Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 01, 2019
Hello guys, I'm planning to make a story about the year between Super/Cho Z and GT. I'll get the first chapter up as soon as I can, but I shall be taking fan made characters in the meantime. Please give me a detailed description on personality, the beyblade, and its special moves. Let's do this thing!
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - CheetoBlader - Aug. 01, 2019
(Aug. 01, 2019 10:54 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Hello guys, I'm planning to make a story about the year between Super/Cho Z and GT. I'll get the first chapter up as soon as I can, but I shall be taking fan made characters in the meantime. Please give me a detailed description on personality, the beyblade, and its special moves. Let's do this thing!
I’m fairly sure that you know Roan. Right?
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 01, 2019
(Aug. 01, 2019 10:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Aug. 01, 2019 10:54 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Hello guys, I'm planning to make a story about the year between Super/Cho Z and GT. I'll get the first chapter up as soon as I can, but I shall be taking fan made characters in the meantime. Please give me a detailed description on personality, the beyblade, and its special moves. Let's do this thing!
I’m fairly sure that you know Roan. Right?
Yup, I've seen him 'round these parts
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - CheetoBlader - Aug. 01, 2019
(Aug. 01, 2019 11:00 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: (Aug. 01, 2019 10:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: I’m fairly sure that you know Roan. Right?
Yup, I've seen him 'round these parts
Which one? Character or member?
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 01, 2019
Episode 1: The Leopard's SERIOUS Upgrade!
Achilles: Aiga!
Achilles: AIGA!
Achilles: Aiga, don't give up!
As Aiga closes his eyes to embrace the disappointing jaws of defeat, Achilles calls out to him. Achilles falls and its Dimension Driver twists on the stadium wall, switching from its high balance mode to its high attack mode.
Shu: It switched to attack mode!
Aiga shouts, resonating with Achilles and unleashing his fighting spirit at the same time...
Achilles flies fast around the stadium with its newfound speed....
Valt and Valkyrie don't back down and Valkyrie grinds against the stadium groove to gain a burst of speed....
As both beys close in on each other, both their bladers shout out the Special Moves they believe will take them to victory...
Valt: SUPER FLASH SHOOT! (TURBO FLASH LAUNCH!)
Aiga: SUPER Z BUSTER! (TURBO BREAKER!)
Both beys clash, sending a brilliant light around them. As they both fly into the air, covered by the veil of pure light, on bursts and the other survives. Once the chaos finally ends the winner is revealed to be
Laban: AIGA! That was amazing! He's so amazing! I can't believe it!
Believe it or not folks, that was Laban Vanot, who was rejoicing after seeing the outcome of the battle (Aiga being the victor of course).
Laban: It's decided, I'm going to challenge Aiga next! Hmmm, but I need an upgrade before I stand a chance, that's what the wind tells me! My fortunes don't lie!
2 HOURS LATER
Laban: IT IS FINISHED!
Laban has completed his new bey Fang Leopard 13Astro Jet (it's description shall be posted once I find it)
Laban happily makes haste to train with his new powerful partner, as his match with Aiga is coming (the next day) and he needs to be prepared
Laban: Let's go, Fang Leopard! Show me what you can do! 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
1 DAY LATER
Aiga and Laban stare at each other from across the stadium, each boy sizing the other one up. The crowd is cheering for their preferred favorites of course, Aiga's cheer squad is where they normally are, and Senor Hanami is doing his play-by-play. And the battle BEGINS... 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
Achilles (in its tallest height, balance mode) rushes to the center as Fang Leopard (In Upper and Barrage Modes) bears down on it with its powerful attacks. Laban prepares for his Special Move, but Aiga beats him to the punch
Aiga: SUPER Z DEFENSE!
Laban (a little too late): FANG FURY!
Achilles' perfect defense block all of Leopard barrage assault, but Laban then decides to use...
Laban: FANG UPPER!
Leopard delivers a swift uppercut to Achilles, being extra vulnerable to an attack from below since it was so tall and Achilles flies out of the stadium!
Referee: Leopard wins with an Over FInish! One point!
As the crowd goes wild, Aiga has an extreme look of surprise on his face, but he quickly recovers...
Aiga: I didn't know your new bey was so strong, Laban! Even with the Super/Cho Z Awakening, I still couldn't win
Laban: Thanks for the compliment, the today the spirits are on my side!
As the crowd continues to cheer, one interesting looking character in particular in hyped up, possibly more than anyone in the arena
Unknown: AMAZING! There's no holding back now! I've decided I'm going for the World Champion title! Are you with me, Crystal Aether?
Aether glows with a brilliant, yet small light (a combo of all the rainbow colors)
Who is this mysterious, yet totally not important character? Will Laban keep up the pace, or will the champion prove his rightful place? Find out in
Episode 2: An Inspiring Burst and the Crystalized Defender!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - BurningSands - Aug. 02, 2019
Its cool to see a script format story! Its quite rare, and sometimes fun to read
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - HakaishinLDrago - Aug. 02, 2019
yo add my character Kanniu
Kanniu's Bey: Dimensional Kopano
Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.
Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.
Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 12:31 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote: yo add my character Kanniu
Kanniu's Bey: Dimensional Kopano
Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.
Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.
Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.
Thank you; I'm totally going to use this!
What's the combo for you bey?
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - HakaishinLDrago - Aug. 02, 2019
(Aug. 02, 2019 12:34 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: (Aug. 02, 2019 12:31 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote: yo add my character Kanniu
Kanniu's Bey: Dimensional Kopano
Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.
Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.
Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.
Thank you; I'm totally going to use this!
What's the combo for you bey?
Dimensional Kopano Hakai Godspeed' (Hakai has a lot of metal for more attack power and Godspeed' is like ultimate reboot mixed with Evolution Image below of Godspeed':
https://gyazo.com/4e275667b239bfad8ba9eed4700e3edd)
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - DuctTapeHero - Aug. 02, 2019
Okuji Kettei (Kettei means determination in Japanese)
Alpha Odysseys
Okuji is an ambitious new blader who wants to start at the top, and learn from the best. He is a little bit impatient, But is good at making new friends. He makes cheesy jokes all the time. His beyblade is a balance type with 7 dash meteor xtend. His layer gimmick is he can flip over his main contact points and choose whether to make it soft rubber for attack or slick plastic for defense/stamina. Okuji wears vintage t-shirts with shorts and sneakers.
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 05, 2019
Episode 2: An Inspiring Burst and the Crystalized Defender
As the fateful battle between Laban and Aiga rages on, one special character stand up and leaves to do training with her bey, Crystal Aether. Regardless of this, Round 3 of the title match starts as both Laban and Aiga gear up in their launching positions.
Everyone in the stadium: 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
As Leopard and Achilles race across the stadium, Achilles sits high up in its attack mode, while Leopard looks a bit different. It's frame seems.... flipped. As for the layer, it's sitting higher than it was in the last two rounds...
Aiga: No reason to think about it! Achilles, SUPER Z SHOOT!
As Leopard is barraged with a storm of blows, Laban looks usually calm while Leopard starts to wobble... THEN AIGA SEES HIS PLAN!
Laban: Unleash your maximum potential with our resonance! FANG COUNTER!
Leopard drifts on its Astro frame to regain balance and prepares to deliver a smash attack so Aiga counters with
Aiga: SUPER Z SWORD, Achilles!
The two special moves clash and the impact sends out a brilliant shockwave throughout the stadium. Both beys feel the recoil and hit the stadium wall with their bladers' pride right behind it.
Aiga: SUPER Z BUSTER! FINISH HIM!!!
Laban: Bear your fangs! The improved Howling Bite! FANG CRUSHER!
Leopard grabs Achilles and chomps down making it lose teeth. It then proceeds to toss it but unfortunately, the Super Z wings were not removed.
Laban: Prepare for an Over Finish!
Aiga: I don't think so!
The final impact had sent Leopard scraping all over the stadium. Precisely one millisecond before Achilles hit the ground, Fang Leopard burst.
Senor Hanami: Aiga wins with a score of 3-1! What an amazing battle!
Both Laban and Aiga walk up to each other and they give each other the other's bey. Then they shake hands on the good battle...
THE TV TURNS OFF
Alicia Caryadani, the owner of Crystal Aether, was traveling to America (watching the battle on TV instead of live) and at that precise moment the private jet had landed. She was going to a very familiar place in America (you all know what I'm talking about)
ONE HOUR LATER
Shu: So you came to challenge me to a battle, huh?
Alicia: Yes! I really want you to see how strong my Crystal Aether is! We will show you our resonance!
Shu: I ACCEPT!
They walk over to an empty stadium. Several people crowd around to watch. One girl with dark purple hair, black sneakers, and fine skin watches closely with a look of hatred on her face..
Fubuki: Welp, first round!
3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
Super/Cho Z Spriggan starts off in right spin defense mode, racing around the stadium as Aether settles down in the center.
Shu: SUPER UPPER SHOOT!
Spriggan quickly changes course and knocks Aether out of the center, taking it for itself. As Aether races towards the wall, Alicia smiles..
Alicia: CRYSTAL COUNTER!
It bounces of the wall gaining speed, full tilt and hits Spriggan's Wall frame.
Shu: Big mistake, now Aether is off balance (as Aether is off balance)
Shu takes a good look at Spriggan and sees that it's off balance as well! That was what she was aiming for! As both beys wobble to the center, they clash one last time and fall to the ground.
Fubuki: Double Over Finish! DRAW!
Alicia: I tied with Shu? I tied with Shu! I TIED WITH SHU!!!!! (She shouted REALLY LOUD, like Valt level stuff)
Shu: Looks like the battle will have to continue then.
Alicia: Okay, time for Round 2!
As both bladers mode change to show their REAL power, the shady girl, who was staring nastily at Alicia, left the building...
Melissa: What?
As she turns around she sees someone no blader would want to see...
ASHRAM/ASHTEM
Episode 3: Jealousy as a Poison! Petrifying Medusa!
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Dt20000 - Aug. 05, 2019
Isn’t Fubuki only 12?
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 05, 2019
(Aug. 05, 2019 1:23 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Isn’t Fubuki only 12?
Yeah, but this isn't an official battle, so anyone can referee
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 07, 2019
(Aug. 05, 2019 12:14 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Episode 2: An Inspiring Burst and the Crystalized Defender
As the fateful battle between Laban and Aiga rages on, one special character stand up and leaves to do training with her bey, Crystal Aether. Regardless of this, Round 3 of the title match starts as both Laban and Aiga gear up in their launching positions.
Everyone in the stadium: 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
As Leopard and Achilles race across the stadium, Achilles sits high up in its attack mode, while Leopard looks a bit different. It's frame seems.... flipped. As for the layer, it's sitting higher than it was in the last two rounds...
Aiga: No reason to think about it! Achilles, SUPER Z SHOOT!
As Leopard is barraged with a storm of blows, Laban looks usually calm while Leopard starts to wobble... THEN AIGA SEES HIS PLAN!
Laban: Unleash your maximum potential with our resonance! FANG COUNTER!
Leopard drifts on its Astro frame to regain balance and prepares to deliver a smash attack so Aiga counters with
Aiga: SUPER Z SWORD, Achilles!
The two special moves clash and the impact sends out a brilliant shockwave throughout the stadium. Both beys feel the recoil and hit the stadium wall with their bladers' pride right behind it.
Aiga: SUPER Z BUSTER! FINISH HIM!!!
Laban: Bear your fangs! The improved Howling Bite! FANG CRUSHER!
Leopard grabs Achilles and chomps down making it lose teeth. It then proceeds to toss it but unfortunately, the Super Z wings were not removed.
Laban: Prepare for an Over Finish!
Aiga: I don't think so!
The final impact had sent Leopard scraping all over the stadium. Precisely one millisecond before Achilles hit the ground, Fang Leopard burst.
Senor Hanami: Aiga wins with a score of 3-1! What an amazing battle!
Both Laban and Aiga walk up to each other and they give each other the other's bey. Then they shake hands on the good battle...
THE TV TURNS OFF
Alicia Caryadani, the owner of Crystal Aether, was traveling to America (watching the battle on TV instead of live) and at that precise moment the private jet had landed. She was going to a very familiar place in America (you all know what I'm talking about)
ONE HOUR LATER
Shu: So you came to challenge me to a battle, huh?
Alicia: Yes! I really want you to see how strong my Crystal Aether is! We will show you our resonance!
Shu: I ACCEPT!
They walk over to an empty stadium. Several people crowd around to watch. One girl with dark purple hair, black sneakers, and fine skin watches closely with a look of hatred on her face..
Fubuki: Welp, first round!
3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
Super/Cho Z Spriggan starts off in right spin defense mode, racing around the stadium as Aether settles down in the center.
Shu: SUPER UPPER SHOOT!
Spriggan quickly changes course and knocks Aether out of the center, taking it for itself. As Aether races towards the wall, Alicia smiles..
Alicia: CRYSTAL COUNTER!
It bounces of the wall gaining speed, full tilt and hits Spriggan's Wall frame.
Shu: Big mistake, now Aether is off balance (as Aether is off balance)
Shu takes a good look at Spriggan and sees that it's off balance as well! That was what she was aiming for! As both beys wobble to the center, they clash one last time and fall to the ground.
Fubuki: Double Over Finish! DRAW!
Alicia: I tied with Shu? I tied with Shu! I TIED WITH SHU!!!!! (She shouted REALLY LOUD, like Valt level stuff)
Shu: Looks like the battle will have to continue then.
Alicia: Okay, time for Round 2!
As both bladers mode change to show their REAL power, the shady girl, who was staring nastily at Alicia, left the building...
Melissa: What?
As she turns around she sees someone no blader would want to see...
ASHRAM/ASHTEM
Episode 3: Jealousy as a Poison! Petrifying Medusa!
Crystal Aether 10 Rainbow
Crystal Aether - A Super Z layer that has a very round shape with four main contact points (they are metal). Can switch modes to extend the blades for more attack power or keep them less exposed for defense and the destabilization of its opponents. Mainly a clear white color with a metal diamond on the center that has light blue eyes.
10 - 10 except its painted red, yellow, and orange.
Rainbow - A ball shaped driver that works like a Unite with rubber around the base (it's still shaped like a ball, no outer ring or anything). A flat launch for calm movement or a tilted launch for more intense movement and friction for more power. The stem is green, the rubber on the ball is blue, and the plastic in the middle of the ball is purple.
Sorry, this description is way too late.
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - CheetoBlader - Aug. 07, 2019
(Aug. 01, 2019 11:00 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: (Aug. 01, 2019 10:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: I’m fairly sure that you know Roan. Right?
Yup, I've seen him 'round these parts
Hey, just checking, is Roan in? I didn’t get a response yet.
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 13, 2019
Episode 3: Jealousy as a Poison! Petrifying Medusa!
Melissa: What?
Ashram steps out into the light along with two other men. They quickly grab Melissa and carry her off. Her muffled screams cannot save her as she is pulled into the abyss of the dark side of beyblade...
MEANWHILE IN THE RAGING BULLS
Fubuki: Round 2! Ready, set!
Everyone present: 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
Alicia twists her body (similar to Drum's newer launch form) and launces to get maximum momentum. Shu does a similar technique with
Shu: SUPER SOUTHERN CROSS SHOT!
Super Z Spriggan races around the stadium in left spin stamina mode while Aether is.. wait not taking the center!
Shu: What? Aether's shape is different from before!
Alicia: That's because I switched Aether two its attack mode! Look at it!
Even though the defense Aether still looked round for the most part, four small edges that were covered are now protruding even more than before.
Alicia: This time, I'll leave it all out there! Special Move!
(Aether focuses its power into one of the four blades that's now sticking out of the layer and drifts on the rubber edge of the Rainbow driver for more speed)
Alicia: CRYSTAL RAINBOW SWORD!
Aether rams Spriggan and almost bursts it, but the Super Z Awakening (Cho Z Kakusei) protects it as Spriggan hits the wall and flies up
Alicia: Darn it! Maybe it will go for the Over Finish instead!
Shu: Don't be so sure... SPRIGGAN!
The Zeta' driver extends outwards...
Shu: Spriggan, attack mode!
Spriggan spins its driver to change into its attack mode.
Shu: Spriggan, SUPER SPRIGGAN SLASH!
Alicia: I won't give up! Aether, get ready for your barrage attack! CRYSTAL FLASH JAB!
Aether clashes with Spriggan, its four blades weakening its stamina during every rotation...
Alicia: I've won!
Shu: NOPE!
As the power radiates around the area, both beys are set up for another Double Over Finish but Aether bursts in midair. Spriggan, protected by its burst stoppers, falls to the floor.
Fubuki: Shu wins with a Burst Finish!
Alicia: I was so close!
Shu: It was a great battle (he says this while picking and reassembling her bey)
They share a handshake
Shu: You should join the Raging Bulls!
Alicia: Looks like I'm a member of the team now, Captain!
Shu smiles while everyone laughs, enjoying the presence of their new teammate...
MEANWHILE IN THE SEWERS
Melissa sits in a chair in the middle of a room. The musty, stinky smell and the murky green light only falling on her gives the room a sense of an interrogation purpose.
Melissa: WHERE IN THE WORLD AM I?
Ashram steps into the light, finally being visible to Melissa
Ashram: You are here because it's finally done.
Melissa: Oh, you mean my new beyblade! You can hand it over I, guess...
Ashram: Not so fast! First you have to beat it, the get it.
Another guy steps out into the light, with a helmet that has murky green eyes.
Ashram: You must beat Murky Eye with Petrifying Medusa. Remember, we said you always have to produce results. Unless if you're weak. You haven't forgotten...
Melissa's mind races back to that fateful moment (All we see is a bey in the middle of the road which gets crushed by a skateboard. There is also laughing in the background..)
Melissa: I AM NOT WEAK!
Ashram: Then PROVE IT!
Murky Eye: LET THE BATTLE BEGIN! MEET DARK MEDUSA! (He pulls out a shadow copy, similar to the ones in Evolution/God)
THE TWO BLADERS STARE AT EACH OTHER WITH AN UNRELENTING FURY, WITH THE WILL TO PROVE THAT THEY'RE THE STRONGER OF THE TWO.
MELISSA (in her head): I WILL GET MY REVENGE ON ALICIA CARYADANI!
Episode 4: The Power of Petrifying Stone and the Will of Victory!
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 19, 2019
Sorry for the serious lack of episodes, I've just started high school
Episode 4: The Power of Petrifying Stone and the Will of Victory!
The room is silent...
Melissa and Murky Eye ferociously stare at each other from across the stadium, launchers ready, and minds as well.
Ashram: Ready, SET!
They start the countdown...
Melissa and Murky Eye: 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
Both Medusas race down to the center and being stamina types they aim to steal the spotlight. They clash with each other, one dark green and purple, the other black and white. They mirror the other's movements down to the millimeter.
Murky Eye: Is that all that you've got? Let's take 'em out!
Dark Medusa goes straight for Petrifying Medusa and knocks it into the wall. Petrifying Medusa hits the wall, flies into the air (towards the center), and starts to lose balance while Dark Medusa takes the center. It seems like Murky Eye will win...
Melissa: No!...
She remembers the day where the vision of a bey being crushed by a skateboard that is in the middle of the road
Melissa will invoked Medusa to resonate (Medusa is a tall green woman-esque figure with snakes for hair and a scepter that has a blue orb on the end)
Melissa: PETRIFYING STONE!
P Medusa falls on top of D Medusa. It crushes it from above, using to same spin wind current to increase its own spin speed, while D Medusa loses it because of the weight of P Medusa. D Medusa tries to escape, but it's like it has been turned to stone...
Melissa (very softly with a scary grin on her face): End it.
Dark Medusa bursts and P Medusa flies into the air with its parts...
Melissa: GET OUT OF HERE NOW!
Petrifying Medusa knocks the bursted parts of Dark Medusa at Murky Eye who then falls down a new created hole, made to send him packing. Melissa Aedi turns to Ashram
Melissa: I think I've earned this now (while holding up Petrifying Medusa)
Then she just walks away, out onto the streets and into the sunset, yet now she has a new target.
ALICIA CARYADANI!
Episode 5: The Amazing Return of the Veterans!
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Dash Driver - Aug. 20, 2019
(Aug. 07, 2019 9:28 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Aug. 01, 2019 11:00 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Yup, I've seen him 'round these parts
Hey, just checking, is Roan in? I didn’t get a response yet. Knowing Cheeto, he means yes. You’ll be fine with putting Roan in.
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 27, 2019
Episode 5: The Amazing Return of the Veterans!
Two people stand, watching the sun fall over the horizon (the same sunset out of the end of the previous episode). One with tall spiky hair and a headband with a skull on it. The other stands on his right side with flat, sharp tipped hair all around his head and a bird on his shoulder. They look at each other...
Daigo: We should join the fun, right Deathscyther?
Cuza: My Chronos is saying the same exact thing!
THE NEXT DAY
Daigo and Cuza: IT'S DONE!
Daigo: It's time to meet my Reaper Deathscyther!
Cuza: Nice, but it's not a match for my Space Chronos!
Zoro/Raul: I'm happy to see that you guys are happy with your Super Z upgrades! HO HO HO!
Daigo: It's time to test them out!
The door to Raul's van is suddenly thrown open. One very reminiscent figure standing in the way of the sunlight..
Silas/Sisco: Cuza! Remember two years ago when you joined BC Sol?
Cuza remembers...
Cuza: Yeah, is there anything I'm supposed to be getting?
Silas (angrily): How could you be so clueless?! I'm here to settle the score that has been standing for over TWO YEARS!
Cuza: Oh! Our battle that we never finished? Why didn't we finish it anyway?
Silas (with even more anger): No one cares, let's just battle!
IN THE MAIN TRAINING HALL
Everyone has shown up to watch Silas and Cuza battle. Valt, Rantaro, Free, Daigo, Shasa, Rickson, Kris, Raul, etc.
That BC Sol referee guy steps up towards the stadium.
Ref: Bladers, observe the opponent's bey!
Cuza grabs Kreis Satan, while Silas snatches Space Chronos.
Silas (in his head): The layer can weight change in addition to spreading its blades outwards for attack. The disc (7) is slightly unbalanced. The frame (Open) has to open claws in the perfect circle combined offense and defense. The driver (Combine) has a rubber base for speed (like Trans with rubber) and can switch modes to release a fine sharp point for a steady controlled spin. But there's something odd...
Both bladers return the other one's bey.
Silas: I didn't think you could make such an upgrade. Now show me what it can do!
Cuza: Gladly!
Ref: Ready, SET!
Everyone: 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
Cuza does a new boost no one has ever seen before..
Cuza: DOUBLE BACKFLIP BOOST!
Chronos zooms quickly towards the center (defense mode- layer, stamina mode- driver) and it spins quite calmly waiting for the opponent to strike back...
Silas: I know Chronos's weakness! The disc!
Satan drifts around the stadium in a circle...
Silas: CYCLONE LOOP!
Satan his the Open frame and knocks out Space Chronos.
Ref: One point, to Satan with and Over Finish!
Cuza thinks long and hard. He resonates with his bey and makes a decision. He switches the layer to attack mode, and switches the driver as well. Silas sees the extend blades as well as Cuza's strategy.
Silas (thinking): You're so predictable!
Ref: Ready, SET!
Everyone: 3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!
Chronos makes a dash for the center and takes it just as fast as it did before...
Silas: Wait, I though the driver was in attack mode!
Cuza: Well, you thought wrong and its played into my hands!
Silas: NANI? (Sorry, I won't do it again)
Satan hits Chronos with CYCLONE LOOP and Chronos take the impact and blasts off with superior speed!
Cuza! The driver is in BALANCE MODE! CHRONOS, SPACE COMBINE!
Chronos falls on the rubber edge and gets and boost of speed and power...
Cuza: THIS IS OUR RESONANCE!
Chronos jumps onto the stadium wall and begins to tightrope it...
Cuza: INFINITE DIVE!
Chronos jumps back into the stadium, hits Satan, and bursts it. The pieces fall down at Silas's feet.
Everyone is silent....
Daigo: Looks like it's my turn to battle with my new bey
Episode 6: The Horrifying Scythe Strikes!
P.S. Daigo is still with AS GALUS
P.P.S. Credit of Reaper Deathscyther goes to the user JINBEE. You should go check out his thread on his fanmade Reaper Deathscyther beyblade, it's really awesome.
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - X-Wing - Aug. 27, 2019
Nice! Is this too late?
Name: Cyrus
Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.
Bey: Rupture Chimera
Attack type, Counterclockwise spin
Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide
Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful
Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor
Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.
P.S. Tear is disc frame.
Special moves:
Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.
Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.
Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Aug. 27, 2019
(Aug. 27, 2019 12:33 AM)X-Wing Wrote: Nice! Is this too late?
Name: Cyrus
Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.
Bey: Rupture Chimera
Attack type, Counterclockwise spin
Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide
Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful
Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor
Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.
P.S. Tear is disc frame.
Special moves:
Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.
Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.
Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.
I will try to fit this in like I am doing for Roan
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - X-Wing - Aug. 27, 2019
(Aug. 27, 2019 12:47 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: (Aug. 27, 2019 12:33 AM)X-Wing Wrote: Nice! Is this too late?
Name: Cyrus
Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.
Bey: Rupture Chimera
Attack type, Counterclockwise spin
Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide
Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful
Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor
Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.
P.S. Tear is disc frame.
Special moves:
Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.
Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.
Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.
I will try to fit this in like I am doing for Roan Alright thx
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Valtryek Aoi - Sep. 07, 2019
I am trying a different writing format for this episode and it will probably stay like this for the rest of the series.
Episode 6: The Horrifying Scythe Stirkes!
Everyone turned their heads towards Daigo Kuragami who stepped up to the stadium looking for his opponent. "I'll gladly take you on!" says Cuza happily. "You won't be defeating me so easily now that I have Space Chronos!" Daigo smirked, "you forgot that I also have an upgrade. Reaper Deathscyther!"
They both square up in their launch positions. Daigo notices that Cuza has set all of Space Chronos's modes to stamina. "He going to draw the battle out be tightroping, eh? Too bad, that won't work out for him!" Anton (the BC Sol referee) steps up to the plate. "Ready, set!" he cries. As a collective group everyone says "3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!"
Chronos flies towards the outer edge in its perfectly circular stamina mode and jumps onto the stadium wall, doing its tightrope technique like a boss. "It's going just as I planned!" Daigo thought as Deathscyther races towards the wall. "Quadruple Crusher!" Daigo yelled. Deathscyther hits the stadium wall with both of its double hitting scythes, causing Chronos to fall down into the stadium. Cuza starts to lose his composure but rallies quickly. "Stardust Field!" Cuza cried. Chronos's round layer created a powerful wind current. Deathscyther dashes towards Chronos, but is pushes back several times. It then falls on its specialized Crown driver and speeds up. "CROWN CRASH!" Daigo shouts with all he's got. Deathscyther knock Chronos out of the stadium for an Over Finish.
Everyone starts in shock including Cuza, while Daigo looks tired from all the energy he put in it and he smiles. "Yes!" he exclaims happily. A second after he said that, the door opened and there he was. "FREE DE LA HOYA!" everyone yells. "I heard the power of Reaper Deathscyther and Space Chronos all the way from the forest. I really want to battle you Daigo Kurogami." Free says while pointing at him, "What about me!?" Cuza growls angrily. "Wait your turn," Free says calmly. "Did he really just say that?" Shasa says.
Free and Daigo square up, preparing for battle. "I have to watch out for the power that those four scythes hold," Free thinks to himself. "I'm going to turn that to my advantage with a slow motion burst!" Anton steps up to the plate. "Ready, set!" he cries. As a collective group everyone says "3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!" Fafnir comes of the launcher very slowly while Deathscyther blasts off as if it were going for the moon. "CROWN CRASH!" Daigp shouts. Deathscyther grinds on the Crown driver and takes off towards Fafnir. Fafnir absorbs the massive impact with its rubber, allowing it to gain so much speed the rubber retracted. "Looks like your plan failed," Free says with a bit of a grin. "It hasn't yet," Daigo states. Fafnir blasts of the wall, gaining serious speed for its GEIST SPIN attack. The 12 disk's sharp blades create a wind disturbance cutting through Fafnir's signature move. As Deathscyther hits Fafnir, its Absorb driver is pushed down. "ABSORB BREAK!" Free calls. Fafnir's untamable speed rockets towards Deathscyther. "Take it head on. Use QUADRUPLE CRUSHER!" Daigo shouts. The two beys collide with massive energy. Purple energy on Daigo's side and yellow energy on Free's side. Once the light disperses the two beys fly out of the stadium and burst simultaneously.
Everyone is in even more shock that Daigo just tied with Free, but Free just smiles. "I was right. You and your bey have a true resonance." Free says praising Daigo. "You should go back to AS GALUS and show everyone your new power. With that, I'll have to watch out for you even more closely. I'll have to watch both of you. actually," Free says pointing at both Daigo and Cuza. All three of them smile. "We'll settle the score another day!" they all exclaim at the same time.
Episode 7: Whatever Happened to the Dead Gran?
After the amazing title match where Aiga claimed victory, the members of the Dead Gran have now become more popular being a powerful team in the world focused on fun battles. As new recruits join them, someone from the shadows watches in disgust for his lack of understanding. Will he take them all out? Who's this new recruit? Will this change the course of Dead Gran and the world of beyblade?
Find out on Sunday (September 8th, hopefully)
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - bekfastblader - Sep. 07, 2019
I have one Valtryek Aoi
Rai Ghasp
Owns Revolution Ghost 00'Spine Control: Revolution Ghost is a balance type with different armours like Phoenix and 2 burst stopper. Control is a Xtend+ mixed with Dimension with 6 modes: Attack, Barrage, Defence, Hold, Spin, and Last
Wears black Nike React Shoes, has a white hoodie, and has a calm attitude. Doesn't listen to trash-talk
Moves: Revolution Whip: Uses it Attack armour and slashes it with it blades
Control Break: Uses it's Tip in the lowest mode to scrape the outside and gain a speed boost
Ghost Defence: Uses defence armour and block all incoming attacks from the opponent
Ghost Spin: Aimlessly spin slowly and spin steals off the opponent. Can use any mode on the driver for this
Barrage Launch: Uses Barrage mode on driver and unleashes some powerful attacks
Hold: Uses Hold Mode and doesn't let anything take the centre
Hope my character gets in!
Also these are the armours for Revolution Ghost: Speed, Barrage, Spin, Hold and Flash
Combo abbreviation: rV 00'Sp Ctl
RE: Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE) - Aadi Lui - Sep. 07, 2019
I have only one request
BRING LUI SHIROSAGI BACK.
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