Yeah I'm gonna take a shot at this Fanfic thing... I've been reading people fanfics so lets give it a shot.
Zac Toler and his bey Ultra Zahhak have set out to change the blading world one battle at a time, Zac runs into a force of great evil looking to end beyblade for good, Friendships break, new ones are formed, alliances created, promises broken and personalities changed forever, Will Zac be able to break free of the evil reign of terror? or will beyblade be shut down forever...
Core - the core is similar to the DB cores shape, it holds the teeth but not the chip design, the chip locks into the core like how sparking chips locked into sparking rings, Each core has a different gimmick, such as burst locks, bound gimmicks, or metal, etc.
Chip - the chip locks into the core like how sparking chips locked into the rings, the chips feature the core design and some have metal or other basic gimmicks.
Blade - similar to DB blades but specially designed for the Quantum system
Jolt - The jolt is a Gear like ring that adds blades to the layer, it snaps onto the layer before you put the Armour on the bey
armour - like DB armours but larger.
Disc - Regular old chunky disc...
Driver - A regular old driver.
More about characters and beys as I finish them up, This is my first time writing fanfic so sorry if it sucks.
(Nov. 28, 2021 10:40 PM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: Yeah I'm gonna take a shot at this Fanfic thing... I've been reading people fanfics so lets give it a shot.
Zac Toler and his bey Ultra Zahhak have set out to change the blading world one battle at a time, Zac runs into a force of great evil looking to end beyblade for good, Friendships break, new ones are formed, alliances created, promises broken and personalities changed forever, Will Zac be able to break free of the evil reign of terror? or will beyblade be shut down forever...
Core - the core is similar to the DB cores shape, it holds the teeth but not the chip design, the chip locks into the core like how sparking chips locked into sparking rings, Each core has a different gimmick, such as burst locks, bound gimmicks, or metal, etc.
Chip - the chip locks into the core like how sparking chips locked into the rings, the chips feature the core design and some have metal or other basic gimmicks.
Blade - similar to DB blades but specially designed for the Quantum system
Jolt - The jolt is a Gear like ring that adds blades to the layer, it snaps onto the layer before you put the Armour on the bey
armour - like DB armours but larger.
Disc - Regular old chunky disc...
Driver - A regular old driver.
More about characters and beys as I finish them up, This is my first time writing fanfic so sorry if it sucks.
liking the system! also dont worry if it sucks cause there's all ways more room to improve giving that it does suck! good luck on your first fanfic!
(Nov. 28, 2021 10:40 PM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: Yeah I'm gonna take a shot at this Fanfic thing... I've been reading people fanfics so lets give it a shot.
Zac Toler and his bey Ultra Zahhak have set out to change the blading world one battle at a time, Zac runs into a force of great evil looking to end beyblade for good, Friendships break, new ones are formed, alliances created, promises broken and personalities changed forever, Will Zac be able to break free of the evil reign of terror? or will beyblade be shut down forever...
Core - the core is similar to the DB cores shape, it holds the teeth but not the chip design, the chip locks into the core like how sparking chips locked into sparking rings, Each core has a different gimmick, such as burst locks, bound gimmicks, or metal, etc.
Chip - the chip locks into the core like how sparking chips locked into the rings, the chips feature the core design and some have metal or other basic gimmicks.
Blade - similar to DB blades but specially designed for the Quantum system
Jolt - The jolt is a Gear like ring that adds blades to the layer, it snaps onto the layer before you put the Armour on the bey
armour - like DB armours but larger.
Disc - Regular old chunky disc...
Driver - A regular old driver.
More about characters and beys as I finish them up, This is my first time writing fanfic so sorry if it sucks.
liking the system! also dont worry if it sucks cause there's all ways more room to improve giving that it does suck! good luck on your first fanfic!
Thanks, I have little experience writing just going off of what I know and the system is basically rip off DB lol but it's pretty cool
Okay so beys and characters are done
Alright so currently in the works for beys we have, zahhak, Fenrir, Chaos, Uranus, and Evil-eye... What should we do next, I'll let you guys vote on it
Hades(2) or Egis(0), Vote away, voting ends on December 4th
Alright so currently in the works for beys we have, zahhak, Fenrir, Chaos, Uranus, and Evil-eye... What should we do next, I'll let you guys vote on it
Hades(1) or Egis(0), Vote away, voting ends on December 4th
hades, 100%! also you should totally add odin into the story since your name is OdinaryBlader
Alright so currently in the works for beys we have, zahhak, Fenrir, Chaos, Uranus, and Evil-eye... What should we do next, I'll let you guys vote on it
Hades(1) or Egis(0), Vote away, voting ends on December 4th
hades, 100%! also you should totally add odin into the story since your name is OdinaryBlader
~Ultimate Phoenix Would blades would engulf in white energy as it slammed into Fenrir~
Finley: 90% Disaster Crash!
~Fenrir would Move back from the attack and change it's movement to smash into Ultimate Phoenix~
~It would go Dark and a white light would appear with ultimate the Ultimate Phoenix silhouette in front of it. Cracks Would slowly form from the inside of the bey inwards, Breaking. the scene would appear again with Ultimate Phoenix breaking~
Zac: No! Phoenix! That was the Last thing my dad gave me before he left
~A tear would fall onto the broken layer~
FInley: Come on man, it was an accident, I'm sorry.
~He'd offer to help Zac up~
Zac: It's gone, his legacy is gone
~Zac would take Finley's offer for help up~
FInley: well let's continue his legacy
Zac: How?
Finley: By creating a new bey to honor him. Continue his legacy and create your own.
~Time Skip to the making of the bey~
Zac: This is it
Finley: Designs are looking good
~Zac would design the parts~
Zac: Almost Done...
~Showing off the new Bey~
Zac: Done! Ultra Zahhak!
FInley: Nice!
Zac: Rematch Time!
Finley: Bet!
FInley & Zac: 3... 2... 1... Let It Rip!
~Fenrir & Zahhak Would Land in The stadium~
Zac: Now! Snake Eyes!
~ The Snake eyes on the Blade and on the core would glow as Zahhak slammed into Fenrir, making Fenrir lose 1 click~
FInley: Fenrir! 100% Disaster Crash
~Finley's resonance would flare and Fenrir would emerge from the bey in grey and white flames~
Zac: Zahhak!
~Zahhak would emerge from the bey in blue and green-blue flames~
~The two beys would clash with both of the Beys bursting~
Zac & Finley: No way!
~end of flashback~
Zac(Thoughts): That was a long time ago, a year ago today, The places you get in a year....
~He'd look down at Zahhak, the light glistening off of it's edge~
Zac(Thoughts): We can do this Zahhak!
Announcer: We have a Match for the history books folks, Zac Toler Vs Finley Craw winner Goes on to the World Championship Match!
~The Crowd would cheer~
Announcer: In the Red Corner we have Finley Craw! The Power Blader!
~Finley would walk out and approach the stadium~
~the fans would cheer~
Announcer: In the blue corner we have Zac Toler
~Zac would run out~
~The fans would cheer~
Zac: This victory is mine!
Finley: You know I'm the stronger one
Zac/Finley: 3... 2... 1... Let it rip!
~Fenrir & Zahhak would land in the stadium~
Finley: Disaster Upper!
~Fenrir would Smash into Zahhak almost immediately with a upper attack~
Zac: Counter attack! Ultra Swords!
~Zahhak would speed around the stadium with the momentum from Fenrir's attack crashing into Fenrir with it's sword~
Finley: Fenrir! 60% Disaster Crash!
Zac: Ultra Instinct!
~Zahhak and Fenrir would clash in the middle of the stadium~
Appearance: Zac Is rather tall and has a lean build, He wears a Black bandana to hold his hair back. He wears blue framed sunglasses and he has a scar over his left eye. He wears a blue tank top and a black jacket. He wears Greenish blue shorts with Grey Knee pads that have a black bands on them. He wears blue shoes with white laces and grey rim around the top and bottom. He wears a Green Glove with gold trim on his left hand.
Beyblade: Ultra Zahhak Awaken 4 counter Blade
Chip: Zahhak: The Zahhak chip features a deep blue color base with a gold helmet with green eyes in the middle of the Chip, It has two silver swords in a cross behind the Helmet, and two green snakes coming out of the sides of the helmet coiling around to each end of the chip, there is spark designs around the snakes.
Core: Awaken: The Awaken Core has a deep blue base with gold accents around the bottom edges. When the Bey is spinning Fast the Blade is locked in a stationary position but once it loses about half of it’s stamina it will unlock and have a bound gimmick.
Armour: 4: The 4 armour has 4 V shaped points one on each end of the armour, the armour has a thick design for extra weight and is thickest at the outer edge for more attack power.
Blade: Ultra: The Ultra blade has 2 upper sloped snake like blades, each snake blade has a round head with two sharp protrusions like fangs. The blade then goes up in an upper slope. The blade is covered in a bunch of small indentations like scales, the edge of the blade has a bunch of sharp edges for attacks. After that there are two Large swords, The swords are flat like infinite achilles swords, the swords are long-ish and end in a sharp point for more aggressive attacks. After that are two spring loaded shields on either side of the layer, if you hit them they push in and activate a burst lock on either side of the layer.
Jolt: Up: The Up Jolt extends the Snake Like upper blades on the Ultra layer and makes the swords more aggressive shaped for more attack power.
Disc: Counter: The Counter disc features flat blades and a LAD ridge, the blades on the layer end in a sharp point for increased mobility.
Driver: Blade: The Blade Driver has A large flat rubber tip giving it an aggressive movement pattern. The Rubber tip free spins so it does not lose as much Stamina because of the rubber tip. Up from that is 4 metal sword handles in a X pattern for extra weight however due to the high height of them they hinder the drivers performance.
(Dec. 08, 2021 4:36 AM)OdinaryBlader Wrote: OK So official beys for Quantum Jolt
Zac Toler: Ultra Zahhak (Starter)
Finley Craw: DIsaster Fenrir(Starter)
Cara Delon: Brine Chaos(Random Booster)
Erin Zorton: Surpass Evil-Eye(Starter)
Omar herlat: Monolith Odin(Starter)
Xen Rilt: Ruin Xcalibur(Starter)
Chad Philles: Immortal Chronos(starter)
King Kinsley: Screech Kukulcan(Starter)
Ezra Zorton: Globe Egis(starter)
Hayden: Corpse Hades(starter)
Jay Lasure: Fortune Joker(starter)
Parker Peyor: Bliss Pegasus(starter)
Valor - Platinum Valkyrie(starter)
Lucas shirosagi - Extinction Longinus(starter)
Scott Kurenai - Supreme Spriggan(starter)
Abigail Akabane - Warrior Achilles(starter)
Diego Koryu - Monarch Dragon(starter)
Hunter Hizashi - Ignite Hyperion(starter)
Harvey Hizashi - Helios Breaker(starter)
Blake Daikokuten - Cosmic Belial(starter)
Oh shoot I skipped so much content.
First of all, I love that you're bringing back old beys like Fenrir, Chaos (pog), Pegasus, Kukulcan, Chronos (slightly forgot, but still nice), Evil-Eye (That was unexpected) and even Egis (I made one too, but still on the paper). I too love bringing back old beys or make unexpected motifs such as Hestia for example.
Second of all, the chapter was quite short, especially in plot. Two guys battled, Zac's Father is ded (Might come handy later), Zac's generic bey breaks, He makes a new one, test battle. End of flashback, and a "cliffhanger" to the next chapter. Honestly, I think you could fill it up with some detail, like how characters were interacting with each other and minor descriptions about the place. Ofc you don't need to do it, but that will help.
(Dec. 14, 2021 1:34 AM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: Uhhh can you guys read my fanfic pls? BEYBLADE burst solar system
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Not the proper place to self promote (Actually, just don't self promote on other user's threads, not nice). People will read your fic if they get interested. Also, I'll send something on your fic pretty soon (like a mini help).
Appearance- green messy hair /kinda pale teal beanie/white and black jacket/has a V on the side of his jacket/when gets serious hair goes crazy like gwyn/blue long jeans/can be cute sometimes/social person unlike his dad/ smart in a way lol/has infinite lock system but is a quantum bey
Bey name- overdrive venues
Chip-push has hard clicks
Core-venues has a venues flytrap monser design on it
Armor-Zero
Blades-circle with two round blades that have the savior Valkyrie rebound gimmick
Jolt-glare adds two more blades to the bey
Disk-risk a round disk with two daggers
Driver-atomic dash atomic but dash version wat else to say
Back story- kid who loves his dad a lot trains with him on holidays but on the other days he’s with his friends loves all of his friends deeply doesn’t hate people but doesn’t like people who are rude and break beys but understands accidents is a sweet kid who likes to sleep and blade usually you would find him sleeping only thing that wakes him up are frying pans encourages others to live there dreams if he can’t be the champ he wants to be in the top five bladers to prove he’s strong just like his dad
Bey colors-blue green white teal
Ordinaryblader
OdinaryBlader
eeeeeeeeeeeeeee, school can go suck my Giga disc, now anyways i gotta push back the episode further cause school sucks, should be out tomorrow afternoon instead of today, sorry
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Name: Hibiki Hisakawa
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Age: 15
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Gender: Female
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Height: 172 cm
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Eye Color: Gray Iris
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Hair color: Black by the roots, dyed gray.
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Appearance: Short-ish fluffy hair, An assymetrical deep gray sweater above a white shirt. Gray shorts above black leggings. Gray running shoes. White Headphones around the neck (when not used). Silver fingerless gloves.
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Personality - Psychology: High common sense, Alert and Quick to judge.
Self-discipline: Sometimes makes errors in judgement and Unfocused
Lifestyle: Structured, Solitary and A perfectionist.
Social attitude: Tolerant and Shy
Honesty and Honour: Very loyal and Straight-forward.
Emotional Capacity: Supportive and Detached
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More facts: Hibiki can't speak since birth, she is mute. She likes to hear music, that’s why she carries her headphones everywhere she goes. To communicate, she either uses sign language or writes (for those that can't understand sign language). She was bullied when little because of her condition, so she tries to avoid people. She discovered beyblade fairly recently and she likes it a lot. She can take a lot of time to get used to people, and even more to become friends with but it is worth it. Her "trauma" from bullying made her a bit anxious. She is only truly herself around her family, and she doesn't have a brother nor sister.
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Bey (idk how the naming goes, but the layer is supposed to be called Diorite Horogium, adapt the names if I made it wrong)
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Core - Cog: A dual spin Core. It features a Cog design and is all made of plastic. It is average weight and very smooth for aerodynamic purposes.
Teeth position: 5 average teeth
Color squeme: Deep gray with white borders.
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Chip - Horogium: A right spin chip. It features an avatar at the middle similar to the one in Twisted Tempo's screw. The avatar is made out of metal. It has a hexagon around the avatar
Color squeme: The chip is deep gray, the metal is silver, the hexagon is white.
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Blade - Diorite: A right spin Blade. It features a round design and it has a gear-like shape (the teeth are flattened out). The inside has a small hollow spaces that would make the bey unbalanced, but the effect is barely noticeable. The blade is made out of metal with a plastic coat around it. It also features 12 roman numerals around it and, unlike Twisted Tempo, the "IIII" is replaced by "IV". Each number is carved on the metal.
Color squeme: The metal is silver, the plastic coating is deep gray, the numbers are white.
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Jolt - (Fused Jolt): Entirely made of metal and don't affect the bey's shape, just makes it a little more chunky.
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Armour - 7: This armor features weight points evenly distibuted. It is a decently heavy armour.
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Disc - Dial: A heavy disc. It features a low center of gravity akin to Vanguard, but a bit higher. Its weight sits around Nexus+S, making it one of the heaviest discs. It also synergies with Wide, making it have really good LAD. It's perimeter is very smooth.
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Driver - Wide metal: A defense type driver. It features an obtuse angle sharp tip made out of metal (the normal variant is plastic). The wide surface area prevents the Beyblade from being knocked over easily. In addition, it is able to wobble at a larger angle and for a longer. However, when it leans on it's side, it creates more friction with the arena, making it go faster and waste more stamina until it regains the balance. It features average height.
Color squeme: Transparent, you can see the spring inside it. The metal is silver.
Name:
Eisaku Nishikiyama Other Names:
En-san Gender:
Male Age:
15 years old Height:
168cm Beyblade Name:
Evangelion Evalach Bastion Over High Atomic-10 (EEl.Bt.Ov.HAt-0)
Appearance:
Eisaku's appearance is mainly androgynous, so it's hard to figure out whether he's a boy or a girl upon first impression. He doesn't stick to one outfit, but he always dresses up as a girl and has light brown chin-length hair, amber eyes, a fair skin complexion, and a slim body build.
Personality/Traits:
Eisaku is a playful person who's very outgoing and cheerful, often looking for friends to talk with. He's also a little mischievous, sometimes playing innocent pranks on his friends or classmates just to get some kicks or scare them just for the sake of their reactions. In battle though, he likes to trick people or provoke them in order to break. And despite having a Defense-type as his Bey, is very flexible with his movements such as stunning their opponents' Beys before sending a combination of attacks on them, or performing feints in his attacks.
Background:
Eisaku came from an average family, nothing out of the ordinary. He's the eldest of the family and despite his mischief, he wants the best for his sister as he feels like he's not enough for his loved ones. Back then, he wasn't like his current self. He was a rebellious person who was very naive and selfish, often getting into fights and losing them, he was also quite stubborn, not taking advice from his rivals whenever he lost. As he grew up, however, he knew that this wasn't going to help his cause so he changed into this persona he has now.
Beyblade Info:
Core - Bastion:
Bastion is a right-spinning Core that features two rubber tabs and rubber slopes instead of teeth, similar to the Bahamut Core. As the Driver moves, the tabs slowly get pushed to the (out)side, and by the time the prongs have reached the mid-section, they have fully extended and made contact with the prongs of the Disc, acting like the tab on the Gen Weight.
Chip - Evalach:
Evalach is a right-spinning Chip that features a face looking forward and wearing a crown as a reference to this Bey's motif, King Evalach from Arthurian mythology, the wielder of the shield who Josephus of Arimathea painted a cross on with his own blood, thus giving it divine protection. The crown found in the center has 5 'jewels' made of metal, giving it increased weight.
Blade - Evangelion:
Evangelion is a circular Blade with thick, jagged walls that have 4 gaps to parry against opponents similar to the Basalt/Twisted Fusion Wheel. The walls slope towards the center in order to create a vortex in the center to provide downforce, stabilizing it when spinning.
Jolt - (N/A, I'm not sure whether Jolts havea name or not):
The Jolt Evalach has is completely made of rubber, and it can be placed underneath and over the Blade. When it's placed underneath, it's concealed and hidden under the plastic, giving the Blade rigidity in order for it to counter attacks and when it's placed over the blade, the rubber is exposed and fills in the gaps on the Evangelion Blade, allowing it to defend more efficiently.
Forge Disc - Over:
Over is a DB Forge Disc that features a circular perimeter and a smooth underside, similar to a fusion between Outer and 0. This shape provides good LAD and is classified as one of the heaviest Discs in the metagame.
Armor - 10:
10 is an Armor that features 2 large protrusions encasing 3 smaller ones in the middle of each side. It is, for the most part, rather circular
Performance Tip - High Atomic:
High Atomic is the High Driver variant of Atomic, a Defense-type driver that features a free-spinning ball tip surrounded by a free-spinning ring with four stubs around it, giving it stability and stamina at the same time.
Color Scheme:
Its primary color is mainly painted in gold, with its secondary color being silver and bronze while it has some hints of blue. The crown on the motif is silver with gold outlines, while the body on the Chip is clear and the frame surrounding the Core is painted in white with gold glitter. The rubber parts are painted in white and the Driver is painted in white while the ring surrounding the ball is painted in gold.
Name:
Eisaku Nishikiyama Other Names:
En-san Gender:
Male Age:
15 years old Height:
168cm Beyblade Name:
Evangelion Evalach Bastion Over High Atomic-10 (EEl.Bt.Ov.HAt-0)
Appearance:
Eisaku's appearance is mainly androgynous, so it's hard to figure out whether he's a boy or a girl upon first impression. He doesn't stick to one outfit, but he always dresses up as a girl and has light brown chin-length hair, amber eyes, a fair skin complexion, and a slim body build.
Personality/Traits:
Eisaku is a playful person who's very outgoing and cheerful, often looking for friends to talk with. He's also a little mischievous, sometimes playing innocent pranks on his friends or classmates just to get some kicks or scare them just for the sake of their reactions. In battle though, he likes to trick people or provoke them in order to break. And despite having a Defense-type as his Bey, is very flexible with his movements such as stunning their opponents' Beys before sending a combination of attacks on them, or performing feints in his attacks.
Background:
Eisaku came from an average family, nothing out of the ordinary. He's the eldest of the family and despite his mischief, he wants the best for his sister as he feels like he's not enough for his loved ones. Back then, he wasn't like his current self. He was a rebellious person who was very naive and selfish, often getting into fights and losing them, he was also quite stubborn, not taking advice from his rivals whenever he lost. As he grew up, however, he knew that this wasn't going to help his cause so he changed into this persona he has now.
Beyblade Info:
Core - Bastion:
Bastion is a right-spinning Core that features two rubber tabs and rubber slopes instead of teeth, similar to the Bahamut Core. As the Driver moves, the tabs slowly get pushed to the (out)side, and by the time the prongs have reached the mid-section, they have fully extended and made contact with the prongs of the Disc, acting like the tab on the Gen Weight.
Chip - Evalach:
Evalach is a right-spinning Chip that features a face looking forward and wearing a crown as a reference to this Bey's motif, King Evalach from Arthurian mythology, the wielder of the shield who Josephus of Arimathea painted a cross on with his own blood, thus giving it divine protection. The crown found in the center has 5 'jewels' made of metal, giving it increased weight.
Blade - Evangelion:
Evangelion is a circular Blade with thick, jagged walls that have 4 gaps to parry against opponents similar to the Basalt/Twisted Fusion Wheel. The walls slope towards the center in order to create a vortex in the center to provide downforce, stabilizing it when spinning.
Jolt - (N/A, I'm not sure whether Jolts havea name or not):
The Jolt Evalach has is completely made of rubber, and it can be placed underneath and over the Blade. When it's placed underneath, it's concealed and hidden under the plastic, giving the Blade rigidity in order for it to counter attacks and when it's placed over the blade, the rubber is exposed and fills in the gaps on the Evangelion Blade, allowing it to defend more efficiently.
Forge Disc - Over:
Over is a DB Forge Disc that features a circular perimeter and a smooth underside, similar to a fusion between Outer and 0. This shape provides good LAD and is classified as one of the heaviest Discs in the metagame.
Armor - 10:
10 is an Armor that features 2 large protrusions encasing 3 smaller ones in the middle of each side. It is, for the most part, rather circular
Performance Tip - High Atomic:
High Atomic is the High Driver variant of Atomic, a Defense-type driver that features a free-spinning ball tip surrounded by a free-spinning ring with four stubs around it, giving it stability and stamina at the same time.
Color Scheme:
Its primary color is mainly painted in gold, with its secondary color being silver and bronze while it has some hints of blue. The crown on the motif is silver with gold outlines, while the body on the Chip is clear and the frame surrounding the Core is painted in white with gold glitter. The rubber parts are painted in white and the Driver is painted in white while the ring surrounding the ball is painted in gold.
Name:
Eisaku Nishikiyama Other Names:
En-san Gender:
Male Age:
15 years old Height:
168cm Beyblade Name:
Evangelion Evalach Bastion Over High Atomic-10 (EEl.Bt.Ov.HAt-0)
Appearance:
Eisaku's appearance is mainly androgynous, so it's hard to figure out whether he's a boy or a girl upon first impression. He doesn't stick to one outfit, but he always dresses up as a girl and has light brown chin-length hair, amber eyes, a fair skin complexion, and a slim body build.
Personality/Traits:
Eisaku is a playful person who's very outgoing and cheerful, often looking for friends to talk with. He's also a little mischievous, sometimes playing innocent pranks on his friends or classmates just to get some kicks or scare them just for the sake of their reactions. In battle though, he likes to trick people or provoke them in order to break. And despite having a Defense-type as his Bey, is very flexible with his movements such as stunning their opponents' Beys before sending a combination of attacks on them, or performing feints in his attacks.
Background:
Eisaku came from an average family, nothing out of the ordinary. He's the eldest of the family and despite his mischief, he wants the best for his sister as he feels like he's not enough for his loved ones. Back then, he wasn't like his current self. He was a rebellious person who was very naive and selfish, often getting into fights and losing them, he was also quite stubborn, not taking advice from his rivals whenever he lost. As he grew up, however, he knew that this wasn't going to help his cause so he changed into this persona he has now.
Beyblade Info:
Core - Bastion:
Bastion is a right-spinning Core that features two rubber tabs and rubber slopes instead of teeth, similar to the Bahamut Core. As the Driver moves, the tabs slowly get pushed to the (out)side, and by the time the prongs have reached the mid-section, they have fully extended and made contact with the prongs of the Disc, acting like the tab on the Gen Weight.
Chip - Evalach:
Evalach is a right-spinning Chip that features a face looking forward and wearing a crown as a reference to this Bey's motif, King Evalach from Arthurian mythology, the wielder of the shield who Josephus of Arimathea painted a cross on with his own blood, thus giving it divine protection. The crown found in the center has 5 'jewels' made of metal, giving it increased weight.
Blade - Evangelion:
Evangelion is a circular Blade with thick, jagged walls that have 4 gaps to parry against opponents similar to the Basalt/Twisted Fusion Wheel. The walls slope towards the center in order to create a vortex in the center to provide downforce, stabilizing it when spinning.
Jolt - (N/A, I'm not sure whether Jolts havea name or not):
The Jolt Evalach has is completely made of rubber, and it can be placed underneath and over the Blade. When it's placed underneath, it's concealed and hidden under the plastic, giving the Blade rigidity in order for it to counter attacks and when it's placed over the blade, the rubber is exposed and fills in the gaps on the Evangelion Blade, allowing it to defend more efficiently.
Forge Disc - Over:
Over is a DB Forge Disc that features a circular perimeter and a smooth underside, similar to a fusion between Outer and 0. This shape provides good LAD and is classified as one of the heaviest Discs in the metagame.
Armor - 10:
10 is an Armor that features 2 large protrusions encasing 3 smaller ones in the middle of each side. It is, for the most part, rather circular
Performance Tip - High Atomic:
High Atomic is the High Driver variant of Atomic, a Defense-type driver that features a free-spinning ball tip surrounded by a free-spinning ring with four stubs around it, giving it stability and stamina at the same time.
Color Scheme:
Its primary color is mainly painted in gold, with its secondary color being silver and bronze while it has some hints of blue. The crown on the motif is silver with gold outlines, while the body on the Chip is clear and the frame surrounding the Core is painted in white with gold glitter. The rubber parts are painted in white and the Driver is painted in white while the ring surrounding the ball is painted in gold.
Appearance: A short, brown haired boy, with green streaks in his hair who wears a blue hoodie and gray sweatpants.
Personality: A outgoing but also calculating and cunning boy who has bladed since he was 6, he often feels like he’s a bad blader due to his past experiences of losing most of his matches.
Background: A boy coming from the Carter family a wealthy family who is a business associate of the Murasaki family. Due to being upper class and being homeschooled he grew up not having many social connections.
Bey: Catalyst Perseus Weight Over Quattro’-2
Type: Balance
Core: Weight: A metal core adding weight(it’s in the name)
Chip: Perseus: A chip with metal towards the outside for Stamina referencing the motif of Perseus, a Greek hero who slayed Medusa.
Blade: Catalyst: A blade with 2 rubber blades for Upper attack and 2 plastic blades for Smash attack.
Jolt: Align: 2 rubber blades that align with the upper blades on the Catalyst Blade
Disc: Over: A round and balanced disc providing good attack, defense, stamina, and LAD
Driver: Quattro’: A driver with 2 rubber modes(Attack and Balance) and 2 metal modes(Stamina and Defense) which is upgraded by a golden spring.
Armor: 2: An armor which evenly distributes weight on each side
Color scheme: the Chip is mainly gold featuring some blue with a sideways facing face fitting the motif of Perseus. The blade has 2 gold rubber blades and 2 silver metal blades. The Jolt is blue and the disc Is painted blue. The driver is orange.
~Zahhak and Fenrir would clash in the middle of the stadium~
~Zahhak Would glow in a blue color, then a purple larger color, then a pure white large energy as it would push back against Fenrir~
Finley: Fenrir! 100%
~Fenrir would push back but it would be no use~
Zac: Finish it! Ultra Crasher!
~Zahhak would Lean downwards and strike fenrir from the bottom bursting it~
Announcer: It's over! Fenrir's Undefeated streak is over, Zac Toler is moving on in the world championship cup!
Finley: 2 Years I went undefeated, 2 long years filled with glory and power, 2 years of fame and recognition for my many hours of work, Fenrir can rest now, its over my blading career has come to an end
Announcer: Did I hear that right? Finley is done blading?
Finley: 104 to.... 1, Disaster Fenrir will rest now.
~Finley would walk off stage~
Announcer: In the finals we will see Zac Toler Vs. Cara Delon
~Later that day~
Zac: So your done Blading?
FInley: I'm done with blading I've had my 15 minutes of fame
Zac: So where are you going from here?
Finley: Well as world champion you'll need a team, a strategist.
Zac: You have a lot of faith in me being world champion.
FInley: As I should
~At another Location~
Cara: The first piece to the Ultimate Bey, The Savior Gear!