Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - BounduAtakku - Mar. 26, 2019
Chapter 0/Prologue:
20 Years after Gachi, all the characters we loved are now adults, Valt, a now 36 year old father of a beyblade-enthusiast daughter, Varya Aoi ,he's is still Blading! Aiga is also a father, of Anki Akaba, the 11 year old owner of Rebirth Achilles! Aiga also got a new Achilles, Level Achilles! Varya doesn't have a Beyblade yet, since Valt considers her unready, while Valt is the owner Thunder Valkyrie.
With the main protagonists introduced, we can begin!
Saiko wins with another burst finish! That's 4-0! Saiko De La Hoya wins, and advances to the semifinals! Announced the referee.
"Hmph" says Saiko, as he begins to walk away from the stadium.
At the end of the tunnel waiting for him was Free, his father.
"Impressive" said Free.
"It's nothing, really, wish i could battle stronger opponents" replied his son.
"Just as i thought. How is Seprent holding up?"
Saiko's Beyblade, Phantom Serpent , is the beyblade that he made with the help of Aiga. He's currently the number one ranked Blader, Following his father's footsteps.
"Pretty good, who's my next opponent?"
"3!"
"2!"
"1!"
"Go Shoot!!"
Anki launched Rebirth Achilles 14 Galaxy (Better description will be given later, i'm new to story writting).
"Go Achilles, faster!" Yelled Anki.
While spinning in a flower pattern, Achilles hit the wall of the stadium, after it bounced off the wall, it started going straight, instead of towards the centre. It kept speeding up.
Anki was surprised. this never happened before.
Suddenly, Achilles started to glow, all while Anki was just staring.
After a minute of it glowing, it bursted into three peices.
The sound of the Burst shocked Anki, waking him up from his daydreaming.
That's it for this chapter, i konw its short but it's mainly just a prologue, to introduce the characters.
This is my first time making a story, you guys tell me what you think.
RE: Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - boigamer25 - Mar. 26, 2019
Nice. It's a little weird having all the characters as adults, let alone parents but it's really cool. Nice bey names too.
RE: Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - abidjkhan7 - Mar. 26, 2019
Nice I like bey names
RE: Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - Fusion core - Mar. 27, 2019
(Mar. 26, 2019 7:16 PM)BounduAtakku Wrote: Chapter 0/Prologue:
20 Years after Gachi, all the characters we loved are now adults, Valt, a now 36 year old father of a beyblade-enthusiast daughter, Varya Aoi ,he's is still Blading! Aiga is also a father, of Anki Akaba, the 11 year old owner of Rebirth Achilles! Aiga also got a new Achilles, Level Achilles! Varya doesn't have a Beyblade yet, since Valt considers her unready, while Valt is the owner Thunder Valkyrie.
With the main protagonists introduced, we can begin!
Saiko wins with another burst finish! That's 4-0! Saiko De La Hoya wins, and advances to the semifinals! Announced the referee.
"Hmph" says Saiko, as he begins to walk away from the stadium.
At the end of the tunnel waiting for him was Free, his father.
"Impressive" said Free.
"It's nothing, really, wish i could battle stronger opponents" replied his son.
"Just as i thought. How is Seprent holding up?"
Saiko's Beyblade, Phantom Serpent , is the beyblade that he made with the help of Aiga. He's currently the number one ranked Blader, Following his father's footsteps.
"Pretty good, who's my next opponent?"
"3!"
"2!"
"1!"
"Go Shoot!!"
Anki launched Rebirth Achilles 14 Galaxy (Better description will be given later, i'm new to story writting).
"Go Achilles, faster!" Yelled Anki.
While spinning in a flower pattern, Achilles hit the wall of the stadium, after it bounced off the wall, it started going straight, instead of towards the centre. It kept speeding up.
Anki was surprised. this never happened before.
Suddenly, Achilles started to glow, all while Anki was just staring.
After a minute of it glowing, it bursted into three peices.
The sound of the Burst shocked Anki, waking him up from his daydreaming.
That's it for this chapter, i konw its short but it's mainly just a prologue, to introduce the characters.
This is my first time making a story, you guys tell me what you think.
Surprising that valt managed to have babies after
THIS ..... !!!!!
[Image: ieffpj.png]
(Credit : @[Cat] )
RE: Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - BounduAtakku - Mar. 27, 2019
Chapter 1: Go!! Rebirth Shoot!!
"Dad! Dad!! Come here, quick!! Something amazing happened" Anki yelled.
"Hm? What is it son?" Replied Aiga
"It's Achilles! He started to glow when i launched him!"
"Huh?!"
"Come! I'll show you!"
They both ran to the stadium, Anki was preparing to launch, Aiga was observing.
"3!"
"2!"
"1!"
"Go Shoot!!"
Unlike last time, Achilles was very unbalanced, hiting the wall losing speed and spin.
"What?? It was different last time!!
In a blink of an eye, Achilles stopped spining.
Anki launched Again and again, but to no avail, he quickly gave up.
"Come on, get up, let's try a battle, maybe then it will work." Aiga said.
"Huh?? When did you get a Beyblade?!?"
"I've had it for a long time, look, This is Level Achilles."
Level Achilles, still a balance type, is more focusing on defence and stamina, rather than attacking. It's still rocking the 00 and Dm.
Rebirth Achille 14 Gl, also a balance type. The layer has a sword and shield in the middle of the layer. On the top and the bottom are dull slopes that serve as shields. On the sides there are metal contact poins in the shape of a knight's sword. 14 is a core disc with 14 points that give it outer weight. Galaxy that looks like Xtend, with mode and height changes. The mode changes consist of two little metal balls on the opposite sides, when the mode is changed the little balls move outward, giving it more stamina, this is called the Rebirth stamina mode. When the balls are closer to the inside, the tip changes to flat, this is called the Rebirth attack mode.
"It looks cool. Come on, let's have a battle"
"Sure."
"3!"
"2!"
"1!"
"Go Shoot!!"
rA spun in a flower pattern, not hitting the walls this time, completely ballanced. lA was spining along the outer rim of the stadium, slowly, in the shortest mode of the Dm driver.
"Go now!! Rebirth Shoot!!!" Yelled Anki
The Galaxy driver started scraping the floor, launching rA into lA, sending it into the air.
"Now, Achilles, Level Dive!!" said Aiga.
"Not so fast! Go, Achilles!!!!" Cried Anki.
Rebirth Achilles's bit beast appeared. It had more red on it that ChoA, with tiger stripes on it shoulders and shield.
"Now, go Achilles!! Rebirth Buster!!"
The beys hit in the center, with lA on top, rA was struggling to survive.
"Don't give up, Rebirth Achilles!" Anki's hair started to glow bright red with red horns emerging from the top of his head.
"Huh!?!?" Said Aiga, surprised.
Before Aiga got a chance to call for lA, the Beys split, sending them both into the air.
"What??" Both of them asked in unison.
Both bursted, but lA bursted first, with rA bursting a spilt second later.
Anki looked at his split apart bey, shocked. Aiga on the other hand wasn't surprised, since he knew who won.
"You did impressive, you won. Congrats on your first victory, Rebirth Achilles still has a long way to go."
"Thanks, dad" Anki said, as he was picking up his Beyblade parts, reassembling Achilles.
And with that, Anki's story begins, his long path ofbecoming the best is right before him.
RE: Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - boigamer25 - Mar. 27, 2019
(Mar. 27, 2019 10:58 AM)Fusion core Wrote: (Mar. 26, 2019 7:16 PM)BounduAtakku Wrote: Chapter 0/Prologue:
20 Years after Gachi, all the characters we loved are now adults, Valt, a now 36 year old father of a beyblade-enthusiast daughter, Varya Aoi ,he's is still Blading! Aiga is also a father, of Anki Akaba, the 11 year old owner of Rebirth Achilles! Aiga also got a new Achilles, Level Achilles! Varya doesn't have a Beyblade yet, since Valt considers her unready, while Valt is the owner Thunder Valkyrie.
With the main protagonists introduced, we can begin!
Saiko wins with another burst finish! That's 4-0! Saiko De La Hoya wins, and advances to the semifinals! Announced the referee.
"Hmph" says Saiko, as he begins to walk away from the stadium.
At the end of the tunnel waiting for him was Free, his father.
"Impressive" said Free.
"It's nothing, really, wish i could battle stronger opponents" replied his son.
"Just as i thought. How is Seprent holding up?"
Saiko's Beyblade, Phantom Serpent , is the beyblade that he made with the help of Aiga. He's currently the number one ranked Blader, Following his father's footsteps.
"Pretty good, who's my next opponent?"
"3!"
"2!"
"1!"
"Go Shoot!!"
Anki launched Rebirth Achilles 14 Galaxy (Better description will be given later, i'm new to story writting).
"Go Achilles, faster!" Yelled Anki.
While spinning in a flower pattern, Achilles hit the wall of the stadium, after it bounced off the wall, it started going straight, instead of towards the centre. It kept speeding up.
Anki was surprised. this never happened before.
Suddenly, Achilles started to glow, all while Anki was just staring.
After a minute of it glowing, it bursted into three peices.
The sound of the Burst shocked Anki, waking him up from his daydreaming.
That's it for this chapter, i konw its short but it's mainly just a prologue, to introduce the characters.
This is my first time making a story, you guys tell me what you think.
Surprising that valt managed to have babies after
THIS ..... !!!!!
[Image: ieffpj.png]
(Credit : @[Cat] )
When did that happen!?
RE: Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - lilphilyb - Mar. 27, 2019
In the manga
RE: Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - Fusion core - Mar. 28, 2019
(Mar. 27, 2019 10:04 PM)boigamer25 Wrote: (Mar. 27, 2019 10:58 AM)Fusion core Wrote: Surprising that valt managed to have babies after
THIS ..... !!!!!
[Image: ieffpj.png]
(Credit : @[Cat] )
When did that happen!? During the valt vs diago battle in the manga .
RE: Beyblade Burst Ultra-Z - boigamer25 - Mar. 28, 2019
(Mar. 28, 2019 5:37 AM)Fusion core Wrote: (Mar. 27, 2019 10:04 PM)boigamer25 Wrote: When did that happen!? During the valt vs diago battle in the manga .
Oof
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