Noodoosoup VS Insomniac.

Insomniac., I think your match here with Noodoo was the closest of the rounds. Yours had a very interesting storyline with a futuristic setting and great plot, but for me, the main reason that Noodoo got my vote was because of the use of time. It added a certain tone to the story. I think you did a great job and shouldn't change a thing.

Leone19 VS The Supreme One

I couldn't quite understand Leone19's story at first, but reading it again helped it make sense. I found it more humorous than related to the topic of A Fatal Error. Don't get me wrong, it was good, but I just didn't feel it matched the subject as much as TSO's did. It was a decent length, and I liked that TSO wasn't afraid to go outside the normal level of writing and took up PG-13, kind of like my style.

For you Leone, I'd suggest making your writing a bit longer. That's really my only big deal.

Thunder Dome VS Odin

Quite frankly, I didn't think this one was that hard to choose. A chess game? That already makes it interesting. It felt like the simple game of chess was like a warzone. There were soldiers fighting and everything. It immediately gained my vote. Well done, Odin.

Don't feel too bad, my fellow NC writer. You have plenty of time to improve and get better. I've never seen many of your writings, anyways. I didn't know you wrote, either (LOL). I think to start, try not to make it a personal experience. Be creative. Also, length is a big deal. I think it can be simply worked out.

Kyler_the_Best VS LMAO

This one was pretty interesting to see. Both of you had great stories. Kyler's was mysterious, and he backed up the feel with a great body and interesting finish. However, I think LMAO had a very smart idea with his writing. Sounded just like a diary, and I loved it. It's unique.

Don't feel too bad, Kyler. I thought yours was amazing as well. Don't change anything and I think you'll have a nice writing.