World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

So this thread is being revived as the general BeyFic thread so I don't keep making new threads and I’ll also be announcing a brand new BeyFic tomorrow. I do miss writing these so I’m excited to come back!

Im looking to see what you have to create!

Announcing the new series…
Bey100’s Beyblade X!
This will be my own version of the Beyblade X story! I am aware that the X manga and anime exists but I’m still doing my own thing!
Characters + Beys:

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Story:

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Bey100’s Beyblade X Episode 1:
X!!! The Journey Begins!!!!

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The First Episode Is Here! Hope You Enjoy!
Also a few updates regarding the future of the thread:

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“Become The Legend”
Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends Official Teaser Trailer:

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(Sep. 14, 2023 2:06 AM)Bey100 Wrote: [ -> ]Bey100’s Beyblade X Episode 1:
X!!! The Journey Begins!!!!

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There’s a shot of a boy in red clothes and red hair running down the sidewalk

Then the boy stops and smiles

In the distance he sees a crowd of people gathering around a beyblade stadium

The boy walks through the crowd and gets to the stadium

Then he declares…

Bird: My name is Bird Kazumi!!! And this is my beyblade!

Bird holds up a bey with a hawk motif design

Bird: Strike Hawk!

The crowd stares in awe

???: Stupid little bey….

Then an extremely buff guy from the crowd walks up to the stadium

Takumi: My name is Takumi Ishiyama! And this is my bey!

Takumi holds up a bulky designed bey

Takumi: Stone Mont Blanc!

The crowd once again stares in awe

Bird laughs

Bird: So you want a battle?

Takumi smirks

Takumi: What do ya think?

Bird then gets out his launcher as there is a nice red sparkle effect

Takumi gets his launcher out too

Bird: I’m warning you…. you’re gonna lose!

Takumi laughs

Takumi: Yeah sure.

Random Kid: First Battle!

Bird and Takumi get in their launch positions

Random Kid: Ready Set!

3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!

Bird and Takumi both launch so hard the it blows some people in the crowd back

Random Kid 2: Ahhhh!!!

Eagle and Blanc both land in the stadium and go around it

Bird moves his left hand quickly (smear frame)

Bird: Attack Eagle!

Eagle goes straight for a hit but Blanc barely dodges

Bird: What!?

Takumi then chuckles

Takumi: Stone Break!

Blanc then hits Eagle knocking Eagle back

Bird: Noo…

Takumi: Now Stone Upper Attack!

Then Blanc using it metal contact points does an upper attack on Eagle to knock Eagle out of the stadium

Random Kid: Stone Mont Blanc wins with a ring out finish!

Bird: Dang it!!!

Then Takumi takes Strike Eagle

Bird: Wait…

Takumi smiles

Takumi: Hold em boys!

The Takumi’s friends holds Bird back

Bird: Give that back!!!!

Takumi: Nah I don’t think I will.

Takumi then pulls out and mini hammer and smashes Strike Eagle destroying the bey

Following this there’s a cool effect where the background goes blurry and Bird’s the only clear person but then the effect goes away

Bird: Noooooo!!!!!!

One of Takumi’s friends push Bird down and Takumi and his group walk off laughing

Tears fill Bird’s eyes

Bird: Noo….

Bird picks up his now destroyed Strike Eagle

Bird: No.

The crowd pulls out their phones and start laughing at him and then they all walk away

Bird looks up at his team….

The Albartos Strikers

Bird then sees his two friends and members

Friend 1: Wow…. you suck.

Friend 2: What an embarrassment…..

Friend 1: Your dad would be ashamed of you….

Tears fill Bird’s eyes

Bird: Don't ever talk about my dad!!!!!!

Friend 2: Maybe if you were good enough... he would still be alive.

Friend 1: And you would be a stronger and better blader

Friend 2: Face it. You're a disgrace in every way and I would just give up if I were you.

Bird's face slowly turns angry

Bird: You guys aren’t my true friends…

Friend 2: Duh, stupid.

The two kids laugh and walk off

Friend 2: By the way we are kicking you out of the team!

Bird frowns and looks down

Bird: I am a failure.

*Flashback Begins*

Bird is holding his father’s hand as his dad’s on his deathbed

Bird’s Dad: Son, remember that whatever you love and want to do in the world… just keep going….

Bird nods

*Flashback Ends*

Bird then looks at the sky and inhales

Bird (thoughts): I made a promise and I’m going to keep it!!!

Then there’s a beautiful shot where Bird is running down the sidewalk determined to be great

But the Bird trips

Bird: Oh.

Bird lands hard on the ground

Then a mysterious figure with a helmet with an X drawn on it walks up to him

Mysterious Helmet Figure: You good man?

Bird gets up

Bird: Yeah. Who are you?

The Bird slowly takes his finger and points it at the figure but extremely slow

Mysterious Helmet Figure: Uh.. okay...

Bird: What do you want anyway? To laugh at how mid I am at blading!

Mysterious Figure: No I just want to help...

Bird: With what?

Mysterious Helmet Figure: Your view on beyblade.

Bird then has a confused look on his face

Bird: Wut?

Mysterious Helmet Blader sighs

X Cross: Name's X Cross.

Bird: Bird, Kazumi Bird!

X Cross: Huh?

Bird: Bird, Kazumi Bird!

X Cross: So Kazumi is your first name?

Bird: What? No! It's Bird, Kazumi Bird!

X Cross: Oh so Bird's your first and last name while Kazumi is your middle-

Bird: Forget it.

X Cross: You seems kind of angry...

Bird: Yeah no sh-

X Cross: Langauge.

Bird sighs

X Cross: Look I know that jerk broke your bey...

Bird holds Strike Eagle with a sad look on his face

X Cross: And I want to avenge you!

Bird: Wait, really?

X Cross: No, or course not.

Bird: Bruh.

X Cross: Not until you remember blading is about having fun!

Bird: What do you-?

Bird eyes then widen

*Flashback Begins*

We see a younger Bird playing beyblade with his original friends and they are all laughing and smiling

*Flashback Ends*

Bird: Wow...

X Cross: I'll help you beat that idiot!

Bird gulps then nods

We cut to a stadium with Takumi and X Cross on each side

Takumi: Can't believe you got this helmet kid to try and get payback for you.

Bird: Well you know you are rude!?

Takumi: And you know I can beat you to a wall!?

Bird gulps

X Cross: Blading is about having fun you A holes!

Bird: A holes? Really?

Takumi: Nah winning is the thrill!

Takumi Friend: First Battle!

X Cross holds up his bey

Bird gasps and so does Takumi and his group

X Cross: DranSword baby!

Bird: But how...?

Takumi (thoughts): A DranSword bey? Wow. It has a 360 ratchet but has a flat bit making it an aggressive attack type... eh.

X Cross gets his launcher out and locks his bey on it

X Cross: Let's go!!!!

Takumi Friend: Ready Set!

3...2..1..Let It Rip!

X Cross launches his bey at full power as Bird stares in amazement

DranSword speeds around the stadium while Blanc takes center stage

Takumi: What ya gonna do?

X Cross then takes his hands and makes an X

Bird: You doing the Wakanda Forever symbol or something?

X Cross: Now!

DranSword uses the X Dash gimmick

Bird then makes an extremely shocked face

DranSword with all it's speed then hits Blanc knocking Blanc into the pocket

Takumi's jaw then drops

Takumi Friend: Uh... DranSword with an extreme finish! X Cross is the winner!

Takumi drops to his knees

X Cross: Bird let's go.

X Cross and Bird both leave Takumi and his friends speechless

A few hours later..

Bird and X Cross are coming out of an ice cream shop with Bird holding a ice cream cone (vanilla flavored)

Bird: Thanks man!

X Cross nods

Bird: But I must ask... who are you? Without the helmet?

X Cross then removes his helmet

Then we see the guy's face

Kamen: Kamen.

Bird jaw drops

Kamen: Kamen X! And I would love to be part of your team!

Bird: But my team abandoned me...

Kamen: Which is why I want to join!

Bird: You were on one of the biggest team's in the country though.... Team PenDragon!

Kamen: Yeah... but I had a falling out with them...

Bird then makes a Pikachu face

Bird: Oh......

Kamen: But now together we can climb our way to the top of the X tower!

Bird: Yeah...

Bird looks up

Bird: We will....

Kamen: Maybe.

Bird looks back at Kamen

Bird: What do you mean?

Kamen: Well you know... we're now both nobody's?

Bird: You're not a nobody... I am!

Kamen chuckles

Kamen: Nah you're a friend.

Bird smiles the hugs Kamen

Kamen: Stop... I don't like hugs..

Bird steps back and smiles sheepishly

Bird: Sorry...

Meanwhile...

We see a figure with long hair standing

???: I will become the strongest...

Then the figure begins to have a dark blue aurora glowing

???: No matter what!

Then a female with a jacket walks up to him

Mysterious Female Figure: No sign of Kamen...

The figure turns around and smiles evilly

???: Good.
To be continued...
Next Episode: Multiple Beyblades? Different Personalities? What's Going On?
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!!
The First Episode Is Here! Hope You Enjoy!
Also a few updates regarding the future of the thread:

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•Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends Is Still Happening And New Trailer Will Come Tomorrow Plus The Premiere Date Will Be Announced
•I Plan On Finishing Elemental Journey And Yes Season 2 Is Coming
•There Is A New BeyFic Is The Very Early Stages Of Development But It’s Not Coming For A Very Long Time (Gonna have to be patient sorry 🙂)
•Episodes Will Be A Bit More Spaced Out So I Or You Guys Won’t Feel Fatigued
•I Will Be A Lot More Vocal And Consistent From Now On (Well at least I’ll try lol)

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You kicked things off with a bit too much haste, and the whole thing was paced quite fast. The part where they make Bird sad is a bit uh... Extreme? I think that's the word.
That being said, it's not a bad chapter, just could've been done better (I don't know anything Beyblade X related so I can't comment much on that).

Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 16:
Corvus Vs Pegasus!

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Next Episode Will Be Crazy!

Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 17:
Pan Unleashed! Elemental Destruction!

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This is probably the best episode of Elemental Journey so far

Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 18:
Training Hard! Let It Rip!

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The countdown to the end of Elemental Journey begins!

Updates On The Rest Of Year:

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Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 19:
The End! Elemental Showdown! (Changed this to the final episode)

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Thanks for reading the final episode of Beyblade Elemental Journey!
The story continues in Elemental Explosion which is a literal part 2!
Tell me your thoughts on it!!!
And to celebrate the finale here's this:
"Power Up"
Beyblade Elemental Explosion Official Teaser Trailer:

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Rip Elemental Journey
April 10 2023 - September 18 2023
Update Time:

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Hope your excited to see what the rest of 2023 offers

Episode Titles For X:
2. Multiple Beyblade’s? Different Personalities? Multi!
3. The Perfect Defense! KnightShield!
4. KnightShield Evolution! KnightLance!
5. A Maid Owns This Bey!? SharkEdge!

Beyblade Elemental Explosion will premiere February 2nd 2024

Teaser For New Untitled BeyFic Coming 2025:

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Bey100's Beyblade X Episode 2:
Multiple Beyblades? Different Personalities? Multi!

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hopefully an improvement from last episode.

Out of curiosity which of my BeyFics do you like the most and why? (Cyber Crush, Elemental Journey and X)
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(Sep. 22, 2023 11:25 PM)Bey100 Wrote: [ -> ]Out of curiosity which of my BeyFics do you like the most and why? (Cyber Crush, Elemental Journey and X)
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I like Cyber Crush and X so far.

(Sep. 22, 2023 11:25 PM)Bey100 Wrote: [ -> ]Out of curiosity which of my BeyFics do you like the most and why? (Cyber Crush, Elemental Journey and X)
Turboblader and Hollowmind13

We getting fancy here with the mentions, huh?
Cyber tbh.
Elemental has that high power vibe that I kinda don't resonate too well, but it's not bad (imo). Characters are nice tho and story is ok.
X is brand new so no comments as of rn.

Bey100’s Beyblade X Episode 3:
The Perfect Defense! KnightShield!

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This episode is basically a bunch of set ups for future episodes and has some surprises!

Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends Episode Titles:
1. The Legend Arrives!
2. Venom Power! Claw Cobra!
3. A New Legacy! Aires Evolution!
4. The Protector! Defend Roc!
5. Burn Down! Master Griffin!
More updates soon.

All Characters In Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends So Far:

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More Updates Coming Soon.

Dates For Upcoming BeyFics:
Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends (January 12th 2024)
Beyblade Elemental Explosion (February 2nd 2024)
Untitled BeyFic (May 31st 2024)
Project BZ BeyFic (Sometime In 2025)
More Updates Soon!

Breaking Announcement!
Beyblade Hex Announcement:
Plot:

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Characters:

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System:

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Here’s a teaser for new Beyblade:
H**e*D**g**n
This is gonna be much different from the other BeyFics because the main protagonist will be an adult so hope your hype!
Releases May 31st 2024!

Beyblade Elemental Explosion New Beys:
Drago Explosion.Combined
Crazy Cavas.Spike
Switch Corvus.Dud
Unlimited Valkyrie.Invincible Reboot
More Info Soon.

Beyblade Hex Character Contest Announcement!

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Join in if you want!

Update Time:

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All the news currently

Guess I'll join since I'm new here.

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- Name: Romen Skaar
- Age: 16
- Birthday: December 22nd
- Appearance: He's 5'9" and weighs 132 pounds with a muscular and athletic physique. As well as this he has a light skin tone, red eyes, and black spiked slicked back hair. He usually wears traditional Japanese clothes with his main attire being a black sleeveless shirt under a white sleeveless kimono with him wearing a black long sleeved kimono robe over those layers which he'll only take the robe off if he gets serious. As well as this he wears baggy white pants, black socks, and white sandals.
- Personality: He's selfish and sadistic with his only goal being to prove he's the stronger as he has no care for anyone or anything and will do whatever he wishes no matter how it affects other people. When he defeats people with ease (like most times) he'll usually mock them and bully them as he laughs at them sadistically as he believes the weak have no place in the blading world. So if he believes his opponent is weak he'll likely break their bey to tell them to stop blading forever. But under that facade is a hurt kid as he was an unwanted child and was an accident causing his parents to not love him and just use him to give their family success. Causing Roman to believe the only way to cause his family to love him was success. Though the more he climbed to power the more lonelier he became as the more he continued on his path to power less people were able to understand him causing him to feel isolated and him to draw a line between him and bladers. Though even with that he continued climbing and growing his power as he became more and more isolated as he wished someday to finally meet an equal, someone who could justify his strength, someone that could understand him and the natural loneliness that came from becoming strong. But due to his personality and goal that never happens as his natural personality would cause him to push others away and for people to hate him as even if he found an equal his natural competitive nature would cause him to continue working till he eventually surpassed the obstacle in which his downward spiral of loneliness would continue. Making Roman's worst enemy himself and his nature.
And for the bey you will have: Imaginary Raum.Adaption
- Blade: Raum (A right spinning blade that has two main attack points that are shaped similar to Rage Longinus's attack points with the attack points being metal but the design is inverted to fit a right spinning bey rather then a left spinning bey. The blade is red with the metal on the attack points being black with the metal on the blades being in the shape of a raven rather then a dragon like Longinus. As well as this the gabs you would normally see on a Rage Longinus is covered with black bumpers made of metal so if the bey is attacked and the bumpers are hit it will reduce the damage taken with the bumpers having edges and jagged curves. In the center of the blade is the bey avatar which is a black raven standing on it's two legs and with its wings tucked in as well as the head looking to the top right as only the right side of the raven is being shown. The raven is also made of the same black metal as the attack points and bumpers and has a singular red eye due to only the right side of the raven being shown.)
- Driver: Adaption: (A red driver built in a similar shape to Xtend+ but the driver has two main functions compared to Xtend+. When the bey is first launched Adaption will be in its attack mode where the driver is shaped like Xtreme as the tip that touches the stadium floor is fully extended out. But later in the battle due to stamina loss the tip will go back into the driver where it'll go into it's defense mode creating a defense like tip. Then finally at it's final stage it'll go into it's stamina mode where the tip will go to it's maximum state inside the driver creating a bearing like tip as the driver's bottom then unlocks and starts spinning freely creating a similar affect as bearing. The separate function is that the more clicks Raum takes the driver will then tighten it's spring more causing Raum to gain more and more burst resistance the more attacks it takes.)
- Magnet: Imaginary (A black magnet you would see on balance types as it's equally useful for every type.)

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