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Beyblade Burst Bonds! - USN - May. 04, 2021

Hello. This is going to be a thread for my fan-fic and I hope you guys enjoy. There are currently two chapters (As of the time I am posting this.) I hope you guys enjoy! 
BTW It would be greatly appreciated if you guys rated it and gave me suggestions I currently have a vague idea of the story.
Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oSdoCsID-g6-gYcGKC_phvhJHQE6Mav6JOFw8rOr7lQ/edit?usp=sharing
The spaces are just so that every new chapter starts on a new page. I know that they are kind of awkward.
A rating would be appreciated!

Characters (In Order of Appearance.):
Part I
The Crimson Rebirth
Part II
The Aura Games


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - JCE_13 - May. 04, 2021

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - Dragon Blader Z - May. 04, 2021

I agree with JCE_13

(May. 04, 2021  8:26 PM)USN Wrote: Hello. This is going to be a thread for my fan-fic and I hope you guys enjoy. There are currently two chapters (As of the time I am posting this.) I hope you guys enjoy! 
BTW It would be greatly appreciated if you guys rated it and gave me suggestions I currently have a vague idea of the story.
Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oSdoCsID-g6-gYcGKC_phvhJHQE6Mav6JOFw8rOr7lQ/edit?usp=sharing
The spaces are just so that every new chapter starts on a new page. I know that they are kind of awkward.

USN I read your fanfic and I like it so far!!!


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - USN - May. 04, 2021

(May. 04, 2021  8:43 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: I agree with JCE_13

(May. 04, 2021  8:26 PM)USN Wrote: Hello. This is going to be a thread for my fan-fic and I hope you guys enjoy. There are currently two chapters (As of the time I am posting this.) I hope you guys enjoy! 
BTW It would be greatly appreciated if you guys rated it and gave me suggestions I currently have a vague idea of the story.
Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oSdoCsID-g6-gYcGKC_phvhJHQE6Mav6JOFw8rOr7lQ/edit?usp=sharing
The spaces are just so that every new chapter starts on a new page. I know that they are kind of awkward.

USN I read your fanfic and I like it so far!!!

Any criticism?


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - Dragon Blader Z - May. 04, 2021

USN what does that mean?


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - USN - May. 04, 2021

(May. 04, 2021  9:12 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: USN what does that mean?

What did I do wrong. You did not imply anything, I just want to know how to make it better.


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - Dragon Blader Z - May. 04, 2021

Ok USN no criticism


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - USN - May. 04, 2021

(May. 04, 2021  9:13 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Ok USN no criticism

Thanks!


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - Dragon Blader Z - May. 04, 2021

But a quick question

What did you say for your thread subject cause I’m making a thread cause someone inspired me to


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - JCE_13 - May. 04, 2021

Your creations were the subforum. And [Fan Fiction] was the prefix.


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - USN - May. 04, 2021

(May. 04, 2021  9:17 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: But a quick question

What did you say for your thread subject cause I’m making a thread cause someone inspired me to

yeah he's right.


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - Dragon Blader Z - May. 04, 2021

(May. 04, 2021  9:22 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: Your creations were the subforum. And [Fan Fiction] was the prefix.

Ok Thanks JCE_13

(May. 04, 2021  9:22 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: Your creations were the subforum. And [Fan Fiction] was the prefix.

What do you mean creations were the subforum?

Im trying to but it’s not working


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - JCE_13 - May. 04, 2021

(May. 04, 2021  9:23 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote:
(May. 04, 2021  9:22 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: Your creations were the subforum. And [Fan Fiction] was the prefix.

Ok Thanks JCE_13

(May. 04, 2021  9:22 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: Your creations were the subforum. And [Fan Fiction] was the prefix.

What do you mean creations were the subforum?

Ok, here we go. Do you see the big WBO logo at the top left of your screen? Click it. Do you see the list of subforums on the left of the homepage? Scroll down to media and you should see "Your Creations". Click that, and then at the top left of the list of threads, you should see "Post a thread" or something. Name your thread and make the first post and you are done.


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - Dragon Blader Z - May. 04, 2021

(May. 04, 2021  9:34 PM)JCE_13 Wrote:
(May. 04, 2021  9:23 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Ok Thanks JCE_13


What do you mean creations were the subforum?

Ok, here we go. Do you see the big WBO logo at the top left of your screen? Click it. Do you see the list of subforums on the left of the homepage? Scroll down to media and you should see "Your Creations". Click that, and then at the top left of the list of threads, you should see "Post a thread" or something. Name your thread and make the first post and you are done.

I did what you said, and I have a problem what is a subject for my thread?

(May. 04, 2021  9:34 PM)JCE_13 Wrote:
(May. 04, 2021  9:23 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Ok Thanks JCE_13


What do you mean creations were the subforum?

Ok, here we go. Do you see the big WBO logo at the top left of your screen? Click it. Do you see the list of subforums on the left of the homepage? Scroll down to media and you should see "Your Creations". Click that, and then at the top left of the list of threads, you should see "Post a thread" or something. Name your thread and make the first post and you are done.

I did what you said, and I have a problem what is a subject for my thread?


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - JCE_13 - May. 04, 2021

You need to be more specific. Are you talking about subforum?

Oh, wait never mind. What you're talking about is the name. The subject is where you name your thread.


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - Dragon Blader Z - May. 04, 2021

(May. 04, 2021  9:39 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: You need to be more specific. Are you talking about subforum?
What I’m talking about is that I need to enter a subject to make my thread but I can’t so can you help me make a subject and I can make my thread?

(May. 04, 2021  9:39 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: You need to be more specific. Are you talking about subforum?

Oh, wait never mind. What you're talking about is the name. The subject is where you name your thread.

But I named it though, but it said that the subject is missing so what does that mean?


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - JCE_13 - May. 04, 2021

It's probably saying that the prefix is missing, did you click on the drop-down prefix menu and choose one?


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - Dragon Blader Z - May. 04, 2021

Yes I did JCE_13


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - USN - May. 14, 2021

Chapters 1-4 have been posted. If you guys want to, I would appreciate a rating.

Side note, Toko and Arina's beys will be explained more in-depth next chapter.


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds - USN - May. 17, 2021

New Announcement!
Character Competition! You guys will submit a character and Beyblade. The winners of this competition will have their character featured as one of the Tenacious Ten in my Fan-Fic. Here is the template:
Name:
Personality Description:
Physical Description:
Beyblade Name:
Beyblade Shape:
Beyblade Parts with descriptions:


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds (Character Contest!) - USN - May. 17, 2021

Just an update to the Character Contest,
I will be excepting two Bladers instead of one as I originally planed.


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds (Character Contest!) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021

oh ok i enter with this

name: Hizashi Ito
Bey: nexus hurricane it has 4 blades and this special tip that allows it to speed up even tho its a stamina type
what hes like: hizashi has a dark past but now he owning up to it
age: 12
bio : when he was younger he used to hang around with dark and shady people
parts: Tempest


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds (Character Contest!) - USN - May. 17, 2021

(May. 17, 2021  4:47 PM)JJustice Wrote: oh ok  i enter with this

name: Hizashi  Ito
Bey: nexus hurricane it has 4 blades and this special tip that allows it to speed up even tho its a stamina type
what hes like: hizashi has a dark past but now he owning up to it
age: 12
bio : when he was younger he used to hang around with dark and shady people
parts: Tempest

Thanks for entering!


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds (Character Contest!) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021

(May. 17, 2021  4:50 PM)USN Wrote:
(May. 17, 2021  4:47 PM)JJustice Wrote: oh ok  i enter with this

name: Hizashi  Ito
Bey: nexus hurricane it has 4 blades and this special tip that allows it to speed up even tho its a stamina type
what hes like: hizashi has a dark past but now he owning up to it
age: 12
bio : when he was younger he used to hang around with dark and shady people
parts: Tempest

Thanks for entering!

np

i made a back up oc if you cant do that one


RE: Beyblade Burst Bonds (Character Contest!) - USN - May. 17, 2021

(May. 17, 2021  4:52 PM)JJustice Wrote:
(May. 17, 2021  4:50 PM)USN Wrote: Thanks for entering!

np

i made a back up oc if you cant do that one

No, I like this character.