4th Season: MR System - DaJetsnake - Oct. 04, 2015
Here is my idea of a new system of Beyblade, it's called the "Metal Revolution System". It's supposed to take place a few months after the Nemesis Crisis where instead of Madoka making the first ZeroG Beyblade Samurai Ifraid, she makes the first MR Beyblade "Paradise Apodis". Which Gingka then gives to Zyro. But this is far before the start of when the ZeroG first episode would happen. Basically, it has parts like 4D but a bit different
Face: An old part with the same use, identifying or weight.
Clear Wheel: Special design, another part of the Beyblade naming process, mandatory unless Bey is L/R Bey
Metal Frame: The main attack, defense or stamina part, can be switched with Spin Frame in some combos, part of the MR metal wheel.
Spin Frame: Main Gimmick for MR system Beyblades, interchangeable.
Core: Used to hold the Beyblade together, part of the MR metal wheel
Track: Height and/or extra gimmicks.
Bottom: Decides Beyblades movement, balance and spin time.
Optional Parts/Obscure Parts:
Claw Frame: Basically the PC frame, but it isn't mandatory, it can be composed of POM or Metal, is a part of some MR metal wheels.
Lock Switch: used instead of clear wheels for LR Beyblades.
Driver: Combination of Track and Bottom, has gimmicks, when used it replaces the track and bottom.
Example:
Solar Wings Pegasis WD
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
Owner: Gingka Hagane
Face: Pegasis IV, despite the previous iterations cartoon-like design, Pegasis IV goes for a more realistic one. It is the design of the Samurai Pegasis motif, but with out the top right flame, and the top left and middle left flames. The horse face is thinner and edgier, it is primarily white, with blue accents, the eyes are like those of Pegasis III, but of a lighter shade. There are wing like motifs on both sides of the horse, they have 'sharper' edges and the curves are somewhat pronounced. The hair on the horse appears to be stylized in a flame-like way. To the middle right of the motif seems to be some form of stylized '3'. The 'wings' are outlined by white but on the inside, transition from a light gray to a dark blue.
Clear Wheel: Pegasis IV, this clear wheel basically shows a Pegasus from head-wings-tail. The eyes for the Pegasus have red stickers, and the head has some minor depressions, the ears are somewhat raised to elude to the fact that they are ears. The first wing begins right after that, it is detailed, due to the feathers on it. There is a minor pause before the next wing, it has two bright red stickers that fill up space, the stickers have white lines going through them in varying thicknesses. The next wing is just as long as the first one, and as detailed. immediately after the wing, the 'tail' is shown, it has navy blue stickers on it with black lines going through them. after the tail, there is a minor 'placeholder' area that has a bumpy surface, on one part, a 'W' sticker is placed, it transitions from bright red to navy blue (Right to Left) with black and white lines on it. To the left of that is a sticker of a 'P' sideways, it transitions from left to right, bright red and navy blue with black and white lines. The stickers on the wall next to the facebolt are fiery red, with white accents, it transitions into dark blue with white accents. There is also one red eye underneath the flames. It, obviously, has metal powder, its weight comes in at 3.45 grams.
Metal Wheel: Wings, not to be confused with Wing, is meant to fix the problems of Big Bang and Wing. There are three main wings, each with a subdivision of four of their own wings, these wings start quite far beyond the 'main body'. The first part of the wing is much longer than the other three, it has most of the contact points, which are feathers, each feather is a different height and width. As soon as it begins to curve inwards, the next, smaller wing appears, it has the same details of the first wing, only 1/3rd of the size. The next wing is a little bit smaller than the last wing, it has the same details, but at the end, it curves slightly outwards on the bottom. The last wing has the same curve on the bottom of the wing and is as big as the second wing. As soon as one of the main wing ends, there is a gap separating the wings, this gap also has two separate indents, making it appear a part of a wing. There are notches on the top and bottom of the metal frame, these allow spin frames, pc frames, and claw frames. Holding the Beyblade together is the core below the metal frame. It is raised slightly to allow beyblades with more layers to still be able to function, the bottom of the core has ~19 blades facing a counterclockwise direction. Its weight comes in at 42.3 grams
Spin Frame: Solar, is the first spin frame identified. It has 3 gaps allowing it to be inserted onto a metal wheel. Its main gimmick is its 'wings', during battle they start off (if seen in a bird's eye view) at the left and are locked at that position, when it is hit hard enough, they move to the right and lock there. These wings have wing details on both sides and curve outwards on the bottom to give an upper smash of sorts. The modes are as follows, on the top of the metal frame, starting position: Smash Mode; end position: Cover Mode, On the bottom of the metal frame, starting position: Awoken Mode; end position: Upper Attack Mode. Its weight is 3.9 grams
Driver: Wing Drive, it is similar to Final Drive in the sense that it is two tips in one driver and they change depending on the spin velocity of the Beyblade. However what is different is how it works, you can manually change and lock the tips. The tips are Wide Semi Flat to Rubber Ball, there is a little hole with a circle in it, the color of the circle represents the mode, blue is WSF, red is RB, and yellow is battle-switch (changing of WSF to RB during battle, due to spin velocity). Once a click is heard, the mode has been locked. In battle switch mode, the lock is skipped. Overall, WD is a little less aggressive than FD,
Chapters:
So what do you think? Any suggestions? I would love to hear how I could improve.
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Oct. 05, 2015
I also think I might start a series on it.Ill put in a poll.
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Dec. 29, 2015
I have decided that if anybody would like to have their character and Beyblade in the story they can post it on here. However it must use the MR format and also describe the character and Beyblade well not just " it is yellow" or anything like that because I don't want to change YOUR character to make it interesting. Thank you and have a nice time, Hatter Off!
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Dec. 31, 2015
Finished Ch.1:
Click this to read
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Dec. 31, 2015
So any suggestions? I need ideas for the 2nd chapter.
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Mega L-Drago 24 - Dec. 31, 2015
Oh my gosh you use google docs too, the only thing different is I copy & paste my writings
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - BAWB18 - Dec. 31, 2015
This is really cool! I'm not a very big fan of Zero-G, and since your Rubber system idea happens instead of Zero-G it makes it that much better! When are you going to make chapter 2?
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 01, 2016
(Dec. 31, 2015 9:54 PM)Mega L-Drago 24 Wrote: Oh my gosh you use google docs too, the only thing different is I copy & paste my writings
Cool another difference is that you use a script-like viewpoint
(Dec. 31, 2015 10:43 PM)BAWB18 Wrote: This is really cool! I'm not a very big fan of Zero-G, and since your Rubber system idea happens instead of Zero-G it makes it that much better! When are you going to make chapter 2?
Thanks BAWB18, I'll start on chapter 2 tomorrow because ITS A FREE DAY!!!
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Jinbee - Jan. 01, 2016
I must admit, the structure, grammar and layout is one of the best I've seen so far, not bad.
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 01, 2016
(Jan. 01, 2016 1:14 AM)J.I.N.B.E.E! Wrote: I must admit, the structure, grammar and layout is one of the best I've seen so far, not bad.
Thanks a lot J.I.N.B.E.E, considering you've done a 33 episode series that means even more
Oh btw guys if you haven't noticed the characters are less cheeeeeesssy
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 01, 2016
So I decided to do a sneak peek at chapter 2, enjoy!
METAL FIGHT BEYBLADE MR
CHAPTER.2 REBORN
“A Pegasis?” Gingka stuttered “But that isn't possible, of all 4 generations of Pegasis I've owned not once has there been 2 Pegasis’ at the same time.” He stated, but then he realized and remembered “Pegasis is simply putting it's wings somewhere else, it'll return once it has rested up.” Remembering what his father had said, a single tear fell from his eyes, which he quickly rubbed off his face “Storm Pegasis…..you're back” he thought happily. However his moment was ended abruptly when Zyro said impatiently “Gingka! Gingka! What are you gonna call it? Huh Gingka?” Gingka thought for quite some time then said “Wing Pegasis I guess”.
The rest should be uploaded today or tomorrow
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Mega L-Drago 24 - Jan. 04, 2016
sweet sneak peak, now hurry up and finish it
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 05, 2016
(Jan. 04, 2016 11:55 PM)Mega L-Drago 24 Wrote: sweet sneak peak, now hurry up and finish it
School, too annoying
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Mega L-Drago 24 - Jan. 05, 2016
I'm in school right now!
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Mega L-Drago 24 - Jan. 12, 2016
I won't get to battle you on meta's comic uhh
Oh yeah hurry up and make chapter 2
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 13, 2016
(Jan. 12, 2016 11:19 PM)Mega L-Drago 24 Wrote: I won't get to battle you on meta's comic uhh
Oh yeah hurry up and make chapter 2
I know, also IM TRYING. Though I think I wrote something a bit amusing in Ch. 2 so wait a bit
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Mega L-Drago 24 - Jan. 13, 2016
Okay bra let me know when It's done
Ps. where do you stand on the Ryuga still being alive thing if you want could you please make him appear in your story but only if you want to
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Bladerguy2 - Jan. 13, 2016
Sounds cool but it seems like a lot of parts. I only skimmed the explanations because im working on homework. I read that some are optional, i Like that, keep it up
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 13, 2016
Thanks bladerguy I have the same thing to do as you XD Anyway maybe you can check it out in full detail later and tell me what you think
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 14, 2016
Sorry for the double post but here is the second Chapter:
Click here to read Ch.2
Beyblades introduced this chapter:
Claw Leone D150RWB
Type: Defense
Spin Direction: Right
Owner: Kyoya Tategami
Face: Leone III, it is the outline of a Lion's head and paw on a lemon yellow background at a 135 degree angle, above the head is a small crown and inside the paw is a star.
Clear Wheel: Leone III, Leone III is similar to Leone II with the "screw" features and dark coloring, aside from that the three screws are layed atop on three higher trapeziums which are separated by a serrated section, each of which are separated by a purplish gem in the middle separating the section. Leone III is dark green in color and is, like its previous two iterations, a high clear wheel which has a downwards slope.
Spin Frame: Leone, the Leone spin frame is four paw like rubber shapes that are all connected via a metal frame. The rubber is red colored to make it stand out. It is one of the few spin frames to only be compatible with its stock form, aside from L-Drago Guardian, when in conjunction with the Claw Metal Frame it has two modes, Defense and Counter. Defense mode lays the paws in the paw like holes in Claw to absorb attacks. Counter mode flips the paws revealing the attack protrusions of Claw.
Metal Frame: Claw, Claw is a almost fully circular metal frame and is quite heavy, weighing in at 46.6 grams on average, Claw is separated into 4 parts each section separated by 5 major bumps, similar to those on the Basalt Metal Wheel. Each section has two spherical shapes that rise slightly from the frame and are all a purplish color. Claw also has 4 small paw like holes taken out of it reducing the weight by 4.8 grams, these holes work in conjunction with the rubber frame and defense mode but when in counter mode the tips of the paws are shown to rise and curve upwards, similar to a lions claw hence the name "Claw", Claw is not a painted frame.
Track: D150, Defense 150 is a heightened version of D125 made to fill the mistakes in its previous counterpart, those being its width and the lack of bearings. The track's frames have widened to accommodate bearings, in addition to the fact that D150's defense ring has been widened to the width of the Claw Metal Frame.
Bottom: RWB, Rubber Wide Ball is the wide version of RB used for more grip on the stadium and also a more aggressive tip, fitting Kyoya's usual fighting style, although RWB loses a significant amount of spin time compared with its plastic counterpart, it makes up for that by being able to KO some Defense and Stamina Types and sometimes OS Attack and Balance types, showing its effectiveness IF USED with the right Metal Frame.
(Jan. 13, 2016 2:20 AM)Mega L-Drago 24 Wrote: Okay bra let me know when It's done
Ps. where do you stand on the Ryuga still being alive thing if you want could you please make him appear in your story but only if you want to
You'll know soon enough, I wasn't going to spoil the story
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Mega L-Drago 24 - Jan. 16, 2016
nice but no actual blading went down and when is the time skip to 7 years into future with Zyro as the lead?
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 17, 2016
(Jan. 16, 2016 5:44 AM)Mega L-Drago 24 Wrote: nice but no actual blading went down and when is the time skip to 7 years into future with Zyro as the lead?
Which time skip?
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Mega L-Drago 24 - Jan. 18, 2016
Well you know when Zyro becomes the lead in a 7 year future where he's a teen meeting his friends taking over the series you know like shogun steel!
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - DaJetsnake - Jan. 18, 2016
(Jan. 18, 2016 2:31 AM)Mega L-Drago 24 Wrote: Well you know when Zyro becomes the lead in a 7 year future where he's a teen meeting his friends taking over the series you know like shogun steel!
Still don't understand what you're trying to get at
RE: Metal Rubber System Idea - Mega L-Drago 24 - Jan. 18, 2016
I mean like where you know everyone is an adult gingka is barely seen Tsubasa is leader of the wbba for some reason!
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