RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 3:40 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: (Apr. 30, 2020 3:37 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Is this a character suggestion?
My own character but ye, also for the new Amaterios
Amaterios: Six small teeth
Fiery: Basically a right spin tact that does not depend on the layer weights, instead containing five medium sized blades with metal on them that expand during battle but can retract from contact.
Razor: Razor shaped disk with 45 degre blades
Anchor' But, there isn't a GT ametarios.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - Nitrogenic - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 3:45 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: (Apr. 30, 2020 3:40 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: My own character but ye, also for the new Amaterios
Amaterios: Six small teeth
Fiery: Basically a right spin tact that does not depend on the layer weights, instead containing five medium sized blades with metal on them that expand during battle but can retract from contact.
Razor: Razor shaped disk with 45 degre blades
Anchor' But, there isn't a GT ametarios For the story yes, I invented it.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 3:46 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: (Apr. 30, 2020 3:45 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: But, there isn't a GT ametarios For the story yes, I invented it.
There isn't a GT ametarios in the story though.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - Nitrogenic - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 4:02 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: (Apr. 30, 2020 3:46 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: For the story yes, I invented it.
There isn't a GT ametarios in the story though.
Fine just add teh character I can ivnent the moves though
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 4:12 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: (Apr. 30, 2020 4:02 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: There isn't a GT ametarios in the story though.
Fine just add teh character I can ivnent the moves though
what bey will the character have tho?
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - Nitrogenic - Apr. 30, 2020
Stock combo Amaterios or Shadow Amaterios you decide
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - Apr. 30, 2020
Next chapter will be written by me. Release date is currently being decided.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - Suoh sadboii - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 2:35 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Chapter 4 is out! CheetoBlader wrote this one!
“Ah, yes. Very good my students,” Count Night said.
Forrest and Roan ran over to where their Beyblades had been launched. Both Beys were scratched up and slightly damaged.
“We can’t battle with our Beys in this condition, Forrest. We have to forfeit,” Roan said.
Forrest sighed. “I guess you’re right. Count Night, we forfeit this match.”
Count Night chuckled. “You can’t quit. My apprentices are still hungry.”
A bunch of the guards came out and surrounded the Bladers.
“You can’t beat us,” Count Night said. “So why don’t you join us? We can make you stronger, almost as strong as them,” Count Night said, pointing at the Amaterios Bladers.
“You’ve kept me here for too long. I’m not joining you, and I never will,” Roan declared.
“How about this? If you win, you can go. If my pupils win, you join us. Forever.”
“Deal.”
Forrest gulped. “Roan, what the heck?” He hissed.
“Don’t worry, I have a plan.”
“3!…2!…1!…Go Shoot!” Count Night and the guards shouted.
Revenge flew out of the stadium very quickly towards some of the guards. The guards fell over each other trying to avoid getting hit.
Forrest took that as a chance to run and so did Roan. ‘Had he planned for that to happen all along?’ Forrest wondered.
“Well don’t just sit there, go get them!” Count Night declared.
Roan and Forrest were sprinting ahead at full speed looking for places to hide while a small group of the guards were behind them, trying to catch-up.
Forrest noticed a train station and headed towards it. Roan followed.
The duo entered the station and decided to rest on a bench nearby. Suddenly, the door burst open and a dozen guards entered the station.
Roan grabbed Forrest and pulled him over to the ticket booth. “Hi, can we get two of the cheapest tickets you have? We’re filming a YouTube video and we want it to be a surprise,” Roan told the cashier.
“Do you have the money to purchase two tickets?” The tired cashier asked.
Roan was dumbstruck, so Forrest chimed in. “Yes. Our staff over there will pay for it,” Forrest said, hinting at the angry guards.
“Okay, here are your tickets. Enjoy your ride.”
Roan and Forrest walked off to the entrance for their train ride. “Nice save, Forrest. We would’ve been toast.”
“Thanks,” Forrest replied, heavily breathing.
“Well, let’s get on the train. I’m not staying here for one more second,” Roan said, walking towards the entrance of the train.
Forrest grabbed Roan by the shoulder. “You mean, just leave? We don’t even know where we’re going!”
“We’ll be safe wherever we end up, and we could meet some Bladers to train against! Plus, I don’t care where we end up. I can finally have an amazing bond with Revenge! And you can be strong with Fenrir!” Roan explained. “So, am I going with or without you?”
Forrest thought about all of his options before realizing he didn’t really have one. If he stayed, he’d be found and forced to join Count Night, but if he went, he could have a great life.
Forrest smiled at Roan. “I’m coming with you.”
Roan returned the smile. “Great to have you on board. Now, let’s go be a part of a journey bigger than ourselves.”
Both of them entered the train excited for the path that lay ahead of them.
This was great!
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - Apr. 30, 2020
Next chapter will be released on Wed, May 6th 2020 and will be written by me.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - SoulBurner - Apr. 30, 2020
awesome! cant wait for pt2!
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 10:38 PM)SoulBurner Wrote: awesome! cant wait for pt2!
You mean chapter 5? Anyway, thanks for reading it!
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - CheetoBlader - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 10:38 PM)SoulBurner Wrote: awesome! cant wait for pt2!
Part two? This story isn’t over yet, and we have four chapters so far.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - SoulBurner - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 10:41 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: (Apr. 30, 2020 10:38 PM)SoulBurner Wrote: awesome! cant wait for pt2!
You mean chapter 5? Anyway, thanks for reading it!
yeah yeah my bad 😅
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - Apr. 30, 2020
(Apr. 30, 2020 10:42 PM)SoulBurner Wrote: (Apr. 30, 2020 10:41 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: You mean chapter 5? Anyway, thanks for reading it!
yeah yeah my bad 😅 It’s fine
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - May. 01, 2020
If anyone wants to suggest a name for the owner of Shadow ametarios, then please pm me.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - Nitrogenic - May. 01, 2020
(May. 01, 2020 3:05 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: If anyone wants to suggest a name for the owner of Shadow ametarios, then please pm me.
Atrius Sulfur
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - May. 01, 2020
(May. 01, 2020 3:16 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: (May. 01, 2020 3:05 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: If anyone wants to suggest a name for the owner of Shadow ametarios, then please pm me.
Atrius Sulfur
I said to pm me.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - May. 06, 2020
Chapter 5 is going to be released soon
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - CheetoBlader - May. 06, 2020
Chapter 5 will be posted very shortly.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - May. 06, 2020
Chapter 5 is out!
Forrest looked around the train, looking for places to sit. ‘Finally, I can relax,' He thought.
They soon found two seats next to a guy wearing a dark red zip-up hoodie. ‘Oh no. Is that guy one of the Amatarios bladers? No that can’t be right. How would he get on? He seems pretty tough either way.’
But, his thoughts were interrupted as soon as the train started moving.
“Hey Forrest, you wanna battle?” Roan asked, gesturing towards the stadium on the train.
“Sure, we need a judge though,” Forrest said, while looking around for a judge.
“I can do it,” a voice said.
It was the same guy that they sat next to. It was the person in the dark red hoodie. ‘Is he serious?’ Forrest gulped at the thought of the guy being one of the Amatarios bladers.
“Okay, ready, set! Three, two, one. Go, shoot!” All three of them said simultaneously.
‘I have an idea! Why don’t I use Vanargand’s Fang right out of the gate!’ Forrest wondered. Fenrir started to glow the dark blue color.
“Let's go! Fenrir! Vanargand’s Fang!” He called out, as Fenrir headed towards Revenge.
“What? Already?” Roan yelled, surprised.
“1 point to Fang Fenrir, by knockout. The score is now 1 to 0,” the person in the red hoodie said.
“Ready, set! Three, two, one! Go, shoot!” All three of them yelled again.
“Amatarios! Destroy them!” Someone yelled. “Blinding strike!”
Forrest turned around in shock and saw the amatarios blader that wore the red and gold cloak. Amatarios was shining so bright, Forrest couldn’t see anything. Soon, the light cleared and there was a huge wind that blew Fenrir and Revenge out of the stadium. Forrest scrambled to pick up Fenrir. As he did, he looked up to see the person in the red hoodie with a launcher. His eyes were glowing red, and he jumped out of the train to follow his bey.
“Forrest let's get out of here!” Roan quickly said, as he pushed a button that read Emergency stop (for emergencies only).
Forrest looked out the window to see the hooded guy fighting the Amaterios blader.
“Forrest! Let’s go and help this person!” Roan exclaimed. “He’s helping us!”
The two of them quickly dashed out of the train, but there already was a crowd around the battle. Forrest looked back and saw the other amatarios blader follow them. They quickly made their way through the crowd and finally got a good view of the battle.
“Amatarios! Attack him!” The cloaked blader yelled. “Anchor flare!”
Amatarios moved backwards, allowing the red parts of its driver to hit the ground. It then shot towards the unknown bey.
“Yes! Amatarios! Destroy him!”
There was a huge explosion where the two beys made contact. The unknown beyblade flew into the air. But, the person in the red hoodie was smiling. ‘What? It switched from a tip similar to fenrir’s, to a stamina like tip,’ Forrest observed.
“Since there aren't any slopes, and the battle is fought on a flat surfaced ground. A sharp tip will have more control,” Roan informed.
“It doesn’t matter! Attack him, Amatarios!”
This time, Shining Amatarios was the one that was sent flying.
“Let’s finish this! Amatarios! Blinding Ember!”
Shining Amatarios began to emit a gold and red aura. Then, its avatar appeared. It was a samurai dressed in gold and red armor. It was heading straight towards the unknown bey.
“Defeat him! Kagutsuchi!” The unnamed blader yelled.
The beyblade known as Kagutsuchi now had a dark red aura surrounding it, and the blader’s eyes were once again glowing red. A warrior made of fire came shooting out of Kagutsuchi. ‘That must be its avatar,’ Forrest guessed.
The two beys made contact and dark red fire flew everywhere. Forrest felt his eyes burn, despite closing them. He then felt an arm on his shoulder, leading him to a cleared area.
“Amatarios! Where did you go?” He heard someone yell.
“Amatarios just burst!” He heard another person yell.
“Brother! Are you okay?” The other amatarios blader yelled
When he opened his eyes again, he was sitting next to Roan and the red hooded guy.
“Hey, I’m Akuma Yamikasai, and I think that you guys could use some help,” Akuma said.
“Yeah, thanks for helping us,” Roan replied.
“Thanks,” Forrest said. He was speechless.
“Hey, I have an idea. Why don’t you two come with me and train with my friends and I? We have a place to stay.”
”That sounds great! We’ll come,” Roan said.
Forrest didn’t say anything because he agreed with it.
The two of them followed Akuma to his place.
*one hour later*
The two Amaterios bladers went back to Count Night.
”Well? How’d it go?” Count Night asked.
”One of their friends burst us…” One of the Amaterios bladers said.
”Well then. You’re gonna need more training before you go out again.”
”Yes, master,” the two bladers said in harmony.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - Nitrogenic - May. 06, 2020
Where is my dude, great plot though.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - May. 06, 2020
Thanks for the character suggestion (Akuma) by Suoh sadboii .
Nitrogenic, your dude is just a name for the amatarios blader.
Next chapter will be released on Thursday 5/14/2020 and probably be written by CheetoBlader.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - Suoh sadboii - May. 07, 2020
(May. 06, 2020 5:50 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Thanks for the character suggestion (Akuma) by Suoh sadboii .
Nitrogenic, your dude is just a name for the amatarios blader.
Next chapter will be released on Thursday 5/14/2020 and probably be written by CheetoBlader
Great chapter!
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - GreenK9148 - May. 14, 2020
There will be a delay for the release of chapter 6. CheetoBlader is busy with school and has his hands full. Therefore I will write chapter 6 and the new release date is yet to be confirmed.
RE: Call of the Beyblade. - Jdog757 - May. 14, 2020
Nice job I just read them all
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