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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 30, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  2:17 AM)Dragunix Wrote:
(Oct. 30, 2017  12:09 AM)MWF Wrote: Name: Vis Tordaline
Looks: pale skin, black messy hair, gray eyes.
Personality: he is highly determined and focused.
Beyblade: Iris sonar.8R.St
Layer: Is is named after the minor goddess of light Iris and is a stamina defense hybrid. It has two main blades with a small gap between them. The gimmick is when hit or at low spin speed the outer ring of the layer is free spining causing attacks to roll off it. The gimmick works like shadow orochium. The God chip is white with a lowercase s behind an uppercase I. The s is black while the I is gold.
Core disk: 8 this disk is a heavy disk allowing for great spin times.
Frame: roll. This frame is circular like polish for lad.
Driver: stable. This driver has a survive shaped rubber on a bearing allowing for great stamina and KO defense.
Overall: Is.8R.St is a strong defensively with a gimmick that causes attacks to have minimum effect and great stamina.

Special moves:
Spiral hold: chain launch on steroids. The combination of free spining layer and high friction driver stop enemy attacks cold.
Retro shoot: Vis swings the launcher left causing Iris to roll left to counter attacks.

Extra: Vis is blind. He was born blind but he learned to listen to his surroundings. He can tell what type the enemy is by the sound of its movement and impacts.

Free has problems facing Vis. Due to The free spining gimmick of iris free can not rely on spin stealing late in the match.
what color is the layer? I just want to describe its aura.

The crowd roared as the two bladers stepped up to the stadium. The glaring light illuminated their faces as Iris Makina and Vis Tordaline shook hands.

"You seem to be set on winning this, Vis. I'll be looking forwards to this," Iris said, as she readies her launcher.

"I could say that you're just as enthusiastic about this occasion, then. Good luck," replied Vis. Both bladers crouch in anticipation, their beys quivering with excitement.

"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" Vis and Iris keep their eyes on their beys as the crowd's cries of excitement soars ever louder.

"Sweep him away, Leviathan!" Iris shouts. The bey responds, quickly dropping towards Iris Sonar with great speed. Surprisingly, Sonar swoops around towards the back of Leviathan, then begins to shove it towards the edge of the stadium. Without warning, a grin creeps onto Iris' face as she moves a finger to the left. Leviathan swoops downwards and evades the pushing force behind it...only to be caught once again and thrown out of the stadium.

"What just..." she notes Vis' neutral expression, his posture, and his eyes. "Are you by any chance...blind?" She knew she was risking his anger, but to her surprise the blind blader nodded sagely.

"Yes. Your bey...she feels like a defense type. Am I correct?" Iris is suddenly unnerved by his senses despite her knowledge of his enhanced senses. Being blind didn't mean he was defenseless. But she was shocked by how aware he was of his surroundings and other beys. "Don't be afraid of me. I don't mean any harm to anyone anyways. Just go."

"Alright, then." Iris was in a pinch. How was she to defeat this blader? Then she knew. Frenzied Surf and Tsunami Crush were her only chances now. "I'm ready, Vis." He nodded. Was it her imagination, or was he smiling?

"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" Once again, the beys shot around the stadium before facing each other the second time for dominance of the center. Iris' eyes gleamed turquoise for a brief moment before her bey lit up. The sea serpent slid outwards along a wave as Leviathan was surrounded in an aquamarine aura. Leviathan charged towards Iris Sonar, then quicky began to latch onto the small gap between the blades of the layer.

Vis smiled briefly. "And just what is this supposed to-" his confidence was replaced with a curious silence, as his ears almost twitched to find the latest news. And he gobbled up the information like a famished child.

"Sonar!" Vis yelled. His eyes snap open, and Sonar is enveloped within a ghostly white aura as it uses its gaps to latch onto Leviathan. Leviathan then uses Frenzied Surf in a desperate attempt to throw the opponent off, but to no avail. Iris Sonar drops to the stadium floor as Leviathan drifts forward in its initial direction, then bursts.

"And Vis takes a win for [insert team here, if any]!" screams the announcer. The crowd jumps upwards, while Rykos watches silently. His eyes and Iris' eyes meet silently as he gives her a nod of acknowledgement, a nod that said, "You did well. Let me take it from here." He disappears afterwards.

"Thank you." Iris whirls around as Vis' voice playfully taps her on the shoulder, his hand now extended in greeting. "That was fun, wasn't it?" Despite her loss, Iris found a smile within her initial disappointment and wore it proudly as she shook Vis' hand. Both bladers left, having gained a respect for one another. However, a new storm brewed in the distance...

Good job. Now let me type up the my variant of the story. Also small tid bit, Vis always does a standard launch first to test the enemy Beyblade.

Iris walks up to the stadium wondering which blader she will be going against. Team Double Threat sends up Vis Tordaline. Their newest member. The two Bladers get ready to launch. Iris is confused by Vis holding his launcher with his arms extended over the stadium. They launch, Iris sonar rolls to the center as Leviathan rushes towards it in an attempt to hook on and fling it out. To Iris' surprise, even though the impact was spot on, Iris sonar did not budge but instead took the center. Leviathan dives into the center to try to knock it out and take the center but is stopped cold yet again. "So your beyblade is a defense type." Says Vis in a almost monotone voice, "Iris, spiral hold." Iris sonar's two wings retract removing the gap between them and the layer starts to free spin. Leviathan is trapped and stops spinning before Iris. "Iris sonar wins by survivor finish. The score is now Double threat with two points and [insert your team here] with two points."

Both Vis and Iris return to the stadium. "Ready for a rematch?" Says Vis opening his eyes, the gray irises staring forward at nothing in particular, " I have something prepared for this match." Iris, slightly unnerved by the indirect glare of Vis' eyes, gets ready tilting her launcher in a way that glave will bounce off the stadium once. Vis holds his launcher close to his right side. As they launch Vis yells "Retro Launch!" And swings his launcher to the left while launching causing Iris sonar to roll left. This causes Iris to panic as the glave bounce caused Leviathan to charge head on into Iris sonar getting bursted in one hit. "Vis Tordaline wins by burst finish, the final score is double threat with four points and [your team] with two points. Team Double Threat wins the team battle Championship." The announcer rounds out the night saying. "Unbelievable! Vis Tordaline has became the first blind blader to win a championship! Everyone lets give the winning team and the runner up a round of applause. Thank you for joining us and see you next time."

Vis holds out his hand for a hand shake and Iris accepts. Vis then says, "Your beyblade is interesting. Movement wise it sounded like an attack type but impact wise it sounded defensive. Hope to battle you again."


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Dragunix - Oct. 30, 2017

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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 30, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  3:02 AM)Dragunix Wrote:
(Oct. 30, 2017  2:56 AM)MWF Wrote: Good job. Now let me type up the my variant of the story. Also small tid bit, Vis always does a standard launch first to test the enemy  Beyblade.

Iris walks up to the stadium wondering which blader she will be going against. Team Double Threat sends up Vis Tordaline. Their newest member. The two Bladers get ready to launch. Iris is confused by Vis holding his launcher with his arms extended over the stadium. They launch, Iris sonar rolls to the center as Leviathan rushes towards it in an attempt to hook on and fling it out. To Iris' surprise, even though the impact was spot on, Iris sonar did not budge but instead took the center. Leviathan dives into the center to try to knock it out and take the center but is stopped cold yet again. "So your beyblade is a defense type." Says Vis in a almost monotone voice, "Iris, spiral hold." Iris sonar's two wings retract removing the gap between them and the layer starts to free spin. Leviathan is trapped and stops spinning before Iris. "Iris sonar wins by survivor finish. The score is now Double threat with two points and [insert your team here] with two points."

Both Vis and Iris return to the stadium. "Ready for a rematch?" Says Vis opening his eyes, the gray irises staring forward at nothing in particular, " I have something prepared for this match." Iris, slightly unnerved by the indirect glare of Vis' eyes, gets ready tilting her launcher in a way that glave will bounce off the stadium once. Vis holds his launcher close to his right side. As they launch Vis yells "Retro Launch!" And swings his launcher to the left while launching causing Iris sonar to roll left. This causes Iris to panic as the glave bounce caused Leviathan to charge head on into Iris sonar getting bursted in one hit. "Vis Tordaline wins by burst finish, the final score is double threat with four points and [your team] with two points. Team Double Threat wins the team battle Championship." The announcer rounds out the night saying. "Unbelievable! Vis Tordaline has became the first blind blader to win a championship! Everyone lets give the winning team and the runner up a round of applause. Thank you for joining us and see you next time."

Vis holds out his hand for a hand shake and Iris accepts. Vis then says, "Your beyblade is interesting. Movement wise it sounded like an attack type but impact wise it sounded defensive. Hope to battle you again."
Interesting. I'd like to know why Iris prepared to launch that way, and what country Double Threat represented again. Also, Iris is more unnerved by words, not actions. So she would be unfazed by a strange launch; Nova Launch isn't exactly orthodox either. But great draft! Seems more detailed too!

They are an American team. And thanks. Your draft was pretty good also. And with the glave bounce it would give a small burst of speed causing the average blader to be caught off guard.


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - ayggdrasilgy - Oct. 30, 2017

orson monroe

beyblade: might ophiuchus 6 bump jump

his apearence and personality

he is confident calmed and with ninja training by his dad his bey was given by him and he sai use your skills in battle and become the best by that day he trained all day and he can end up with his oponets with odd tecniques
he uses long silver hair a wide blue shirt and wide black pants and getas with incredible height

his bey its a balance type

layer: might ophiuchus :base on the serpent with silver and blue colors this layer has 8 blades and four of them are spring loaded the gimick is that when the oponent clash againts the spring loaded blade it cancel the attack and the normal sharp blade attacks

disk 6 frame bump

driver jump is a spring loaded wide fs that is triggered by a disk on it as soon as the disk releases the tip it jump for a diving attack or to stand in stamina position

moves:

counter bound: is provided by the gimmick of the layer
dive strike: when the bey jumps high i can hit the oponent by above
stack stand: if it fail by striking the oponent by above the now large axis of the driver makes it unreachable


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Beatlynx27 - Oct. 30, 2017

The Kristine  white:
Kristine is a very timid blader, despite her looks and bey. She wears an eyepatch to cover one eye that has no pupil. She also wears a torn shirt and short, denim shorts.
Bey: dark pirate 4tpg
Dark pirate layer:
Dark pirate is a stamina layer that can also be switched into a killer attack mode with a single twist. The attack mode has 16 high recoil blades and sharp teeth to survive recoil. In stamina mode the layer is small and circular with w2 teeth to avoid being op. It shows a pirate hat with dark tenticles flowing out.
4 disc:
First seen on blaze ragnuruk
Tail frame:
Seen on nova dragoon
Peg tip:
A gyro style tip but without the gimmick and a large freespinning ring around it.

Special moves: 
Darkness rise: The bey leans on the freespinning ring on peg and gains movement.


Name: haven't decided yet
Bey: ultra kraken 8ctn
Ultra kraken layer: 
Ultra kraken is a defence/stamina hybrid layer that can switch between jagged and smooth modes. Smooth is mostly round with 5 tentacles sticking out. Jagged is the same but two shelter regulus spiky things stick out on each round bit and a blade appears between each tentacle.
8 disc:
Comes on drain fafnir
Cross frame:
Comes on blaze ragnuruk 
Tentacle tip:
Needle with wider surface area and a free spinning ring around it like atomic.
 

Special moves:
Sinking slide: ragnuruk zone and horusood field at the same time.

Here it is, rykos vs tucker

"A blader who's crawled his way to the top and dominated the competition, please welcome Tucker smith!" Tucker steps nervously up to the stadium while the commentator announces ryokos. Ryokos races up to the stadium and immediately sees tuckers restrainers. "Won't those make you launch badly?" Ryokos asks."don't underestimate me! Take them of NOW!" Tucker refuses and the battle begins. Ryokos prepares for a nova launch while Tucker does his famous chimera launch. 3,2,1... go shoot! Nova dragoon rushes for the tornado ridge while alpha chimera appears to go for center. As rykos   calls out "nova launch!" alpha chimera dodges the center and heads for the wall. "See! A missed launch! I told you to take those things off!" Rykos exclaims. But Tucker continues to smirk and calls out "Dragonhead launch!" Alpha chimera glows a faint purple and bounces around the stadium like a wild dragon spiralling around its prey. Dragoon attempts to strike but misses every time. It eventually  stops spinning. The ref announces "alpha chimera wins by survivor finish!" Rykos' eyes flare white for a split second while he sets up for a bound storm. Tucker once again goes for the chimera launch. 3,2,1...go shoot! To rykos' surprise, chimera settles in the middle. Tucker calls out " goathead zone!". Red hot sparks flare around chimera as dragoon attacks. The sparks don't hold it back and aC bursts. "Nova dragoon wins by burst finish. The score is two to one" says the ref. Tucker slowly says "well you're  screwed" and throws off his restrainers. Rykos prepares another bound storm while Tucker doesn't change his launch. 3,2,1...go shoot! Dragoon attacks the center but chimera is on the tornado ridge. Tucker shouts "lionhead strike! Now!" and ryoko says slowly said "um, b-bound storm?" But it was to late. Dragoon was already flying through the air in three pieces. "Alpha chimera wins with a burst finish. Tucker smith wins with a score of 3/2"


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 30, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  6:14 AM)Beatlynx27 Wrote: The Katie white:
Katie is a very timid blader, despite her looks and bey. She wears an eyepatch to cover one eye that has no pupil. She also wears a torn shirt and short, denim shorts.
Bey: dark pirate 4tpg
Dark pirate layer:
Dark pirate is a stamina layer that can also be switched into a killer attack mode with a single twist. The attack mode has 16 high recoil blades and sharp teeth to survive recoil. In stamina mode the layer is small and circular with w2 teeth to avoid being op. It shows a pirate hat with dark tenticles flowing out.
4 disc:
First seen on blaze ragnuruk
Tail frame:
Seen on nova dragoon
Peg tip:
A gyro style tip but without the gimmick and a large freespinning ring around it.

Special moves: 
Darkness rise: The bey leans on the freespinning ring on peg and gains movement.


Name: haven't decided yet
Bey: ultra kraken 8ctn
Ultra kraken layer: 
Ultra kraken is a defence/stamina hybrid layer that can switch between jagged and smooth modes. Smooth is mostly round with 5 tentacles sticking out. Jagged is the same but two shelter regulus spiky things stick out on each round bit and a blade appears between each tentacle.
8 disc:
Comes on drain fafnir
Cross frame:
Comes on blaze ragnuruk 
Tentacle tip:
Needle with wider surface area and a free spinning ring around it like atomic.
 

Special moves:
Sinking slide: ragnuruk zone and horusood field at the same time.

Here it is, rykos vs tucker

"A blader who's crawled his way to the top and dominated the competition, please welcome Tucker smith!" Tucker steps nervously up to the stadium while the commentator announces ryokos. Ryokos races up to the stadium and immediately sees tuckers restrainers. "Won't those make you launch badly?" Ryokos asks."don't underestimate me! Take them of NOW!" Tucker refuses and the battle begins. Ryokos prepares for a nova launch while Tucker does his famous chimera launch. 3,2,1... go shoot! Nova dragoon rushes for the tornado ridge while alpha chimera appears to go for center. As rykos   calls out "nova launch!" alpha chimera dodges the center and heads for the wall. "See! A missed launch! I told you to take those things off!" Rykos exclaims. But Tucker continues to smirk and calls out "Dragonhead launch!" Alpha chimera glows a faint purple and bounces around the stadium like a wild dragon spiralling around its prey. Dragoon attempts to strike but misses every time. It eventually  stops spinning. The ref announces "alpha chimera wins by survivor finish!" Rykos' eyes flare white for a split second while he sets up for a bound storm. Tucker once again goes for the chimera launch. 3,2,1...go shoot! To rykos' surprise, chimera settles in the middle. Tucker calls out " goathead zone!". Red hot sparks flare around chimera as dragoon attacks. The sparks don't hold it back and aC bursts. "Nova dragoon wins by burst finish. The score is two to one" says the ref. Tucker slowly says "well you're  screwed" and throws off his restrainers. Rykos prepares another bound storm while Tucker doesn't change his launch. 3,2,1...go shoot! Dragoon attacks the center but chimera is on the tornado ridge. Tucker shouts "lionhead strike! Now!" and ryoko says slowly said "um, b-bound storm?" But it was to late. Dragoon was already flying through the air in three pieces. "Alpha chimera wins with a burst finish. Tucker smith wins with a score of 3/2"

from this story Tucker would have some fun going against Vis. also nice story.


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Dragunix - Oct. 30, 2017

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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 30, 2017

I made some changes to Iris Sonar it is now IS.8A (accel).St. now for a little battle between Vis and IS verses Ryoko and nD.

Iris leads Vis to the stadium that Ryoko was waiting at. "So you came," said Ryoko, " Lets see what that bey of yours can do." Vis nods saying, "Iris will be the referee, it will be first to three points. Ready?" Ryoko doesn't respond with words but instead gets his launcher ready. Vis extends his arms to do his trademark test launch. This annoys Ryoko and he says, "What, don't think I deserve anything special?" Vis doesn't respond instead starts the count. The two beyblades land in the stadium. Iris Sonar rolls into the center as Dragoon starts to speed up. Ryoko yells "Nova launch!" as Dragoon charges at Iris. But Dragoon just acts like there was nothing there. Despite a direct hit, Iris was unaffected. "what, How?" says Ryoko and dragoon tries again to meet the same result. "Trick of the light." said Vis as Dragoon keeps attempting to get a strong hit ultimately Dragoon stop spinning. "Iris Sonar wins by spin out finish. Vis leads one to zero." Said Iris.

The two bladers get ready for the next round. Before Vis starts the count he says, "Attack type, Highly aggressive, and reckless." Ryoko responds slightly annoyed responds with, "What? can you say that again?" Vis starts the count and tilts his launcher. Iris notices this and is surprised. It is a perfect copy of the experimental glave bounce. The beyblades are launched and Sonar's accel frame grips into the stadium giving it a serious boost speed as it charges behind Dragoon, bouncing off it and rolls into the center. Dragoon on the other hand was knocked off course and almost runs out of the stadium. instead, Dragoon charges around to Iris and starts to circle around it making constant contact. Ryoko grins and says, "Breaker Gra-" only to be interrupted by Vis who says in a monotone voice, "Spiral Hold." In this instant both beyblades start glowing. Iris glows white as the free spinning layer activates. Dragoon glows red as it speeds around Iris. To Ryoko's surprise Dragoon stops spinning. "Iris Sonar wins by spin out finish." says Iris, "the score is Vis with two points and Ryoko with zero points."

"I can hear that you are quite angry now." says Vis as he opens his eyes and slightly grins, "good. I was hoping for a challenge." Ryoko hears this and Yells, " I am going to CRUSH that grin right off your face." Iris starts the count as she notices Vis holding his launcher to his right. As they launch Ryoko mislaunches out of frustration and Vis swings his launcher left saying "Retro launch" in his monotone voice. Dragoon starts to circle the stadium at average speed but is stopped and bursted by the high speed smash of the head on collision. "Iris Sonar wins by burst finish. Vis Tordaline wins by a score of four to nothing." Iris said.

Iris prepares to hold back Ryoko but to her surprise instead of trying to attack Vis he just stands there staring at neo Dragoon. He asks, "How? How did that happen?" Iris puts her hand on Ryoko's shoulder and says, "Well they don't call Iris Sonar the attack killer for nothing. If it makes you feel any better my match against him took only two rounds." Vis then walks up to Ryoko and extends his arm for a hand shake which Ryoko accepts with a very tight grip. Vis winces slightly and says ow under his breath then tells Ryoko, "That was fun."


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Dragunix - Oct. 30, 2017

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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 30, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  3:22 PM)Dragunix Wrote:
(Oct. 30, 2017  2:41 PM)MWF Wrote: I made some changes to Iris Sonar it is now IS.8A (accel).St. now for a little battle between Vis and IS verses Ryoko and nD.

Iris leads Vis to the stadium that Ryoko was waiting at. "So you came," said Ryoko, " Lets see what that bey of yours can do." Vis nods saying, "Iris will be the referee, it will be first to three points. Ready?" Ryoko doesn't respond with words but instead gets his launcher ready. Vis extends his arms to do his trademark test launch. This annoys Ryoko and he says, "What, don't think I deserve anything special?" Vis doesn't respond instead starts the count. The two beyblades land in the stadium. Iris Sonar rolls into the center as Dragoon starts to speed up. Ryoko yells "Nova launch!" as Dragoon charges at Iris. But Dragoon just acts like there was nothing there. Despite a direct hit, Iris was unaffected. "what, How?" says Ryoko and dragoon tries again to meet the same result. "Trick of the light." said Vis as Dragoon keeps attempting to get a strong hit ultimately Dragoon stop spinning. "Iris Sonar wins by spin out finish. Vis leads one to zero." Said Iris.

The two bladers get ready for the next round. Before Vis starts the count he says, "Attack type, Highly aggressive, and reckless." Ryoko responds slightly annoyed responds with, "What? can you say that again?" Vis starts the count and tilts his launcher. Iris notices this and is surprised. It is a perfect copy of the experimental glave bounce. The beyblades are launched and Sonar's accel frame grips into the stadium giving it a serious boost speed as it charges behind Dragoon, bouncing off it and rolls into the center. Dragoon on the other hand was knocked off course and almost runs out of the stadium. instead, Dragoon charges around to Iris and starts to circle around it making constant contact. Ryoko grins and says, "Breaker Gra-" only to be  interrupted by Vis who says in a monotone voice, "Spiral Hold." In this instant both beyblades start glowing. Iris glows white as the free spinning layer activates. Dragoon glows red as it speeds around Iris. To Ryoko's surprise Dragoon stops spinning. "Iris Sonar wins by spin out finish." says  Iris, "the score is Vis with two points and Ryoko with zero points."

"I can hear that you are quite angry now." says Vis as he opens his eyes and slightly grins, "good. I was hoping for a challenge." Ryoko hears this and Yells, " I am going to CRUSH that grin right off your face." Iris starts the count as she notices Vis holding his launcher to his right. As they launch Ryoko mislaunches out of frustration and Vis swings his launcher left saying "Retro launch" in his monotone voice. Dragoon starts to circle the stadium at average speed but is stopped and bursted by the high speed smash of the head on collision. "Iris Sonar wins by burst finish. Vis Tordaline wins by a score of four to nothing." Iris said.

Iris prepares to hold back Ryoko but to her surprise instead of trying to attack Vis he just stands there staring at neo Dragoon. He asks, "How? How did that happen?" Iris puts her hand on Ryoko's shoulder and says, "Well they don't call Iris Sonar the attack killer for nothing. If it makes you feel any better my match against him took only two rounds." Vis then walks up to Ryoko and extends his arm for a hand shake which Ryoko accepts with a very tight grip. Vis winces slightly and says ow under his breath then tells Ryoko, "That was fun."
1. It's Rykos

2. Why is Rykos and nD getting nerfed so bad??

Also, Rykos isn't that reckless and temperamental. He's just passionate about blading. And the only time he has anger issues is if someone close to him gets hurt or if they insult his grandpa.

1. sorry for the misspelling.
2.  it was due to the match up. strong attack vs. strong stamina/defense.

also I misinterpreted the temper. yet the mislaunch could be caused by Ryko geting unnerved by how IS countered attacks.
with the temper I interpeted it as he gets annoyed when he thinks he is taken lightly. He thought the test launch and Vis describing his beyblade was an insult, annoying him.


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Dragunix - Oct. 30, 2017

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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 30, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  4:01 PM)Dragunix Wrote:
(Oct. 30, 2017  3:38 PM)MWF Wrote: 1. sorry for the misspelling.
2.  it was due to the match up. strong attack vs. strong stamina/defense.

also I misinterpreted the temper. yet the mislaunch could be caused by Ryko geting unnerved by how IS countered attacks.
with the temper I interpeted it as he gets annoyed when he thinks he is taken lightly. He thought the test launch and Vis describing his beyblade was an insult, annoying him.
Oh. Okay. But Rykos beat both tL and bV which are both defense types. He also bursted them both, alongside lS and double bursted with L2. He also Double KOed against Free.

(Oct. 30, 2017  3:38 PM)MWF Wrote: 1. sorry for the misspelling.
2.  it was due to the match up. strong attack vs. strong stamina/defense.

also I misinterpreted the temper. yet the mislaunch could be caused by Ryko geting unnerved by how IS countered attacks.
with the temper I interpeted it as he gets annoyed when he thinks he is taken lightly. He thought the test launch and Vis describing his beyblade was an insult, annoying him.
Oh. Okay. But Rykos beat both tL and bV which are both defense types. He also bursted them both, alongside lS and double bursted with L2. He also Double KOed against Free.

(Oct. 30, 2017  4:01 PM)Dragunix Wrote: Oh. Okay. But Rykos beat both tL and bV which are both defense types. He also bursted them both, alongside lS and double bursted with L2. He also Double KOed against Free.

Oh. Okay. But Rykos beat both tL and bV which are both defense types. He also bursted them both, alongside lS and double bursted with L2. He also Double KOed against Free.
And this is all without Synchronization's boost. Tbh, I wish I didn't nerf my OCs.

I started writing before I knew about synchronization boost. I will add it to the second draft.


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Dragunix - Oct. 30, 2017

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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 30, 2017

Here is the second draft.

Iris guided Vis to the stadium. this stadium was in the park and was reminiscent of stadiums that beyblades like storm Pegasus and rock leone would battle in. Rykos is standing at the stadium waiting he says "So you decided to accept the challenge." Vis responds by saying the rules and that Iris will be the referee. They get ready, Vis extends his arms in his trademark test launch. Rykos jokes around saying. "what, don't think I am worth effort?" They launch and Iris rolls around while Dragoon slams into Iris from behind causing Iris to almost speed out of the stadium. Iris then rolls into the center as Dragoon speeds at Iris. Vis says, "Trick of the Light." and Dragoon's attacks almost phase through Iris. Rykos is confused and asks how the attack missed. Vis responds by saying, "When a strong attack hits Iris the layer will start to free spin. combine this with the high friction free spin driver Iris will roll around attacks. Now! Spiral Hold!" as Vis says that Dragoon goes for a barrage of attack but each attack has no effect. Ultimately Dragoon stops spinning. "Iris Sonar wins by survivor finish. the score is now one to zero."

"your beyblade is an attack type." says Vis, "quite an aggressive one to say the least." Rykos accepts the statement and gets ready to launch. Both Beyblades launch and Rykos says "Nova Launch" and Dragoon Speeds into Sonar, slamming it into the wall, bursting it. "Interesting." Said Vis as he picks up his beyblade almost falling into the stadium. Rykos snickers at this but Iris gives him a cold glare and Rykos stops. "nova Dragoon wins by burst finish." said Iris, "the score is now Two to One with Rykos in the lead."

"Now to finish it." says Rykos setting up his launch. "We will see." Responded Vis tilting his launcher. This surprises Iris. it is a perfect copy of the glave bounce that she tried against him. They launch and Sonar's accel frame grips the stadium launching the beyblade around the stadium, catching up to Dragoon and flinging it out of the stadium as Iris Sonar rolls into the center. "I am more than just Defense." Said Vis. Rykos, on the other hand, had no words. He was in shock due to what happened. "Iris Sonar wins by a ring out finish. The score is now Two to Two."

Rykos' grin says it all, he was enjoying the challenge. Vis opens his eyes and grins slightly as he brings his launcher to his right side. There are no words to say their blader spirits say it all. They launch. Rykos Tilts his launcher last second and yells "Syncro Nova!" and Vis swings his launcher to the left yelling, "Retro Launch" both beyblades click twice on the head on collision. They bounce off each other and due to the power behind the retro launch Sonar starts to circle. Dragoon glows red as it unleashes a barrage upon Sonar who starts glowing white who does not move off course. Vis yells as Sonar tilts revealing the accel frame. Dragoon goes in for a final attack. As he does this Vis yells, "Gripping Counter!" and the accel frame takes the hit and combined with the high friction of Stable Dragoon bursts after impact. Iris stands there speechless for a second before saying "Iris Sonar wins by burst finish. Vis Tordaline wins with a score of four to two."

Vis walks up to Rykos and reaches out his hand for a handshake. Rykos accepts with a tight grip. Vis winces slightly and says ow under his breath then tells Rykos, "That was fun. That neo Dragoon of yours is interesting. From what I heard it has two rubber surfaces one makes it go faster than the other. Also behind the contact points is metal am i correct?" Rykos responds and tells Vis, "I hope to battle you again."


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - The_DarkBlader - Oct. 30, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  12:01 AM)Dragunix Wrote:
(Oct. 29, 2017  11:34 PM)DaJetsnake Wrote: All your characters are op lol
I wasn't aware of that. But I'll try to come up with some weaker characters, if that works better?

(Oct. 29, 2017  11:35 PM)The_DarkBlader Wrote: He has his own team called Blazing Dragons

You should make a role-play section where we can rp as our charecers
Which character did you say he wanted to battle? It wasn't specific on the PM

(Oct. 30, 2017  12:01 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Also, isn't spriggan more of a warrior with an ax in the anime? It's a thought.
Ya in the anime but the spriggan i made is a dragon i could change the name if you want


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - dt1000 - Oct. 30, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  2:40 AM)Dragunix Wrote:
(Oct. 30, 2017  1:10 AM)dt1000 Wrote: I can write it for you. I like to write and I have a lot of time to write

Why did you take down the initial concept? I found it pretty interesting and it was a great idea to toss around and mold into a fine project. Tbh, it seemed a bit more realistic than mine, but as I have no knowledge on iS' teeth, idk what the outcome would be. Keep it up, it was great!

Oh, I didn't know you liked it. I compared mine to yours and yours was better.

Winter Snow
Beyblade: Frosty Chione .0.Sf
Layer - Frosty Chione
Frosty Chione is perfectly round and made of POM, with a metal filling. This allows it to absorb the toughest of attacks. However, it features three mediocre teeth to keep the layer from being metabreaking. It also has small ridges along the outside to catch into opposing layers, but this makes it easier to burst.
Disk - 0
0 weighs as much as 7, but with a very high spin velocity and a very wide round disk. The spin velocity is due to IWD.
Driver - Spinforce
Spinforce is B:D but without a bearing and the same size as normal drivers, and made of POM.
Winter Snow
Appearance:
A tall pale girl with fluffy white hair wearing a periwinkle parka and blue pants. She wears an orange scarf.
Personality:
She is very polite and quiet, and very helpful. During battle however, she becomes intense and focuses all her power into battles. She gives it her all no matter what opponent, and is very strategic.
Special Moves:
Icy Glide
Chione glides around the center at a steep angle. The angle creates high speed and allows it to dodge most attacks.


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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - dt1000 - Oct. 30, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  10:34 PM)Dragunix Wrote: Vis and Rykos entered the arena, floodlights blinding the roaring crowd. The two blades shook hands, their bey's ready to battle. Vis gripped his launcher, the bey tilted at an angle to get a quick burst of speed. But Rykos smelled it in the air. He felt the tension running through his opponent. And he too gripped his launcher tightly.

"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" Both bladers roared alongside the stadium as Sonar took to the center. However, it had spun to the left, its Retro Shoot evading Nova Launch.

"I'm going to be quick and to the point Vis. Your mighty skillful when it comes to blading." Rykos grinned.

"Maybe so, but that doesn't make me any sloppier. Stand your ground, Sonar!" The bey speeds up in anticipation of Dragoon's Bound Storm, which came. But instead of being at an angle to hook Sonar like Vis anticipated, Dragoon came straight at it. The impact knocked Sonar out of the stadium, and was promptly retrieved by Vis.

"One point for Rykos Azuki!" the announcer cries. Vis only smirks, an ominous gesture that briefly chills Rykos. He regains his composure as the blind blades prepares his launcher.

Once again, the crowd roars as the two beys rocket around the stadium. Dragoon slides sideways to knock Sonar out of the stadium once more, but Sonar is ready. It leans to the side, grappling Dragoon's hooks and bursting it after a brief moment.

"The score is now 2 to 1 for Vis Tordaline!" As the shock of Baldur grows, Rykos becomes unsettled by the skill of Vis. But at the same time, a grin sneaks across his face.

"I'll admit it, Vis. You're probably up there with Free and the rest of those guys. And this bey of yours, it excites me. But this time...I'll go all out now." Rykos removes his azure outer robe, revealing a well toned body wearing a plain white shirt. He then grasps his launcher in a stance for Nova Launch.

"This is the first time I've met an opponent this strong. It will be quite an annoyance to not have met you in the finals, my friend." Vis replies. However his eyes almost open in shock as he notices a brilliant scarlet aura flaring to life around Rykos, whose eyes gain draconic pupils and wings sprout from his back as part of the aura.

"Get ready, Vis." Rykos says. His now gold irises sparkle with power. Vis tenses his body, readying himself for the challenge ahead.

"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" The aura flares intensely before shrinking into the shape of a humanoid dragon around Rykos. Dragoon, however, instantly disappears as Sonar uses it's free spinning ring to nullify the damage and burst Dragoon. However, a loud burst signifies this vain effort to counter the sudden ambush against Sonar. Dragoon circles around and returns to Rykos, whose aura fades once more.

"T-the score is 3 to 2 for Rykos Azuki! Could this be the turnaround Heavenly Trigram needs to stay in the game?" the announcer stutters, incredulous at this sudden victory.

Vis stares with closed eyes at Dragoon and Rykos. He suddenly snaps Sonar back together. Rykos looks up in concern.

"Are you alright, Vis?" he asks. Vis smiles.

"I really meant what I said earlier, Rykos. I will miss the chance to fight you in the finals." He then opens his eyes, staring at Rykos. "But I will enjoy and fight this battle with my fullest extent as well." Rykos is stunned, until his grin stretches across his face once again.

"Alright then, Vis." Rykos readies his launcher once again, a sapphire aura now encircling him. "Let's go wild with this one chance we have! You and Sonar, me and Dragoon. This won't be something either of us forget in a long time!" Vis smirks in response.

"As you say, my friend." He readies his launcher with ecstasy coursing through his body. A loud ping echoes through his mind. His blind eyes search for the source of the sound.

"Sonar? Alright then, let's go." He steadies himself and prepares to fight to the end.

"You've unlocked it too...The endless potential of Synchronization. Now I'm really pumped to fight you!" Vis smiles gently in response.

"3..."
"2..."
"1..."
"GO SHOOT!" A gigantic explosion rings throughout the stadium as Sonar and Dragoon clash fiercely with Retro Shoot and Stardust Nova, which Rykos had thrown all his power into, their partners roaring with the same joy and passion they possess. Loud clicks become barely noticeable as Dragoon and Sonar both burst. Rykos and Vis both pant heavily, before Rykos falls to his knees and Vis sits down.

"Who, just who won the battle? The ferocious dragon, or the ever seeing Sonar? Let's take a closer look, shall we?" The camera replays, zooming in on the supposed double burst. As it slows down, Dragoon flew apart just before Sonar. Both bladers' eyes widen in utter bewilderment as the taut silence the crowd had been possessed by is shattered beyond repair, a tumultuous roar nearly that almost deafens those outside of the arena.

"And after such an intense battle, Vis Tordaline and his bey Iris Sonar takes the victory, with a tenacious finishing score of 5 to 3! Let's give these bladers a huge round of applause!" Rykos and Vis shake hands under the limitless curtain of applause.

"I'll be waiting to face you again, Rykos," Vis says

"I can't deny that I want to do the same, Vis. I wish you luck in the finals," Rykos responds, a hearty laughter evident in his cheery reply.


My take on the battle. What do you think about this? Who do you think should have claimer victory? Anything I should change? Maybe make a rematch?

(Oct. 30, 2017  9:18 PM)dt1000 Wrote: Oh, I didn't know you liked it. I compared mine to yours and yours was better.

Winter Snow
Beyblade: Frosty Chione .0.Sf
Layer - Frosty Chione
Frosty Chione is perfectly round and made of POM, with a metal filling. This allows it to absorb the toughest of attacks. However, it features three mediocre teeth to keep the layer from being metabreaking.
Disk - 0
0 weighs as much as 7, but with a very high spin velocity and a very wide round disk. The spin velocity is due to IWD.
Driver - Spinforce
Spinforce is BGrin but with -1 bearing and the same size as normal drivers, and made of POM.
Winter Snow
Appearance:
A tall pale girl with fluffy white hair wearing a periwinkle parka and blue pants. She wears an orange scarf.
Personality:
She is very polite and quiet, and very helpful. During battle however, she becomes intense and focuses all her power into battles. She gives it her all no matter what opponent, and is very strategic.
Special Moves:
Icy Glide
Chione glides around the center at a steep angle. When an opponent comes near, the airflow causes Chione to be pushed away, allowing it to dodge.
so what is the airflow due to? what about burst resistance? I understand the teeth are mediocre, but its completely circular, has IWD, and is POM. It's literally a better mG with an IWD 7 disk and a...BGrin with no bearing? how does that work? Again, just IMO that there is too much POM and OP stuff, but still very interesting. I'd like to know more about the design and maybe write up a draft about Winter and fC vs Iris (character) and tL. I know tL would probably lose, but it's just so...interesting XD.

(Oct. 29, 2017  11:34 PM)Neptrius Wrote: name: michael "tsunami master" Tōshō

bey: layer:tsunami leviathan, disk:flash, driver:flood.
attack type
special move: leviathan flood destruction

michael wears blue jeans, a blue shirt, black leather jacket black and blue shoes and a blue baseball cap

leviathan's layer has a leviathan coming out of a tsunami, his disk has a flash flood design on it, and his driver has a rubber tip around a metal core for maximum strength.

stats of a scale from 1 through 10: attack 9.5, defense 6.4, stamina 6.6
Eyyy! #LeviathanSquad. also, this sounds like it uses CS from MFB. Also, is the layer aggresive? Defensive? Sounds like it leans towards being aggresive from what its driver is, but interesting concept! I'll love to see more!

Nerfed it and altered the special move.


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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Lost Spiral - Oct. 30, 2017

Name- Zenn Yoshida
Bey - Ace Articross | God/evolution bey- eternal Articross
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Silent and careless this blader doesnt get out to others much,
Prefers strong and competitive teammates and rarely shows at team battles

His interest consist of his Bey (Articross)  and his cousin Sasori

Ace Articross is an Attack Type that has a great deal in speed and power, its clock handlike blades also form as a mechanism that burst Beys in a single shot. 

Its performance tip is the S. Tip ( survivor ) is a main aspect in the bey, and it the main reason articross has its speed and agility. With the weight of the bey being one of the lightest Articross doesn't have much of a disadvantage unless dealing with defense types, though the speed of the performance tip keep it fast enough to lay enough hits for a burst.

Its Energy layer is probably its best feature, having a partial cross or clocklike blade set on the layer make it formidable for most beys with loose edges this especially for right spinning Bey because articross spins to the left the blades catch on the most edges and lower endurance quickly on almost all right spinning beys

The forge disk isnt really much of a spark as the other parts but the D05 or (Magnum) is lightweight making it faster plus the speed gained by the survivor performance tip making it hit faster than most bey can keep up with it.

Articross has A special that doubles its agility, attack and speed Blade Burst is probably one of the stronger attacks giving articross an edge against defense types.

The launcher used is the B-66 string Launcher


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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 31, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  11:12 PM)Dragunix Wrote:
(Oct. 30, 2017  12:09 AM)MWF Wrote: Name: Vis Tordaline
Looks: pale skin, black messy hair, gray eyes.
Personality: he is highly determined and focused.
Beyblade: Iris sonar.8A.St
Layer: Is is named after the minor goddess of light Iris and is a stamina defense hybrid. It has two main blades shaped like bR/dC with a small gap between them. The gimmick is when hit or at low spin speed the outer ring of the layer is free spining causing attacks to roll off it. The gimmick works like shadow orochium. The God chip is white with a uppercase S behind an uppercase I. The S is black while the I is gold. The layer itself is white with gray details.
Core disk: 8 this disk is a heavy disk allowing for great spin times.
Frame: Accel. This frame is two sided like Iris for increased speed and stamina. This frame is gray.
Driver: stable. This driver has a survive shaped rubber on a bearing allowing for great stamina and KO defense. Black driver with white rubber.
Overall: Is.8A.St is a strong defensively with a gimmick that causes attacks to have minimum effect and great stamina.

Special moves:
Spiral hold: chain launch on steroids. The combination of free spining layer and high friction driver stop enemy attacks cold.
Retro shoot: Vis swings the launcher left causing Iris to roll left to counter attacks.
Trick of the light: Iris Sonar uses its free spining layer and the stable driver to roll around attacks making it seem like the attack phased right through it.
Bounce shoot: Vis tilts the launcher in a way that the accel frame will bounce off the stadium giving a quick speed boost to avoid attacks.

Extra: Vis is blind. He was born blind but he learned to listen to his surroundings. He can tell what type the enemy is by the sound of its movement and impacts.

Free has problems facing Vis. Due to The free spining gimmick of iris free can not rely on spin stealing late in the match.

Despite partially named after the goddess of color Iris the only part of the beyblade that isn't monochrome is the gold I on the God chip.

This beyblade has two names. It can be called sonar or Iris.
So Free battled Vis before? It would be really interesting to see a battle played out between the two. I'll update my version of the Rykos vs. Vis draft to include Trick of the Light.

(Oct. 30, 2017  7:57 PM)MWF Wrote: Here is the second draft.

Iris guided Vis to the stadium. this stadium was in the park and was reminiscent of stadiums that beyblades like storm Pegasus and rock leone would battle in. Rykos is standing at the stadium waiting he says "So you decided to accept the challenge." Vis responds by saying the rules and that Iris will be the referee. They get ready, Vis extends his arms in his trademark test launch. Rykos jokes around saying. "what, don't think I am worth effort?" They launch and Iris rolls around while Dragoon slams into Iris from behind causing Iris to almost speed out of the stadium. Iris then rolls into the center as Dragoon speeds at Iris. Vis says, "Trick of the Light." and Dragoon's attacks almost phase through Iris. Rykos is confused and asks how the attack missed. Vis responds by saying, "When a strong attack hits Iris the layer will start to free spin. combine this with the high friction free spin driver Iris will roll around attacks. Now! Spiral Hold!" as Vis says that Dragoon goes for a barrage of attack but each attack has no effect. Ultimately Dragoon stops spinning. "Iris Sonar wins by survivor finish. the score is now one to zero."

"your beyblade is an attack type." says Vis, "quite an aggressive one to say the least." Rykos accepts the statement and gets ready to launch. Both Beyblades launch and Rykos says "Nova Launch" and Dragoon Speeds into Sonar, slamming it into the wall, bursting it. "Interesting." Said Vis as he picks up his beyblade almost falling into the stadium. Rykos snickers at this but Iris gives him a cold glare and Rykos stops. "nova Dragoon wins by burst finish." said Iris, "the score is now Two to One with Rykos in the lead."

"Now to finish it." says Rykos setting up his launch. "We will see." Responded Vis tilting his launcher. This surprises Iris. it is a perfect copy of the glave bounce that she tried against him. They launch and Sonar's accel frame grips the stadium launching the beyblade around the stadium, catching up to Dragoon and flinging it out of the stadium as Iris Sonar rolls into the center. "I am more than just Defense." Said Vis. Rykos, on the other hand, had no words. He was in shock due to what happened. "Iris Sonar wins by a ring out finish. The score is now Two to Two."

Rykos' grin says it all, he was enjoying the challenge. Vis opens his eyes and grins slightly as he brings his launcher to his right side. There are no words to say their blader spirits say it all. They launch. Rykos Tilts his launcher last second and yells "Syncro Nova!" and Vis swings his launcher to the left yelling, "Retro Launch" both beyblades click twice on the head on collision. They bounce off each other and due to the power behind the retro launch Sonar starts to circle. Dragoon glows red as it unleashes a barrage upon Sonar who starts glowing white who does not move off course. Vis yells as Sonar tilts revealing the accel frame. Dragoon goes in for a final attack. As he does this Vis yells, "Gripping Counter!" and the accel frame takes the hit and combined with the high friction of Stable Dragoon bursts after impact. Iris stands there speechless for a second before saying "Iris Sonar wins by burst finish. Vis Tordaline wins with a score of four to two."

Vis walks up to Rykos and reaches out his hand for a handshake. Rykos accepts with a tight grip. Vis winces slightly and says ow under his breath then tells Rykos, "That was fun. That  neo Dragoon of yours is interesting. From what I heard it has two rubber surfaces one makes it go faster than the other. Also behind the contact points is metal am i correct?" Rykos responds and tells Vis, "I hope to battle you again."
Sorry for sounding really annoyed earlier to anyone who read my replies. I just get kinda grouchy when misunderstood, and at times there wasn't a good moment to write longer replies, so I was a bit too blunt with my replies and such. And just a note, but Rykos isn't really mean enough to snicker at someone with disabilities. Also, Stardust Nova is a move where Rykos increases the angle and force at which he uses Nova Launch, increasing the power and speed of the technique. Even though it is harder to control, it can intercept Trick of the Light and Retro Shoot if used at the right time and angle.

And stupid autocorrect. But please, enjoy writing here. I apologize for any discomfort I may have caused.

Well when one draft takes about an hour or more depending on which class I am in at the time. Things tend to desync. 

And syncro nova is a stronger nova launch caused by syncro. With trick of the light the only way to get past it is with an attack that hits it head on with enough force to get past the high friction stable driver. Retro launch is just a way to counter circling beyblades. Dragoon didn't burst  on impact against the retro launch. It is the bounce launch that you should be worried about.


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Dragunix - Oct. 31, 2017

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RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - MWF - Oct. 31, 2017

(Oct. 30, 2017  10:34 PM)Dragunix Wrote: Vis and Rykos entered the arena, floodlights blinding the roaring crowd. The two blades shook hands, their bey's ready to battle. Vis gripped his launcher, the bey tilted at an angle to get a quick burst of speed. But Rykos smelled it in the air. He felt the tension running through his opponent. And he too gripped his launcher tightly.

"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" Both bladers roared alongside the stadium as Sonar took to the center. However, it had spun to the left, its Retro Shoot and Trick of the Light evading and clicking Dragoon as it roared past using Nova Launch.

"I'm going to be quick and to the point Vis. Your mighty skillful when it comes to blading." Rykos grinned.

"Maybe so, but that doesn't make me any sloppier. Stand your ground, Sonar!" The bey speeds up in anticipation of Dragoon's Bound Storm, free spinning to prepare for the aggressive technique. But instead of being at an angle to hook Sonar like Vis anticipated, Dragoon came straight at it. The impact knocked Sonar out of the stadium, and was promptly retrieved by Vis.

"One point for Rykos Azuki!" the announcer cries. Vis only smirks, an ominous gesture that briefly chills Rykos. He regains his composure as the blind blader prepares his launcher.

Once again, the crowd roars as the two beys rocket around the stadium.  Dragoon slides sideways to knock Sonar out of the stadium once more, but Sonar is ready. It leans to the side, grappling Dragoon's hooks and bursting it after a brief moment.

"The score is now 2 to 1 for Vis Tordaline!" As the shock of Baldur grows, Rykos becomes unsettled by the skill of Vis. But at the same time, a grin sneaks across his face.

"I'll admit it, Vis. You're probably up there with Free and the rest of those guys. And this bey of yours, it excites me. But this time...I'll go all out now." Rykos removes his azure outer robe, revealing a well toned body wearing a plain white shirt. He then grasps his launcher in a stance for Nova Launch.

"This is the first time I've met an opponent this strong. It will be quite an annoyance to not have met you in the finals, my friend." Vis replies. However his eyes almost open in shock as he notices a brilliant scarlet aura flaring to life around Rykos, whose eyes gain draconic pupils and wings sprout from his back as part of the aura.

"Get ready, Vis." Rykos says. His now gold irises sparkle with power. Vis tenses his body, readying himself for the challenge ahead.

"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" The aura flares intensely before shrinking into the shape of a humanoid dragon around Rykos. Dragoon, however, instantly disappears as Sonar uses it's free spinning ring to nullify the damage and burst Dragoon.  However, a loud burst signifies this vain effort to counter the sudden ambush against Sonar. Dragoon circles around and returns to Rykos, whose aura fades once more.

"T-the score is 3 to 2 for Rykos Azuki! Could this be the turnaround Heavenly Trigram needs to stay in the game?" the announcer stutters, incredulous at this sudden victory.

Vis stares with closed eyes at Dragoon and Rykos. He suddenly snaps Sonar back together. Rykos looks up in concern.

"Are you alright, Vis?" he asks. Vis smiles.

"I really meant what I said earlier, Rykos. I will miss the chance to fight you in the finals." He then opens his eyes, staring at Rykos. "But I will enjoy and fight this battle with my fullest extent as well." Rykos is stunned, until his grin stretches across his face once again.

"Alright then, Vis." Rykos readies his launcher once again, a sapphire aura now encircling him. "Let's go wild with this one chance we have! You and Sonar, me and Dragoon. This won't be something either of us forget in a long time!" Vis smirks in response.

"As you say, my friend." He readies his launcher with ecstasy coursing through his body. A loud ping echoes through his mind as a flickering white aura illuminates Vis. His blind eyes search for the source of the sound.

"Sonar? Alright then, let's do this." He steadies himself and prepares to fight to the end.

"You've unlocked it too...The endless potential of Synchronization. Now I'm really pumped to fight you!" Vis smiles gently in response.

"3..."
"2..."
"1..."
"GO SHOOT!" A gigantic explosion rings throughout the stadium as Sonar and Dragoon clash fiercely with Retro Shoot and Stardust Nova, their partners roaring with the same joy and passion they possess. The loud clicks were barely noticeable as Dragoon and Sonar both burst. Rykos and Vis both pant heavily, before Rykos falls to his knees and Vis sits down.

"Who, just who won the battle? The ferocious dragon, or the ever seeing Sonar? Let's take a closer look, shall we?" The camera replays, zooming in on the supposed double burst. As it slows down, Dragoon flew apart just before Sonar. Both bladers' eyes widen in utter bewilderment as the taut silence the crowd had been possessed by is shattered beyond repair, a tumultuous roar that almost deafens those outside of the arena.

"And after such an intense battle, Vis Tordaline and his bey Iris Sonar takes the victory, with a tenacious finishing score of 5 to 3! Let's give these bladers a huge round of applause!" Rykos and Vis shake hands under the limitless curtain of applause.

"I'll be waiting to face you again, Rykos," Vis says

"I can't deny that I want to do the same, Vis. I wish you luck in the finals," Rykos responds, a hearty laughter evident in his cheery reply.


My take on the battle. What do you think about this? Who do you think should have claimed victory? Anything I should change? Maybe make a rematch?

(Oct. 30, 2017  9:18 PM)dt1000 Wrote: Oh, I didn't know you liked it. I compared mine to yours and yours was better.

Winter Snow
Beyblade: Frosty Chione .0.Sf
Layer - Frosty Chione
Frosty Chione is perfectly round and made of POM, with a metal filling. This allows it to absorb the toughest of attacks. However, it features three mediocre teeth to keep the layer from being metabreaking.
Disk - 0
0 weighs as much as 7, but with a very high spin velocity and a very wide round disk. The spin velocity is due to IWD.
Driver - Spinforce
Spinforce is BGrin but with -1 bearing and the same size as normal drivers, and made of POM.
Winter Snow
Appearance:
A tall pale girl with fluffy white hair wearing a periwinkle parka and blue pants. She wears an orange scarf.
Personality:
She is very polite and quiet, and very helpful. During battle however, she becomes intense and focuses all her power into battles. She gives it her all no matter what opponent, and is very strategic.
Special Moves:
Icy Glide
Chione glides around the center at a steep angle. When an opponent comes near, the airflow causes Chione to be pushed away, allowing it to dodge.
so what is the airflow due to? what about burst resistance? I understand the teeth are mediocre, but its completely circular, has IWD, and is POM. It's literally a better mG with an IWD 7 disk and a...BGrin with no bearing? how does that work? Again, just IMO that there is too much POM and OP stuff, but still very interesting. I'd like to know more about the design and maybe write up a draft about Winter and fC vs Iris (character) and tL. I know tL would probably lose, but it's just so...interesting XD.

(Oct. 29, 2017  11:34 PM)Neptrius Wrote: name: michael "tsunami master" Tōshō

bey: layer:tsunami leviathan, disk:flash, driver:flood.
attack type
special move: leviathan flood destruction

michael wears blue jeans, a blue shirt, black leather jacket black and blue shoes and a blue baseball cap

leviathan's layer has a leviathan coming out of a tsunami, his disk has a flash flood design on it, and his driver has a rubber tip around a metal core for maximum strength.

stats of a scale from 1 through 10: attack 9.5, defense 6.4, stamina 6.6
Eyyy! #LeviathanSquad. also, this sounds like it uses CS from MFB. Also, is the layer aggresive? Defensive? Sounds like it leans towards being aggresive from what its driver is, but interesting concept! I'll love to see more!

Good job but one thing. Vis always starts with his test launch so he can judge the typing by hearing the sounds. He never starts with retro launch due to beyblades like Fafinir. I should edit the bio again to add the test launch.

(Oct. 31, 2017  4:34 AM)Dragunix Wrote: I need to ask something on this thread. I've seen the disk "0" used as both a lightweight and heavy disk in combos. Which one is it? Because I'm not sure if we should differentiate the two variants---or at least try and keep it consistent?

To differentiate between lightweight and heavyweight let's use ° for lightweight and 0 for heavyweight.

So Marcus' bey will be cH.°W.Mu (charge Hyperion zero (light) weight multi.)


RE: Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character - Dragunix - Oct. 31, 2017

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