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GenesisBlader

Jul. 27, 2021  6:21 PM
(Jul. 27, 2021  6:16 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Theme song coming soon I JUST NEED INSPIRATION!?

dont worry spark through and do it!

LegendJustice

Jul. 27, 2021  6:21 PM
Okay just need to think of something
Chapter 9 is waiting to be read!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Can you rate I'll rate yours you too, are you free to rate?

LegendJustice

Jul. 28, 2021  7:46 PM
Theme song is here
https://youtu.be/BZcErUf7S_8 Listen to this while ready this below me you may begin
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I tried okay…

UnseenBurst

Jul. 28, 2021  7:47 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  7:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Theme song is here
https://youtu.be/BZcErUf7S_8 Listen to this while ready this below me you may begin
Spoiler (Click to View)
I tried okay…

It's obviously a rickroll

Edit: Nevermind it's just the song Rise

Hollowmind13

Jul. 28, 2021  7:55 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  7:47 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 28, 2021  7:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Theme song is here
https://youtu.be/eBGIQ7ZuuiU Listen to this while ready this below me you may begin
Spoiler (Click to View)
I tried okay…

It's obviously a rickroll

Edit: Nevermind it's just the song Rise
Are you sure?

LegendJustice

Jul. 28, 2021  7:57 PM
Alright this is a fit song but read the theme up there https://youtu.be/eBGIQ7ZuuiU

Hollowmind13

Jul. 28, 2021  8:05 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  7:57 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Alright this is a fit song but read the theme up there https://youtu.be/eBGIQ7ZuuiU

No one will fall to that one once they click the video

LegendJustice

Jul. 28, 2021  8:06 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 28, 2021  7:57 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Alright this is a fit song but read the theme up there https://youtu.be/eBGIQ7ZuuiU

No one will fall to that one once they click the video

To bad...

GenesisBlader

Jul. 28, 2021  8:20 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:06 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]No one will fall to that one once they click the video

To bad...

rick roll?!

LegendJustice

Jul. 28, 2021  8:21 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:20 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:06 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]To bad...

rick roll?!

Alright let's not get of topic!
are you free to give stars?

Hollowmind13

Jul. 28, 2021  8:46 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:21 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:20 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]rick roll?!

Alright let's not get of topic!
HollowMind8 are you free to give stars?

For the intro?

LegendJustice

Jul. 28, 2021  8:51 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:46 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:21 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Alright let's not get of topic!
HollowMind8 are you free to give stars?

For the intro?

Nah my recent chapter

Hollowmind13

Jul. 28, 2021  8:59 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:51 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 28, 2021  8:46 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]For the intro?

Nah my recent chapter
I've saw some mistakes, for example "Valtryak". It was just a battle chapter showing the power of the might "Champion Valtryek" so I don't blame you for being a short chapter, but it will take out 1 star.

I think it's 7,6/10 (mostly because of the reasons above), which falls into the "good" category

LegendJustice

Jul. 28, 2021  9:08 PM
Thanks I will work on that!

Hollowmind13

Jul. 28, 2021  9:36 PM
(Jul. 28, 2021  9:08 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]Thanks I will work on that!

I cut off a whole point because I think you can do better, with this it should be 8.6/10

LegendJustice

Jul. 29, 2021  6:31 PM
Meet The Blader!
Bam Ako!
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LegendJustice

Jul. 31, 2021  1:13 AM
For those of you who did not see the post were I explained the system this is the system!
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LegendJustice

Jul. 31, 2021  5:41 PM
Deleated post

LegendJustice

Aug. 01, 2021  4:04 PM
What I wanted Apex to look like
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Demon Belial

Aug. 01, 2021  4:14 PM
Looks good!

LegendJustice

Aug. 01, 2021  4:15 PM
Thanks! I'll try and make it more better

GenesisBlader

Aug. 01, 2021  5:25 PM
(Aug. 01, 2021  4:04 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]What I wanted Apex to look like

better than if I were to draw it, I'll tell ya that

LegendJustice

Aug. 01, 2021  5:28 PM
(Aug. 01, 2021  5:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 01, 2021  4:04 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]What I wanted Apex to look like

better than if I were to draw it, I'll tell ya that

Thanks lol!
Next Chapter will come in an hour Promise!
can you rate my recent chapter?
I’m about to post a chapter can you rate it?

UnseenBurst

Aug. 02, 2021  2:07 AM
(Aug. 01, 2021  5:28 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 01, 2021  5:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: [ -> ]better than if I were to draw it, I'll tell ya that

Thanks lol!
Next Chapter will come in an hour Promise!
can you rate my recent chapter?
I’m about to post a chapter can you rate it?

I'll give it a summary rating

LegendJustice

Aug. 02, 2021  2:08 AM
Chapter 10
Hard Power!
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