(Aug. 06, 2021  10:38 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:36 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Lol, I'm so glad you made a sequel to Beyjitzu! Maybe add some other characters in Beyjitzu.

I could add a beyjitzu character later, but Beyjitzu must be finished first. (but that's a great idea, I didn't thought about that)

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:38 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:36 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Lol, I'm so glad you made a sequel to Beyjitzu! Maybe add some other characters in Beyjitzu.

I could add a beyjitzu character later, but Beyjitzu must be finished first. (but that's a great idea, I didn't thought about that)

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:41 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:38 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I could add a beyjitzu character later, but Beyjitzu must be finished first. (but that's a great idea, I didn't thought about that)

wow now I wanna make a sequel to something

(Aug. 07, 2021  11:10 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: 2nd chapter is out! you can find it on the main post or right here:

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Chapter 2
Unstoppable force vs Immovable object!

We both swap beys, as I’m seeing Scylla, I notice that it has extreme power, it has 3 blades with metal and rubber that comes from the chassis, plus it has Destroy’, one of the best drivers.
- You weren’t joking when you said that she is powerful. – Sarah says to Kevin – But I’ll win anyways.
- I doubt it. – I reply.
We both swap back and get into position; I keep Minus mode.
- This will be a 2 points battle, standard rules! – Kevin says.
- Three. Two. One. Go Shoot!
Both beys land on the stadium, Magnesium goes straight for the middle, but Scylla gets there first.
- I’ll not let you! – Says Sarah, while her bey throws Magnesium out of the middle – Harsh Strike!
Her bey starts speeding up and aims for Magnesium.
- Dodge it! Rush Counter! – I say, Magnesium leans on its driver and speeds up just in time – Phew...
- We’re not over yet! – Sarah replies, Scylla slams into a wall and goes straight for Magnesium. – Harsh Strike!
They both start clashing, Magnesium starts getting pushed and leans on its driver, that’s now free spinning, but Scylla keeps pushing and sends Magnesium out of the stadium
- Magnesium has been KO ’ed, 1 point to Sarah – Says Kevin.
- See? I said that I’m going to win! – Sarah said, full of confidence.
- The battle isn’t over yet. – I reply, picking up Magnesium and changing it to Plus mode.
We both attach our beys to the launchers and get into position. My plan is simple, knock it out of atadium before it bursts me, let’s see if I can pull this out.
- Three. Two. One. Go Shoot! – We all say.
As Scylla and Magnesium lands, Magnesium leans on its driver and starts speeding up towards Scylla
- Magnetic Mayhem! – I say, Magnesium start throwing Scylla around the arena, knocking it off-balance.
- What the flag! – Sarah says, censoring herself – Hang in there!
- Too late! – I say, Magnesium hits the wall with one of its blades, propelling itself towards Scylla and landing a strong blow on Scylla.
- Get out of there! – She says but is already too late.
Magnesium hits Scylla and throws it out of the stadium. I thought it was going to burst but at least we’re tied now.
- 1:1, one more point to go! – says Kevin.
- And I’m going to get it! – Me and Sarah both reply at the same time.
And then comes the next round, simultaneous KO. Okay… I will win next round, simultaneous Burst Finish… huh… We both tied at least 20 times.
- Tired already? – Said Sarah, panting.
- No, I’m only warming up! – I say, also panting
- That’s enough! You two are both tired, what about we take a break? – Kevin suggests
We both decline, but he kept insisting, we eventually just gave up and decided to take a break.
- That was fun, funnier than I expected at least. – I said.
- That. Was. Awesome! – Kevin said. – What’s you rank?
- Wait a sec... – I grab my phone to see my rank – uh, 78th Globally.
They both stay silent, a little bit shocked and then Sarah says:
- Carp, you’re very good. – She says, then we hear a notification alarm, Sarah checks her phone – Bad news Kevin, my parents are out so we can’t lunch at my house.
- What about you guys go to my house? It will be fun. – I suggest
- Sure, as long you don’t have a problem with bringing one more person – Kevin says – I’m calling Callum.
I agreed and told my address to them, and they send it to whoever Callum is. We all start walking, talking on the way to there about Beyblade and other stuff. Eventually we get there, I unlock the door and we all get in.
- You’re came back just in... who are these with you? – asks dad
- Oh, these two are Sarah and Kevin, they’re my friends. Long story short they’re going to eat here – I reply
- Friends? That’s new. – He says, surprised – Well, welcome! The food is almost done.
- Thank you, Max’s father. – Replies Sarah, with the most polite tone that you can ever imagine.
We go to the attic waiting for Callum, while we’re waiting, I show my bey collection for them.
- Woah, you have loads of beys! – Kevin says
- Yeah, I have one for each element on the periodic table, but Magnesium is my favorite. – I reply, casually – I also have an experimental upgrade to my launcher – I show my Beyjitzu launcher 2.0
The launcher is very similar to a regular Beyjitzu launcher, except it is made from metal and it has a gap about 5 cm where you fit a cylinder, inside that cylinder has 3 small holes where you put a nitroglycerin-like substance. In theory this would explode, giving a huge speed boost.
- That’s dangerous! Did you test it? – Sarah asks
- Unfortunately, no. Explosives are on the banned list on the competitive, but this other one has a bearing, which increases the number of RPM. – I say, showing another cylinder. – I can talk more about...
I'm interrupted by someone knocking the attic trapdoor, I open it and receive a jump-scare from a masked guy. I almost scream, almost.
- Finally, you’re here! – Sarah says – Max, that’s my twin brother: Callum.
Callum waves his hands, not saying anything.
- What’s the deal with the mask? – I ask
- He has social anxiety, that’s like his “support animal”. – Kevin replies – He’s also a very strong blader.
We start telling Callum about the battles that we had at the park, when I tell him about the “tie streak” he takes his bey and shows me. I get a little bit confused. Fortunately, Kevin notices that.
- Oh, he’s challenging you for a battle. You better be ready! He’s ranked 12th on America.
- WHAT! – I reply
[The End]

(Aug. 07, 2021  11:31 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great chapter! And max's dad is just letting people in for dinner? My parents would never do that

(Aug. 07, 2021  11:34 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 07, 2021  11:31 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great chapter! And max's dad is just letting people in for dinner? My parents would never do that

He's a chill guy, plus Sarah and Kevin are Max's only real friends (like, irl (not like she has that much online either)). I would do the same on this case.

Also, all the grammar comes from word auto-corrector and my own

(Aug. 07, 2021  11:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Aug. 07, 2021  11:34 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: He's a chill guy, plus Sarah and Kevin are Max's only real friends (like, irl (not like she has that much online either)). I would do the same on this case.

Also, all the grammar comes from word auto-corrector and my own

I did notice a little mistakes tho forgot what line it was and MAX (girl) HAS BEYS FROM DIFFERENT ELEMENTS OF EARTH??????????

(Aug. 07, 2021  11:42 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 07, 2021  11:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I did notice a little mistakes tho forgot what line it was and MAX (girl) HAS BEYS FROM DIFFERENT ELEMENTS OF EARTH??????????

yes, she has Oxigen, Carbon, etc.. each one having a unique ability that resembles it's own element. They're not that important tho.

(Aug. 10, 2021  12:13 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Oh look, a Chapter! ( I think My chapters are a bit short, especially this one. Anyways, you can find it here and on the first post)

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 3
An unexpected turn of events! let’s watch tv and ignore the end.

- The food is ready! – My dad says, with his head in the attic, he then leaves.
- What a timing. – Says Sarah – You can battle Max after we eat.
Callum stays emotionless; we all go downstairs to the kitchen. There was a lot of pizzas, apparently my dad wanted to play safe and just made pizza, I don’t blame him. We all sit and start eating, except Callum: he took a plate, grabbed some slices, and then leaves. My dad was kind of surprised.
- Don’t worry, he will come back. – Kevin says
Anyways, we were eating and having a good time, and knowing each other better, eventually Callum came back. My brother (who was also there) turned on the tv, while he was scrolling across the channels, he finds out about BeyBattleTV, it’s a channel where, normally, people send broad-casted battles and the owners, that are hired from Beyblade company (like BeyTube), select a few to show on tv. The battle was between a guy named Clio and the other named William.
- Oh look. It’s Clio. – Sarah says, then looks at me – He’s Callum friend, I bet you won’t like him.
- Let’s see about that when I see him – I say
Clio is in the middle of a battle; his bey is called Pressure Chaos. While his opponent is using Twister Wyvern. Wyvern is near the stadium wall and comes back, like a pendulum. As they make contact, Clio yells “Pressure Smash”, one of Chaos blades goes in and it sends Wyvern in the air, bursting it.
- With a strong move, Clio opens the score with 2 points! – Says the announcer.
- Oh yeah! Me and Chaos are the best! – Clio says, with a smile
- Don’t be so confident, I’ll beat you! – William replies
- I’d like to see you try. – Clio says, attaching Chaos to his launcher.
Three, Two, One, Go Shoot. Both beys land on the stadium and start clashing in the middle, Chaos gets pushed away from the center and slams onto the wall, but it absorbs the impact, then it starts going back and clashes hard against Wyvern, but it’s free spinning ring transfers the impact. Some time later Wyvern is wobbling while Chaos is still spinning, eventually Wyvern stops spinning.
- And it seems like Chaos is a stamina monster! – says one of the announcers.
- It won against Twister Wyvern without losing a point! Clio was not joking. – says the second announcer
Then the outro plays, the results zooms out and go on the bottom, with their photos and combos, while the commercial is playing on the top.
- Pressure Chaos seems strong, and it also has a lot of stamina – I say
- That’s because It has OWD, a good amount of weight and a driver made from glass – Kevin replies
- Why-... forget it – I say, giving up on trying to understand
It starts to get late, so we say goodbye. As they’re leaving, Callum shows his bey to me.
- Don’t worry, I won’t forget. - I say to Callum, then I wave my hand – Bye!
- See you tomorrow at the park after school! – Sarah says.
Then I close the door, my dad looks at me with a shocked look, I ask him what’s wrong.
- It’s just that... you made friends. – He says – What about you go to sleep? I bought all your and your brother’s school material for tomorrow.
- Yeah... – I say – Goodnight.
I get ready for sleep, as I’m in my bed I look on Magnesium. “Tomorrow will be a busy day, are you ready for it?” I say in my mind, suddenly I hear “Sure”. I almost jump out of my bed.
- What the... – I say, looking around – I must be hearing things...
I lay down and fall asleep. Then suddenly appear on a void, everything is dark except me.
- Hello? – I say, looking around for anything.
A tree appears Infront of me, it has an arena on the left. On the arena, I see two people battling, one is a little girl and the other is an older boy, Me and my brother. I’m using a King Kerbeus Central Orbit from Husbri and my brother a Lost Longinus Jerk Impact, my bey gets thrown out of the stadium onto my feet, I grab it and look at it. “Some things never change” I say to myself. Suddenly I see myself 1 year later, I’m in my room with black clothes, I can hear someone talking:
- Can I enter? I just want to talk. – A familiar voice says.
- Go away – My little self says, sobbing.
Here we are again, for some context my mother died when I was about 7 years old. I got very sad about that and just isolated myself from people. A tear falls from my eye. Another time-skip happens, this time I’m 10 and I’m on the living room from your old house, I’m sitting on the sofa and both my dad and brother are giving me a present. “Why am I here?” I say, but no sound comes out of my mouth.
- You’ve had a lot of good and bad moments. – a mysterious voice says – and seems like you’re still in the past.
- Who are you? Is that myself? – I ask, confused
The mysterious voice laughs a little, and then says:
- I’m your bey, Magnesium. And who are you?
- Am I going crazy? – I say and look around – I’m Max...
- And who is Max? What are your motivations? Your dreams and nightmares? – Asks “Magnesium”.
I’m very confused at this point, I try to touch myself, but I don’t feel it.
- Am I on therapy again? You’re the lady with the glasses that asks me questions? – I say – I think it was... Ms. Ellen?
The voice giggles a bit more and says:
- One day you’ll get it, until then... – Then I wake up by the sound of the alarm, I turn my head and see Magnesium shining from the sun.
“That was weird” I say to myself “Was that you? Probably it was just a dream”.
[End]

(Aug. 10, 2021  12:13 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Oh look, a Chapter! ( I think My chapters are a bit short, especially this one. Anyways, you can find it here and on the first post)

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 3
An unexpected turn of events! let’s watch tv and ignore the end.

- The food is ready! – My dad says, with his head in the attic, he then leaves.
- What a timing. – Says Sarah – You can battle Max after we eat.
Callum stays emotionless; we all go downstairs to the kitchen. There was a lot of pizzas, apparently my dad wanted to play safe and just made pizza, I don’t blame him. We all sit and start eating, except Callum: he took a plate, grabbed some slices, and then leaves. My dad was kind of surprised.
- Don’t worry, he will come back. – Kevin says
Anyways, we were eating and having a good time, and knowing each other better, eventually Callum came back. My brother (who was also there) turned on the tv, while he was scrolling across the channels, he finds out about BeyBattleTV, it’s a channel where, normally, people send broad-casted battles and the owners, that are hired from Beyblade company (like BeyTube), select a few to show on tv. The battle was between a guy named Clio and the other named William.
- Oh look. It’s Clio. – Sarah says, then looks at me – He’s Callum friend, I bet you won’t like him.
- Let’s see about that when I see him – I say
Clio is in the middle of a battle; his bey is called Pressure Chaos. While his opponent is using Twister Wyvern. Wyvern is near the stadium wall and comes back, like a pendulum. As they make contact, Clio yells “Pressure Smash”, one of Chaos blades goes in and it sends Wyvern in the air, bursting it.
- With a strong move, Clio opens the score with 2 points! – Says the announcer.
- Oh yeah! Me and Chaos are the best! – Clio says, with a smile
- Don’t be so confident, I’ll beat you! – William replies
- I’d like to see you try. – Clio says, attaching Chaos to his launcher.
Three, Two, One, Go Shoot. Both beys land on the stadium and start clashing in the middle, Chaos gets pushed away from the center and slams onto the wall, but it absorbs the impact, then it starts going back and clashes hard against Wyvern, but it’s free spinning ring transfers the impact. Some time later Wyvern is wobbling while Chaos is still spinning, eventually Wyvern stops spinning.
- And it seems like Chaos is a stamina monster! – says one of the announcers.
- It won against Twister Wyvern without losing a point! Clio was not joking. – says the second announcer
Then the outro plays, the results zooms out and go on the bottom, with their photos and combos, while the commercial is playing on the top.
- Pressure Chaos seems strong, and it also has a lot of stamina – I say
- That’s because It has OWD, a good amount of weight and a driver made from glass – Kevin replies
- Why-... forget it – I say, giving up on trying to understand
It starts to get late, so we say goodbye. As they’re leaving, Callum shows his bey to me.
- Don’t worry, I won’t forget. -  I say to Callum, then I wave my hand – Bye!
- See you tomorrow at the park after school! – Sarah says.
Then I close the door, my dad looks at me with a shocked look, I ask him what’s wrong.
- It’s just that... you made friends. – He says – What about you go to sleep? I bought all your and your brother’s school material for tomorrow.
- Yeah... – I say – Goodnight.
I get ready for sleep, as I’m in my bed I look on Magnesium. “Tomorrow will be a busy day, are you ready for it?” I say in my mind, suddenly I hear “Sure”. I almost jump out of my bed.
- What the... – I say, looking around – I must be hearing things...
I lay down and fall asleep. Then suddenly appear on a void, everything is dark except me.
- Hello? – I say, looking around for anything.
A tree appears Infront of me, it has an arena on the left. On the arena, I see two people battling, one is a little girl and the other is an older boy, Me and my brother. I’m using a King Kerbeus Central Orbit from Husbri and my brother a Lost Longinus Jerk Impact, my bey gets thrown out of the stadium onto my feet, I grab it and look at it. “Some things never change” I say to myself. Suddenly I see myself 1 year later, I’m in my room with black clothes, I can hear someone talking:
- Can I enter? I just want to talk. – A familiar voice says.
- Go away – My little self says, sobbing.
Here we are again, for some context my mother died when I was about 7 years old. I got very sad about that and just isolated myself from people. A tear falls from my eye. Another time-skip happens, this time I’m 10 and I’m on the living room from your old house, I’m sitting on the sofa and both my dad and brother are giving me a present. “Why am I here?” I say, but no sound comes out of my mouth.
- You’ve had a lot of good and bad moments. – a mysterious voice says – and seems like you’re still in the past.
- Who are you? Is that myself? – I ask, confused
The mysterious voice laughs a little, and then says:
- I’m your bey, Magnesium. And who are you?
- Am I going crazy? – I say and look around – I’m Max...
- And who is Max? What are your motivations? Your dreams and nightmares? – Asks “Magnesium”.
I’m very confused at this point, I try to touch myself, but I don’t feel it.
- Am I on therapy again? You’re the lady with the glasses that asks me questions? – I say – I think it was... Ms. Ellen?
The voice giggles a bit more and says:
- One day you’ll get it, until then...  – Then I wake up by the sound of the alarm, I turn my head and see Magnesium shining from the sun.
“That was weird” I say to myself “Was that you? Probably it was just a dream”.
[End]

(Aug. 10, 2021  12:22 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 10, 2021  12:13 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Oh look, a Chapter! ( I think My chapters are a bit short, especially this one. Anyways, you can find it here and on the first post)

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 3
An unexpected turn of events! let’s watch tv and ignore the end.

- The food is ready! – My dad says, with his head in the attic, he then leaves.
- What a timing. – Says Sarah – You can battle Max after we eat.
Callum stays emotionless; we all go downstairs to the kitchen. There was a lot of pizzas, apparently my dad wanted to play safe and just made pizza, I don’t blame him. We all sit and start eating, except Callum: he took a plate, grabbed some slices, and then leaves. My dad was kind of surprised.
- Don’t worry, he will come back. – Kevin says
Anyways, we were eating and having a good time, and knowing each other better, eventually Callum came back. My brother (who was also there) turned on the tv, while he was scrolling across the channels, he finds out about BeyBattleTV, it’s a channel where, normally, people send broad-casted battles and the owners, that are hired from Beyblade company (like BeyTube), select a few to show on tv. The battle was between a guy named Clio and the other named William.
- Oh look. It’s Clio. – Sarah says, then looks at me – He’s Callum friend, I bet you won’t like him.
- Let’s see about that when I see him – I say
Clio is in the middle of a battle; his bey is called Pressure Chaos. While his opponent is using Twister Wyvern. Wyvern is near the stadium wall and comes back, like a pendulum. As they make contact, Clio yells “Pressure Smash”, one of Chaos blades goes in and it sends Wyvern in the air, bursting it.
- With a strong move, Clio opens the score with 2 points! – Says the announcer.
- Oh yeah! Me and Chaos are the best! – Clio says, with a smile
- Don’t be so confident, I’ll beat you! – William replies
- I’d like to see you try. – Clio says, attaching Chaos to his launcher.
Three, Two, One, Go Shoot. Both beys land on the stadium and start clashing in the middle, Chaos gets pushed away from the center and slams onto the wall, but it absorbs the impact, then it starts going back and clashes hard against Wyvern, but it’s free spinning ring transfers the impact. Some time later Wyvern is wobbling while Chaos is still spinning, eventually Wyvern stops spinning.
- And it seems like Chaos is a stamina monster! – says one of the announcers.
- It won against Twister Wyvern without losing a point! Clio was not joking. – says the second announcer
Then the outro plays, the results zooms out and go on the bottom, with their photos and combos, while the commercial is playing on the top.
- Pressure Chaos seems strong, and it also has a lot of stamina – I say
- That’s because It has OWD, a good amount of weight and a driver made from glass – Kevin replies
- Why-... forget it – I say, giving up on trying to understand
It starts to get late, so we say goodbye. As they’re leaving, Callum shows his bey to me.
- Don’t worry, I won’t forget. -  I say to Callum, then I wave my hand – Bye!
- See you tomorrow at the park after school! – Sarah says.
Then I close the door, my dad looks at me with a shocked look, I ask him what’s wrong.
- It’s just that... you made friends. – He says – What about you go to sleep? I bought all your and your brother’s school material for tomorrow.
- Yeah... – I say – Goodnight.
I get ready for sleep, as I’m in my bed I look on Magnesium. “Tomorrow will be a busy day, are you ready for it?” I say in my mind, suddenly I hear “Sure”. I almost jump out of my bed.
- What the... – I say, looking around – I must be hearing things...
I lay down and fall asleep. Then suddenly appear on a void, everything is dark except me.
- Hello? – I say, looking around for anything.
A tree appears Infront of me, it has an arena on the left. On the arena, I see two people battling, one is a little girl and the other is an older boy, Me and my brother. I’m using a King Kerbeus Central Orbit from Husbri and my brother a Lost Longinus Jerk Impact, my bey gets thrown out of the stadium onto my feet, I grab it and look at it. “Some things never change” I say to myself. Suddenly I see myself 1 year later, I’m in my room with black clothes, I can hear someone talking:
- Can I enter? I just want to talk. – A familiar voice says.
- Go away – My little self says, sobbing.
Here we are again, for some context my mother died when I was about 7 years old. I got very sad about that and just isolated myself from people. A tear falls from my eye. Another time-skip happens, this time I’m 10 and I’m on the living room from your old house, I’m sitting on the sofa and both my dad and brother are giving me a present. “Why am I here?” I say, but no sound comes out of my mouth.
- You’ve had a lot of good and bad moments. – a mysterious voice says – and seems like you’re still in the past.
- Who are you? Is that myself? – I ask, confused
The mysterious voice laughs a little, and then says:
- I’m your bey, Magnesium. And who are you?
- Am I going crazy? – I say and look around – I’m Max...
- And who is Max? What are your motivations? Your dreams and nightmares? – Asks “Magnesium”.
I’m very confused at this point, I try to touch myself, but I don’t feel it.
- Am I on therapy again? You’re the lady with the glasses that asks me questions? – I say – I think it was... Ms. Ellen?
The voice giggles a bit more and says:
- One day you’ll get it, until then...  – Then I wake up by the sound of the alarm, I turn my head and see Magnesium shining from the sun.
“That was weird” I say to myself “Was that you? Probably it was just a dream”.
[End]

Not gonna lie, you had me tearing up near the end, Awezome Chapter! Also, is Percy gonna make an appearance when Beyjitzu ends?

(Aug. 11, 2021  3:53 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I was thinking and maybe this could be a cool theme. (I also don't know how to put videos to see here, so here's the link)

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uf3ouaeB6UQ

The 4th chapter is out today too, maybe 2hr after this post.

(Aug. 11, 2021  10:57 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Hello! Unfortunately I was not able to finish today's chapter, so I'll finish it tomorrow.

I would also like to know how to insert images and make them visible without needing to click on a link. GenesisBlader do you have any idea? On how to do it.

(Aug. 11, 2021  11:03 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote:

(Aug. 11, 2021  10:57 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Hello! Unfortunately I was not able to finish today's chapter, so I'll finish it tomorrow.

I would also like to know how to insert images and make them visible without needing to click on a link. GenesisBlader do you have any idea? On how to do it.

hmm im not so sure