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Driver - Accel - Ninja Blader - Dec. 16, 2015 Quote:{{Part Infobox RE: Driver Accel Draft - Kai-V - Dec. 16, 2015 Hm, always make sure to check on the Beyblade Wiki in case there is already an article about a part, and just build onto it : http://beyblade.wikia.com/wiki/Driver_-_Accel For instance, the physical description is fine on Beyblade Wikia already, and even the sentence about it being aggressive is OK. I would not say that it is top-tier for Attack since we know that a flat rubber tip is coming out soon. Perhaps just write : "It is the best Driver to use for its increased control compared to Assault, in the absence of flat rubber Driver." Each suggested combination should be detailed more, also. You should look at others of our "Use in x Customization" sections on Beywiki. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Ninja Blader - Dec. 16, 2015 Now I had made a draft so would I get points for this and also the OP is edited RE: Driver Accel Draft - ashton pinto - Dec. 16, 2015 (Dec. 16, 2015 4:05 PM)vikrambeyblade Wrote: Now I had made a draft so would I get points for this and also the OP is edited you need to make a new draft. not a copy paste draft of an old article which is already written since its release Read the rules again The whole point of the scavenger hunt is to get people involved and to actively contribute, and not merely for points RE: Driver Accel Draft - MiddayOBWL - Dec. 16, 2015 (Dec. 16, 2015 4:05 PM)vikrambeyblade Wrote: Now I had made a draft so would I get points for this and also the OP is edited Since an article for Accel already exists, I don't think you'll get any points anyway. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Ninja Blader - Dec. 16, 2015 Oh! I am very sorry. I would make a new topic of a new part. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Kai-V - Dec. 16, 2015 Ah, I somehow forgot to write "in the absence of a flat rubber Driver". The Beyblade Wikia article for Accel is certainly not complete in terms of describing the performance and the use in combinations. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Ninja Blader - Dec. 16, 2015 Well I want to ask that is my beyblade knowledge good or not. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Kai-V - Dec. 16, 2015 Your knowledge is OK but it does not go in depth, like really explaining why a part works this or that way. To be honest, it is your English skills that are more difficult to deal with : a lot of your sentences make no sense in terms of syntax, so I would have to rewrite a lot of things. That being said, for sure I appreciate the effort, but this implies that more work has to be done instead of being able to quickly approve drafts and get them published like the part-by-part system is supposed to allow. RE: Driver Accel Draft - DRAGON KING - Dec. 16, 2015 Well, this article needs better spelling and grammar, sorry to tell you RE: Driver Accel Draft - Ninja Blader - Dec. 17, 2015 Ha! No problem I will improve my English and edit my articles soon RE: Driver Accel Draft - Neo - Dec. 17, 2015 If you're going to be referencing the Flat Bottom from MFB, maybe you should also make reference to the first Flat tip, Flat Base from 4-Layer, or SG Flat Base from 5 Layer. Especially Flat Base; as it was the first one released and it should be noted how much of a staple it is for the first BeyBlade of each generation to have a flat tip. Something like; "It should be noted that Accel follows the tradition of having a flat tip on the first Beyblade in a new Generation." Or; "Much like Flat Base or Flat Bottom, Accel follows the tradition of being a flat tip on the first Beyblade of the Generation." RE: Driver Accel Draft - Ninja Blader - Dec. 17, 2015 Edited RE: Driver Accel Draft - Ninja Blader - Dec. 26, 2015 OP edited have a look. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Neo - Dec. 26, 2015 Maybe instead of calling the combos "nice", you could elaborate on what makes them useful? RE: Driver Accel Draft - Ninja Blader - Dec. 26, 2015 Edited RE: Driver Accel Draft - Kai-V - Jan. 18, 2016 Finally, these are my revisions. As I had stated, what was already written on Beyblade Wiki should have been used for the beginning, since it was well written ... Does anyone have objections to this being published soon ? Quote:The Accel driver was released as a part of B-01 DX Starter Valkyrie Wing Accel on July 16 2015. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Cookie Bouquets - Jan. 18, 2016 (Jan. 18, 2016 10:53 PM)Kai-V Wrote: Finally, these are my revisions. As I had stated, what was already written on Beyblade Wiki should have been used for the beginning, since it was well written ... I keep reading this part and it just doesn't make sense to me, hahahaha RE: Driver Accel Draft - Mitsu - Jan. 18, 2016 Wyvern Heavy Accel is aggressive defense, not anti-attack. That could probably be taken out. As far as I know, Accel doesn't seem to have any anti-attack usage as a whole either. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Kai-V - Jan. 19, 2016 Did we officially differentiate mobile Defense from Anti-Attack ? I mean, of course we need an Anti-Attack article as soon as possible, quite urgently, to explain what that type even implies, so knowing that it will be explained later, I thought it was fine to just mention it in this article and there will be a link to the Anti-Attack article once it exists. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Neo - Jan. 19, 2016 Hold on, why is Valkyrie Central Fusion listed as a product for Accel ...? RE: Driver Accel Draft - Bey Brad - Jan. 19, 2016 ^ And Valkyrie Spread Survive. Seems like a list for Valkyrie, not Accel. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Cookie Bouquets - Jan. 19, 2016 Quote:Although it has less speed and provides less power to its combination than αssault and Xtreme, it has more stamina than the latter and is a lot more controllable than αssault. This sentence also feels a bit awkward, especially everything after the comma. I guess I'd say something like Quote:Despite the driver having less speed and power in comparison to αssault and Xtreme, it has more stamina and is a lot more controllable than both drivers. RE: Driver Accel Draft - Kai-V - Jan. 19, 2016 (Jan. 19, 2016 2:25 AM)Shirayuki Wrote:Quote:Although it has less speed and provides less power to its combination than αssault and Xtreme, it has more stamina than the latter and is a lot more controllable than αssault. That is the problem though : the way it was first worded is more correct than how you reworded it. Xtreme is technically a lot more controllable than Accel. I will fix that list later then, I just copied and pasted what vikrambeyblade had written hah. RE: Driver Accel Draft - *Ginga* - Jan. 24, 2016 In regards to Xtreme vs Accel with controllability ... In my experience, Xtreme holds a flower pattern really nicely without too awkward of a launch (especially with that cover!), which is something Accel is a lot worse at. However, Xtreme can self KO, especially in the following conditions : a) It is brand new; b) You launch too high from the stadium (or other condtions similar to this, I haven't looked too deep into it), and Xtreme bounces over the Tornado Ridge into an exit. That is one of my main annoyances with Xtreme : it hops the Tornado Ridge a lot if not launched well. Sorry if this was confusing :p |