A Whirlwind Is Coming..
Picture this: a young teenage boy, with fair skin and blonde hair, is suddenly pushed to the ground with great force by a towering, muscular guy with bulging biceps, a sharp jaw, and huge pecs. The boy falls to the ground with a loud thud, his heart racing with fear and confusion. It's a terrifying scene that no one should ever have to experience.
???: Ow! What the heck!?
Narrator: The slim teenage caucasian boy? The one with blue hair & eyes? The one crying on the ground? The weak dude? The guy with the big forehead? The guy with the long-sleeved blue shirt? That guy? Do you see him? Of course you don’t this is writing. His name is Wonder and bullying is pretty much normal for him.
???: What’s wrong? Do you want to cry, Wonder?
Wonder: Just back off Zack!
"A heartless smile comes from the cold figure."
Zack: Nah, I don’t think so.
Wonder: Uh oh…
The tension builds as the screen suddenly fades to black, leaving nothing but the intense sounds of punches being thrown in the background.
3 hours later…
Wonder was sentenced to detention by the principal, who scowled at him with a stern expression.
As Wonder steps out into the cold, gloomy world, a deafening thunder rumbles in the distance and the heavens open up, pouring down rain. It's as if the elements are trying to drown out the world, but Wonder remains undaunted, trudging through the deluge with unbreakable determination.
Wonder: Ah great.
As Wonder walks down the sidewalk dragging his feet with his head down avoiding eye contact with people he walks by.
Wonder: Why is my life like this...
Narrator: Wonder has lived a very sad life. He has not-so-loving parents & gets bullied by his peers for many reasons... This causes him to feel always dull. Except for one thing...
1 hour later...
Wonder arrives home and opens the door, only to be met by two angry parents staring at him.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder...
Wonder's heart sinks as he begins to feel chills of fear.
So he just awkwardly smiles knowing things won’t end well for him…
Wonder (Thoughts): I’m dead.
Wonder’s Mom: You worthless idiot!!!! Where the hell have you been!?
Wonder: Uh.. school?
Wonder’s Dad: Don’t ever talk like that to me!!!
Wonder’s Mom: Um.. me too honey.
Wonder’s mother looks at her husband with her head down.
Wonder’s Dad: Yeah, whatever.
Wonder: But-!?
Wonder’s Dad: That is it! You're gonna wash the dishes, clean the bathroom, and make us dinner! Keyword: Us! Meaning me and your mother… NOT YOU.
Wonder's face begins to turn red as his anger rises.
Wonder: Why are you so mean to me!? I haven’t done anything to deserve this!
Wonder’s Mom: Yes you have! You are the reason Jack is dead!
*Flashback begins*
A young Wonder chases his brother Jack as they both run on the sidewalk.
Young Wonder: I’m gonna get you!
Jack: No! I’m too fas-
Then all of a sudden Jack trips as his shoelaces are untied causing him to flop to the ground.
Jack: Ahh!
Unfortunately, a rushing car then comes out of nowhere colliding with Jack
Wonder: Jack!
*Flashback ends*
Wonder’s Dad: Playing tag in the middle of the road! Are you insane!?
Wonder: We were five.. Five!
Wonder’s Mom: Well because of you the child I cared for and had in my womb is dead!
Wonder’s Dad: He lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
The parents walk out of the living room angrily leaving a heartbroken Wonder to stand alone in absolute silence & pain as tears begin to form & roll down his eyes
Wonder: I hate my life.
5 hours later...
Wonder lays flat on the bright blue bed in his room full of spaceships & cars as he just lets out a big...
“Sigh”
Wonder (Thoughts): If only things could’ve been different.
Wonder then picks up the remote & begins to flip through channels using his thumb until he encounters...
Wonder: The Beyblade Channel!!! My favorite! Alongside the cooking channel, the wrestling channel & etc..!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Quiet!!!
The TV screen shows two bladers battling with their beys in a huge arena filled with tons of excited people cheering & clapping.
Wonder: Woah…
Wonder continues to stare at his screen as he can’t look away just in pure awe he grins.
Narrator: That one thing is Beyblade! Wonder has loved Beyblades since he was a little kid & it is one of the few hobbies that brings joy to his heart.
Wonder: Maybe this could one day be me?
Wonder eyes widen in shock.
Wonder: Wait, this could be me..?
Wonder continues to stare in realization…
Wonder: What am I doing? I should become a Blader!!!!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Be quiet!!!!
Wonder rolls his eyes discarding what his father said.
Wonder: I have a new goal... Time to start a new journey!
Wonder jumps up into the air with his left hand up as he has found newfound determination & purpose.
Wonder’s Dad (From another room *again*): For the last f-ing time.. Be quiet!!!!
Wonder quickly rushes back into the lying position on his bed hearing what his father had just said.
Wonder: Well I will tomorrow. Gonna find that BeyLab so I can make my new Beyblade!
Narrator: The journey of Beyblade Whirlpool has just begun!
Wonder quickly lies up in absolute confusion looking around.
Wonder: Who’s speaking?
Narrator: Uh.. nobody.
Wonder: I can hear you. I have ears.
Narrator: Oh um.. Dang it.
Then the next day…
Wonder speeds down the busy sidewalk as he pushes people out of the way with his fiery heart inside lit with new passion!
Wonder: Gotta find that BeyLab!!
Wonder then suddenly comes to a screeching halt as he investigates the area with there being many buildings, stores, & trees (lots of trees) in absolute confusion.
Wonder: Hold up? Where am I? Am I lost? Ugh! Can my luck get any worse?
Wonder searches around the area to find any blader until he eventually finds a short, chubby-looking male figure with black hair, a blue t-shirt, & brown joggers holding a launcher.
Wonder: A-ha!
Wonder rushes to the boy eager for answers as his legs and arms swing.
Wonder: Hey kid!
The boy's eyes widen in shock, and he begins to run off in absolute fear.
Wonder: Wait! Come back!
Meanwhile at Wonder’s house..
Wonder’s Dad sits at the glass dining table with a pale expression on his face as if he has seen a ghost.
Wonder’s Mom quickly takes notes and addresses her husband.
Wonder’s Mom: Darling, are you okay?
Wonder’s Dad: I just miss Jack.. y’ know?
His wife wraps her thin arms around his thick neck.
Wonder’s Dad: I suffered a lot too when I was younger...
Wonder’s Mom: Honey, we’re gonna be okay.
Wonder’s father looks down at his full plate of veggies
Wonder’s Dad: My dad made me suffer when I was younger and I just didn’t want to go through more pain...
*Sighs*
Wonder’s Mom: We're going to be okay. Now eat.
*Meanwhile in the town*
Boy: Ahhh!!!
Wonder continues to sprint as he chases the boy through the busy city.
Wonder: Stop! Come back!
Wonder pushes people out of the way.
Wonder: Move!
Finally, the boy gets to a dead end as he stops at a huge wall with no other way to escape.
Wonder: Hey!
Wonder begins to slow down running out of breath trapping the boy.
Wonder: I just wanted to know where the BeyLab is.
The young boy's jaw drops.
Boy: That’s why you chased me!?
Wonder shakes his head back & forth.
Wonder: Uh.. yeah?
The boy continues to stare in absolute disbelief at Wonder.
Boy: Wow.
*10 minutes later..*
Wonder & the young boy both arrive at the gigantic 5-level BeyLab building with the sun shining upon it in all its glory. It glows with a white/blue color design and it is circular with a big fat red logo with a Beyblade symbol with the words “BEYLAB”.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder continues to stare in awe
Wonder: Thanks for…
Wonder said as he began to turn his head to the left to thank the young boy just to see him running off
Wonder: Okay?
Wonder gains a huge grin spreading across his face.
Wonder: Here we go…
Wonder climbs up the small number of stairs eagerly.
Wonder then finally goes through the automatic doors into a brand-new world. The inside features many bladers & scientists plus lots of Bey stadiums + 4 huge screens featuring previous broadcast Bey battles.
Wonder: Yo!!!
Wonder looks around with a huge grin, eyes wide open, & his jaw dropped.
Wonder rushes to the small front counter with a chubby female scientist with curly red hair & lots of freckles.
Wonder: Hello!
The female scientist stares directly at Wonder…
Female Scientist: Hi…
Wonder: Please! I want to make my own new Beyblade!
Female Scientists: 50 bucks.
Wonder eyes lower with his mouth wide open
Wonder: What the hell!? What do you mean 50 bucks!?
Female Scientist: Well I have to make money somehow.
Wonder slightly tilts his head right.
Wonder: Guess you have a point…
Female Scientists: So do you have money?
Wonder slowly and awkwardly smiles.
Wonder: Well.. so you see.
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder: Wait! But-
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder looks down with his eyebrows lowered and his back tilted.
???: Wait.
Wonder turns his head to see a slender build, brown eyes, and beautiful brown hair. Completed with a blue tank top a sleek black jacket & bright blue denim jeans that hug her legs along with stylish blue/yellow Nike shoes.
Wonder's eyes immediately light up as he is quickly in complete memorization.
Wonder: Woah…
Then he begins to gain a wide smile on his face as he feels a rush of chills.
Wonder: Hey.
The female smiles and nods her head.
???: I’ll pay for him.
Wonder: What!?
???: It’s alright.
She lightly taps his shoulders immediately giving another chill rush to Wonder seducing him without even trying.
Female Scientist: Are you sure Feng?
Feng: Positive.
Feng pulls out 60$ from her sky-blue wallet and hands it to the female scientists causing the scientist's face to immediately light up.
Female Scientist: Thank you!
Feng thugs Wonder’s shirt as a signal to go into the elevator
*10 minutes later..*
*Swoosh*
As the automatic door opens welcoming both Wonder & Feng into the huge clean lab room full of computers, launchers, & one huge stadium.
Feng: Well here we are!
Wonder can’t help but grin.
Wonder: Thank you so much, Feng! But why did you pay?
*Feng chuckles smiling*
Feng: I saw how excited you were and I didn’t want your excitement to turn into disappointment.
Wonder: Well thanks a lot. I always dreamed of becoming a big blader only problem never really knew if I could do it.
Feng: Well you never know until you try.
*Wonder stares smiling*
Wonder: Yeah. If I may ask though who are you? Like you know?
Feng: Well I’m 15, a blader, and someone who just loves helping people.
Wonder: Really?
Feng: Yeah, I like drawing, music, dancing & superheroes.
Wonder: Cool, I am 16, a future blader, and I’ve always been into cooking, action, and well... as you could probably tell Beyblade.
Feng: Yeah I can see that, but what exactly do you plan for yourself?
Wonder: I want to become the strongest blader alive!
Feng stares confusingly as if she is expecting more.
Feng: That’s it?
Wonder: Well..
Wonder cheery tone starts to be replaced by something far duller as he looks down frowning
Wonder: I- my whole life... Have always been pushed by everyone and nobody ever believes in me and thinks I’ll grow up to be a… failure…
Feng simply frowns with a dull expression
Feng: I’m so sorry…
*Wonder nods*
Wonder: So I want to prove everyone wrong... And make something of myself. To finally live a happy life and to make Jack proud.
Feng’s left eyebrow raises
Feng: Excuse me? Who’s Jack?
Wonder eyes widen
Wonder: Um never mind..
Feng moves slightly closer to Wonder
Feng: You can tell-
Wonder then begins to boil up inside as he fights not to let his emotions get the best of him until…
Wonder: I SAID I DON” T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT!
Wonder's voice echoes across the room and for a few seconds absolute silence
Wonder takes his left hand and rubs his eyes
Wonder: I’m sorry… I should’ve yelled… I’d just-
Feng: It’s okay… I understand it’s none of my business.
Wonder nods his head with a dull expression on his face as frowns.
Feng: Do your parents believe in you?
Wonder depressingly shakes his head left & right indicating no as his eyes begin to get watery.
*Feng sighs*
Feng: Why would they not believe in their child?
Wonder: I prefer not to talk about it…
Feng: Well it’s okay. At the end of the day as long as your okay.
Wonder smiles as he fights back his tears.
Wonder: Don’t worry I’m okay.
Feng: Let me help you make your new bey!
Wonder slightly raises his hands in disagreement.
Wonder: You-
Feng: I insist.
Wonder smile gets bigger
Wonder: Sure, thank you.
*Feng smiles*
Feng: No problem.
Wonder: Well shall we uh… get started?
Feng has a cute smile as she fixes her hair
Feng: Let’s get to work.
*Montage begins* (Insert song “Unstoppable” from The Score)
Wonder gets out 3 sheets of plain white paper and begins to sketch out his ideas for his new bey with art that seems to impress Feng. The sketch shows off a four-bladed bey with seemingly a Knight motif intriguing Feng.
Wonder then begins to type quickly on the computer keyboard as we transition to the computer screen showing off a 3d model of Wonder’s new bey in a 2000s-like green background.
Finally, Wonder begins to watch as a tiny white/black 3d printer prints out Wonder’s new bey while adding some dark blue color to its design.
*Montage Ends* (So does the song)
Wonder: Whew! It’s done!!!!
Wonder jumps up high into the air holding up his new Beyblade as his eyes are wide open, has a huge smile with his white teeth showing, and eyebrows lit up.
Wonder: Welcome Whirlwind Knight!!!!!
*Feng smiles*
Feng: You did it.
Wonder: Thanks to you.
Feng: So what about the bey?
Wonder then suddenly puts on thin black sleek glasses.
Wonder: Time to get my nerd mode on!
*Feng giggles*
Feng: Okay?
Wonder: The core Knight in question is a right-spinning core that exhibits a striking color scheme of dark blue and bright purplish hues, which blend seamlessly to create a visually captivating appearance. Adding to its appeal is the presence of a winged knight motif, which gives it a sense of nobility and strength. Overall, this object is both aesthetically pleasing and intriguing.
Feng: Continue?
Wonder: The blade is called Whirlwind! Firstly, it has a four-bladed attack-type blade. The blade is designed in a way that is perfect for offensive play, allowing you to launch powerful attacks against your opponent. Secondly, the color scheme of the bey is quite stunning. It has a dark blue color scheme with some bright purplish color on the blades, which gives it a very modern and sleek look. Lastly, the main feature of this bey is its bound attack. What this means is that if you push back the four-blade far enough, a spring is activated, which allows the bey to knock the opponent's bey back with tremendous force. It's a fantastic feature and can give you an edge over your opponents.
Feng: And for the driver?
Wonder: It’s called “Typhoon” There honestly is not much to say about it.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder grips Whirlwind Knight in his palm tightly with a big smile on his face.
Wonder (Thoughts): Finally we're on our way….
*Flashback begins*
Wonder’s Father: Jack lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
*Flashback Ends*
Wonder (Thoughts): We’re gonna prove you wrong!
Narrator: And so we have the birth of Whirlwind Knight! Now the journey truly begins! And we have to end this episode because it’s far too long-
Wonder & Feng both search around the empty room looking for answers.
Wonder/Feng: Who’s that?
Narrator: Oh brother.
To be continued…
The first episode is finally here! Please tell me your thoughts on what you like & what I could improve on for future episodes