(Jul. 01, 2019  11:28 PM)PersonPerson Wrote:

Chapter One: Round Three Hundred Ninety Six                                                                                                                                                                                                                   

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"Let it.....RIP!" yelled both a red haired teenager and a bright yellow haired, significantly shorter kid. Both of their beyblades fell into the stadium they were training with, which was sort of damaged due to many, many hours of practicing. Exactly ten seconds later, the yellow haired-kid's beyblade was launched out of the stadium, bursting midair. "Aw man..." said the yellow haired-kid, picking up the pieces of his beyblade. "Hey, look at the bright side, Gabriel," the red-haired teenager said, picking up his beyblade from out of the stadium. "At least you lasted one more second than last time". "Not helping, Daniel..." Gabriel said, staring at his beyblade. "If I keep making progress this slow, I'll never be able to beat you!" "Well, what's worse? Making very little progress, or making no progress at all?" asked Daniel, putting his beyblade back on his launcher. Gabriel didn't say anything. "That's what I thought. Now, ready for round three hundred ninety six? Or are you just too weak to keep going?" asked Daniel, grinning. Gabriel quickly put his beyblade onto his launcher and grinned, a yellow and white aura radiating from him. "Prepare to lose!"   

         

(Jul. 02, 2019  1:04 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:

(Jul. 01, 2019  11:28 PM)PersonPerson Wrote:

Chapter One: Round Three Hundred Ninety Six                                                                                                                                                                                                                   

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"Let it.....RIP!" yelled both a red haired teenager and a bright yellow haired, significantly shorter kid. Both of their beyblades fell into the stadium they were training with, which was sort of damaged due to many, many hours of practicing. Exactly ten seconds later, the yellow haired-kid's beyblade was launched out of the stadium, bursting midair. "Aw man..." said the yellow haired-kid, picking up the pieces of his beyblade. "Hey, look at the bright side, Gabriel," the red-haired teenager said, picking up his beyblade from out of the stadium. "At least you lasted one more second than last time". "Not helping, Daniel..." Gabriel said, staring at his beyblade. "If I keep making progress this slow, I'll never be able to beat you!" "Well, what's worse? Making very little progress, or making no progress at all?" asked Daniel, putting his beyblade back on his launcher. Gabriel didn't say anything. "That's what I thought. Now, ready for round three hundred ninety six? Or are you just too weak to keep going?" asked Daniel, grinning. Gabriel quickly put his beyblade onto his launcher and grinned, a yellow and white aura radiating from him. "Prepare to lose!"   

         

That’s a great beginning!

(Jul. 03, 2019  3:28 AM)PersonPerson Wrote:

Chapter Three: The Air-Bender, Aether Quasar!                                                                                                                                                                                               

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 Aeo stared at the two brothers for a while before finally saying, "I would like to go against both of you at the same time." 

Daniel tilted his head. "Are you sure? Me and Gabriel are pretty strong when we're working together."
 "I am positive. Going against both of you will make this quick."
 "Well, if you say so," Daniel said. He looked over at Gabriel. "Gabe, are you fine with that?"
  Gabriel shrugged, putting Gavreel onto his launcher. "I guess. And stop calling me Gabe."
"Alright....Gabe," Daniel said, snickering, as Gabriel sighed.
                          
The three bladers held out their launchers and prepared for battle. "Three..." They are said in unison.
"Two..."
"One..."
"Let it...RIP!" They all yelled, their beyblades falling into the stadium.
   Aether and Gavreel both quickly went for the center, while Daemon circled around them. Aether and Gavreel clashed together.
"Now!" Gabriel yelled, "Shimmering Rebound!" 
A bright yellow shield formed around Gavreel, pushing Aether back.
         
 "Aether," Aeo exclaimed, "Twister Parry!"
Aether swiftly recovered from the attack and leaned onto the metal wings on it's driver, drifting behind Gavreel and counter attacking.
           
Daniel chuckled. "Is that all you got? Daemon, Flaming Bullet!"
Daemon crashed into one of the walls of the stadium, rebounding into another and another, gaining more and more speed, before crashing into Aether with incredible force, knocking it out of the stadium.
 
Aeo's eyes widened, but he said nothing, picking Aether up from off the floor. "What?" Daniel said, grinning, "Surprised you lost?"                                                                     
Gabriel glared at Daniel. "It's only the first round, Daniel. He could still beat us."
"Not blading like that he could."
 "You have to stop being so cocky."
"Yeah, yeah."
                       
The two brothers picked up their beyblades and put them on their launchers, as Aeo did the same. "Three..."
"Two..."
"One..."
"Let it...RIP!" they all yelled for a second time. However, there was something different about Aether.
Instead of going for the center, Aether was rushing after Daemon.

          
Both of the brothers had confused looks on their faces. "Huh?"
Aeo chuckled. "You two are denser than I thought. My Aether is a Balance type."
"But you have a rubber sharp tip," Gabriel said, "It doesn't change modes!"
"He didn't change modes, he launched at an angle," Daniel said.
"Huh?"
"The metal wings on his tip are pushing air down, so if he launches at an angle, the bey speeds up. But that won't stop us! Daemon, Flare Rush!"
Daemon started to glow red and speed up dramatically, striking Aether ruthlessly.
 
                       
Aeo sighed. "Let's get this over with. Aether, Accelerating Cyclone Rush!"
Aether's wings began to push air down, along with the Turbine driver's wings, making Aether also speed up, beginning to strike Gavreel.                          
"Not so fast! Gavreel, Surround Drift!" Gabriel yelled, as Gavreel began to circle around the center of the stadium surprisingly fast.
          
"I am honestly sorry for this. Aether, Rising Blow!" Aeo yelled.
Aether suddenly started to speed up, pushing more air down, creating more lift, until...
 Aether started to rise into the air.
            
Both Gabriel and Daniel were shocked, while Aeo chuckled. "If you two think that was impressive, you haven't seen anything yet-"
Daemon sent itself into a wall, launching into the air, aiming at Aether.
                 
Aeo's eyes widened. "W-wait, what?" Daniel chuckled. "If you think that was impressive, you ain't seen nothing yet," he said, sort of mocking Aeo. "Now, Cataclysm Meteor!"
          
 Daemon's avatar appeared, a red and black dragon with wings made of pure dark energy, and shot straight through Aether, bursting it and sending the layer flying into a podium.
Daniel laughed and looked over at Gabriel. "Let's go home, Gabe. I'm pretty hungry after all that winning."
Gabriel sighed, and both of the brothers picked up their beys and began to walk home, leaving Aeo there at the stadium, a broken Aether's pieces scattered all over the place.

(Jul. 03, 2019  3:43 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:

(Jul. 03, 2019  3:28 AM)PersonPerson Wrote:

Chapter Three: The Air-Bender, Aether Quasar!                                                                                                                                                                                               

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 Aeo stared at the two brothers for a while before finally saying, "I would like to go against both of you at the same time." 

Daniel tilted his head. "Are you sure? Me and Gabriel are pretty strong when we're working together."
 "I am positive. Going against both of you will make this quick."
 "Well, if you say so," Daniel said. He looked over at Gabriel. "Gabe, are you fine with that?"
  Gabriel shrugged, putting Gavreel onto his launcher. "I guess. And stop calling me Gabe."
"Alright....Gabe," Daniel said, snickering, as Gabriel sighed.
                          
The three bladers held out their launchers and prepared for battle. "Three..." They are said in unison.
"Two..."
"One..."
"Let it...RIP!" They all yelled, their beyblades falling into the stadium.
   Aether and Gavreel both quickly went for the center, while Daemon circled around them. Aether and Gavreel clashed together.
"Now!" Gabriel yelled, "Shimmering Rebound!" 
A bright yellow shield formed around Gavreel, pushing Aether back.
         
 "Aether," Aeo exclaimed, "Twister Parry!"
Aether swiftly recovered from the attack and leaned onto the metal wings on it's driver, drifting behind Gavreel and counter attacking.
           
Daniel chuckled. "Is that all you got? Daemon, Flaming Bullet!"
Daemon crashed into one of the walls of the stadium, rebounding into another and another, gaining more and more speed, before crashing into Aether with incredible force, knocking it out of the stadium.
 
Aeo's eyes widened, but he said nothing, picking Aether up from off the floor. "What?" Daniel said, grinning, "Surprised you lost?"                                                                     
Gabriel glared at Daniel. "It's only the first round, Daniel. He could still beat us."
"Not blading like that he could."
 "You have to stop being so cocky."
"Yeah, yeah."
                       
The two brothers picked up their beyblades and put them on their launchers, as Aeo did the same. "Three..."
"Two..."
"One..."
"Let it...RIP!" they all yelled for a second time. However, there was something different about Aether.
Instead of going for the center, Aether was rushing after Daemon.

          
Both of the brothers had confused looks on their faces. "Huh?"
Aeo chuckled. "You two are denser than I thought. My Aether is a Balance type."
"But you have a rubber sharp tip," Gabriel said, "It doesn't change modes!"
"He didn't change modes, he launched at an angle," Daniel said.
"Huh?"
"The metal wings on his tip are pushing air down, so if he launches at an angle, the bey speeds up. But that won't stop us! Daemon, Flare Rush!"
Daemon started to glow red and speed up dramatically, striking Aether ruthlessly.
 
                       
Aeo sighed. "Let's get this over with. Aether, Accelerating Cyclone Rush!"
Aether's wings began to push air down, along with the Turbine driver's wings, making Aether also speed up, beginning to strike Gavreel.                          
"Not so fast! Gavreel, Surround Drift!" Gabriel yelled, as Gavreel began to circle around the center of the stadium surprisingly fast.
          
"I am honestly sorry for this. Aether, Rising Blow!" Aeo yelled.
Aether suddenly started to speed up, pushing more air down, creating more lift, until...
 Aether started to rise into the air.
            
Both Gabriel and Daniel were shocked, while Aeo chuckled. "If you two think that was impressive, you haven't seen anything yet-"
Daemon sent itself into a wall, launching into the air, aiming at Aether.
                 
Aeo's eyes widened. "W-wait, what?" Daniel chuckled. "If you think that was impressive, you ain't seen nothing yet," he said, sort of mocking Aeo. "Now, Cataclysm Meteor!"
          
 Daemon's avatar appeared, a red and black dragon with wings made of pure dark energy, and shot straight through Aether, bursting it and sending the layer flying into a podium.
Daniel laughed and looked over at Gabriel. "Let's go home, Gabe. I'm pretty hungry after all that winning."
Gabriel sighed, and both of the brothers picked up their beys and began to walk home, leaving Aeo there at the stadium, a broken Aether's pieces scattered all over the place.

Something tells me that Aeo won’t be happy about this later. . Nice chapter.