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Fan Fiction Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (BBB OC Story) (Completed Until Further Notice) - Printable Version

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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Ryuga's Son - Dec. 12, 2020

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A MFB FAN!!!!!!!!!


I feel so sad...............

6Jupiter5 I feel so sad for u. I am sorry for your loss......its something that cannot be healed.............Hope u and ur family have a good life, and u live in harmony

Pichaku Sensei, hope u will be happy in the journeys ahead waiting for u


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 13, 2020

Will try to get a preview out tomorrow


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - SacredXcalibur - Dec. 13, 2020

Goodbye Pikachu Sensei... You were a Legend. : '(


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 14, 2020

Apologies for no preview yesterday, wasn't feeling all that well. New Chapter will be finished tomorrow.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Eclipse Force - Dec. 14, 2020

(Dec. 14, 2020  4:14 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Apologies for no preview yesterday, wasn't feeling all that well. New Chapter will be finished tomorrow.

Don't push yourself, take as many breaks as you want too.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 15, 2020

Chapter 10



RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 16, 2020

Next chapter is gonna be a bit of a filler but im still gonna try and make it awesome.

Next chapter is called Burning Bright! Growing Flare!

We're seeing a tag team battle in this chapter.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - PeppzieCola - Dec. 16, 2020

(Dec. 16, 2020  5:09 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Next chapter is gonna be a bit of a filler but im still gonna try and make it awesome.

Next chapter is called Burning Bright! Growing Flare!

We're seeing a tag team battle in this chapter.

Great Chapter Delta, I love that you put "In Memory of Pikachu Sensei" Unhappy


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 20, 2020

I'll have the latest chapter here tomorrow.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Darkus/Flasher - Dec. 29, 2020

Is this Fan-Fiction on Hiatus?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 29, 2020

(Dec. 29, 2020  12:59 AM)Darkus/Flasher Wrote: Is this Fan-Fiction on Hiatus?

For now. Im still recovering from Christmas and i want to start Infinity Warriors before I release another Chapter of this story.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 11, 2021

End Lucifer En 2D Description (this is replacing LcA as Lanes evo)

Ring: End - a thicker Variant with burst stoppers akin to World

Chip: Lucifer2 - pretty much irl Lucifer2 (so unoriginal i know)

Chassis: 1D

Disk: Hurricane

Driver: Endless' - pretty much CrazyAries tip on his Golden Aurora

Special Moves: End Wall, End Press, End Disaster


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Jan. 11, 2021

(Jan. 11, 2021  3:15 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: End Lucifer En 2D Description (this is replacing LcA as Lanes evo)

Ring: End - a thicker Variant with burst stoppers akin to World

Chip: Lucifer2 - pretty irl Lucifer2 (so unoriginal i know)

Chassis: 2D - b a r r i e r

Driver: Enigma - imagine a free spin Metal WD but as a burst driver.

Finally, we got the barrier. However, Enigma irl would have to be average height to be good as WD works well on tracks like 130 or 125.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Master_chanter0 - Jan. 11, 2021

(Jan. 11, 2021  3:15 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: End Lucifer En 2D Description (this is replacing LcA as Lanes evo)

Ring: End - a thicker Variant with burst stoppers akin to World

Chip: Lucifer2 - pretty irl Lucifer2 (so unoriginal i know)

Chassis: 2D - b a r r i e r

Driver: Enigma - imagine a free spin Metal WD but as a burst driver.

So the tip is basically EWD metal?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 11, 2021

(Jan. 11, 2021  5:14 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Jan. 11, 2021  3:15 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: End Lucifer En 2D Description (this is replacing LcA as Lanes evo)

Ring: End - a thicker Variant with burst stoppers akin to World

Chip: Lucifer2 - pretty irl Lucifer2 (so unoriginal i know)

Chassis: 2D - b a r r i e r

Driver: Enigma - imagine a free spin Metal WD but as a burst driver.

So the tip is basically EWD metal?

yes.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 16, 2021

If you want to read C11 go to Wattpad to read it. Im not posting fillers/unimportant chapters to WBO.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 17, 2021

Easy access to Chapter 11
https://www.wattpad.com/996188240-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 19, 2021

Chapter 12: The Fiery Majestic Crimson Flames! World Spriggan!



RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Jan. 19, 2021

What happened in episode 39?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 19, 2021

(Jan. 19, 2021  4:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: What happened in episode 39?

What?


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Jan. 19, 2021

(Jan. 19, 2021  5:00 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Jan. 19, 2021  4:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: What happened in episode 39?

What?

I know it’s a little bit too late, but I can’t remember what happened in that episode and I couldn’t find it. To remind you it was Aiga and Drum vs Athena and Valt.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 19, 2021

(Jan. 19, 2021  5:07 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Jan. 19, 2021  5:00 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: What?

I know it’s a little bit too late, but I can’t remember what happened in that episode and I couldn’t find it. To remind you it was Aiga and Drum vs Athena and Valt.

I know.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 19, 2021

Chapter 13 Teaser



RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Jan. 19, 2021

(Jan. 19, 2021  11:30 PM) Wrote: Chapter 13 Teaser

Personally I think she’s going to fail, but we’ll see.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 20, 2021

(Jan. 19, 2021  11:39 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [quote pid='1719225' dateline='1611095412']
Chapter 13 Teaser

Personally I think she’s going to fail, but we’ll see.
[/quote]

She's prolly gonna end up like Ranjiro when he attempted to fight Lean.