(Nov. 14, 2020  9:45 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Posted this on Wattpad so ima post it here as well

Sorry the new chapter of Story Of Lanes Sister: Athena is taking so long. Recently ive been really stressed and had been severely depressed for the past couple days and that has destroyed my motivation to write anything. I kept it all to myself because I didn't want anyone to worry and bombard me with questions.

Im sorry for no story updates but just know I'm trying my best in my current mental state.

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:07 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 6: Sisco vs Lane! Summary

The final battle against Lane has begun! Sisco hammers at the barrier but Lane counters with the same tactic that ended Ranjiro. With Lanes Flare growing throughout the battle, can Satan endure Lucifers attack?

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:11 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:07 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 6: Sisco vs Lane! Summary

The final battle against Lane has begun! Sisco hammers at the barrier but Lane counters with the same tactic that ended Ranjiro. With Lanes Flare growing throughout the battle, can Satan endure Lucifers attack?

Sisco the devil yes he can

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

Probably not.

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:53 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Probably not.

Oof.


If you don't mind, care to explain why?

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:38 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 7, 8 and 9 Summaries

Chapter 7: Demon Flare! Lane Valhalla!

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Athena challenges Lane to a heated showdown. with both of their Flares shining, the abandoned factory rocks with bright explosions!

Chapter 8: Warrior! Brave Valkyrie!

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to train to beat Lane, Athena trains with Valt Aoi who had seemingly gotten interested in her "New Power"...

Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Force!

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with Legend League qualifiers underway, the first matchup is Lane Vs Ranjiro.

NOTE: i will not make Ragnaruk break.

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:41 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: When they all going to die by an asteriod?

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:41 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: When they all going to die by an asteriod?

not gonna happen sorry.

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

i dont know why this made me laugh as much as it did.

honestly, this story is an AU (Alternate Universe) so Ragnaruk breaking never actually happened.

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

i dont know why this made me laugh as much as it did.

honestly, this story is an AU (Alternate Universe) so Ragnaruk breaking never actually happened.

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:17 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: i havent decided but there might be a flashback some point in the series on how I thought Lane got First Uranus along with some possible childhood memories.

(this is mostly head-canon stuff and not sure if i'll go through with it.)

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:17 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: i havent decided but there might be a flashback some point in the series on how I thought Lane got First Uranus along with some possible childhood memories.

(this is mostly head-canon stuff and not sure if i'll go through with it.)

I think Lane created First Uranus cause he wanted to defeat the legends

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:26 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I think Lane created First Uranus cause he wanted to defeat the legends

probably but im probably gonna try and come up with a more logical explanation.

(Nov. 16, 2020  8:25 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: a little bit of a minor detail but Athena did actually have a generic bey combo before creating Adeona (she had 2)

one was Heaven Ashura 1' Eternal Zan and the other is Ace Valkyrie 00Reach Trans Retsu

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

(Nov. 17, 2020  1:48 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

HELL YEAH!
THIS IS A GREAT FANFIC!

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(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

Oh well, circle of life!