RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Zyndicater - May. 06, 2019
This is all fake let me know when you guys figure out what beyblade is really about
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 06, 2019
this is a fan series, take your trash somewhere else, please. 
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - May. 06, 2019
(May. 06, 2019 8:44 PM)Zyndicater Wrote: This is all fake let me know when you guys figure out what beyblade is really about
I may just be misunderstanding your post, but this thread is a fan story.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Zyndicater - May. 06, 2019
(May. 06, 2019 8:57 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: (May. 06, 2019 8:44 PM)Zyndicater Wrote: This is all fake let me know when you guys figure out what beyblade is really about
I may just be misunderstanding your post, but this thread is a fan story.
oh ok sorry about that
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - May. 06, 2019
(May. 06, 2019 8:33 PM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: dont really wanna double post (a dumb rule IMO)
but i finished him  Sweet! I’ll be adding Cobalt around after the tournament
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 06, 2019
Thanks! oh shoot i didnt add any special moves, ill add them later lol
Edit: Ive added my special moves :)
Edit 2: when will the next part come out? im just wondering.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - May. 09, 2019
(May. 06, 2019 9:34 PM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: Edit 2: when will the next part come out? im just wondering.
Aiming for either today or tomorrow. Just been planning out new chapters
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 15, 2019
(May. 09, 2019 5:46 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: (May. 06, 2019 9:34 PM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: Edit 2: when will the next part come out? im just wondering.
Aiming for either today or tomorrow. Just been planning out new chapters
Its been almost a week dude, where are the next chapters?
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - May. 15, 2019
(May. 15, 2019 2:31 AM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: (May. 09, 2019 5:46 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Aiming for either today or tomorrow. Just been planning out new chapters
Its been almost a week dude, where are the next chapters?
Writers have a life. Dont bug them, since they might be busy or something unexpected happened and their schedules are whacked up. They arent writing machines
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 15, 2019
(May. 15, 2019 2:38 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: (May. 15, 2019 2:31 AM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: Its been almost a week dude, where are the next chapters?
Writers have a life. Dont bug them, since they might be busy or something unexpected happened and their schedules are whacked up. They arent writing machines
jesus i was just wondering man
i was exited for the next chapter thats all
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - May. 15, 2019
Chapter 19 - Go! Ultra Ripper!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Charles is afraid of losing at first, and even after giving up two points to Nika, the battle is reaching its end!
The crowd appreciated Charles’ fixed mindset. But still, a part of him felt... spoilt, or unworthy of the Galaxy frame.
Despite being a piece of plastic, it shone majestically in his hand with power. He sighed, and turned to Paris.
“I’m sorry. I can’t- it’s not mine-“
Charles had envisioned the conversation to be more like this:
“Oh my god Charles! You’re such a loser!” Paris’ face burst with laughter.
“Weak!” Aiga blurted.
But instead, Paris was empathetic for Charles. He cheered him on,
“You can do it! I believe in you!”
“Wait! Are you sure-“
Before Charles could protest, Paris had already left the building as his battle with Aaron was about to begin.
He twisted Pegasus’ piece onto the Penta disc, which fit perfectly. A metal clunking, robotic noise emerged with a whinnying, horse-like sound.
“And I believe in you!”
A reddish, orange aura burst out of him excitedly, giving him a boost of confidence.
As Paris sank into the seat in the waiting room, he smiled at the sight of Charles being himself.
“I hope I get to battle the real Charles this time,” Nika said.
“Oh, you will,” Charles replied with a smirk. “And it’s not gonna be pretty.”
The referee called for the second battle. Nika was taken by surprise at Charles’ sudden change of confidence, but it gave her something to look forward to.
Charles had been working on a new launch technique for a while. And that was the first day he met Paris.
His launcher was hovering over the center of the stadium, like a defense type. If he could pull it off...
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
“And what a landing!” Hanami spoke into his microphone. Ultra Centurion initially scraped the stadium floor, contributing to its loss of stamina.
As soon as Grand Nike zoomed, Centurion dodged its impending attack as it bounced off the stadium floor.
“What?” Nika was surprised.
She put two and two together and realized it was from the Galaxy frame. Grand Nike charged for another attack.
“Northern Cross Shoot!” She commanded.
“Fight back! Ultra Revival!” Charles yelled.
Both beys crashed into each other endlessly; each attack was with extreme force, until they had lost a click each.
Grand Nike quickly pulled away, and took the centre of the stadium. Ultra Centurion sent a series of attacks, but it was useless.
“Hope you’ve had your fun,” Nika looked at Charles and back at Nike, “Let’s go! Fusion Whirlwind!”
The Fuse driver switched, into a barrage mode. It looked menacing, that was for sure.
Repeatedly thrashing Ultra Centurion, it flew into the wall and shot into the air.
“I’ve been holding back all this time. It’s time to discover my true potential,” Charles said.
Centurion’s avatar appeared, with Pegasus flying overhead, as they roared in unison.
“Now! Aerial Attack!” Charles shouted.
Grand Nike lost another click, and the tables were turned as it shot into the wall. Soon after taking the hit, Nike shot back at full speed.
“What a recovery!” Hanami enjoyed the sight of bladers giving it their all. Charles had acted quickly on the situation.
“Recover from this! Ultra Ripper!” Charles’ voice echoed through the building, as Centurion took the center of the stadium and wobbled, defending itself but attacking at the same time.
Grand Nike tried to break through, and as much as Nika hated to admit it.. this was harder than she thought.
“Grand Rush!” Nika exclaimed, but the only thing Nike did was slightly push Centurion back.
A few seconds passed, as Nike was about to lose its stamina...
“Burst Strike!” Ultra Centurion blasted right through Grand Nike, bursting it.
“Two points to Ultra Centurion for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-2!” The referee announced.
Paris jumped out of his seat followed by a ‘Yes!’ attracting strange looks from other people.
“That was fun,” Nika admitted. “But you and me both know this is the end.”
“The end where I win,” Charles corrected.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
The two balance types slammed into each other, pressing their blades into their layers.
“Burst Strike!” Charles roared.
“Cancel it out! Northern Cross Shoot!”
Charles decided to give it his all early, in hopes to finish the battle quickly. Both beyblades rolled back.
“Now! Ultra Ripper!”
Ultra Centurion repeated what happened in the last battle. The tension was rising, as Grand Nike tried everything to break through...well, almost everything.
Nika’s pink hair lit like a flame.
“Northern Cross Shoot!”
Finally, Ultra Centurion’s barrier was broken by Nike’s furious attacks, sending it into the wall.
Charles had just used up all of his luck. What he tried in the last battle didn’t work in this one, so what went wrong? Thinking about it made him tired mentally rather than physically.
“Again! Northern Cross Shoot!” Nika shouted.
Grand Nike knocked Ultra Centurion out of its orbit, as it rushed for another attack.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles commanded. Instantly, Centurion regained its balance and became stable.
But it was too late.
“Fusion Whirlwind!”
This time, Grand Nike switched into its first mode of the two, Lower Mode, which gave it an opportunity to uppercut Centurion into the air, bursting it.
“Two points to Grand Nike. The score is now 4-2, making Nika Aoi the winner!”
Paris took a heavy hit, as if Nike had hit him instead.
Everyone did too. Charles remembered what Paris had said:
“Battling is fun when you win, but when you lose, you smile, ‘cuz you had fun anyway.”
He turned to Nika.
“Congratulations.”
“Thanks. You did great too,” Nika smiled.
Hanami tapped into his microphone. “Now it’s time for a long awaited battle, Paris vs Aaron! It’s about to start!”
Paris was quivering with anticipation. Seeing all his friends battle made him extremely eager.
“Wait! Paris!” A voice shouted from behind.
It was Charles, who had the Galaxy frame in his hand.
“You’re not upset?” Paris was shocked that he actually listened.
“Nope. It was fun, but now the pressure’s on you,” Charles joked.
Nodding, Paris reunited the frame with the rest of the frame.
“I think you’ll have to rephrase that,” Toko said, walking in with Taiki.
“Turns out we were qualified for the tournament,” Taiki added, “Oh, and good luck Paris.”
“Thanks. I’m gonna need it.”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - May. 15, 2019
(May. 15, 2019 9:01 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 19 - Go! Ultra Ripper!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Charles is afraid of losing at first, and even after giving up two points to Nika, the battle is reaching its end!
The crowd appreciated Charles’ fixed mindset. But still, a part of him felt... spoilt, or unworthy of the Galaxy frame.
Despite being a piece of plastic, it shone majestically in his hand with power. He sighed, and turned to Paris.
“I’m sorry. I can’t- it’s not mine-“
Charles had envisioned the conversation to be more like this:
“Oh my god Charles! You’re such a loser!” Paris’ face burst with laughter.
“Weak!” Aiga blurted.
But instead, Paris was empathetic for Charles. He cheered him on,
“You can do it! I believe in you!”
“Wait! Are you sure-“
Before Charles could protest, Paris had already left the building as his battle with Aaron was about to begin.
He twisted Pegasus’ piece onto the Penta disc, which fit perfectly. A metal clunking, robotic noise emerged with a whinnying, horse-like sound.
“And I believe in you!”
A reddish, orange aura burst out of him excitedly, giving him a boost of confidence.
As Paris sank into the seat in the waiting room, he smiled at the sight of Charles being himself.
“I hope I get to battle the real Charles this time,” Nika said.
“Oh, you will,” Charles replied with a smirk. “And it’s not gonna be pretty.”
The referee called for the second battle. Nika was taken by surprise at Charles’ sudden change of confidence, but it gave her something to look forward to.
Charles had been working on a new launch technique for a while. And that was the first day he met Paris.
His launcher was hovering over the center of the stadium, like a defense type. If he could pull it off...
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
“And what a landing!” Hanami spoke into his microphone. Ultra Centurion initially scraped the stadium floor, contributing to its loss of stamina.
As soon as Grand Nike zoomed, Centurion dodged its impending attack as it bounced off the stadium floor.
“What?” Nika was surprised.
She put two and two together and realized it was from the Galaxy frame. Grand Nike charged for another attack.
“Northern Cross Shoot!” She commanded.
“Fight back! Ultra Revival!” Charles yelled.
Both beys crashed into each other endlessly; each attack was with extreme force, until they had lost a click each.
Grand Nike quickly pulled away, and took the centre of the stadium. Ultra Centurion sent a series of attacks, but it was useless.
“Hope you’ve had your fun,” Nika looked at Charles and back at Nike, “Let’s go! Fusion Whirlwind!”
The Fuse driver switched, into a barrage mode. It looked menacing, that was for sure.
Repeatedly thrashing Ultra Centurion, it flew into the wall and shot into the air.
“I’ve been holding back all this time. It’s time to discover my true potential,” Charles said.
Centurion’s avatar appeared, with Pegasus flying overhead, as they roared in unison.
“Now! Aerial Attack!” Charles shouted.
Grand Nike lost another click, and the tables were turned as it shot into the wall. Soon after taking the hit, Nike shot back at full speed.
“What a recovery!” Hanami enjoyed the sight of bladers giving it their all. Charles had acted quickly on the situation.
“Recover from this! Ultra Ripper!” Charles’ voice echoed through the building, as Centurion took the center of the stadium and wobbled, defending itself but attacking at the same time.
Grand Nike tried to break through, and as much as Nika hated to admit it.. this was harder than she thought.
“Grand Rush!” Nika exclaimed, but the only thing Nike did was slightly push Centurion back.
A few seconds passed, as Nike was about to lose its stamina...
“Burst Strike!” Ultra Centurion blasted right through Grand Nike, bursting it.
“Two points to Ultra Centurion for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-2!” The referee announced.
Paris jumped out of his seat followed by a ‘Yes!’ attracting strange looks from other people.
“That was fun,” Nika admitted. “But you and me both know this is the end.”
“The end where I win,” Charles corrected.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
The two balance types slammed into each other, pressing their blades into their layers.
“Burst Strike!” Charles roared.
“Cancel it out! Northern Cross Shoot!”
Charles decided to give it his all early, in hopes to finish the battle quickly. Both beyblades rolled back.
“Now! Ultra Ripper!”
Ultra Centurion repeated what happened in the last battle. The tension was rising, as Grand Nike tried everything to break through...well, almost everything.
Nika’s pink hair lit like a flame.
“Northern Cross Shoot!”
Finally, Ultra Centurion’s barrier was broken by Nike’s furious attacks, sending it into the wall.
Charles had just used up all of his luck. What he tried in the last battle didn’t work in this one, so what went wrong? Thinking about it made him tired mentally rather than physically.
“Again! Northern Cross Shoot!” Nika shouted.
Grand Nike knocked Ultra Centurion out of its orbit, as it rushed for another attack.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles commanded. Instantly, Centurion regained its balance and became stable.
But it was too late.
“Fusion Whirlwind!”
This time, Grand Nike switched into its first mode of the two, Lower Mode, which gave it an opportunity to uppercut Centurion into the air, bursting it.
“Two points to Grand Nike. The score is now 4-2, making Nika Aoi the winner!”
Paris took a heavy hit, as if Nike had hit him instead.
Everyone did too. Charles remembered what Paris had said:
“Battling is fun when you win, but when you lose, you smile, ‘cuz you had fun anyway.”
He turned to Nika.
“Congratulations.”
“Thanks. You did great too,” Nika smiled.
Hanami tapped into his microphone. “Now it’s time for a long awaited battle, Paris vs Aaron! It’s about to start!”
Paris was quivering with anticipation. Seeing all his friends battle made him extremely eager.
“Wait! Paris!” A voice shouted from behind.
It was Charles, who had the Galaxy frame in his hand.
“You’re not upset?” Paris was shocked that he actually listened.
“Nope. It was fun, but now the pressure’s on you,” Charles joked.
Nodding, Paris reunited the frame with the rest of the frame.
“I think you’ll have to rephrase that,” Toko said, walking in with Taiki.
“Turns out we were qualified for the tournament,” Taiki added, “Oh, and good luck Paris.”
“Thanks. I’m gonna need it.”
I like this chapter! Its cool that Paris has some great sportsmanship in Beyblade
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 15, 2019
Great chapter! i wish that someone made drawings of what they look like, as its a bit hard to visualize, but great story nonetheless!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - May. 15, 2019
(May. 15, 2019 8:57 PM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: Great chapter! i wish that someone made drawings of what they look like, as its a bit hard to visualize, but great story nonetheless!
You can imagine Paris as a mini Gingka c:
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - May. 24, 2019
Chapter 20 - The Warrior’s Spirit! Shield Ares
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Charles learns it’s not all about winning, as Paris is about to begin his battle.
Paris was quivering with anticipation. It had been quite some time since he’d battled. Plus, this was a new opponent.
“Ah, Paris! Long time no see!” With the friendliest grin on his face, Roan stood at the other end of the corridor.
“Off to a battle?” Paris guessed.
“Yeah, yeah I am. Glad to see you’re back on track,” Roan replied. "Good luck."
Just like that, the two friends parted ways. Paris heard Hanami commencing the battle.
“Welcome to all you BeyFans! Today marks the second round of the National Tournament!”
One of the doors rattled and opened, revealing Aaron Mizusawa, a boy with wavy gold hair and a blue coat.
“We have our first competitor, Xhan’s right-hand man, Aaron!” Hanami announced.
“And our second competitor is a crowd favourite, the boy who never gives up, Paris Hagane!”
The two bladers stood on either end of the stadium. Ryota observed closely.
“His bey is Shield Ares. The bey is like the ultimate defense type, since it has four metal balls that change its trajectory during battle.”
The layer had four equal curves, with a metal ball aligned in front of each protrusion. The middle had a small sword, like Xcalibur.
The disc, 25, had 13 bumps on the back and 12 to the front. The driver, Drive, had a spherical rubber tip, similar to Friction.
“We’re about to see what it can do,” Charles added.
Aiga recalled battling him during one of his visits to the Bogard Kingdom.
Of course, he had won, only after
going the extra mile.
“Mind not holding back?” Aaron asked.
“You bet,” Paris responded with ease.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Shield Ares and Immortal Pegasus spun competitively, dodging each other’s attacks. Ares took the center, as two of its opposite metal balls shifted inward.
“Shield Defense!” Aaron commanded, as Pegasus made its way.
“Rush him!” Paris shouted.
Pegasus accelerated with each hit, dealing twice the amount of damage each time. Ares resisted movement as it spun stably, unlike Immortal Pegasus.
“I’ve gotta think fast,” Paris thought to himself. “And effectively.”
With little stamina left, it was too late to use a move. Pegasus shifted toward the center, as Shield Ares moved all four metal balls outward.
“End this Ares! Ares Drive!” Aaron yelled, as Ares surged through the stadium, flinging Pegasus outside.
“One point to Shield Ares for an Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!”
The tension was rising throughout the building. Immortal Pegasus landed in Aiga’s blue gloves.
Paris walked over to the Crimson Nova, recollecting his bey.
“Just my word of advice, give it all you got. I made that same mistake when I lost my championship to Valt Aoi,” Aiga said.
Nodding, Paris prepared for the second round.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Shield Ares positioned itself to instantly knock Pegasus away, and succeeded.
“Now’s our chance! Supernova Shoot!”
Like a shooting star, Immortal Pegasus shot across the arena and rapidly dealt huge blows to Ares.
Ares retreated to the center of the stadium as Pegasus came rushing down.
“Not a repeat of the first battle!” Charles sighed.
Pegasus took advantage of the situation and zoomed around the middle, trapping Ares in its infamous Immortal Stormbringer.
“What?” Aaron widened his eyes, as Shield Ares shot into the air. Fortunately for him, it returned back to the stadium’s surface.
“That’s enough! Ares Guard!” Aaron used his latest move, as Shield Ares headed toward Pegasus.
“Wait for this! Immortal Slash!”
Ending the battle with a heavy collision, both beys were sent flying into the air and split apart. Aaron and Paris stared anxiously at the referee, awaiting a response.
“Two points to Immortal Pegasus for a Burst Finish - the score is now 2-1!”
“Alright! We did it!” Paris cheered alongside with Charles and Ryota.
“Third battle!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Shield Ares sniped Immortal Pegasus, pushing it back as Ares did its job; defending itself. Slamming Pegasus multiple times, it flew into the air as Paris’ eyes glinted blue.
“Heh. Pegasus likes flying,” Paris smirked as its avatar appeared, a white-winged horse.
Descending at an increasing speed, it slammed into Ares, knocking the bey into the center of the stadium.
“Ares Drive!” Aaron shouted, as Shield Ares attempted to overpower Immortal Pegasus in speed.
“Let’s do this! Supernova Shoot!” Paris pulled another trick from his sleeve.
Pegasus pulled a chain of attacks, as Ares was unable to keep up with each one. Flinging into the wall, Ares lost a click.
The metal balls on Shield Ares retracted. If Aaron couldn’t play offensive, then he’d play defensive.
“Now Ares! Shield Defense!” Aaron exclaimed. Ares’ avatar, a furious-looking knight with a sword and a shield in each hand appeared.
“Again! Supernova Shoot!”
Despite Immortal Pegasus using excessive force on Shield Ares, it was stubborn and refused to move.
The two beys were down to their last few seconds worth of stamina. Pegasus had lost three clicks - one more, and Aaron would win.
Paris decided it was worth taking the risk.
“Finish him! Immortal Slash!”
BOOM. Shield Ares burst, and just as Immortal Pegasus collapsed, it did too.
“Two points to Immortal Pegasus for a Burst Finish! The score is now 4-1. Paris Hagane will move on to the next round!”
“Alright! We did it!” Paris looked at his friends, then back at Pegasus.
“You deserved it. Congratulations,” Aaron said, leaving the room.
On the screen, Aaron’s picture faded away.
“What an exciting introduction to the beginning of the second round! That sure made me pumped!”
The screen selected the next two competitors.
“Our next two bladers are the Aoi twins! Toko against Nika! That should be interesting!”
Toko glanced nervously at his sister.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dt20000 - May. 24, 2019
I read “the boy who never gives up” as “the boy who never grows up”. Peter Pan? Is that you?
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - May. 25, 2019
OMG !!!!!! Toko vs Nika . This is going to be crazy .
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 30, 2019
im calling it, tokos gonna win. (i want him to win honestly)
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Theswordhitter - May. 30, 2019
Oh my god bro and sis fight??
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Jun. 04, 2019
What just happend ??? Why this thread has been dormant for so many days !!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Jun. 23, 2019
Sadly it has been a month and sir saitama has not written a story . I think he has given up writing . I really liked his stories and the plot of the story too was going the right direction . But he may have felt otherwise . I dont know if there is anyone left here who is interested in him but i will never forget his stories . ??????
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - #Fafnir - Jun. 23, 2019
(Jun. 23, 2019 2:19 PM)Fusion core Wrote: Sadly it has been a month and sir saitama has not written a story . I think he has given up writing . I really liked his stories and the plot of the story too was going the right direction . But he may have felt otherwise . I dont know if there is anyone left here who is interested in him but i will never forget his stories . ??????
That's probably not the case. He/she may be busy right now and doesn't have time.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Jun. 27, 2019
(Jun. 23, 2019 2:19 PM)Fusion core Wrote: Sadly it has been a month and sir saitama has not written a story . I think he has given up writing . I really liked his stories and the plot of the story too was going the right direction . But he may have felt otherwise . I dont know if there is anyone left here who is interested in him but i will never forget his stories . ??????
Don’t worry, I haven’t given up writing. I’ve been really busy recently, so I guess the series is on a mini hiatus.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Jun. 27, 2019
(Jun. 27, 2019 7:35 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: (Jun. 23, 2019 2:19 PM)Fusion core Wrote: Sadly it has been a month and sir saitama has not written a story . I think he has given up writing . I really liked his stories and the plot of the story too was going the right direction . But he may have felt otherwise . I dont know if there is anyone left here who is interested in him but i will never forget his stories . ??????
Don’t worry, I haven’t given up writing. I’ve been really busy recently, so I guess the series is on a mini hiatus.
O yeah thats great . I was eagerly waiting for your response . Never give up friend . I am always there to support you . I am waiting for your upcoming episodes .
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dash Driver - Jun. 30, 2019
I've only read the 1st chapter and I already LOVE IT!
Also, does the author still accept character requests?
As far as I can tell, Sir Saitama still does.
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