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Yeah I'm gonna take a shot at this Fanfic thing... I've been reading people fanfics so lets give it a shot.

Zac Toler and his bey Ultra Zahhak have set out to change the blading world one battle at a time, Zac runs into a force of great evil looking to end beyblade for good, Friendships break, new ones are formed, alliances created, promises broken and personalities changed forever, Will Zac be able to break free of the evil reign of terror? or will beyblade be shut down forever...


Quantum System:  
More about characters and beys as I finish them up, This is my first time writing fanfic so sorry if it sucks.
(Nov. 28, 2021  10:40 PM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah I'm gonna take a shot at this Fanfic thing... I've been reading people fanfics so lets give it a shot.

Zac Toler and his bey Ultra Zahhak have set out to change the blading world one battle at a time, Zac runs into a force of great evil looking to end beyblade for good, Friendships break, new ones are formed, alliances created, promises broken and personalities changed forever, Will Zac be able to break free of the evil reign of terror? or will beyblade be shut down forever...


Quantum System:  
More about characters and beys as I finish them up, This is my first time writing fanfic so sorry if it sucks.

liking the system! also dont worry if it sucks cause there's all ways more room to improve giving that it does suck! good luck on your first fanfic!
(Nov. 28, 2021  10:44 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 28, 2021  10:40 PM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah I'm gonna take a shot at this Fanfic thing... I've been reading people fanfics so lets give it a shot.

Zac Toler and his bey Ultra Zahhak have set out to change the blading world one battle at a time, Zac runs into a force of great evil looking to end beyblade for good, Friendships break, new ones are formed, alliances created, promises broken and personalities changed forever, Will Zac be able to break free of the evil reign of terror? or will beyblade be shut down forever...


Quantum System:  
More about characters and beys as I finish them up, This is my first time writing fanfic so sorry if it sucks.

liking the system! also dont worry if it sucks cause there's all ways more room to improve giving that it does suck! good luck on your first fanfic!
Thanks, I have little experience writing just going off of what I know and the system is basically rip off DB lol but it's pretty cool

Okay so beys and characters are done


Protagonist - Zac Toler
Beyblade: Ultra Zahhak Awaken 4 counter Blade

Duetragonist - Finley Craw
Beyblade: Disaster Fenrir Push 4 Slash Skull

Tritagonist - Cara delon
Beyblade: Brine Chaos Bound 2 Fall Bearing'

antagonist - Umar wartal
Beyblade: Primal Uranus Shift 2 Crush Adapt
Ok first episode names are ready
Episode #1: Ultra Impact! Zahhak Awakens
Episode #2: Controlled Nightmare! Disaster Fenrir
Episode #3: Potent Venom! Zahhak's true power
Episode #4: The Great Brine Chaos!
Episode #5: Challenge Zone! The 7 Tales of blading!
Episode #6: The Valkyrie Challenge!
Episode #7: The Longinus Challenge!
Episode #8: Iron Wall Defense! Surpass Evil-eye!

Beys That  MIGHT Be in the Fanfic:

Alright so currently in the works for beys we have, zahhak, Fenrir, Chaos, Uranus, and Evil-eye... What should we do next, I'll let you guys vote on it

Hades(2) or Egis(0), Vote away, voting ends on December 4th
1. Hades 2. I see good things coming from this.
(Nov. 30, 2021  2:13 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]1. Hades 2. I see good things coming from this.

Thanks man I'm trying my best to putvout some good content, This is encouraging.
(Nov. 30, 2021  2:11 AM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Ok first episode names are ready
Episode #1: Ultra Impact! Zahhak Awakens
Episode #2: Controlled Nightmare! Disaster Fenrir
Episode #3: Potent Venom! Zahhak's true power
Episode #4: The Great Brine Chaos!
Episode #5: Challenge Zone! The 7 Tales of blading!
Episode #6: The Valkyrie Challenge!
Episode #7: The Longinus Challenge!
Episode #8: Iron Wall Defense! Surpass Evil-eye!

Beys That  MIGHT Be in the Fanfic:

Alright so currently in the works for beys we have, zahhak, Fenrir, Chaos, Uranus, and Evil-eye... What should we do next, I'll let you guys vote on it

Hades(1) or Egis(0), Vote away, voting ends on December 4th

hades, 100%! also you should totally add odin into the story since your name is
(Nov. 30, 2021  2:59 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Nov. 30, 2021  2:11 AM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Ok first episode names are ready
Episode #1: Ultra Impact! Zahhak Awakens
Episode #2: Controlled Nightmare! Disaster Fenrir
Episode #3: Potent Venom! Zahhak's true power
Episode #4: The Great Brine Chaos!
Episode #5: Challenge Zone! The 7 Tales of blading!
Episode #6: The Valkyrie Challenge!
Episode #7: The Longinus Challenge!
Episode #8: Iron Wall Defense! Surpass Evil-eye!

Beys That  MIGHT Be in the Fanfic:

Alright so currently in the works for beys we have, zahhak, Fenrir, Chaos, Uranus, and Evil-eye... What should we do next, I'll let you guys vote on it

Hades(1) or Egis(0), Vote away, voting ends on December 4th

hades, 100%! also you should totally add odin into the story since your name is

I probably will
Beyblade Burst: Quantum Jolt
Episode #1
"Ultra Impact! Zahhak Awakens"
Zac toler & Ultra Zahhak
official bey list will be out soon
OK So official beys for Quantum Jolt

Zac Toler: Ultra Zahhak (Starter)

Finley Craw: DIsaster Fenrir(Starter)

Cara Delon: Brine Chaos(Random Booster)

Erin Zorton: Surpass Evil-Eye(Starter)

Omar herlat: Monolith Odin(Starter)

Xen Rilt: Ruin Xcalibur(Starter)

Chad Philles: Immortal Chronos(starter)

King Kinsley: Screech Kukulcan(Starter)

Ezra Zorton: Globe Egis(starter)

Hayden: Corpse Hades(starter)

Jay Lasure: Fortune Joker(starter)

Parker Peyor: Bliss Pegasus(starter)

Valor - Platinum Valkyrie(starter)

Lucas shirosagi - Extinction Longinus(starter)

Scott Kurenai - Supreme Spriggan(starter)

Abigail Aka bane - Warrior Achilles(starter)

Diego Koryu - Monarch Dragon(starter)

Hunter Hizashi - Ignite Hyperion(starter)

Harvey Hizashi - Helios Breaker(starter)

Blake Daikokuten - Cosmic Belial(starter)
(Dec. 08, 2021  4:36 AM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: [ -> ]OK So official beys for Quantum Jolt

Zac Toler: Ultra Zahhak (Starter)

Finley Craw: DIsaster Fenrir(Starter)

Cara Delon: Brine Chaos(Random Booster)

Erin Zorton: Surpass Evil-Eye(Starter)

Omar herlat: Monolith Odin(Starter)

Xen Rilt: Ruin Xcalibur(Starter)

Chad Philles: Immortal Chronos(starter)

King Kinsley: Screech Kukulcan(Starter)

Ezra Zorton: Globe Egis(starter)

Hayden: Corpse Hades(starter)

Jay Lasure: Fortune Joker(starter)

Parker Peyor: Bliss Pegasus(starter)

Valor - Platinum Valkyrie(starter)

Lucas shirosagi - Extinction Longinus(starter)

Scott Kurenai - Supreme Spriggan(starter)

Abigail Akabane - Warrior Achilles(starter)

Diego Koryu - Monarch Dragon(starter)

Hunter Hizashi - Ignite Hyperion(starter)

Harvey Hizashi - Helios Breaker(starter)

Blake Daikokuten - Cosmic Belial(starter)

Oh shoot I skipped so much content.
First of all, I love that you're bringing back old beys like Fenrir, Chaos (pog), Pegasus, Kukulcan, Chronos (slightly forgot, but still nice), Evil-Eye (That was unexpected) and even Egis (I made one too, but still on the paper). I too love bringing back old beys or make unexpected motifs such as Hestia for example.
Second of all, the chapter was quite short, especially in plot. Two guys battled, Zac's Father is ded (Might come handy later), Zac's generic bey breaks, He makes a new one, test battle. End of flashback, and a "cliffhanger" to the next chapter. Honestly, I think you could fill it up with some detail, like how characters were interacting with each other and minor descriptions about the place. Ofc you don't need to do it, but that will help.
Uhhh can you guys read my fanfic pls? BEYBLADE burst solar system
(Dec. 14, 2021  1:34 AM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: [ -> ]Uhhh can you guys read my fanfic pls? BEYBLADE burst solar system
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Not the proper place to self promote (Actually, just don't self promote on other user's threads, not nice). People will read your fic if they get interested. Also, I'll send something on your fic pretty soon (like a mini help).
Ok thank you
New Chapter Tomorrow sorry for the delay, been busy.

But... I'm announcing a character contest cause i need about 4-5 more beys

form:

Name(any Name you want, if long a nickname would be nice):

Age(13-16 range):

Height(any height that's reasonable):

Eye Color(anything but no black eyes):

Hair color(unless bald):

Appearance(what.. do.. they.. look.. like):

Beyblade(FULL bey names):

Chip:

Core:

Armour:

Blade:

Jolt:

Disc:

Driver:

Backstory(optional):
Name: vex ronalds

Age-14

Height-5,4

Teal eyes

Hair green

Dad-gwyn

Gender-male

Appearance- green messy hair /kinda pale teal beanie/white and black jacket/has a V on the side of his jacket/when gets serious hair goes crazy like gwyn/blue long jeans/can be cute sometimes/social person unlike his dad/ smart in a way lol/has infinite lock system but is a quantum bey

Bey name- overdrive venues

Chip-push has hard clicks

Core-venues has a venues flytrap monser design on it

Armor-Zero

Blades-circle with two round blades that have the savior Valkyrie rebound gimmick

Jolt-glare adds two more blades to the bey

Disk-risk a round disk with two daggers

Driver-atomic dash atomic but dash version wat else to say

Back story- kid who loves his dad a lot trains with him on holidays but on the other days he’s with his friends loves all of his friends deeply doesn’t hate people but doesn’t like people who are rude and break beys but understands accidents is a sweet kid who likes to sleep and blade usually you would find him sleeping only thing that wakes him up are frying pans encourages others to live there dreams if he can’t be the champ he wants to be in the top five bladers to prove he’s strong just like his dad

Bey colors-blue green white teal

Ordinaryblader

OdinaryBlader
eeeeeeeeeeeeeee, school can go suck my Giga disc, now anyways i gotta push back the episode further cause school sucks, should be out tomorrow afternoon instead of today, sorry
(Dec. 16, 2021  5:14 PM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: [ -> ]New Chapter Tomorrow sorry for the delay, been busy.

But... I'm announcing a character contest cause i need about 4-5 more beys

form:

Name(any Name you want, if long a nickname would be nice):

Age(13-16 range):

Height(any height that's reasonable):

Eye Color(anything but no  black eyes):

Hair color(unless bald):

Appearance(what.. do.. they.. look.. like):

Beyblade(FULL bey names):

Chip:

Core:

Armour:

Blade:

Jolt:

Disc:

Driver:

Backstory(optional):
.
Sure, I like creating characters anyways.
I'm just gonna:

(Dec. 21, 2021  5:24 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: [ -> ]I'm just gonna:


Nice OC and also

(Dec. 21, 2021  10:18 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 21, 2021  5:24 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: [ -> ]I'm just gonna:


Nice OC and also


The
CHARACTER SUBMISSION

Name: Patrick Carter

Age: 14

Height: 5’3 1/2 inches

Appearance: A short, brown haired boy, with green streaks in his hair who wears a blue hoodie and gray sweatpants.

Personality: A outgoing but also calculating and cunning boy who has bladed since he was 6, he often feels like he’s a bad blader due to his past experiences of losing most of his matches.

Background: A boy coming from the Carter family a wealthy family who is a business associate of the Murasaki family. Due to being upper class and being homeschooled he grew up not having many social connections.

Bey: Catalyst Perseus Weight Over Quattro’-2

Type: Balance

Core: Weight: A metal core adding weight(it’s in the name)

Chip: Perseus: A chip with metal towards the outside for Stamina referencing the motif of Perseus, a Greek hero who slayed Medusa.

Blade: Catalyst: A blade with 2 rubber blades for Upper attack and 2 plastic blades for Smash attack.

Jolt: Align: 2 rubber blades that align with the upper blades on the Catalyst Blade

Disc: Over: A round and balanced disc providing good attack, defense, stamina, and LAD

Driver: Quattro’: A driver with 2 rubber modes(Attack and Balance) and 2 metal modes(Stamina and Defense) which is upgraded by a golden spring.

Armor: 2: An armor which evenly distributes weight on each side

Color scheme: the Chip is mainly gold featuring some blue with a sideways facing face fitting the motif of Perseus. The blade has 2 gold rubber blades and 2 silver metal blades. The Jolt is blue and the disc Is painted blue. The driver is orange.
Beyblade Burst: Quantum Jolt
Episode #2
"Controlled Nightmare! Disaster Fenrir"
Short episode I know... next one will be longer