(Aug. 13, 2021 9:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ] (Aug. 13, 2021 9:06 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: [ -> ]no, i cant think of a character lol
Fair enough. (I'll edit this post when I finish double checking the winners)
Aham- The winners are, actually, idk for sure
certainly got first place, but I can't decide if or , mostly because I can see both characters fit very well. So here's is the bracket:
1st place: LJ-Blader
2nd Place: Kiryu Kazuma
3rd Place: LegendJustice
(lol, that's basically the order of the submissions)
1st place character will appear soon, as for 2nd and 3rd, they will appear later on. Maybe as friends, maybe as enemies, only future will tell.
Also, Legend. Consider it your lucky day, I would choose Kiryu's character but since I'm in a good mood I spared you.
nice! good job everyone who participating
I'm very sorry for LJ-Blader, LegendJustice and Kiryu if you guys get mentioned a lot of times (If it does happen, prob not)
Chapter 5, a good example that I'm not that good at writing yet. Half way through I got nauseous, so yeah.
(I don't see a chapter here, must have been outdated)
Also, Is it a Beyjitzu reference?
lemme see...
eh, not to me, nice episode! i see no grammar mistakes!
I'll try doing sth different, I'll try to make a longer chapter since that might improve quality and etc. So
, no need to be worried, expect it to be at least this week.
I'll try counter the increase of time between chapters with some #shorts.
Expected things to come (in order):
* Tyson info
* A #short
* Anna and Ashley info.
* Chapter 6: ... And that's how I meet a Egyptian God.
(Aug. 16, 2021 12:13 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]I'll try doing sth different, I'll try to make a longer chapter since that might improve quality and etc. So , no need to be worried, expect it to be at least this week.
I'll try counter the increase of time between chapters with some #shorts.
Expected things to come (in order):
* Tyson info
* A #short
* Anna and Ashley info.
* Chapter 6: ... And that's how I meet a Egyptian God.
alright nice!
Tyson info:
Name: Tyson Blanter (Russian: Бла́нтер)
Age: 15
Nationality: American/Russian (he has the russian nationality from family)
Appearance: He has short dark red hair, brown eyes and bright skin (is that the term?). He wears a rainproof dark green and black jacket on top of a dark red a dark green T-shirt with bright red prison bars-like stamp, below it's written "Από πάντα", deep dark green pants and black high top shoes.
Personality/About him: He's merciless but kind, serious most of the time. He doesn't have much friends but likes attention (on some extent, obviously). Very chill dude, unless you cross his path. He can also act tough or "be a jerk" if this means not being left apart. He tries to trap people on their sentences, facts, strategies, etc. He likes when things go as they should go and is bothered otherwise. He also has very fast reaction time. He isn't racist and/or equivalent dumb things.
Relationships - Anna and Ashley Campbell: His best friends, they do a lot of stuff and are normally together. Unlike other people, he was very welcoming towards them. He even helped them create their own beys (and also get into beyblade I guess).
Sarah Relish and Kevin Drewitt: As seen on chapter 4 (I think), they don't go well. You would consider that he's a jerk but actually he does that to them for 1. Keep them out of his bubble and 2. he just doesn't like them really, neither him nor them we're very kind to each other since the first time.
Max Hill: He's fine with her. While Max may not like him very much, he doesn't seems to be bothered with it.
Bey: Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II
Even tho he's the antag, I tried to make him less evil and stuff. It's not like every antag is evil anyways
(Me who was making my Antag being trained by Phi) Oh Antag is not always evil?
(Aug. 17, 2021 5:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ](Me who was making my Antag being trained by Phi) Oh Antag is not always evil?
We’re in 2021, antagonist does not equal villain. They’re simply someone whose goal and/or ideals conflict with the protagonist’s, and sometimes act as foil to said protagonist, but doesn’t have to be evil.
(Aug. 17, 2021 5:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ](Me who was making my Antag being trained by Phi) Oh Antag is not always evil?
Pinkrose is correct, Lui wasn't an evil villain, it's just his style of Blading clashed with Valt and he was ruthless while Valt was a bit more careful (
What am I talking about, this kid trips everywhere) I don't really know about Gwyn because HE wanted to break Dragon but wasn't really evil, Definition of Antagnost in Google
one that contends with or opposes another
Opposes not evil, so Lui in a way opposed Valt because they both had very different Blading Style's but overall: You don't need to be evil to be an antagonist, in fact, I'm thinking Rashad won't be an evil antagonist he just despises Bell for many legit reasons (Sorry Pinkrose)
(Aug. 17, 2021 7:11 PM)PinkRose Wrote: [ -> ] (Aug. 17, 2021 5:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ](Me who was making my Antag being trained by Phi) Oh Antag is not always evil?
We’re in 2021, antagonist does not equal villain. They’re simply someone whose goal and/or ideals conflict with the protagonist’s, and sometimes act as foil to said protagonist, but doesn’t have to be evil.
I already know that Not all Antags are evil I just wanted my Antag to be Truly evil I know that Lui just had a different idea of what valt idea, Thus you don't have to correct me I already no it and I just said that as a joke.
The last truly evil antagonist was phi who was a sadistic malicious Blader who enjoyed tormenting his opponents and seeing despair and hopelessness when he destroyed their Beys
(Aug. 17, 2021 7:41 PM)Dread hades12 Wrote: [ -> ]The last truly evil antagonist was phi who was a sadistic malicious Blader who enjoyed tormenting his opponents and seeing despair and hopelessness when he destroyed their Beys
Lane would like to know your location
*Squeals in fear and scampers behind couch
(Aug. 17, 2021 7:49 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ] (Aug. 17, 2021 7:41 PM)Dread hades12 Wrote: [ -> ]The last truly evil antagonist was phi who was a sadistic malicious Blader who enjoyed tormenting his opponents and seeing despair and hopelessness when he destroyed their Beys
Lane would like to know your location
Lane at the end of sparking And Flare would like yours
Guys I don't wanna be a party pooper and stuff but this is Hollow's thread so I'm pretty sure we can't use it as a chatting server
(Aug. 17, 2021 10:33 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Guys I don't wanna be a party pooper and stuff but this is Hollow's thread so I'm pretty sure we can't use it as a chatting server
Thank you !
You're right 100%. It's against the rules, but at the same time if you guys do it about the fic itself, it's fine ig. (I'm talking about ontopic stuff)
I wouldn't have stopped them on my own so thank you.
Tyson bey (aka Tyson info part.2)
Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II
Chip - Tartarus: A right spin sparking-II chip. It has flames and rock-like features, the flames are bright red, the rocks are dark green and the background is dark red. It also features metal teeth.
Ring - Banish: A right-spin, attack type sparking-II ring. It features 3 big blades and 3 smaller blades under it. It has a spring loaded gimmick on which the part where the big 3 blades are is spring loaded, when it starts getting pulled, it would absorb most of the hit and counter attack with the smaller blades, similar to Genesis/god Valtryek/Valkyrie. The 3 big blades are bright red, the 3 small blader are dark red and the rest is dark green, with some black details here and there.
Chassis-II - 12: A light-weight chassis (not so light). It has a very similar shape to the disc 12, except it isn't as sharp. It's not colored.
Chassis frame - Axe: It features a shape similar to Axe. It's black.
Driver - metal Zephyr': Zephyr' but with the metal cap. It's dark green.
(Aug. 18, 2021 9:48 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]Tyson bey (aka Tyson info part.2)
Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II
Chip - Tartarus: A right spin sparking-II chip. It has flames and rock-like features, the flames are bright red, the rocks are dark green and the background is dark red. It also features metal teeth.
Ring - Banish: A right-spin, attack type sparking-II ring. It features 3 big blades and 3 smaller blades under it. It has a spring loaded gimmick on which the part where the big 3 blades are is spring loaded, when it starts getting pulled, it would absorb most of the hit and counter attack with the smaller blades, similar to Genesis/god Valtryek/Valkyrie. The 3 big blades are bright red, the 3 small blader are dark red and the rest is dark green, with some black details here and there.
Chassis-II - 12: A light-weight chassis (not so light). It has a very similar shape to the disc 12, except it isn't as sharp. It's not colored.
Chassis frame - Axe: It features a shape similar to Axe. It's black.
Driver - metal Zephyr': Zephyr' but with the metal cap. It's dark green.
g n a r l y !
(Aug. 18, 2021 9:48 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]Tyson bey (aka Tyson info part.2)
Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II
Chip - Tartarus: A right spin sparking-II chip. It has flames and rock-like features, the flames are bright red, the rocks are dark green and the background is dark red. It also features metal teeth.
Ring - Banish: A right-spin, attack type sparking-II ring. It features 3 big blades and 3 smaller blades under it. It has a spring loaded gimmick on which the part where the big 3 blades are is spring loaded, when it starts getting pulled, it would absorb most of the hit and counter attack with the smaller blades, similar to Genesis/god Valtryek/Valkyrie. The 3 big blades are bright red, the 3 small blader are dark red and the rest is dark green, with some black details here and there.
Chassis-II - 12: A light-weight chassis (not so light). It has a very similar shape to the disc 12, except it isn't as sharp. It's not colored.
Chassis frame - Axe: It features a shape similar to Axe. It's black.
Driver - metal Zephyr': Zephyr' but with the metal cap. It's dark green.
WHAT A OG NAME!!!
(Aug. 18, 2021 10:00 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ] (Aug. 18, 2021 9:48 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]Tyson bey (aka Tyson info part.2)
Banish Tartarus metal Zephyr' 12Axe-II
Chip - Tartarus: A right spin sparking-II chip. It has flames and rock-like features, the flames are bright red, the rocks are dark green and the background is dark red. It also features metal teeth.
Ring - Banish: A right-spin, attack type sparking-II ring. It features 3 big blades and 3 smaller blades under it. It has a spring loaded gimmick on which the part where the big 3 blades are is spring loaded, when it starts getting pulled, it would absorb most of the hit and counter attack with the smaller blades, similar to Genesis/god Valtryek/Valkyrie. The 3 big blades are bright red, the 3 small blader are dark red and the rest is dark green, with some black details here and there.
Chassis-II - 12: A light-weight chassis (not so light). It has a very similar shape to the disc 12, except it isn't as sharp. It's not colored.
Chassis frame - Axe: It features a shape similar to Axe. It's black.
Driver - metal Zephyr': Zephyr' but with the metal cap. It's dark green.
WHAT A OG NAME!!!
Idk what you mean by that (I also don't know what it means).
OG
[OG]
ABBREVIATION
- officer of the guard. (this is it?)
(Aug. 18, 2021 10:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ] (Aug. 18, 2021 10:00 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]WHAT A OG NAME!!!
Idk what you mean by that (I also don't know what it means).
OG
[OG]
ABBREVIATION
- officer of the guard. (this is it?)
Og means Original