Beyblade G Core - Instarez - Aug. 03, 2021
Releasing soon, hopefully.
Summary
The Apex Corporation has developed what they call Beyblades. Spinning tops made from Plastic, metal, and other materials. It is a game played for sport, purely for fun. They took the world by storm, and Apex made a huge profit. However 1 year after Beyblades where launched, a group of people got them for the first time. This caused mysterious occurrences to happen. This group caught the publics eye and was named the G Generation. More and more people became apart of the G Generation, seemingly by luck, to the point where the majority of players were apart of it. Due to unknown reasons relating to the G Generation, Apex has called for a total recall, and they're using brutal force. What will happen to the Sport of Beyblade, and what is the mystery hidden within the tops?
Characters So Far
Rei Osiris
The protagonist. He doesn't remember his parents, and was taken in by his Grandpa.
He doesn't have much going for him, but he's a hard worker.
Shinei Kakusei
The so called "Great Reaper". He hates Rei despite just meeting him for unknown reasons.
He has a heart deep down, but doesn't show it to anyone but his little sister.
"G" Freeman
The chairman of Apex Corp. He is in charge of the "Apex Raids" where armies go from town to town destroying Beyblades. He rules with an iron fist, and wishes to have more control than his superior, who he can't even see.
Kira
A girl that is apart of Shinei and Rei's team. She is a close friend of them, but can get angry very easily.
She wants to learn how to adapt situation's so she can never lose. No one knows where she lives or her relatives.
X, Y, and Z
Lonely Joker members. They go against the Atermis Breakers in the first battle of the Underground Tournament.
Something seems off about them.....
Beyblades So Far
Radiant Artemis Burst Revolution
Gear Core Artemis: An emblem showing a golden knight.
Gear Switch Radiant: An 8 bladed jagged ring, made of only metal.
Gear Drive Burst: A blue half sphere that unleashes 4 spikes when it gets directly hit.
Gear Tip Revolution: A red and sharp rubber tip.
Scythe Thanatos Soul Counter
Gear Core Thanatos: An emblem showing a Reaper.
Gear Switch Scythe: A ring with 1 giant and sharp metal blade. The rest of it is rubber shields.
Gear Drive Soul: A sharp half sphere. It's "Fangs" can counter beys that try to exploit the possible weak point.
Gear Tip Counter: A cylinder shape, half metal have rubber tip. The bey leans on one side to choose which material to use.
Hollow Nemesis Bite Smooth
Gear Core Nemesis: An emblem showing a iron robot.
Gear Switch Hollow: A free spinning ring with 8 small shield.
Gear Drive Bite: A thin pyramid shape.
Gear Tip Smooth: A POM Disc made for optimal stamina.
Chapters
Arc 1: The G Generation
1. The Legend Begins
2. Artemis Trials
3. Because We Believe
4. First Rival
5. The Great Reaper
6. Swift Rider
7. The Underground Tournament
8. Making a Team
9. Lone Wolf
10. Round 1: God vs. Trickster
11. Round 2: Lonely vs. Not Alone
12. Round 3: Beast vs. Tiger
Arc 2: G Fight
13. We're Holding a Tournament?!
14. Unbeatable
15. Shock
16. Friend in Need
17. Super Robo X
Arc 3: At the Beginning
18. Sandstorm Battle
19. Grandpa
20A. What Was Once Hidden (Part 1)
20B. What Was Once Hidden (Part 2)
21. Sad Existence
RE: Beyblade G Core - GenesisBlader - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 03, 2021 11:11 PM)Instarez Wrote: Releasing soon, hopefully.
Summary
The Apex Corporation has developed what they call Beyblades. Spinning tops made from Plastic, metal, and other materials. It is a game played for sport, purely for fun. They took the world by storm, and Apex made a huge profit. However 1 year after Beyblades where launched, a group of people got them for the first time. This caused mysterious occurrences to happen. This group caught the publics eye and was named the G Generation. More and more people became apart of the G Generation, seemingly by luck, to the point where the majority of players were apart of it. Due to unknown reasons relating to the G Generation, Apex has called for a total recall, and they're using brutal force. What will happen to the Sport of Beyblade, and what is the mystery hidden within the tops?
Characters So Far
Rei Osiris
The protagonist. He doesn't remember his parents, and was taken in by his Grandpa.
He doesn't have much going for him, but he's a hard worker.
Shinei Kakusei
The so called "Great Reaper". He hates Rei despite just meeting him for unknown reasons.
He has a heart deep down, but doesn't show it to anyone but his little sister.
"G" Freeman
The chairman of Apex Corp. He is in charge of the "Apex Raids" where armies go from town to town destroying Beyblades.
He rules with an iron fist, and wishes to have more control than his superior, who he can't even see.
Kira
A girl that is apart of Shinei and Rei's team. She is a close friend of them, but can get angry very easily.
She wants to learn how to adapt situation's so she can never lose. No one knows where she lives or her relatives.
X, Y, and Z
Lonely Joker members. They go against the Atermis Breakers in the first battle of the Underground Tournament.
Something seems off about them.....
Beyblades So Far
Radiant Artemis Burst Revolution
Gear Core Artemis: An emblem showing a golden knight.
Gear Switch Radiant: An 8 bladed jagged ring, made of only metal.
Gear Drive Burst: A blue half sphere that unleashes 4 spikes when it gets directly hit.
Gear Tip Revolution: A red and sharp rubber tip.
Scythe Thanatos Soul Counter
Gear Core Thanatos: An emblem showing a Reaper.
Gear Switch Scythe: A ring with 1 giant and sharp metal blade. The rest of it is rubber shields.
Gear Drive Soul: A sharp half sphere. It's "Fangs" can counter beys that try to exploit the possible weak point.
Gear Tip Counter: A cylinder shape, half metal have rubber tip. The bey leans on one side to choose which material to use.
Hollow Nemesis Bite Smooth
Gear Core Nemesis: An emblem showing a iron robot.
Gear Switch Hollow: A free spinning ring with 8 small shield.
Gear Drive Bite: A thin pyramid shape.
Gear Tip Smooth: A POM Disc made for optimal stamina.
Chapters (Tentative)
Arc 1: The G Generation
1. The Legend Begins
2. Artemis Trials
3. Because We Believe
4. First Rival
5. The Great Reaper
6. Swift Rider
7. The Underground Tournament
8. Making a Team
9. Lone Wolf
10. Round 1: God vs. Trickster
11. Round 2: Lonely vs. Not Alone
12. Round 3: Beast vs. Tiger nice!! looking forward to it!
is this plastic gen or metal gen?
RE: Beyblade G Core - LegendJustice - Aug. 03, 2021
So a whole new generation no burst? Awesome! I'll be following!
RE: Beyblade G Core - Instarez - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 03, 2021 11:14 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2021 11:11 PM)Instarez Wrote: Releasing soon, hopefully.
Summary
The Apex Corporation has developed what they call Beyblades. Spinning tops made from Plastic, metal, and other materials. It is a game played for sport, purely for fun. They took the world by storm, and Apex made a huge profit. However 1 year after Beyblades where launched, a group of people got them for the first time. This caused mysterious occurrences to happen. This group caught the publics eye and was named the G Generation. More and more people became apart of the G Generation, seemingly by luck, to the point where the majority of players were apart of it. Due to unknown reasons relating to the G Generation, Apex has called for a total recall, and they're using brutal force. What will happen to the Sport of Beyblade, and what is the mystery hidden within the tops?
Characters So Far
Rei Osiris
The protagonist. He doesn't remember his parents, and was taken in by his Grandpa.
He doesn't have much going for him, but he's a hard worker.
Shinei Kakusei
The so called "Great Reaper". He hates Rei despite just meeting him for unknown reasons.
He has a heart deep down, but doesn't show it to anyone but his little sister.
"G" Freeman
The chairman of Apex Corp. He is in charge of the "Apex Raids" where armies go from town to town destroying Beyblades.
He rules with an iron fist, and wishes to have more control than his superior, who he can't even see.
Kira
A girl that is apart of Shinei and Rei's team. She is a close friend of them, but can get angry very easily.
She wants to learn how to adapt situation's so she can never lose. No one knows where she lives or her relatives.
X, Y, and Z
Lonely Joker members. They go against the Atermis Breakers in the first battle of the Underground Tournament.
Something seems off about them.....
Beyblades So Far
Radiant Artemis Burst Revolution
Gear Core Artemis: An emblem showing a golden knight.
Gear Switch Radiant: An 8 bladed jagged ring, made of only metal.
Gear Drive Burst: A blue half sphere that unleashes 4 spikes when it gets directly hit.
Gear Tip Revolution: A red and sharp rubber tip.
Scythe Thanatos Soul Counter
Gear Core Thanatos: An emblem showing a Reaper.
Gear Switch Scythe: A ring with 1 giant and sharp metal blade. The rest of it is rubber shields.
Gear Drive Soul: A sharp half sphere. It's "Fangs" can counter beys that try to exploit the possible weak point.
Gear Tip Counter: A cylinder shape, half metal have rubber tip. The bey leans on one side to choose which material to use.
Hollow Nemesis Bite Smooth
Gear Core Nemesis: An emblem showing a iron robot.
Gear Switch Hollow: A free spinning ring with 8 small shield.
Gear Drive Bite: A thin pyramid shape.
Gear Tip Smooth: A POM Disc made for optimal stamina.
Chapters (Tentative)
Arc 1: The G Generation
1. The Legend Begins
2. Artemis Trials
3. Because We Believe
4. First Rival
5. The Great Reaper
6. Swift Rider
7. The Underground Tournament
8. Making a Team
9. Lone Wolf
10. Round 1: God vs. Trickster
11. Round 2: Lonely vs. Not Alone
12. Round 3: Beast vs. Tiger nice!! looking forward to it!
is this plastic gen or metal gen?
Whole new generation, separate from them. You can call it the Apex Generation.
RE: Beyblade G Core - GenesisBlader - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 03, 2021 11:15 PM)Instarez Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2021 11:14 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice!! looking forward to it!
is this plastic gen or metal gen?
Whole new generation, separate from them. You can call it the Apex Generation.
good lord spriggan nice!!
RE: Beyblade G Core - Instarez - Aug. 03, 2021
There will be lots of plot twists throughout the story. I have left lots of clues and will continue to do so when the chapters actually come out, so try and guess them!
RE: Beyblade G Core - LegendJustice - Aug. 03, 2021
A man starts a revolution don't ask why I think that!
RE: Beyblade G Core - UnseenBurst - Aug. 03, 2021
My Lord Spriggan this looks like it's going to be an awesome Fanfic!
RE: Beyblade G Core - LegendJustice - Aug. 03, 2021
When's the release date?
RE: Beyblade G Core - Instarez - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 03, 2021 11:26 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: When's the release date?
Soon. Today I will finish the general layout for the story. Starting tomorrow, chapters will begin to be written.
RE: Beyblade G Core - LegendJustice - Aug. 03, 2021
(Aug. 03, 2021 11:27 PM)Instarez Wrote: (Aug. 03, 2021 11:26 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: When's the release date?
Soon. Today I will finish the general layout for the story. Starting tomorrow, chapters will begin to be written. Cool!
RE: Beyblade G Core - Instarez - Aug. 04, 2021
The story overview for G Core is finished! I am adding the rest of the episode titles right now.
RE: Beyblade G Core - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 12:25 AM)Instarez Wrote: The story overview for G Core is finished! I am adding the rest of the episode titles right now.
Ok I can't wait to read!
RE: Beyblade G Core - Demon Belial - Aug. 04, 2021
I'll follow! It looks nice
RE: Beyblade G Core - PinkRose - Aug. 04, 2021
A whole new generation? Wow, that's not something you see often. Defnintely following.
RE: Beyblade G Core - Instarez - Aug. 04, 2021
Chapter 1: The Legend Begins
This is a world where a sport exists called Beyblade. It was made by the Apex Corporation. However tons of people suddenly "resonated" with their Beyblades, causing mysterious happening! Due to this there was a total recall that's still in affect. If you have a Bey, you can be targeted, and if you don't give it up they can use brutal force. Rei Osiris has always wanted a Beyblade. He lives deep in the country, so if he got one, they would never know......
(A boy is tinkering with the radio. It suddenly gets a signal.)
Announcer: Alright Bladers! Today's battle will start now!
Rei: Aw man, I wish I could have a Bey! Could I, Grandpa?
Grandpa: Beys are dangerous, it'l get you targeted. By the way, how'd you even get that signal?
Rei: It's a secret, maybe I'll tell you if you give me my very own Beyblade.
Grandpa: Jeez, you're a riot. Don't get yourself into trouble, got it!
(Rei runs off.)
Rei's Thoughts: Grandpa was an archeologist right? I think his work is cool, but why can't he just let me have a Beyblade? Now where are his tools....
(In the shed outside of his house, Rei finds lots of materials piled with sharp tools and a furnace.)
Rei: This is perfect! Now what should my bey be? Well, I can only go off of what I've been hearing from that radio. What was it, a Core, Switch, Drive, and Tip Right?
Rei: The core is simple! I'll make an emblem of a fierce night! (Rei molds the core.)
Rei: Now for the Switch...that's like ring a right? I'll make it all metal! (Rei lazily constructs a ring with 8 blades.)
Rei: The Drive is the underside.....c'mon think! Couldn't that be a weak spot? There's no weak spots on my bey! I'll make it shoot out spikes at attackers! (Rei builds a blue Drive with a spike mechanism.)
Rei: Now the easiest part, just a Tip. (Rei cuts a thin piece of rubber and attaches it to his bey.)
Rei: It's decided! You'll be...Radiant Artemis! You look a bit shabby though....a test launch is in order!
(Rei uses knives to cut up a small wooden dome.)
Rei: This is barely bigger than Artemis...Aw whatever, time for the launcher!
(Rei makes a wooden launcher, using the last of his gears.)
Rei: Time to test this out! What do they say? Oh yeah! 3, 2, 1, Let it Rip!
(His Beyblade speeds around, before launching out of the stadium and into the window.)
Rei: Woah, Artemis! You're so rowdy...just like me! I guess you're a perfect fit then huh? Now I'll have to keep training. Soon when you grace a grand stadium, you'll be faster that light itself!
(Rei runs outside, with Artemis and his launcher.)
Chapter 2: Artemis Trials
Rei: This is it! Go Artemis! Ultimate Destruction-
(Artemis hits a tree and ricochets into Rei's face.)
Rei: Aw man, they make this Beyblade stuff sound so easy. Maybe I should ask you how to do it, you're a Beyblade Artemis, right?
(Artemis shines in the sunlight.)
Rei: Hmm... First, I need to perfect my launch. A weak launch will give my Beyblade and bad start!
(Rei carves some stick figure's into a tree.)
Rei: Swing my arms to the left, jump forward, swing my arms back, and launch! It's perfect! Ready Artemis? 3, 2, 1, Let it Rip!
(Rei flies in the air, and them falls in a lake.)
Rei: What! Oh no! (Rei dives in the lake quickly to catch Artemis.)
(Hours Later)
Rei: It's already nighttime huh? I guess it's time for me to sleep. (Rei sleeps with Artemis in his hand. Suddenly, Artemis glows.)
Rei: What? Where am I?
???: You are more than you think you are. Discover your destiny with Artemis.
Rei: What, who are....(Rei blacks out)
(Rei wakes up to the sound of food cooking.)
Rei: Oh, that was a dream. Destiny? Me? I guess I should be Blading more? I already planned to do that though. Nah, this country side won't be enough. I have to meet new people, and see new things! Maybe even go against another Blader! I've decided! I'm heading over to Big City!
Grandpa: What are you yapping about? Come over here, it's time to eat.
Chapter 3 Preview
Rei: Please Grandpa! I'll be fine, see, check out Artemis!
Grandpa: You aren't going anywhere.....Apex is scary. I've seen what they've uncovered with my own 2 eyes.....I won't let you get exposed to their activities.
Rei: Scary, what do you mean by that?
Grandpa: Any who, just finish your Breakfast.
I hope you enjoy! I was worrying about this a lot, but I had a lot of fun writing the set up for my story! I've hid some important things here and there, so don't forget them, they'll be important near the end.
RE: Beyblade G Core - GenesisBlader - Aug. 04, 2021
holy guacamole! THIS EPISODE is AWESOME!!1!
keep up the good work bro!
RE: Beyblade G Core - LJ-Blader - Aug. 04, 2021
Love it! So excited for it to continue.
RE: Beyblade G Core - PinkRose - Aug. 04, 2021
It feels a little bit rushed in all honesty (or maybe it's the effect of playscript format, there's not much room for detail there) but so far it looks kinda neat. Let's see what happens next, we might see a new Blader or two..
RE: Beyblade G Core - LegendJustice - Aug. 04, 2021
Seemed short but I liked it keep the work up!
RE: Beyblade G Core - UnseenBurst - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 3:48 PM)Instarez Wrote: Chapter 1: The Legend Begins
This is a world where a sport exists called Beyblade. It was made by the Apex Corporation. However tons of people suddenly "resonated" with their Beyblades, causing mysterious happening! Due to this there was a total recall that's still in affect. If you have a Bey, you can be targeted, and if you don't give it up they can use brutal force. Rei Osiris has always wanted a Beyblade. He lives deep in the country, so if he got one, they would never know......
(A boy is tinkering with the radio. It suddenly gets a signal.)
Announcer: Alright Bladers! Today's battle will start now!
Rei: Aw man, I wish I could have a Bey! Could I, Grandpa?
Grandpa: Beys are dangerous, it'l get you targeted. By the way, how'd you even get that signal?
Rei: It's a secret, maybe I'll tell you if you give me my very own Beyblade.
Grandpa: Jeez, you're a riot. Don't get yourself into trouble, got it!
(Rei runs off.)
Rei's Thoughts: Grandpa was an archeologist right? I think his work is cool, but why can't he just let me have a Beyblade? Now where are his tools....
(In the shed outside of his house, Rei finds lots of materials piled with sharp tools and a furnace.)
Rei: This is perfect! Now what should my bey be? Well, I can only go off of what I've been hearing from that radio. What was it, a Core, Switch, Drive, and Tip Right?
Rei: The core is simple! I'll make an emblem of a fierce night! (Rei molds the core.)
Rei: Now for the Switch...that's like ring a right? I'll make it all metal! (Rei lazily constructs a ring with 8 blades.)
Rei: The Drive is the underside.....c'mon think! Couldn't that be a weak spot? There's no weak spots on my bey! I'll make it shoot out spikes at attackers! (Rei builds a blue Drive with a spike mechanism.)
Rei: Now the easiest part, just a Tip. (Rei cuts a thin piece of rubber and attaches it to his bey.)
Rei: It's decided! You'll be...Radiant Artemis! You look a bit shabby though....a test launch is in order!
(Rei uses knives to cut up a small wooden dome.)
Rei: This is barely bigger than Artemis...Aw whatever, time for the launcher!
(Rei makes a wooden launcher, using the last of his gears.)
Rei: Time to test this out! What do they say? Oh yeah! 3, 2, 1, Let it Rip!
(His Beyblade speeds around, before launching out of the stadium and into the window.)
Rei: Woah, Artemis! You're so rowdy...just like me! I guess you're a perfect fit then huh? Now I'll have to keep training. Soon when you grace a grand stadium, you'll be faster that light itself!
(Rei runs outside, with Artemis and his launcher.)
Chapter 2: Artemis Trials
Rei: This is it! Go Artemis! Ultimate Destruction-
(Artemis hits a tree and ricochets into Rei's face.)
Rei: Aw man, they make this Beyblade stuff sound so easy. Maybe I should ask you how to do it, you're a Beyblade Artemis, right?
(Artemis shines in the sunlight.)
Rei: Hmm... First, I need to perfect my launch. A weak launch will give my Beyblade and bad start!
(Rei carves some stick figure's into a tree.)
Rei: Swing my arms to the left, jump forward, swing my arms back, and launch! It's perfect! Ready Artemis? 3, 2, 1, Let it Rip!
(Rei flies in the air, and them falls in a lake.)
Rei: What! Oh no! (Rei dives in the lake quickly to catch Artemis.)
(Hours Later)
Rei: It's already nighttime huh? I guess it's time for me to sleep. (Rei sleeps with Artemis in his hand. Suddenly, Artemis glows.)
Rei: What? Where am I?
???: You are more than you think you are. Discover your destiny with Artemis.
Rei: What, who are....(Rei blacks out)
(Rei wakes up to the sound of food cooking.)
Rei: Oh, that was a dream. Destiny? Me? I guess I should be Blading more? I already planned to do that though. Nah, this country side won't be enough. I have to meet new people, and see new things! Maybe even go against another Blader! I've decided! I'm heading over to Big City!
Grandpa: What are you yapping about? Come over here, it's time to eat.
Chapter 3 Preview
Rei: Please Grandpa! I'll be fine, see, check out Artemis!
Grandpa: You aren't going anywhere.....Apex is scary. I've seen what they've uncovered with my own 2 eyes.....I won't let you get exposed to their activities.
Rei: Scary, what do you mean by that?
Grandpa: Any who, just finish your Breakfast.
I hope you enjoy! I was worrying about this a lot, but I had a lot of fun writing the set up for my story! I've hid some important things here and there, so don't forget them, they'll be important near the end.
This is really good, Rei seems like an interesting character and apparently, his Grandpa really dosen't want him Blading, maybe something happened in his past, that's what I'm theorizing. Overall Awesome Chapter, just work on grammer!
RE: Beyblade G Core - Demon Belial - Aug. 04, 2021
I liked both of them! But It will look more nice if yoy make it more long
RE: Beyblade G Core - Instarez - Aug. 04, 2021
Episodes 3 and 4 will release tomorrow. There we will meet the Blader that wields Thanatos for the first time.
RE: Beyblade G Core - Instarez - Aug. 05, 2021
Chapter 3: Because We Believe
(Rei's busy scarfing down his food, while his Grandpa is watching him in concern)
Grandpa: You Rei, you made a Beyblade right?
Rei: Wha? How'd you- what of course not!
Grandpa: Don't try to hide it, you where screaming like a maniac! I bet Apex Corp. could hear you all the way from Big City.
Rei: Oh yeah, about that. Grandpa, I really wanna go to Big City.
Grandpa: For what? Let me guess, Blading? Why would you go closer to Apex?
Rei: I understand it might not seem smart at first, however, I can meet new friends, right.
Grandpa: They're like animals. They'll beat you lifeless and steal everything you own. You aren't going any remotely close to the Apex Corp. building.
Rei: Please Grandpa! I'll be fine, see, check out Artemis!
Grandpa: You aren't going anywhere.....Apex is scary. I've seen what they've uncovered with my own 2 eyes.....I won't let you get exposed to their activities.
Rei: Scary, what do you mean by that?
Grandpa: What I mean is, ugh. How do you no you and you're bey won't be targeted!
Rei: Because we believe. Grandpa, I feel that I'm meant to go here, so it'll be fine.
Grandpa: You're stubborn as always....... Any who, just finish your Breakfast.
Rei: So, is that a yes. or what?
(Grandpa sat in silence, like he was reminiscing of a time long ago. Rei saw that he clearly wasn't focused on talking, so he finished his food in silence.)
Rei: How long has it been, 3 hours since Breakfast? Grandpa's been acting weird since then.....does he have some past connected to Apex? Whatever. If I can't go, I'll sneak my way out!
(Rei backed a backpack with some clothing, food, and Beyblade stuff.)
Rei: Am I really gonna do this? Even if I could left, would I really be leaving? I love Grandpa so much.....I don't think I could leave him. Whatever, I'll just Blade the day away.
(Rei spent the rest of the day perfecting his launch. The sound of "3,2,1, Let it Rip! echoed through his mind, but it couldn't keep the thoughts away of Grandpa leaving him one day. Could he ever come to terms with that? It was Afternoon. Rei's arms are sore, and he was hungry and covered in sweat.)
Rei: Beyblade....won't help me run away from my problems. Sorry Artemis. I wasn't even thinking about you.
(Rei somberly climbed into bed. he remembered the dream about his destiny. It seemed cool, leaving to the wide world, but he wanted to continue to stay with Grandpa, just a bit longer......)
(Rei woke up, to absolutely nothing. It was clearly afternoon, so why didn't Grandpa wake him up before. He saw tons of food packaged in pages on the kitchen counter, along with packets on water. Notes on them read "These things seem small, but they can hold a ton of water. Manage you drinking habits and this will get you through the rest of the tea.)
Rei: This, writing, it's Grandpa's. Grandpa! Where are you! Grandpa! (Rei quickly exited through the back door. He keep running, to the tree, past the lake, into swamp, and his legs couldn't take him any further. He somberly waddled back home, only to find his Grandpa quietly resting on the chair in front of the house. He touched his body, it was cold.)
Rei: I, Grandpa,......(Rei broke out into tears. He couldn't think straight He didn't have anything anymore. Why would he even consider leaving Grandpa. Why would he even dream of having this pain. He felt like a total douchebag.)
Rei: Grandpa! I saw, you had some notes near the workbench....of unfinished work. I wanna carry on your legacy but, I've got dreams too! Please....let me go, no. I'm gonna go to the Big City. I'll be fine, I promise. I, I...I won't be fine. But I have Artemis with me, and he helps me feel better. So don't worry about me! You can rest hear for as long as you like....I won't disturb you anymore..
(Rei wiped his tears and stacked all off is materials into a duffel bag. He saw a wallet loaded with cash. He felt kind of bad, but if he didn't take it, he wouldn't be able to survive. In it, he found a note. It read, "Hey Rei. My old age is finally catching up to me...I think I'm done for. I'll let you go to Big City. Don't get into any trouble. I love you. Rei didn't have the strength to smile, but he was truly happy. His Grandpa died in a realm of peace, so he didn't have to worry. He locked the door to the house, and hourryed away towards the main road. There, he would find the destiny he was searching for. Even if he jus had Artemis, he had somebody, and that was enough.)
Beyblade G Core: Prologue Complete
Chapter 4: First Rival
Rei: I can't believe it, I finally made it! (Rei was extremely tired and it was already noon due to traveling all day, but he had made it to Big City.)
Rei: Alright Artemis, yeah! (Rei lifts Artemis into the air, to fast actually. It flies out of his hand. Rei rushes down a hill to catch his Bey. He gets it, but crashes into a shack.)
Rei: Huh, what's this? A home? Oh, whoever lives here, my bad- wait, it's for sale?! It's also cheap! Alright, I've gotten lucky!
(Using Apex Corp.'s advanced system, all Rei had to do was put his money into a slot, and he immediately got the rights to the home, along with the key.)
Rei: It's a bit shabby, but I'll have to take what I can get I supposed. It's not bad at all though. I have food, water, a table, desk, bed, cooler, an actual Television, and microwave. I can make this work!
(Rei gets adjusted to his new home. The day passes by, and the next one begins.)
Rei: Alright, I'm pumped and ready to go! I came here for a reason after all, Beyblade! (Rei made the long trip into town. He was usually a bit wary of dark spots, however he headed straight for the alleyways and quickly found bladers.)
Rei: Woah, I made it! There's a stadium and everything! It took awhile to get here though, I should get a bike. Hey, anyone wanna bet on a match for some money?
Blader: A bet? Well, I know a guy. They call him "The Great Reaper". He does Money Matches.
Rei: Sweet, where would a find him? (The nice boy gives him direction to where this Reaper hangs out. Rei arrived before the Reaper did.)
Rei: Oh hey, took you long enough.
Reaper: Who are you exactly, and most importantly, do you have money?
Rei: I'm Rei Osiris, and I have a bunch of money ready to go!
(The Great Reaper thought about this kid. He didn't know him, he probably just moved into Big City. The only houses they have are on the Outskirts, that place is for the poor folks. I'll have to test him to see if he's worthy.)
Reaper: Sorry, I only accept those with the password.
Rei: Password? C'mon man, just take the cash, I really got to do something! (The Great Reaper just turned his back and stood in silence.)
Rei: Aw you little....whatever, I'll get this password!
(Rei left and reflected on some info. There's 3 main blading spots, all in Back Alleys. A B and C. He got this info from A and was just at B, so he decided to check out C.)
Rei: Hey guys, anyone know of a password I can use to challenge The Great Reaper?
Blader: I know of one, but it was hard to get, so I won't be giving it out.
Rei: How about this, If I beat you in a battle, you give me the password. That sound good?
Blader: Alright, but it'll be a 1-3 vs me and my 2 buddies. (2 more Bladers stepped up).
(Rei thought that this seemed a bit unfair, but he was willing to battle and trusted in Artemis' strength.)
Everyone: 3,2,1, Let it Rip! (The beys flew throughout the stadium. 1 Beyblade headed straight for Artemis, while the other 2 where at the center.)
Rei: This is our first real challenge, but we won't give in! Deflect the attack Artemis!
(Using it's 8 blades, Artemis successfully deflected the attack and pushed the attacker out of the stadium)
Blader: I'm coming next! My rubber will decimate you! (1 of the Beys in the center clashed with Artemis. Artemis retaliated by using it's metal to tear through the rubber, knocking the attacker out of the stadium.)
(The final Blader thought for a second. Simply rushing in won't work, even with some extra power. He would need to attack a weak point....how about the underbelly of the Bey?)
Blader: Now, hit it's Drive! (The final Beyblade went straight for Artemis' Drive, and clashed into it.)
Rei: Exactly what I needed! Artemis, counter! (4 spikes jutted out of Artemis' Drive, knocking the attacking Bey away and destabilizing it.)
Rei: Now, full force Artemis! (Artemis went straight for the final Bey, and knocked it out of the stadium.)
Rei: We did it! Now, could I have the password?! (Everyone picked up their Beys.)
Blader: It's supposed to be in this letter, but I haven't even opened it yet.
(Rei excitedly rushed back to The Great Reaper, Artemis and letter in hand, he arrived, with the Reaper waiting for him.)
Rei: Alright, now here's the password! (He opened the letter, only to be puzzled. It was a coupon for some toy robot called "Super Robo X".)
Rei: Um....Super Robo X? (The Great Reaper simply nodded and led Rei into a room. In it was a stadium. It was finally time to battle.)
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Rei: I'll be putting 100 on the line! I assume you'll do the same?
(The Reaper was confused. Is this guy and idiot? he thought.)
Reaper: Thanatos has no weak points. Your done!
Rei: Sorry, but that 100 belongs to me! Artemis, attack!
RE: Beyblade G Core - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 05, 2021
Great Chapters! There were some grammer mistakes here and there, The battle was great too.
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