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Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Airus - Apr. 06, 2015

Inside of a monitor lab that controls a test server inhabited by AIs controlled by human brains, a virus attacks the server. Alex and Nathan must gain the aid of all the gods upholding each of the 200+ countries to have the strength to beat the virus before the server is shut down by it.


Chapter One



RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Airus - Apr. 07, 2015

CHAPTER ONE IN OP. Chapters SHOULD COME OUT EVERY WEEK and poll will update for opinions on the latest chapter. ACCEPTING FEEDBACK


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Favourite - Apr. 12, 2015

Wow! Your story is totally a class apart. YOU ARE TOTALLY A CLASS WRITER.


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Airus - Apr. 12, 2015

(Apr. 12, 2015  9:49 AM)Favourite Wrote: Wow! Your story is totally a class apart. YOU ARE TOTALLY A CLASS WRITER.
Thanks! I'm working on more chapters later, just trying to find time.


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Favourite - Apr. 13, 2015

You are welcome. I will be checking them out whenever I can.


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Favourite - Apr. 16, 2015

By the way, how many chapters are you planning to write?


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - DefStamina88 - Apr. 18, 2015

Being a guy who has had a fairly popular SERIES of stories on here, I gotta say that this is better than what I write, by a long shot. I hope to see this actually get finished. It has a lot of promise to be dropped right now...


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Airus - Apr. 23, 2015

(Apr. 18, 2015  1:36 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: Being a guy who has had a fairly popular SERIES of stories on here, I gotta say that this is better than what I write, by a long shot. I hope to see this actually get finished. It has a lot of promise to be dropped right now...

Why thanks, I really should work on this right now. I'll get Chapter 2 up soon, just gotta start it. I was too busy to find time.


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Favourite - Apr. 23, 2015

By the way, how many chapters are you planning to write?


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Airus - Apr. 24, 2015

idk, just writing.


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Favourite - Apr. 27, 2015

Sorry, it was a very silly question. I too write a bit and I know to not care about how many chapters I will be writing.


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Airus - Apr. 27, 2015

Guys, I can't write at the moment.

My school is doing this thing where we are making things and selling them, and I am one of the people selling so i need to mass produce my product before May 8th, so I will be unable to write for a while.

Within the time I can find, I'll keep updated with the feedback I get and comments.

Sorry,

" Kirito "


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Favourite - Apr. 28, 2015

No problem at all.

Wish you all the very best.


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Favourite - May. 17, 2015

When are you planning to post chapter 2?

(Apr. 07, 2015  10:30 PM)" Kirito Wrote: CHAPTER ONE IN OP. Chapters SHOULD COME OUT EVERY WEEK and poll will update for opinions on the latest chapter. ACCEPTING FEEDBACK

When are you planning to post chapter 2?


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Airus - May. 18, 2015

Well, I'm in a bit of a time crunch. Hopefully will start posting quicker during the summer


RE: Country of Birth [Non-Beyblade Story][CHAPTER ONE IS OUT] - Favourite - May. 19, 2015

Ok, I just do not want you to disappear out of the blue much like almost all other writers with incomplete stories.