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Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 20, 2020
Ok this is for my fnaf fan fic I’m making. I will be posting the chapters here for you all to read. If you have any ideas for characters you can suggest them to me through here or in dms.
RE: Fazbears Fright - GreenK9148 - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:24 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Ok this is for my fnaf fan fic I’m making. I will be posting the chapters here for you all to read. If you have any ideas for characters you can suggest them to me through here or in dms.
Include cookie monster.
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:25 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 1:24 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Ok this is for my fnaf fan fic I’m making. I will be posting the chapters here for you all to read. If you have any ideas for characters you can suggest them to me through here or in dms.
Include cookie monster.
I was thinking more of characters from fnaf because this story is gonna get pretty deep
RE: Fazbears Fright - GreenK9148 - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:26 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 1:25 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Include cookie monster.
I was thinking more of characters from fnaf because this story is gonna get pretty deep
Ok, but can you please add cookie monster, or big bird.
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:26 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:I will, I’ll probably make bloopers for a group of chapters and I’ll add those characters(Oct. 20, 2020 1:26 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: I was thinking more of characters from fnaf because this story is gonna get pretty deep
Ok, but can you please add cookie monster, or big bird.
RE: Fazbears Fright - GreenK9148 - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:28 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 1:26 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Ok, but can you please add cookie monster, or big bird.I will, I’ll probably make bloopers for a group of chapters and I’ll add those characters
Thank you. Cookie monster is my idol (not actually)
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 20, 2020
Fazbears fright #0 “the beginning”
Waitress:”good morning, I hope your having a nice day. Here’s your breakfast”
Matt: “Thanks ma’am I hope your having a good day too”
Waitress: “do you need any refills or anything”
Matt: “No thanks ma’am”
Waitress: “alright just tell me when to give you the check. Enjoy your meal sir”
Matt: “alright thanks ma’am.”
Matt: “I only have enough money to get this one plate of food for today, but that’s fine.”
*phone rings*
Matt: “Hello? Who’s this”
Phone guy: “HeLlO We’Re CaLlInG Fr0m FaZbEaRs EnTeRtAiNmEnt LoOkInG FoR A NeW SeCuRiTy GuArD....”
Matt: “Hey your cutting out. You still there?”
Phone guy: “We’Re MaKiNg A NeW *fixes mic* establishment called fazbears fright”
Matt: “ Alright also thanks for fixing the mic”
Phone guy” no problem, we’re just facing some technical difficulties here since it’s new”
Matt: “alright what’s this place called”
Phone guy: “fazbears fright the horror attraction”
Matt: “alright but first thing. How did you get my number? Not like I’m saying I won’t take the job because I need a job since my apartments about to be closed”
Phone guy: “Yeah like it’s totally taken care of, we just need a security guard”
Matt: “I understand but like how did you get my number?”
Phone guy: “that doesn’t matter. We just need a security guard. You’ll be working from midnight to 6 in the morning. Sorry if I messed up your day it’s just I’ve been calling people all day your just the only one that picked up”
Matt: “oh whatever man. When do I come to get the interview”
Phone guy: “just come tomorrow morning and we can have it”
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:31 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 1:28 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: I will, I’ll probably make bloopers for a group of chapters and I’ll add those characters
Thank you. Cookie monster is my idol (not actually)
I finished the prologue if you wanna read it and give me a score of how I did
CheetoBlader this is my prologue for my fan fic and I would like for you to rate it since I’ve seen you rate some other fan fics
RE: Fazbears Fright - GreenK9148 - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:47 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Fazbears fright #0 “the beginning”
Waitress:”good morning, I hope your having a nice day. Here’s your breakfast”
Matt: “Thanks ma’am I hope your having a good day too”
Waitress: “do you need any refills or anything”
Matt: “No thanks ma’am”
Waitress: “alright just tell me when to give you the check. Enjoy your meal sir”
Matt: “alright thanks ma’am.”
Matt: “I only have enough money to get this one plate of food for today, but that’s fine.”
*phone rings*
Matt: “Hello? Who’s this”
Phone guy: “HeLlO We’Re CaLlInG Fr0m FaZbEaRs EnTeRtAiNmEnt LoOkInG FoR A NeW SeCuRiTy GuArD....”
Matt: “Hey your cutting out. You still there?”
Phone guy: “We’Re MaKiNg A NeW *fixes mic* establishment called fazbears fright”
Matt: “ Alright also thanks for fixing the mic”
Phone guy” no problem, we’re just facing some technical difficulties here since it’s new”
Matt: “alright what’s this place called”
Phone guy: “fazbears fright the horror attraction”
Matt: “alright but first thing. How did you get my number? Not like I’m saying I won’t take the job because I need a job since my apartments about to be closed”
Phone guy: “Yeah like it’s totally taken care of, we just need a security guard”
Matt: “I understand but like how did you get my number?”
Phone guy: “that doesn’t matter. We just need a security guard. You’ll be working from midnight to 6 in the morning. Sorry if I messed up your day it’s just I’ve been calling people all day your just the only one that picked up”
Matt: “oh whatever man. When do I come to get the interview”
Phone guy: “just come tomorrow morning and we can have it”
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:31 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Thank you. Cookie monster is my idol (not actually)
I finished the prologue if you wanna read it and give me a score of how I did
cheetoblader this is my prologue for my fan fic and I would like for you to rate it since I’ve seen you rate some other fan fics
Pretty good, I’ll read the next chapter, though I’m not that good on rating things, I’ll leave the score to Cheeto. Pretty good so far!
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 20, 2020
Chapter #1 “day one”
1 Day later
Matt: “I really wonder what this job interviews gonna be like. Huh, there’s a note on the ground”
Phone guys note: “hey sorry I couldn’t be there for the interview we have stuff to do at another location. Your clothes will be in your room.”
Matt: “huh, I guess I got the job.”
Matt walks in to fazbears fright and gets greater with news papers of the missing children’s incident at one of the original freddys location. And on the sides you could see broken down animatronics chained by the neck. There was a chain for each animatronic in the pizzeria, Freddy, chica, foxy, and balloon boy.
Matt:” huh, wheres Bonnie?”
Matt then looks to the left and sees Bonnie separated from the others with iron bars. Matt walks through the pizzeria seeing words in fake blood “he sees you” and “you will suffer, like we’ve suffered”. He then sees a fake freddy and foxy costume with axes hanging over 2 peoples heads. But what was even more creepy is that there was a bloodied up fake dead child in each room that people have theorized the missing kids died at. Matt then comes up to see a green bunny that looked like it was rotting. It wasn’t like the others it looked like to be one of those old springlock suits from the old fredbears location. And also the suit theorized to be used to kill the missing children’s incident victims. Also it looked like there was a rotting corpse in it.
Matt: “ I never new they were gonna go this deep into the mystery’s”
The then turns the corner away from the bunny but then has a urge to look back. Matt looks behind him to see the bunny moved to look straight at him.
Matt: “ok, that’s pretty creepy”
Matt then goes to his room and puts his security guard clothes on. The room looked very similar to his apartment room though. Which he felt was really odd. Matt then looks at his watch it’s 11: 58 am.
Matt: “wait wasn’t it like 6 am when I first came. Weird, but whatever I better get to my office.
Matt goes to his office. There’s a door and a vent that he can open and close. He also finds a flashlight he could use. But he then looks to the window in shock.
The bunny: “hello, nightguard”
RE: Fazbears Fright - AlexTheBlader - Oct. 20, 2020
I like it but it’s so predictable it’s basically the fnaf 4 story just with a tiny difference because it’s a fan fiction. I would rate this like a 9/10 if it was actually a unique story but since it’s basically like fnaf 4 I give it a 4/10.
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 3:09 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: I like it but it’s so predictable it’s basically the fnaf 4 story just with a tiny difference because it’s a fan fiction. I would rate this like a 9/10 if it was actually a unique story but since it’s basically like fnaf 4 I give it a 4/10.
How’s it fnaf 4? In fnaf 4 you play as Michael afton (the brother of the bite of 83 victim) getting tortured in his dreams by golden freddy
Also we haven’t even got into the plot this is just basically introducing the characters
RE: Fazbears Fright - AlexTheBlader - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 3:38 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote:I mean fnaf 3 fazbears fright, spring trap, broken animatronics, etc(Oct. 20, 2020 3:09 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: I like it but it’s so predictable it’s basically the fnaf 4 story just with a tiny difference because it’s a fan fiction. I would rate this like a 9/10 if it was actually a unique story but since it’s basically like fnaf 4 I give it a 4/10.
How’s it fnaf 4? In fnaf 4 you play as Michael afton (the brother of the bite of 83 victim) getting tortured in his dreams by golden freddy
Also we haven’t even got into the plot this is just basically introducing the characters
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 4:17 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 3:38 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: How’s it fnaf 4? In fnaf 4 you play as Michael afton (the brother of the bite of 83 victim) getting tortured in his dreams by golden freddyI mean fnaf 3 fazbears fright, spring trap, broken animatronics, etc
Also we haven’t even got into the plot this is just basically introducing the characters
Oh well we haven’t got into the plot yet and trust me this is something no fnaf game has ever done
Fazbears fright #2 “the first night”
The bunny: “you must be the new security guard.”
Matt: “uhhh, yeah. Your not supposed to be doing that. What’s going on?! How are you talking and moving around?”
The bunny: “well aren’t we a smart cookie. What you will know and what I will find out, will be in the future.”
Matt: “what does that mean?”
The bunny: “you’ll find out”
Matt: “ok bunny, can you go back to the stage or wherever you came from”
The bunny: “I’m not named bunny! My name is springtrap, and I’m gonna enjoy torturing you.”
Matt: “ok I’m sorry springtrap. And hey you don’t have to say stuff like that we can be friends.”
Springtrap: “do you not know who I am?”
Matt: “um, I mean, I think i do. I did some research on the franchise.”
Springtrap: “hmm, you might live a night or two. Now I’m gonna find more fun things to do.”
Matt: “um, what?”
Springtrap: “I’ll be able to get in sooner or later.”
Matt gets panicked thinking of what he could do to defend himself from springtrap. He looks at his door and closes it. But then a voice comes from the vents.
Balloon boy: “hello!”
Matt: “um,hi?”
Balloon boy: “hey, can I come in?”
*springtrap then talks over the microphone connected through the building*
Springtrap: “balloon you idiot. He’s not gonna let you in.”
Balloon boy: “hey at least I tried.”
Springtrap mutters: “you stupid statue”
Matt then looks at his door it first had the number 100% but now it says 95%. Matt then made the connection he probably has a limited amount of power. He then finds a book from a past security guard that has wrote what to do against all the animatronics. He sees the page called balloon boy it says “to get rid of balloon just flash him with your flashlight”. Matt then does that and balloon boy crawls away from the vent.
Springtrap: “nightguard, power”
Matt: “what do you mean there’s nothing wrong with my power.”
He then looks at his power and it’s at 75% some how. Springtrap then darts at his door but Matt was able to close it in time. Matt looks back and Springtrap has disappeared. He opens back his door in confusion. He looks at his watch it said 1 am. Matt then whispered to himself “just 5 more hours” to calm himself down. Matt then has to fend against animatronics the rest of the night till 6 am.
*at 6am*
Springtrap: “we’ll be back”
Matt: “alright, sure you will.”
Matt then thinks “I need to get out of here” he then books it to the door but then when he gets out of the pizzeria he gets teleported back to the office, He try’s it again but then gets teleported back to the office. He then makes the connection that he now is trapped here.
I’ll be posting 2 chapters a day
RE: Fazbears Fright - AlexTheBlader - Oct. 21, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 4:29 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote:The security guard seems way to calm for too long seeing a broken down animatronic moving. Everything else is pretty good like how he can’t leave the pizzeria. Here’s a good ending to the story, these are just ideas it’s up to you though. During the day shift he goes crazy while people are touring the attraction screaming “run” or he will catch you! Then this was reported to the head manager, William Afton (I know he’s in springtrap suit but still) another alternate ending could be he gets trapped in there forever something like that(Oct. 20, 2020 4:17 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: I mean fnaf 3 fazbears fright, spring trap, broken animatronics, etc
Oh well we haven’t got into the plot yet and trust me this is something no fnaf game has ever done
Fazbears fright #2 “the first night”
The bunny: “you must be the new security guard.”
Matt: “uhhh, yeah. Your not supposed to be doing that. What’s going on?! How are you talking and moving around?”
The bunny: “well aren’t we a smart cookie. What you will know and what I will find out, will be in the future.”
Matt: “what does that mean?”
The bunny: “you’ll find out”
Matt: “ok bunny, can you go back to the stage or wherever you came from”
The bunny: “I’m not named bunny! My name is springtrap, and I’m gonna enjoy torturing you.”
Matt: “ok I’m sorry springtrap. And hey you don’t have to say stuff like that we can be friends.”
Springtrap: “do you not know who I am?”
Matt: “um, I mean, I think i do. I did some research on the franchise.”
Springtrap: “hmm, you might live a night or two. Now I’m gonna find more fun things to do.”
Matt: “um, what?”
Springtrap: “I’ll be able to get in sooner or later.”
Matt gets panicked thinking of what he could do to defend himself from springtrap. He looks at his door and closes it. But then a voice comes from the vents.
Balloon boy: “hello!”
Matt: “um,hi?”
Balloon boy: “hey, can I come in?”
*springtrap then talks over the microphone connected through the building*
Springtrap: “balloon you idiot. He’s not gonna let you in.”
Balloon boy: “hey at least I tried.”
Springtrap mutters: “you stupid statue”
Matt then looks at his door it first had the number 100% but now it says 95%. Matt then made the connection he probably has a limited amount of power. He then finds a book from a past security guard that has wrote what to do against all the animatronics. He sees the page called balloon boy it says “to get rid of balloon just flash him with your flashlight”. Matt then does that and balloon boy crawls away from the vent.
Springtrap: “nightguard, power”
Matt: “what do you mean there’s nothing wrong with my power.”
He then looks at his power and it’s at 75% some how. Springtrap then darts at his door but Matt was able to close it in time. Matt looks back and Springtrap has disappeared. He opens back his door in confusion. He looks at his watch it said 1 am. Matt then whispered to himself “just 5 more hours” to calm himself down. Matt then has to fend against animatronics the rest of the night till 6 am.
*at 6am*
Springtrap: “we’ll be back”
Matt: “alright, sure you will.”
Matt then thinks “I need to get out of here” he then books it to the door but then when he gets out of the pizzeria he gets teleported back to the office, He try’s it again but then gets teleported back to the office. He then makes the connection that he now is trapped here.
I’ll be posting 2 chapters a day
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 21, 2020
(Oct. 21, 2020 5:57 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 4:29 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Oh well we haven’t got into the plot yet and trust me this is something no fnaf game has ever doneThe security guard seems way to calm for too long seeing a broken down animatronic moving. Everything else is pretty good like how he can’t leave the pizzeria. Here’s a good ending to the story, these are just ideas it’s up to you though. During the day shift he goes crazy while people are touring the attraction screaming “run” or he will catch you! Then this was reported to the head manager, William Afton (I know he’s in springtrap suit but still) another alternate ending could be he gets trapped in there forever something like that
Fazbears fright #2 “the first night”
The bunny: “you must be the new security guard.”
Matt: “uhhh, yeah. Your not supposed to be doing that. What’s going on?! How are you talking and moving around?”
The bunny: “well aren’t we a smart cookie. What you will know and what I will find out, will be in the future.”
Matt: “what does that mean?”
The bunny: “you’ll find out”
Matt: “ok bunny, can you go back to the stage or wherever you came from”
The bunny: “I’m not named bunny! My name is springtrap, and I’m gonna enjoy torturing you.”
Matt: “ok I’m sorry springtrap. And hey you don’t have to say stuff like that we can be friends.”
Springtrap: “do you not know who I am?”
Matt: “um, I mean, I think i do. I did some research on the franchise.”
Springtrap: “hmm, you might live a night or two. Now I’m gonna find more fun things to do.”
Matt: “um, what?”
Springtrap: “I’ll be able to get in sooner or later.”
Matt gets panicked thinking of what he could do to defend himself from springtrap. He looks at his door and closes it. But then a voice comes from the vents.
Balloon boy: “hello!”
Matt: “um,hi?”
Balloon boy: “hey, can I come in?”
*springtrap then talks over the microphone connected through the building*
Springtrap: “balloon you idiot. He’s not gonna let you in.”
Balloon boy: “hey at least I tried.”
Springtrap mutters: “you stupid statue”
Matt then looks at his door it first had the number 100% but now it says 95%. Matt then made the connection he probably has a limited amount of power. He then finds a book from a past security guard that has wrote what to do against all the animatronics. He sees the page called balloon boy it says “to get rid of balloon just flash him with your flashlight”. Matt then does that and balloon boy crawls away from the vent.
Springtrap: “nightguard, power”
Matt: “what do you mean there’s nothing wrong with my power.”
He then looks at his power and it’s at 75% some how. Springtrap then darts at his door but Matt was able to close it in time. Matt looks back and Springtrap has disappeared. He opens back his door in confusion. He looks at his watch it said 1 am. Matt then whispered to himself “just 5 more hours” to calm himself down. Matt then has to fend against animatronics the rest of the night till 6 am.
*at 6am*
Springtrap: “we’ll be back”
Matt: “alright, sure you will.”
Matt then thinks “I need to get out of here” he then books it to the door but then when he gets out of the pizzeria he gets teleported back to the office, He try’s it again but then gets teleported back to the office. He then makes the connection that he now is trapped here.
I’ll be posting 2 chapters a day
I like those ideas I might use them. The security guard isn’t really panicked he’s really just weirded out. Also he did research on the franchise and mystery’s so he would’ve already heard of this.
RE: Fazbears Fright - AlexTheBlader - Oct. 21, 2020
(Oct. 21, 2020 8:18 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote:He wouldn’t have took the job if he knew moving animatronics that can murder him are here. He probably thought those were just rumors and this place was made around these rumors.(Oct. 21, 2020 5:57 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: The security guard seems way to calm for too long seeing a broken down animatronic moving. Everything else is pretty good like how he can’t leave the pizzeria. Here’s a good ending to the story, these are just ideas it’s up to you though. During the day shift he goes crazy while people are touring the attraction screaming “run” or he will catch you! Then this was reported to the head manager, William Afton (I know he’s in springtrap suit but still) another alternate ending could be he gets trapped in there forever something like that
I like those ideas I might use them. The security guard isn’t really panicked he’s really just weirded out. Also he did research on the franchise and mystery’s so he would’ve already heard of this.
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 21, 2020
(Oct. 21, 2020 8:38 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:(Oct. 21, 2020 8:18 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: I like those ideas I might use them. The security guard isn’t really panicked he’s really just weirded out. Also he did research on the franchise and mystery’s so he would’ve already heard of this.He wouldn’t have took the job if he knew moving animatronics that can murder him are here. He probably thought those were just rumors and this place was made around these rumors.
Yeah that’s why I said in the story when he came in he saw newspapers and articles talking about the missing children’s incident and why there’s a fake dead kid in every room a child died
Fazbears fright #3 “night two”
*Tuesday night 11:55 pm*
Balloon boy: wake up
Matt: I’m tired
Balloon boy: wake up sleepy head, wake up
Matt: who gave me this stupid alarm, it’s so loud
Balloon boy: get out of bed
Matt: *yawns* when did I fall asleep?
Matt then yells in panic to see balloon boy on his bed staring at him. And springtrap on his right looking at him reaching for him with both hands.
Matt: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! I CANT MOVE, GET OFF OF ME!
Springtrap: grrrr
Balloon boy: oh, sorry
Springtrap: BRING. ME. YOUR. NECK
Matt: WHAT? WHATS GOING ON?
Matt then calms down wondering why Springtrap isn’t attack him.
Springtrap: I want to strangle you. This stupid track
Matt: what track? What’s going on? Why are you in my room? Why are you walking around?
Balloon boy: I don’t have a track but he does. He gets annoying
Matt: wait what track? What are you talking about?
Balloon boy: he’s on a certain track in the day that keeps him from going to some places. But he was trying to kill you. He couldn’t kill you anyway because it’s not 12
Matt: uhh? Why are you in my room
Balloon boy: well he was in your room so I decided to come up here too
Matt: why were you sitting on me in my room? That’s weird, why didn’t I wake up sooner? My legs are bruised
Balloon boy: I wish I could kill you right now
Matt: why do you want to kill me?
Balloon boy: because your a human. And it’s 12
Matt: ok, well, I’m gonna go this way. You stay there
Balloon boy: it’s only 2 minutes to 12 anyway
Matt: say what now?
Balloon boy: so, it’s like, 11:58
Matt: ok, ok, you can stay in here I guess. Why’s my door open? I didn’t open my door. How did they get in there?
Matt then runs to the security room and closes his door waiting for the clock to hit 12 pm.
Balloon boy: 11:59 night guard
Matt: geez, thanks
Matt then panics because he almost died a couple times last night with Springtrap at his door charging. And from the articles of the rumors he’s read they get more aggressive every night.
Springtrap: AHHH THIS STUPID TIME
Matt:uhhh, if you can like, not do that next time that would be great. Ok? If you can just not kill me that would be nice
The clock hits 12, Matt is starting to panic wondering where the animatronics are.
Balloon boy: you should really go to the puppet
Matt: why? Why should I go to the puppet?
Balloon boy: she wants to tell you a story
Springtrap: UHH, STOP HELPING HIM
Balloon boy: what do you mean? Oh!
Matt now wonders in his mind if he should listen to balloon boy or not. Since it’s annoying Springtrap he’s thinking of going there. He then decides to listen to balloon boy. He then goes to the room he saw the puppet at. He comes into the room seeing puppet stand in front of the giant gift box it comes out of. Matt then wonders what he’s supposed to do in here. He looks around and doesn’t see anyone, only the puppet.
Puppet: welcome children, come all around
Matt: uhhh
Puppet: I’ll tell you a story of which terror abounds. Not so long ago, there was a little boy. He had black hair, his name was Gabriel and he was having a birthday party at freddy fazbears pizza. He was having a good life till he was murdered by a man in a yellow bunny suit. He then woke up as a bear. He now looks for a way to help his friends that are here with him, and try to free them.
Matt then looks beside him to see freddy looking straight at him
Freddy: Hello!
Matt: AHHH
Matt then runs to the security room and closes the door. The night is normal like yesterday’s but the animatronics were a little more aggressive and he also had to deal with Freddy.
(Oct. 21, 2020 5:57 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 4:29 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Oh well we haven’t got into the plot yet and trust me this is something no fnaf game has ever doneThe security guard seems way to calm for too long seeing a broken down animatronic moving. Everything else is pretty good like how he can’t leave the pizzeria. Here’s a good ending to the story, these are just ideas it’s up to you though. During the day shift he goes crazy while people are touring the attraction screaming “run” or he will catch you! Then this was reported to the head manager, William Afton (I know he’s in springtrap suit but still) another alternate ending could be he gets trapped in there forever something like that
Fazbears fright #2 “the first night”
The bunny: “you must be the new security guard.”
Matt: “uhhh, yeah. Your not supposed to be doing that. What’s going on?! How are you talking and moving around?”
The bunny: “well aren’t we a smart cookie. What you will know and what I will find out, will be in the future.”
Matt: “what does that mean?”
The bunny: “you’ll find out”
Matt: “ok bunny, can you go back to the stage or wherever you came from”
The bunny: “I’m not named bunny! My name is springtrap, and I’m gonna enjoy torturing you.”
Matt: “ok I’m sorry springtrap. And hey you don’t have to say stuff like that we can be friends.”
Springtrap: “do you not know who I am?”
Matt: “um, I mean, I think i do. I did some research on the franchise.”
Springtrap: “hmm, you might live a night or two. Now I’m gonna find more fun things to do.”
Matt: “um, what?”
Springtrap: “I’ll be able to get in sooner or later.”
Matt gets panicked thinking of what he could do to defend himself from springtrap. He looks at his door and closes it. But then a voice comes from the vents.
Balloon boy: “hello!”
Matt: “um,hi?”
Balloon boy: “hey, can I come in?”
*springtrap then talks over the microphone connected through the building*
Springtrap: “balloon you idiot. He’s not gonna let you in.”
Balloon boy: “hey at least I tried.”
Springtrap mutters: “you stupid statue”
Matt then looks at his door it first had the number 100% but now it says 95%. Matt then made the connection he probably has a limited amount of power. He then finds a book from a past security guard that has wrote what to do against all the animatronics. He sees the page called balloon boy it says “to get rid of balloon just flash him with your flashlight”. Matt then does that and balloon boy crawls away from the vent.
Springtrap: “nightguard, power”
Matt: “what do you mean there’s nothing wrong with my power.”
He then looks at his power and it’s at 75% some how. Springtrap then darts at his door but Matt was able to close it in time. Matt looks back and Springtrap has disappeared. He opens back his door in confusion. He looks at his watch it said 1 am. Matt then whispered to himself “just 5 more hours” to calm himself down. Matt then has to fend against animatronics the rest of the night till 6 am.
*at 6am*
Springtrap: “we’ll be back”
Matt: “alright, sure you will.”
Matt then thinks “I need to get out of here” he then books it to the door but then when he gets out of the pizzeria he gets teleported back to the office, He try’s it again but then gets teleported back to the office. He then makes the connection that he now is trapped here.
I’ll be posting 2 chapters a day
I’m gonna be using one of these ideas for one of the chapters. But like I said the story/plot is gonna be different from any fnaf game
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 23, 2020
Fazbears frights #3 “the choice”
Matt wakes up to see a note on his bed saying “come to the gift box”. Matt goes to the gift box to see the puppet is there. He walks in very hesitant but the puppet waves for him to come in.
Puppet: Thank you for coming here
Matt: why do you want me here puppet? You want to kill me?
Puppet: no, I do not desire to do such thing. And you can call me by my real name Charlie
Matt: Wait your names Charlie? Not from the franchise, your names the puppet
Puppet: it’s the name I had when I was still a child. Do you not remember who I am?
Matt: no? How would I
Puppet: You don’t remember do you?
Matt: remember what?
Puppet: Michael please come back to me
Matt’s past memories then flash back to him. How he killed his brother with the fredbear animatronic, how he got scooped, and how he set the last location to a blaze.
Charlie: do you now remember?
Michael: yes I do. Thanks for getting my memory’s back
Charlie: it’s alright but this isn’t what I called you back here for. This place is not a real pizzeria, we were sent here by someone. I don’t know who though. But we must free everyone. I tried to free freddy on my own but it didn’t work. I need your help Michael, to free Gabriel and everyone else.
Michael: alright, wait you said there’s other spirits here. Who are they?
Charlie: well there’s Gabriel, Jeremy, Susie, Frits, Kelsey, Andrew, and your father. We must free them all, even your father. He was not in the right straight of mind when he killed us, so he is technically innocent like us all.
Michael: alright who are we doing first
Charlie: on your 3rd night come to my gift box and I will tell you how we will save Gabriel
Michael: alright then, I’ll see you tonight
RE: Fazbears Fright - AlexTheBlader - Oct. 23, 2020
(Oct. 23, 2020 1:35 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Fazbears frights #3 “the choice”okay this is actually really good lol also on chapter two how is he in his room when he is trapped in the fnaf 3 location? Was his room just the security office? I didn’t get that part. my rating goes to a 8/10 few grammar mistakes but chapter three just wow that was good and fixed the last chapters that were not the best
Matt wakes up to see a note on his bed saying “come to the gift box”. Matt goes to the gift box to see the puppet is there. He walks in very hesitant but the puppet waves for him to come in.
Puppet: Thank you for coming here
Matt: why do you want me here puppet? You want to kill me?
Puppet: no, I do not desire to do such thing. And you can call me by my real name Charlie
Matt: Wait your names Charlie? Not from the franchise, your names the puppet
Puppet: it’s the name I had when I was still a child. Do you not remember who I am?
Matt: no? How would I
Puppet: You don’t remember do you?
Matt: remember what?
Puppet: Michael please come back to me
Matt’s past memories then flash back to him. How he killed his brother with the fredbear animatronic, how he got scooped, and how he set the last location to a blaze.
Charlie: do you now remember?
Michael: yes I do. Thanks for getting my memory’s back
Charlie: it’s alright but this isn’t what I called you back here for. This place is not a real pizzeria, we were sent here by someone. I don’t know who though. But we must free everyone. I tried to free freddy on my own but it didn’t work. I need your help Michael, to free Gabriel and everyone else.
Michael: alright, wait you said there’s other spirits here. Who are they?
Charlie: well there’s Gabriel, Jeremy, Susie, Frits, Kelsey, Andrew, and your father. We must free them all, even your father. He was not in the right straight of mind when he killed us, so he is technically innocent like us all.
Michael: alright who are we doing first
Charlie: on your 3rd night come to my gift box and I will tell you how we will save Gabriel
Michael: alright then, I’ll see you tonight
RE: Fazbears Fright - BeybladeManiac0 - Oct. 23, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:31 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 1:28 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: I will, I’ll probably make bloopers for a group of chapters and I’ll add those characters
Thank you. Cookie monster is my idol (not actually)
Cookie...
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 23, 2020
(Oct. 23, 2020 2:17 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:(Oct. 23, 2020 1:35 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Fazbears frights #3 “the choice”okay this is actually really good lol also on chapter two how is he in his room when he is trapped in the fnaf 3 location? Was his room just the security office? I didn’t get that part. my rating goes to a 8/10 few grammar mistakes but chapter three just wow that was good and fixed the last chapters that were not the best
Matt wakes up to see a note on his bed saying “come to the gift box”. Matt goes to the gift box to see the puppet is there. He walks in very hesitant but the puppet waves for him to come in.
Puppet: Thank you for coming here
Matt: why do you want me here puppet? You want to kill me?
Puppet: no, I do not desire to do such thing. And you can call me by my real name Charlie
Matt: Wait your names Charlie? Not from the franchise, your names the puppet
Puppet: it’s the name I had when I was still a child. Do you not remember who I am?
Matt: no? How would I
Puppet: You don’t remember do you?
Matt: remember what?
Puppet: Michael please come back to me
Matt’s past memories then flash back to him. How he killed his brother with the fredbear animatronic, how he got scooped, and how he set the last location to a blaze.
Charlie: do you now remember?
Michael: yes I do. Thanks for getting my memory’s back
Charlie: it’s alright but this isn’t what I called you back here for. This place is not a real pizzeria, we were sent here by someone. I don’t know who though. But we must free everyone. I tried to free freddy on my own but it didn’t work. I need your help Michael, to free Gabriel and everyone else.
Michael: alright, wait you said there’s other spirits here. Who are they?
Charlie: well there’s Gabriel, Jeremy, Susie, Frits, Kelsey, Andrew, and your father. We must free them all, even your father. He was not in the right straight of mind when he killed us, so he is technically innocent like us all.
Michael: alright who are we doing first
Charlie: on your 3rd night come to my gift box and I will tell you how we will save Gabriel
Michael: alright then, I’ll see you tonight
Thanks, and his room isn’t the office. This isnt the fnaf 3 location it’s a different fazbears fright and there’s a room that the nightguard can sleep in
It’s in the left of the security room
RE: Fazbears Fright - AlexTheBlader - Oct. 23, 2020
(Oct. 23, 2020 11:05 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:Oh that’s kinda cool but a bit odd lol(Oct. 23, 2020 2:17 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: okay this is actually really good lol also on chapter two how is he in his room when he is trapped in the fnaf 3 location? Was his room just the security office? I didn’t get that part. my rating goes to a 8/10 few grammar mistakes but chapter three just wow that was good and fixed the last chapters that were not the best
Thanks, and his room isn’t the office. This isnt the fnaf 3 location it’s a different fazbears fright and there’s a room that the nightguard can sleep in
It’s in the left of the security room
RE: Fazbears Fright - Jdog757 - Oct. 23, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:25 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 1:24 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Ok this is for my fnaf fan fic I’m making. I will be posting the chapters here for you all to read. If you have any ideas for characters you can suggest them to me through here or in dms.
Include cookie monster.
You have lots of intelligence
RE: Fazbears Fright - GreenK9148 - Oct. 23, 2020
(Oct. 23, 2020 10:40 PM)Jdog757 Wrote:(Oct. 20, 2020 1:25 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Include cookie monster.
You have lots of intelligence
MMMM, ME WANT COOKIE, NOM NOM NOM NOM.
RE: Fazbears Fright - Golden Freddy - Oct. 23, 2020
Fazbears fright #4 “birthday boy”
Michael wakes up in his room then goes to the gift box to see Charlie.
Michael: so what’s the plan for Gabriel.
Charlie: since he died on his birthday we’re gonna make one for him.
Michael: alright so what do I do?
Charlie: You need to get supplies for his birthday. But first you might wanna go to your office since it’s 11:58.
Michael: true, I’ll be getting the supplies during the night so I’ll meet you when I have all the supplies.
Charlie: alright, I’ll try to keep the animatronics away without me getting much suspicion from whoever created this place.
Michael: alright see yah then!
Michael then runs into the security room to get ready for the night.
Springtrap: nightguard! We’re coming!
Michael closes his door and gets ready for their attacks. They charge at his door and through the vents. Michael doesn’t notice the power going down but then the power went out. He grabbed his flashlight and though this might be a good time to find some supplies for the birthday. He runs into the show stage and sees Springtrap roaming around. He hides behind a table and finds a party hat for the birthday. He grabs it but Springtrap notices his hand.
Springtrap: found you! Haha!
Michael runs to the vent outside the show stage and books it. He looks behind him but sees Springtrap crawling after him. Michael then turns a corner and goes out of the vent that leads to a generator. There’s a note that says “to reset power hit the numbers 1983”. Michael types it in and the power turns back on. He then sees balloon boy turning the corner so Michael runs to the office. Michael gets in and closes the door. He sees the clock 2 am. But then he gets a message in his brain from Charlie saying “when you have all the supplies meet me in the gift box room at 5 am”. Michael runs to find Charlie at the gift box and he asks Charlie
Michael: can you distract the animatronics since I need to get a table for the party
Charlie: alright I’ll go find them
Michael finds a table in the back and moves in to a empty party room. The animatronics sometimes came to the party room but Charlie was able to get them away. It’s 5 am, he comes to Charlie and Charlie brings freddy.
Freddy: good job puppet. Now we can kill him
Charlie: no, Gabriel. He’s here to help us
Freddy: who’s Gabriel. And have you lost your mind? He’s a human, he must die
Charlie: Gabriel, let me bring you somewhere
Freddy: fine, but if that human does anything he’s dead
Charlie brings freddy to the party room and he sees a table with a party hat on it.
Charlie: sit down Gabriel. It’s time to celebrate your birthday
Freddy: birthday?
Freddys memories start flashing back and he remembers about his death and his birthday.
Gabriel: wait, Charlie?
Charlie: there you are! I missed you
Michael: who’s the birthday boy?!
Michael brings a cake with freddys face on it and it had 9 candles. One candle for each year Gabriel lived before he died. Gabriel starts crying and tearing up.
Gabriel: thanks guys.
Charlie: it’s fine, just enjoy your cake
Michael: make a wish, birthday boy
Gabriel smiles, thinks. Then blows the candles. Black smoke fill the air and block the vision of Charlie and Michael. They blink then to see the freddy animatronic looking down at his cake with a birthday hat on his head with the happiest smile a child could ever have.