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Beyblade Burst Eternals
Chapter 1: The Soaring Beast! Wind Pegasus


Chapter 2: Sekhmet’s Blazing Defense! Fire Burst!


Chapter 3: The Black Knight! Negative Perseus!
(Jun. 28, 2019  3:28 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Beyblade Burst Eternals
Chapter 1: The Soaring Beast! Wind Pegasus
It’s a little confusing at times but otherwise it’s mostly good!
Amazing start! Its pretty cool to see that this makes Metal and Burst in one universe. The original Bit Beast designs are pretty interesting! I especially like Sekhmet
Chapter 2: Sekhmet’s Blazing Defense! Fire Burst!

(Jun. 28, 2019  3:45 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Amazing start! Its pretty cool to see that this makes Metal and Burst in one universe. The original Bit Beast designs are pretty interesting! I especially like Sekhmet

Technically, Multiverse. Characters from Burst may pop in occasionally
I like this story!
So are you continuing this story?
(Jul. 12, 2019  9:11 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: [ -> ]So are you continuing this story?

Yep. Chapters just take a while to write
Awesome Story!
(Jul. 12, 2019  10:07 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 12, 2019  9:11 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: [ -> ]So are you continuing this story?

Yep. Chapters just take a while to write
Thanks! Also sorry for being sorta impatient.
Chapter 3: The Black Knight! Negative Perseus!

Also, here's some food for thought:

The next chapter is called: 'The Crimson Conclusion! Shu Kurenai!'
Would you guys be happy with shorter but more frequent chapters?
(Aug. 12, 2019  5:38 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Would you guys be happy with shorter but more frequent chapters?

Whatever makes you happier.
(Aug. 12, 2019  5:38 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Would you guys be happy with shorter but more frequent chapters?

Depends what you want and what makes you feel better. It also depends on how much time you have, too
Okay, chapters will be shorter Smile
This story is not dead, I won’t let another story slip away so quick, but it is on indefinite hiatus, sorry