Feb. 22, 2019 12:44 AM
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Feb. 22, 2019 1:11 AM
Yes you did
You’re lying
You’re lying
Feb. 22, 2019 1:21 AM
(Feb. 22, 2019 1:11 AM)Red phi Wrote: [ -> ]Yes you did
You’re lying
1. This is my story and I can add minor tweaks to it
2. If you’re not happy then just say it and your character will be removed
Feb. 22, 2019 1:27 AM
(Feb. 22, 2019 1:11 AM)Red phi Wrote: [ -> ]Yes you did
You’re lying
Why are you being salty about this? Instead of trying to attack a user, go ahead and write your own story. I was upset that Norman Tarver didnt appear much, but what I do? Instead, I write headcanons and stories featuring him, on my own terms since it didnt go my way. Maybe try not to hurt Cheeto, because that is considered immature. This is his story, so let him do what he wish. If this upsets you so much, then write one yourself. It’s only a couple words after all
Feb. 22, 2019 1:34 AM
(Feb. 22, 2019 1:27 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ](Feb. 22, 2019 1:11 AM)Red phi Wrote: [ -> ]Yes you did
You’re lying
Why are you being salty about this? Instead of trying to attack a user, go ahead and write your own story. I was upset that Norman Tarver didnt appear much, but what I do? Instead, I write headcanons and stories featuring him, on my own terms since it didnt go my way. Maybe try not to hurt Cheeto, because that is considered immature. This is his story, so let him do what he wish. If this upsets you so much, then write one yourself. It’s only a couple words after all
It’s just we had a deal
Feb. 22, 2019 1:38 AM
(Feb. 22, 2019 1:34 AM)Red phi Wrote: [ -> ]Not a deal! Just an arrangement!(Feb. 22, 2019 1:27 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Why are you being salty about this? Instead of trying to attack a user, go ahead and write your own story. I was upset that Norman Tarver didnt appear much, but what I do? Instead, I write headcanons and stories featuring him, on my own terms since it didnt go my way. Maybe try not to hurt Cheeto, because that is considered immature. This is his story, so let him do what he wish. If this upsets you so much, then write one yourself. It’s only a couple words after all
It’s just we had a deal
Feb. 22, 2019 1:39 AM
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Feb. 22, 2019 2:08 AM
Deal or no deal, Cheeto is using your character, though. Glad to see this arrangement work out. Although, this is still his story and work. You can have your character in, but let Cheeto work this out on his own terms. Dont pull any stress on him at all
Feb. 23, 2019 3:43 AM
Chapter 11: Dead Hades!
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“Time to take you down Hartz!” “Good luck. You’ll need it.” Ready Set! 3!…2! The lights turned off then a spotlight came on a person wearing a red outfit. “I’ve come to take you down Hartz!” “Phi! I’m in the middle of something here!” “I don’t care! Battle me or else!” “Fine!” “Wait! What about my battle?” “You can wait!” Ready Set! 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Phoenix took the center while Hades circled around the stadium. “Hades! Dead Gravity!” Hades started circling Phoenix while closing in. Finally Hades started hitting Phoenix while clashing with it. Phoenix’s Armour came off. “Go! Revive Armour Impact!” The Revive Armour flew down on to Hades making it burst. “2 points to Revive Phoenix! Phi wins!” “Our turn!” Then Roan’s and Colin’s mom called on the phone. “Roan! You said you’d be home an hour ago!” “Coming mom!”
…To Be Continued
…To Be Continued
Mar. 04, 2019 4:23 AM
Sorry for the lack of chapters but I’ve been busy lately! I just wanted to say thank you for all of your support and liking my stories! If I had a dollar for each like I got I would be a Millionaire! :D Thank You!
Also let me know if I should make this story interactive! XD
Also let me know if I should make this story interactive! XD
Mar. 04, 2019 4:32 AM
sounds cool.
Also I sent my character to you.
Also I sent my character to you.
Mar. 08, 2019 12:15 AM
Chapter 12: Turn Zombie!
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Roan got home and ate his dinner. After he finished he went to his older brother Zack and asked him to battle. “The stadium is too far.” Zack said. “Well what do you want me to do!? Bring the stadium here?” “Yep.” “Fine.” Roan rolled the stadium into the house. “You happy?” “Yep.” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack’s BEYBLADE Turn Zombie took the center wobbling because Zack had hand spun. “Revenge! Attack!” Revenge had knocked the armor off Zombie. “Keep attacking Revenge!” Revenge kept attacking but Zombie was gaining spin. “I hate that strategy!” Roan said. Revenge bounced on the armor making the armor get flinged into the air. “Go. Zombie. Rubber press.” Revenge hit Zombie but then the armor came down and hit Revenge too making Revenge burst. “Haha now get out of my room.”
…To Be Continued
…To Be Continued
Mar. 08, 2019 12:34 AM
(Mar. 08, 2019 12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 12: Turn Zombie!Amazing! More!
Spoiler (Click to View)Roan got home and ate his dinner. After he finished he went to his older brother Zack and asked him to battle. “The stadium is too far.” Zack said. “Well what do you want me to do!? Bring the stadium here?” “Yep.” “Fine.” Roan rolled the stadium into the house. “You happy?” “Yep.” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack’s BEYBLADE Turn Zombie took the center wobbling because Zack had hand spun. “Revenge! Attack!” Revenge had knocked the armor off Zombie. “Keep attacking Revenge!” Revenge kept attacking but Zombie was gaining spin. “I hate that strategy!” Roan said. Revenge bounced on the armor making the armor get flinged into the air. “Go. Zombie. Rubber press.” Revenge hit Zombie but then the armor came down and hit Revenge too making Revenge burst. “Haha now get out of my room.”
…To Be Continued
Mar. 08, 2019 3:08 AM
(Mar. 08, 2019 12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 12: Turn Zombie!
Spoiler (Click to View)Roan got home and ate his dinner. After he finished he went to his older brother Zack and asked him to battle. “The stadium is too far.” Zack said. “Well what do you want me to do!? Bring the stadium here?” “Yep.” “Fine.” Roan rolled the stadium into the house. “You happy?” “Yep.” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack’s BEYBLADE Turn Zombie took the center wobbling because Zack had hand spun. “Revenge! Attack!” Revenge had knocked the armor off Zombie. “Keep attacking Revenge!” Revenge kept attacking but Zombie was gaining spin. “I hate that strategy!” Roan said. Revenge bounced on the armor making the armor get flinged into the air. “Go. Zombie. Rubber press.” Revenge hit Zombie but then the armor came down and hit Revenge too making Revenge burst. “Haha now get out of my room.”
…To Be Continued
I liked the last line, haha!
Mar. 08, 2019 2:21 PM
(Mar. 08, 2019 12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 12: Turn Zombie!
Spoiler (Click to View)Roan got home and ate his dinner. After he finished he went to his older brother Zack and asked him to battle. “The stadium is too far.” Zack said. “Well what do you want me to do!? Bring the stadium here?” “Yep.” “Fine.” Roan rolled the stadium into the house. “You happy?” “Yep.” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack’s BEYBLADE Turn Zombie took the center wobbling because Zack had hand spun. “Revenge! Attack!” Revenge had knocked the armor off Zombie. “Keep attacking Revenge!” Revenge kept attacking but Zombie was gaining spin. “I hate that strategy!” Roan said. Revenge bounced on the armor making the armor get flinged into the air. “Go. Zombie. Rubber press.” Revenge hit Zombie but then the armor came down and hit Revenge too making Revenge burst. “Haha now get out of my room.”
…To Be Continued
remember the thread you post about us making characters for this are you going to use them
Mar. 08, 2019 4:15 PM
(Mar. 08, 2019 2:21 PM)Jack jackson Wrote: [ -> ](Mar. 08, 2019 12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 12: Turn Zombie!
Spoiler (Click to View)Roan got home and ate his dinner. After he finished he went to his older brother Zack and asked him to battle. “The stadium is too far.” Zack said. “Well what do you want me to do!? Bring the stadium here?” “Yep.” “Fine.” Roan rolled the stadium into the house. “You happy?” “Yep.” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack’s BEYBLADE Turn Zombie took the center wobbling because Zack had hand spun. “Revenge! Attack!” Revenge had knocked the armor off Zombie. “Keep attacking Revenge!” Revenge kept attacking but Zombie was gaining spin. “I hate that strategy!” Roan said. Revenge bounced on the armor making the armor get flinged into the air. “Go. Zombie. Rubber press.” Revenge hit Zombie but then the armor came down and hit Revenge too making Revenge burst. “Haha now get out of my room.”
…To Be Continued
remember the thread you post about us making characters for this are you going to use them
While Cheeto may have plans, please be patient. The last time he and I discussed this, he is currently using filler chapters/has no current ideas. Im not sure when the characters will be used
Mar. 08, 2019 4:30 PM
(Mar. 08, 2019 4:15 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]REDACTED COMMENT BECAUSE I AM TERMINALLY STUPID AND DISRESPECTFUL(Mar. 08, 2019 2:21 PM)Jack jackson Wrote: [ -> ]remember the thread you post about us making characters for this are you going to use them
While Cheeto may have plans, please be patient. The last time he and I discussed this, he is currently using filler chapters/has no current ideas. Im not sure when the
Mar. 08, 2019 4:48 PM
(Mar. 08, 2019 4:30 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: [ -> ](Mar. 08, 2019 4:15 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]While Cheeto may have plans, please be patient. The last time he and I discussed this, he is currently using filler chapters/has no current ideas. Im not sure when the characters will be used
He told me but I won't tell you
When people like Geardini say things like this, I remember why I never tell anybody my plans or accept requests
Mar. 08, 2019 4:57 PM
Oops lol so sorry
Mar. 08, 2019 10:28 PM