WOOF!!! To avoid this going on to the next page, here is chapter 2: The Evil Within
last paragraph will feature ???'s POV again.
I looked into Pegasus's emerald eyes, glistening in the early morning light. They were too familiar! But from WHERE? Ahh! I raised my launcher. "FINE! I'll take you on. But when I crush and defeat you, you have to reveal your identity" He laughed. "Sure, whatever" He narrowed his gaze. "But I won't lose" He raised his completely blue launcher. "But if you lose, you and your buddies will have to catch the next flight back to loser-ville" I attached Dranzer. "Talk is cheap. Care to try me?" He smiled. "I'd be happy to" He attached his bey, which looked to be a weird Metal Wheel made of a really heavy metal alloyed that closely resembled Thermal, Pegasus 130 SD. His entire bey shone in a brilliant blue, like.....like.........like WHO'S old eyes? Agh! I don't care I thought. Who cares about this nobody? I'll put him in his place soon enough. Dranzer's energy surrounded me, and I was ready to battle. However, Christian and Jin didn't look ready to back me up. "Don't battle!" Christian exclaimed. "We know nothing about this guy, and we have more important matters to attend to" "You have to listen to Christian" Jin added. "He makes a valid point" I frowned. "So you guys aren't gonna back me up?" They nodded, and I growled. "No! I refuse to back down from any challenged!" "Ethan, no!" Christian shouted. "Listen to reason! You're letting your emotions and your conscience get the best of you!" But I was ignoring them now. I was going to battle, with or without my teammates support. Pegasus laughed. "How intriguing," He said. "Yah Ethan, listen to your pals. After all, it will save you from embarrassing yourself as I trash your bey" That was it. Something in me snapped right then and there. I had had it with this guy. He knew how to get under my skin, and he did. The red aura around me became a darker, blood red, and my eyes became little embers. "THAT'S IT!!!" I screamed, drawing the attention of everyone in the airport. "YOU ARE TOAST!" We counted down, and launched. In the middle of the airport! Dranzer wasted no time at all at going on the attack. He tore and clashed at Secret Pegasus, who was being pushed back. But despite Dranzers rapid attacks, Pegasus seemed surprisingly calm. He chuckled. "If that's the best you can do," He antagonized. "You're way out of your league" The dark red energy became a night black. "Ethan?" Jin asked. "Are you ok?" Suddenly the energy was channeled directly into my bey, and it shook with power. "AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!" I screamed. The next words that came out of my mouth were unreal, and I felt like it wasn't even me saying them. "Dark Move," I began. "BLACK SOL FIRE COMET!!!!" Dranzer went up like for a normal attck, but the emblem that flashed was different somehow.........then a black fire tore out from Dranzer in ripples of power, beginning to destroy the airport. People fled in ever which direction, screaming and clearly avoiding me. "Ethan!" Christian shouted. "What are you doing!" I only screamed louder, and Dranzers mid-air assault continued. And Pegasus actually looked surprised by this. "So in the end Brooklyn did it" He said calmly. "Interesting. Alright now Secret Pegasus!" His bey soared up at Dranzer. "Special Move!" He cried. "Radiant aura-" "NOW DRANZER!" I shouted, interrupting his special move. Dranzer formed a dark ball of energy around himself, then he dove into the ground, creating a blast so powerfull the entire airport exploded. The attack claimed numerous planes as its' victims. A black light burst through the place and shook it to pieces. Then, slowly, the attack stopped. And with it, so did..................Dranzer. Suddenly a dark shadow drained from my body, leaving me to fall as I blacked out. "Ethan!" Christian cried, and Jin grabbed me. Meanwhile, Pegasus was nowhere in sight. He was gone.
When I finally came to, I was on the floor of what was left of the airport, my clothes scattered rags of what they once were. I was in terrible shape, and I felt as though I had been hit by a truck full of porcupines. I sat up, and my teammates were on either side of me. To my horror, I surveyed the carnage that I had caused. I blinked back a tear. "Did I-...." I asked my teammates, willing them to lie, to tell a different story, how this was not my fault. To my dismay, they nodded. And I cried.
Now ???'s POV
As I returned to my body, I held the bey in my hands again. I almost smiled. Brooklyn and Pegasus had done their jobs for me. Now, the time was right. As if to assure me, the door to my cramped room opened, and Boris entered. "Now is the time," He said. "You are ready, my warrior. Destroy him. Destroy-Ethan" I licked my lips and smiled. I'm going to kill you I thought to myself. Black Dranzer and I.
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(Feb. 01, 2011 1:05 AM)death unicorn Wrote: [ -> ]yo dude i <3 the story !!!!! and i have a character and i hope u could put him in please
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he is a high spirited blader but mysterious partner mf flame Pegasus d125 wd stamina type (sm triforce )
I don't have any room......unless he is a mechanic which I'm guessing wasn't your intention.......
and I kinda already have a pegasus.........