(Oct. 31, 2017  5:12 AM)Dragunix Wrote:

(Oct. 31, 2017  4:42 AM)MWF Wrote: Good job but one thing. Vis always starts with his test launch so he can judge the typing by hearing the sounds. He never starts with retro launch due to beyblades like Fafinir. I should edit the bio again to add the test launch.

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To differentiate between lightweight and heavyweight let's use ° for lightweight and 0 for heavyweight.

So Marcus' bey will be cH.°W.Mu (charge Hyperion zero (light) weight multi.)

Nice. Btw, should I edit my draft to include his test launch?

(Oct. 31, 2017  1:54 PM)Dragunix Wrote:

(Oct. 31, 2017  12:57 PM)MWF Wrote: most likely, Without it battles are not as accurate as they should be.

I've got it in. Not directly, but he now knows the type and traits of nD from the first battle.

(Oct. 31, 2017  3:09 PM)Dragunix Wrote:

(Oct. 31, 2017  2:14 PM)MWF Wrote: Name: Zac Tordaline
Personality: Calm, responsible, and Focused
Looks: Dark blue hair, Blue Eyes.
Beyblade: Lyric Aeros.7M.2S lA.7M.Bu
Layer: lyric Aeros This layer named after the lesser god of the wind aeros this layer has three main contact points that can be changed before battle to show three extra blades in a  mechanism like twin nemesis. the main blades make a triangle in a shape like the original Valkyrie and the second set are swept back like Raganarok but smaller to not stick out too much in attack mode. in attack mode the two sets of blades are aligned  and you get a triangle with swept back wings. when twisted 180 degrees it goes into defense mode as the swept back blades partially fill the gaps reducing recoil. the Second set of blades has a wave like motif to them to symbolize wind. The layer is light blue with a white sublayer. The god chip is Translucent Blue with A white A on it.

Core: 7 heavy for strong attack.
Frame: Meteo heavy frame for increased attack.

Driver: Bound. A Small ball like tip with a spiked ring around it reminisant of the second row on rip fire Variable.

over all lyric Aeros. 7M. Bu is a strong attack beyblade with defensive properties.

Special moves:
Gale launch: Zac agressively flicks his launcher forwards giving aeros a great boost of speed.
Gust Launch: Zac  slightly flicks his launcher forwards giving aeros a speed boost to dodge a starting attack.
Hurricane boost: Aeros uses the spiked ring to speed around the stadium.
Solid Air: Aeros uses the spiked ring as a break as it takes attacks.

trivia:

like as his last name suggest, he is the older brother of Vis.

even though he knows Vis doesn't need it he keeps an eye on Vis to make sure he is ok. He does this almost on instinct.

He became the fourth member of team Double threat to keep an eye on Vis.

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even though he would not do a test launch he wouldn't start with a retro launch or a bounce launch.

K. Please don't make zac op.

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Also, Vis already knew Rykos began with Nova Launch before, and he could sense it from the sound. Can Vis sense air currents?

(Oct. 31, 2017  11:40 PM)Dragunix Wrote: updated Rykos' profile. I'm thinking about removing Nova Dragoon except for the driver and the metal filled layer.

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(Oct. 31, 2017  11:17 PM)Suzaku-X Wrote: Takeshi Kindachi

Blade: Roaring Thor 7Meteor Clutch

Roaring Thor is much like Xcalibur, but with a hammer and lighning bolt contact points. It's gimmick is dual spin.

Clutch is a driver that has a metal flat, and a rubber surrounding it, acting like Reboot.

Takeshi himself is at first a jerk, but as he matures, he becomes serious and unafraid to voice his opinion. He means well, but often will kick a person in the pants to motivate them.

Do you mean Unite/Merge for the driver?

(Oct. 31, 2017  9:25 PM)Dragunix Wrote: A bit too op. But hey, interesting idea.

(Oct. 31, 2017  10:40 PM)Dragunix Wrote: Name: Vesper Nexus

A blader with a tragic past,  Vesper's real name is Kage Namashiki and she was a teen when her parents were viciously injured and abducted by a mysterious blader. Her lust for revenge caused her to gain the ability of Synchronization and power draining. She has battled several bladers over the span of several years and has created an organization named after her alias. Currently, she only has one sibling, whose whereabouts are unknown. Vesper's bey is Rebirth Tiamut 12H. If (Infinity).

Beyblade: Rebirth Tiamut 12H (Hearth) If (Infinity)

Layer: Rebirth Tiamut

The layer is a rust red and inky black color scheme, with 5 gunmetal grey dragon heads encircling the MGC engraved with a draconic "T." The layer has 5 blades similar to Legend Spriggan, but are in both directions (think of a similar concept like Upper Dragoon). The gimmick of the layer is that it is (hollowed, but not flimsy) metal-encased plastic, and is dual-rotational. The contact points end in a softer plastic for durability. Due to the dual-rotational property and the blades with exceptional uppercut, the layer excels in Attack type combos, and has plastic teeth stronger than Legend Spriggan, but slightly shorter than that of Neo Dragoon.

Disk: 12

This disk is a solid metal forge disk that has exceptional burst resistance due to its high weight and evenly spread weight.

Frame: Hearth

Originally found on Spark Vesta, it is a mixture of Meteor and Glaive. Excellent on Balance combos.

Driver: Infinity

The driver is a Bearing Drive with a metal WF. It also has a ceramic ball bearing, allowing for the smoothest spin, and is very heavy.

Techniques:
- Eternal Dragon's Fang: A variant of Breaker Grapple that can counter Sonar due to the Infinity Driver and high inertia.
- Netherworld Dragon Blitzkrieg: Tiamut shoots upwards, and comes down at an angle of the layer, bursting the opposing hey. Basically a stronger version of Cyclone Counter. If the attack misses, the Infinity Driver is at an angle to continue spinning fast even after impact.
- Cloak of the Gods: Tiamut spins so fast that it becomes invisible. Vis can counter this due to his exceptional sense of hearing.
- Requiem of the Fallen: Tiamut speeds up around the stadium, then strikes the opponent repeatedly like Rush Shoot.
- Piercing Barrier: Tiamut stays in the center, and using the spinning, low-friction metal flat, tilts and bursts opponents who dare come near it.
- Typhoon Barrier: Tiamut spins fast enough to creates a thin barrier of wind that offsets any attacks.

History:
- Kage watches as a masked blader tortures her parents. Her brother had disappeared somewhere.
- Kage takes up the identity of Vesper Nexus, who drains the immense power of Nova Dragoon when its owner, Rykos' father, rebels against her. He gives the former Nova Dragoon, now known as Neo Dragoon to Rykos so he (Rykos) can revive its former power. Rykos' father then leaves in an attempt to get stronger and reunite with his son to defeat Vesper.
- Vesper watches from the shadows as she defeats numerous bladers over the span of several years.
TBC
Trivia: TBA

(Oct. 29, 2017  1:14 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Name: Rykos Azuki

A Blader with a fiery spirit, he strives to be one of the best to fulfill his grandfather's dying wishes. His hair is a spiky mess of white, his eyes are a deep blue, and he is very fit, almost as if he was an inactive weightlifter. His clothes usually consist of azure robes (or other garments) lined with gold. He is part of the Korean Team, Heavenly Trigram. He is generally relaxed and kind, but when provoked, he becomes cold and serious, sometimes even sadistic, as shown when he cracks part of Legend Spriggan (albeit Red-Eye attempted to hurt Iris by flinging a bey out of the stadium, and Oraiyun had taken the blow). He is best known for his double over finish against Free, and has even bursted Lui's Lost Longinus on one occasion. The first time he faced Lui, he utilized his Nova Launch for the first time and broke his string launcher. Afterwards, he always used a light launcher and a long winder. His beyblade is Neo Dragoon 7T. Nv.

Beyblade: Neo Dragoon (nD) 7T (Tail). Nv (Nova)

Layer: Neo Dragoon

This layer is a part of the God/Evolution Layer System and consists of four blades similar to the black blades found on Legend Spriggan. The heads are reminiscent of the original Dragoon's design from the Plastic/HMS gen. The layer gimmick is that the undersides of the blades are filled with metal that has been hollowed out underneath. The God Chip is reminiscent of the design found on Dark Knight Dragooon's Crystal Face, but with a more linear design like that of Shelter Regulus' God Chip, and depicts a dragon's head "molded" into the shape of a "D" in white upon a transparent cerulean God Chip. The layer is white, with red highlights alongside smaller green highlights representing Dragoon's eyes along the blades. This layer also possesses teeth slightly taller than that of Legend Spriggan, making it very difficult to burst when combined with the weight of the layer. However, the layer also possesses lower stamina than others, making it a slightly riskier option in terms of attack types.

Disk: 7

The disk found on Neo Dragoon is called 7, and is also found on Legend Spriggan. It is the heaviest burst disk as of now, and is optimal when combined with strong attack layers, such as lS and nD.

Frame: Tail

The frame is similar to Meteor, except with a more aggressive hook design. The design does not protrude much more than Meteor, however, and also causes more scraping when destabilized.

Driver: Nova

This is the most unique part of Neo Dragoon. The driver resembles R2F from MFB, but encircled with a thinner outer layer of circular rubber. The driver is extremely fast, and can even boost its speed like Unite and Merge due to the outer ring of rubber. However, the outer ring does not intrude upon the main R2F star of rubber, allowing for the tip of the driver to wear normally and become more controllable. The main weakness is that it is uncontrollable at first and has less stamina than that of Xtreme, just like how RF spun longer and with greater control than R2F.

Techniques:
- Nova Launch: Rykos launches nD at an angle to utilize its "acceleration ring" moving so quickly around the stadium, that it can burst an opponent's bey in one strike.
- Breaker Grapple: When Rykos faces a stamina or defense stance bey, he utilizes this technique to cycle around his opponent's bey in a chainsaw-like fashion with nD. This technique eventually drains the opponent's stamina or bursts them.
- Bound Storm: nD rushes around the stadium using Nova's speed, then, after accelerating to an almost unnoticeable state, it strikes the opponent repeatedly, landing heavy blows. Rykos used this technique to double over finish against Free once before losing to his opponent's 100% effort. Rykos can also use this technique in single strikes, so as not to lose spin against beys like Drain Fafnir.
- Stardust Nova: A stronger version of Nova Launch that can burst even free-spinning layers with pure force, and has the potential to crack layers. First seen when Rykos uses it in an attempt to defeat Vis, and narrowly loses.

History:
- When Rykos was seven, he received Neo Dragoon from his father before the elder Azuki family member disappeared.
- Rykos' grandfather dies due to old age, Rykos abides by his last wishes. Rykos meets Iris
- Rykos trains, trains, and trains, and eventually faces Lui. Despite his loss, however, Lui acknowledges him as a worthy blader.
- Rykos joins the team Heavenly Trigram before going solo for a period of time.
- Rykos is approached by Valt and co., and is asked to join BC Sol. Rykos refuses, before asking them to challenge him. Wakiya asks him if his skills were taught to him by his grandpa, causing him to go berserk in his battle against the former, cracking Tornado Wyvern's free-spinning ring in the process. The bey was repaired however.
- Rykos and Valt face each other. Valt is caught off guard by Rykos' Nova Launch and Breaker Grapple techniques and loses by over finish once, and burst finish once. Valt still clicks Neo Dragoon
- Rykos joins Heavenly Trigram once more to face off against Free, who beats Rykos in the both rounds via over and burst finishes.
- Rykos ties with Lui in a battle outside of the tournament.
- Rykos meets Xhaka, who states that Rykos possesses "an extremely fierce bonfire" within him. Rykos has a casual battle with Xhaka, and unleashes a new power unknown to him and Iris.
- Rykos battles Vis for the first time, narrowly loses.
- Rykos eventually remasters Dragoon and unlocks its fullest potential (see below)

Trivia:
- Despite Rykos' beyblade being a direct reference to the original Dragoon from Plastic/HMS gen, it is a right spin beyblade.
- Interestingly, the God Chip contains iron fillings, like the 4D System's energy rings did.
- to differentiate the layer from that of the Deathscyther line, the D is inverted on the God Chip.

Reborn Beyblade: Nova Dragoon 7I (Inferno) (Nb)Nebula

Layer: Nova Dragoon


An enhanced and original version of Neo Dragoon, Nova Dragoon is unlocked when Rykos fully Synchronizes with Dragoon on a journey in the Arctic Circle. The layer is now fully filled with metal underneath, except for the teeth, which are just barely taller now. The layer now has better slopes for destabilization. The layer also becomes slightly more aggressive, having sharper points on the slopes.

Disk: 7

Frame: Inferno


A metal frame with an aggresive Meteor style design. Adds decent weight and is rounded for LAD.

Driver: Nebula

The driver now has slightly more exaggerated spikes to enhance the bey's speed, and also has a R2F shaped "acceleration ridge" now. This allows for even greater acceleration, to the point where it nearly nullifies free-spinning techniques like Gripping Counter if fast enough.

(Nov. 01, 2017  3:54 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Sorry. Will edit article on Vesper soon, but please note that Rykos' launch power and Nova's aggressiveness increased (Nova to Nebula), and while I know that greater mass equals longer acceleration time, the increased power is meant to be an equal ratio to Neo Dragoon and Nova before the evolution. Ask if confused, I know it might be a bit confusing.

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Edited Vesper

(Nov. 01, 2017  4:06 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Should I nerf? Because I'm not sure how strong the light launcher is, but Rykos doesn't launch it hard enough to lose control or break it. He always remains in the limits of what he knows he can do despite his vigor in battle. But I can lower the weight to make it more realistic. I just wanted to create a logical upgrade to nD.

(Nov. 01, 2017  4:21 AM)Dragunix Wrote: I understand where you're going with this, but that would cause inconsistent power behind attacks and pointless changes in weight distribution, as the point of the metal in the main contact points is to deliver more force behind the attacks like sX. And I may have to change the design entirely to accomodate a rotating metal section, and lS has great contact points which nD's contact points/destabilizing slopes are based off of.

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And not exactly the same thing, but I've seen toys that have somethint like what you are describing and that makes their stamina drop a bit as well. Dragoon's design is meant to work in the real world as well, not just in this concept.

(Nov. 01, 2017  4:34 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Sounds good. And I apologize for being so critical, I'm kinda sleepy and just ended up overexplaining myself. Probably why the thread is so inactive now, because I'm being a stuck-up person all over it.

Actually, the Neo Light Launcher...sounds interesting. You made a good point there. One I was too busy ranting about to consider. Crazy me.

(Oct. 31, 2017  10:40 PM)Dragunix Wrote: Name: Vesper Nexus

A blader with a tragic past,  Vesper's real name is Kage Namashiki and she was a teen when her parents were viciously injured and abducted by a mysterious blader. Her lust for revenge caused her to gain the ability of Synchronization and power draining. She has battled several bladers over the span of several years and has created an organization named after her alias. Currently, she only has one sibling, whose whereabouts are unknown. Vesper's bey is Rebirth Tiamut 12H. If (Infinity).

Beyblade: Rebirth Tiamut 12H (Hearth) If (Infinity)

Layer: Rebirth Tiamut

The layer is a rust red and inky black color scheme, with 5 gunmetal grey dragon heads encircling the MGC engraved with a draconic "T." The layer has 5 blades similar to Legend Spriggan, but are in both directions (think of a similar concept like Upper Dragoon). The gimmick of the layer is that it is (hollowed, but not flimsy) metal-encased plastic, and is dual-rotational. The contact points end in a softer plastic for durability. Due to the dual-rotational property and the blades with exceptional uppercut, the layer excels in Attack type combos, and has plastic teeth stronger than Legend Spriggan, but slightly shorter than that of Neo Dragoon.

Disk: 12

This disk is a solid metal forge disk that has exceptional burst resistance due to its high weight and evenly spread weight.

Frame: Hearth

Originally found on Spark Vesta, it is a mixture of Meteor and Glaive. Excellent on Balance combos.

Driver: Infinity

The driver is a Bearing Drive with a metal WF. It also has a ceramic ball bearing, allowing for the smoothest spin, and is very heavy.

Techniques:
- Eternal Dragon's Fang: A variant of Breaker Grapple with higher stamina and precision due to the metal flat driver
- Netherworld Dragon Blitzkrieg: Tiamut shoots upwards, and comes down at an angle of the layer, bursting the opposing hey. Basically a stronger version of Cyclone Counter. If the attack misses, the Infinity Driver is at an angle to catch the bey and continue spinning fast even after impact.
- Cloak of the Gods: Tiamut spins so fast that it becomes invisible. Vis can counter this due to his exceptional sense of hearing being able to sense the slight whirring sounds produced.
- Requiem of the Fallen: Tiamut speeds up around the stadium, then strikes the opponent repeatedly like Rush Shoot.
- Piercing Barrier: Tiamut stays in the center, and using the spinning, low-friction metal flat, tilts and bursts opponents who dare come near it.
- Typhoon Barrier: Tiamut spins fast enough to creates a thin barrier of wind that offsets any attacks.

History:
- Kage watches as a masked blader tortures her parents. Her brother had disappeared somewhere.
- Kage takes up the identity of Vesper Nexus, who drains the immense power of Nova Dragoon when its owner, Rykos' father, rebels against her. He gives the former Nova Dragoon, now known as Neo Dragoon to Rykos so he (Rykos) can revive its former power. Rykos' father then leaves in an attempt to get stronger and reunite with his son to defeat Vesper.
- Vesper watches from the shadows as she defeats numerous bladers over the span of several years.
TBC
Trivia: TBA