(Oct. 28, 2014  9:37 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Yeah now that's a good idea

Anyways I will probably post Episode 3 tonight or something.

---

Episode 3 is up, since episode 2 was too short, I'm making up for it with this one.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 3:
It was Tuesday morning, Kenichi was still asleep inside his bedroom, then suddenly, the alarm clock rang rapidly.

Kenichi: He wakes up and then looks at his schedule.

"-Sigh- I remember now, I have regular school...

wait up... I'm coming"

He brushed his teeth, got dressed and walked downstairs to get some rice for breakfast. He kept looking at his training beyblade whilst eating, which reminded him of the training which needed to be done.

Mrs Sora: "Kenichi! It's time you walked to school."

During his maths class, Kenichi sat staring out the window and seeing the academy, he resumed thinking about his beyblade training and wondered how well he would do.

He questioned to himself "Can I really rank up to level 10? I could barely rail a beyblade through a line by itself. How can I test my skills so far?"

Maths Teacher: He glares at Kenichi and smacks his marking book three times repeatly on Kenichi's desk. He shouted:

"WAKE UP! I asked you to answer this question! But you were far too slow..."

Kenichi Sora: "Oh...I'm sorry...I was just thinking about something."

As Kenichi walks into his form class, he sits down, while the teacher makes her announcements.

Kenichi's Form Teacher: "Alright class, we have a new candidate joining us in class, I would like you to treat her with as much respect as you would like to be treated.

A girl who came in had short rounded hair which was black, gapping in the middle, she wore a typical white school uniform neatly, tied with a ribbon, with a white medium length skirt.

Her name is Shinkai Shio."

Shinkai Shio: "It's very nice to meet you all."

She then walks to her seat whilst people were whispering about her. Kenichi stared at her for a few seconds wondering what she is like.

She glared back at Kenichi and asked:

Shinkai Shio: Excuse me, did you want anything?

Kenichi Sora: Erm...no...

Shinkai Shio: Then please stop staring.

Kenichi let out a sigh, then stared at the board.

When school finished, Kenichi rushed into the Beyblade Academy, and got some more training done, he tried turning his beyblade through cones and knocking heavy blocks over.

The principal looked at him while he was hard at work, then said to himself.

"That boy seems to work harder than most level 1 students, which are slackers, and for a beginner he can do his set course quite well. It's time he used the beyblade he got out his box, this will determine his control on more powerful Beyblades.

Excuse me Kenichi, I think it's time you tried this out."

Kenichi Sora: He looked at the Beyblade his mother bought him and accepted it.

"Thanks, I'll be sure to use this now!"

Principal: "Just make sure to practice with it in your spare time."

Kenichi went outside the school field, using his training beyblade to race on the grass. He inspected the grass and found that the terrain was tougher than the normal stadiums.

Then he started to use the beyblade he was given and found the beyblade was capable of going through the grass a lot better, shredding it away. Kenichi however found it harder to control.

"I have to get the hang of this, but how?"

Kenichi looked around the school and wondered how he could practice control, and then he remembered the training room with the line training. Kenichi lined up his launcher to the line once again and launched his beyblade , he tried to rail it towards the line but the more powerful beyblade was harder to control.

"Stay on the line, I need to focus my mind on control, rather than just power....

Wait that's it!"

He used the power of the beyblade and focused it on a certain direction, he controlled the beyblade and boosted it's power to run through the line accurately.

"I did it? Great! Now I have to challenge someone."

The principal walked in to check on Kenichi, and then he said to him:

"I see your finally really to step in and battle against an opponent, I hope you have fun, but remember what you have learnt."

Kenichi Sora: "Got it!"

He looked around the building, peering through every corridor. After a few minutes he found a large room, full of stadiums and seats, it's ceiling was made of thick glass and the room had white and grey walls, and a lot of players battling, trading parts, training or just socialising.

He then overheard one player mumbled: "-Sigh- looks like the winner is Shinkai Shio...again..."

Kenichi Sora: "Shinkai? You mean the new girl in my school? What are you doing here?"

Kenichi watched her skills with an astonished look. Shinkai was able to take down other players easily which amazed Kenichi whilst everyone left with a scowl. Shinkai walked away with little emotion and then found Kenichi just standing there.

Shinkai Shio: "...What are you doing here?"

Kenichi Sora: "I-I come here too...and I just wanted to come here and practice and battle with someone but then I saw your skills and..."

Shinkai Shio: "Oh, is that right?! Mind your own business and get out if my way."

Kenichi Sora: "You can't talk to me that way, I'm a student here too."

Shinkai Shio: "And...?"

Kenichi Sora: "You should treat me with as much respect as you want to be treated, but to get it through to you, I want to challenge you to a beyblade match, I needed to practice against an actual opponent anyway."

Shinkai Shio: "I am treating you how I'm treated...and why should I battle you?"

Kenichi Sora: "I need to train, I also wanted to observe your skills by battling you."

Shinkai Shio: "Your being ridiculous...I don't have to do anything. However, I will show my skills just to teach you a lesson to keep bothering me and I'm not afraid to show-off my skills because I can predict that you will never catch up to my level."

Kenichi Sora: "OK, let's begin...

3...2...1.....Go Shoot!

Kenichi's beyblade races around the stadium and was about to hit Shinkai's beyblade. He used the power of his beyblade in full force to try and knock Shinkai's beyblade out. As he peered down, he looked at Shinkai's beyblade, it was a dark navy colour, when it spun, it seemed fair and rounded, it carried a sharp like bottom and it was at a medium height, it then attack Kenichi's beyblade which careened off it's path.

Kenichi Sora: "Impressive, it seems to be able to consistently spin in perfect motion and controlled, but what's making it so strong?"

Shinkai Shio: "How pathetic?! You can't even back up your so-called skills. I'll just get rid of you right now!"

Kenichi Sora: "I see, the sharpness of the core it's using allows it to reduce friction, but what good is that if it doesn't attack as well?"

Shinkai Shio: "I play the endurance style so I can just wear you down...but don't think that's the only skill I have. I have many other skills which include attacking your Beyblade! I own Samebi, a powerful endurance type with strong attacks, it is because of that you will lose for sure."

Kenichi Sora: "Endurance? Does that mean your beyblade can spin longer than mine by itself? That's not good.

I have got to find a way to defeat her, but how? All I have is a quick burst of power and my beyblade would become totally drained. Wait a minute....

Because of her lower friction, she can be pushed around easier? I wonder...

Attack Samebi!"

Kenichi's Beyblade dashes around the stadium and trails behind Samebi ready to attack, it strikes and hits Samebi away a small distance.

"Damn, not good enough, and my beyblade is starting to drain it's rotation."

Shinkai Shio: "Then I guess I will have to put you out of your misery...MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Tsunami Wave

Kenichi's Beyblade gets extinguished by Samebi.

Kenichi Sora: "I-I lost? My beyblade is broken!"

Shinkai Shio: ...Not even a challenge...Your so weak, I see no reason to worry about you. Don't ever waste my time again or else..."

Kenichi Sora: In defeat, he looks down upset, then quietly replies:

"Yes...Shinkai..."

The principal walks towards Kenichi:

Principal: "I watched your battle young boy."

Kenichi Sora: "I know, I failed badly..."

Principal: "That's not it at all, I was very impressed by your beyblading skills, despite your loss, you knew a strategy, and you lasted much longer than an average blader in this academy alone."

He reached out a beyblade inside his pocket.

"That's why I wanted to give you this, you have shown you were capable of controlling that beyblade, and as it was destroyed, this one is a fine replacement, it's durable and strong as long as you can use it.

This is Shaman Saber, it's a powerful attack type, but you must learn to control it, and find the right style, if you do then I will reward you with this Turbo RPM Gear, it's a very powerful gear which can give bursts of power extremely quickly and will activate when you command it to, I hope you do well."

Kenichi Sora: "Thanks a lot, you have been a real help to me. Looks like I have a long way to go..."

(Oct. 28, 2014  9:37 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Yeah now that's a good idea

Anyways I will probably post Episode 3 tonight or something.

---

Episode 3 is up, since episode 2 was too short, I'm making up for it with this one.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 3:
It was Tuesday morning, Kenichi was still asleep inside his bedroom, then suddenly, the alarm clock rang rapidly.

Kenichi: He wakes up and then looks at his schedule.

"-Sigh- I remember now, I have regular school...

wait up... I'm coming"

He brushed his teeth, got dressed and walked downstairs to get some rice for breakfast. He kept looking at his training beyblade whilst eating, which reminded him of the training which needed to be done.

Mrs Sora: "Kenichi! It's time you walked to school."

During his maths class, Kenichi sat staring out the window and seeing the academy, he resumed thinking about his beyblade training and wondered how well he would do.

He questioned to himself "Can I really rank up to level 10? I could barely rail a beyblade through a line by itself. How can I test my skills so far?"

Maths Teacher: He glares at Kenichi and smacks his marking book three times repeatly on Kenichi's desk. He shouted:

"WAKE UP! I asked you to answer this question! But you were far too slow..."

Kenichi Sora: "Oh...I'm sorry...I was just thinking about something."

As Kenichi walks into his form class, he sits down, while the teacher makes her announcements.

Kenichi's Form Teacher: "Alright class, we have a new candidate joining us in class, I would like you to treat her with as much respect as you would like to be treated.

A girl who came in had short rounded hair which was black, gapping in the middle, she wore a typical white school uniform neatly, tied with a ribbon, with a white medium length skirt.

Her name is Shinkai Shio."

Shinkai Shio: "It's very nice to meet you all."

She then walks to her seat whilst people were whispering about her. Kenichi stared at her for a few seconds wondering what she was like.

She glared back at Kenichi and asked:

Shinkai Shio: Excuse me, did you want anything?

Kenichi Sora: Erm...no...

Shinkai Shio: Then please stop staring.

Kenichi let out a sigh, then stared at the board.

When school finished, Kenichi rushed into the Beyblade Academy, and got some more training done, he tried turning his beyblade through cones and knocking heavy blocks over.

The principal looked at him while he was hard at work, then said to himself.

"That boy seems to work harder than most level 1 students, which are slackers, and for a beginner he can do his set course quite well. It's time he used the beyblade he got out his box, this will determine his control on more powerful Beyblades.

Excuse me Kenichi, I think it's time you tried this out."

Kenichi Sora: He looked at the Beyblade his mother bought him and accepted it.

"Thanks, I'll be sure to use this now!"

Principal: "Just make sure to practice with it in your spare time."

Kenichi went outside the school field, using his training beyblade to race on the grass. He inspected the grass and found that the terrain was tougher than the normal stadiums.

Then he started to use the beyblade he was given and found the beyblade was capable of going through the grass a lot better, shredding it away. Kenichi however found it harder to control.

"I have to get the hang of this, but how?"

Kenichi looked around the school and wondered how he could practice control, and then he remembered the training room with the line training. Kenichi lined up his launcher to the line once again and launched his beyblade , he tried to rail it towards the line but the more powerful beyblade was harder to control.

"Stay on the line, I need to focus my mind on control, rather than just power....

Wait that's it!"

He used the power of the beyblade and focused it on a certain direction, he controlled the beyblade and boosted it's power to run through the line accurately.

"I did it? Great! Now I have to challenge someone."

The principal walked in to check on Kenichi, and then he said to him:

"I see your finally really to step in and battle against an opponent, I hope you have fun, but remember what you have learnt."

Kenichi Sora: "Got it!"

He looked around the building, peering through every corridor. After a few minutes he found a large room, full of stadiums and seats, it's ceiling was made of thick glass and the room had white and grey walls, and a lot of players battling, trading parts, training or just socialising.

He then overheard one player mumbled: "-Sigh- looks like the winner is Shinkai Shio...again..."

Kenichi Sora: "Shinkai? You mean the new girl in my school? What are you doing here?"

Kenichi watched her skills with an astonished look. Shinkai was able to take down other players easily which amazed Kenichi whilst everyone left with a scowl. Shinkai walked away with little emotion and then found Kenichi just standing there.

Shinkai Shio: "...What are you doing here?"

Kenichi Sora: "I-I come here too...and I just wanted to come here and practice and battle with someone but then I saw your skills and..."

Shinkai Shio: "Oh, is that right?! Mind your own business and get out if my way."

Kenichi Sora: "You can't talk to me that way, I'm a student here too."

Shinkai Shio: "And...?"

Kenichi Sora: "You should treat me with as much respect as you want to be treated, but to get it through to you, I want to challenge you to a beyblade match, I needed to practice against an actual opponent anyway."

Shinkai Shio: "I am treating you how I'm treated...and why should I battle you?"

Kenichi Sora: "I need to train, I also wanted to observe your skills by battling you."

Shinkai Shio: "Your being ridiculous...I don't have to do anything. However, I will show my skills just to teach you a lesson to keep bothering me and I'm not afraid to show-off my skills because I can predict that you will never catch up to my level."

Kenichi Sora: "OK, let's begin...

3...2...1.....Go Shoot!

Kenichi's beyblade races around the stadium and was about to hit Shinkai's beyblade. He used the power of his beyblade in full force to try and knock Shinkai's beyblade out. As he peered down, he looked at Shinkai's beyblade, it was a dark navy colour, when it spun, it seemed fair and rounded, it carried a sharp like bottom and it was at a medium height, it then attack Kenichi's beyblade which careened off it's path.

Kenichi Sora: "Impressive, it seems to be able to consistently spin in perfect motion and controlled, but what's making it so strong?"

Shinkai Shio: "How pathetic?! You can't even back up your so-called skills. I'll just get rid of you right now!"

Kenichi Sora: "I see, the sharpness of the core it's using allows it to reduce friction, but what good is that if it doesn't attack as well?"

Shinkai Shio: "I play the endurance style so I can just wear you down...but don't think that's the only skill I have. I have many other skills which include attacking your Beyblade! I own Samebi, a powerful endurance type with strong attacks, it is because of that you will lose for sure."

Kenichi Sora: "Endurance? Does that mean your beyblade can spin longer than mine by itself? That's not good.

I have got to find a way to defeat her, but how? All I have is a quick burst of power and my beyblade would become totally drained. Wait a minute....

Because of her lower friction, she can be pushed around easier? I wonder...

Attack Samebi!"

Kenichi's Beyblade dashes around the stadium and trails behind Samebi ready to attack, it strikes and hits Samebi away a small distance.

"Damn, not good enough, and my beyblade is starting to drain it's rotation."

Shinkai Shio: "Then I guess I will have to put you out of your misery...MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Tsunami Wave

Kenichi's Beyblade gets extinguished by Samebi.

Kenichi Sora: "I-I lost? My beyblade is broken!"

Shinkai Shio: ...Not even a challenge...Your so weak, I see no reason to worry about you. Don't ever waste my time again or else..."

Kenichi Sora: In defeat, he looks down upset, then quietly replies:

"Yes...Shinkai..."

The principal walks towards Kenichi:

Principal: "I watched your battle young boy."

Kenichi Sora: "I know, I failed badly..."

Principal: "That's not it at all, I was very impressed by your beyblading skills, despite your loss, you knew a strategy, and you lasted much longer than an average blader in this academy alone."

He reached out a beyblade inside his pocket.

"That's why I wanted to give you this, you have shown you were capable of controlling that beyblade, and as it was destroyed, this one is a fine replacement, it's durable and strong as long as you can use it.

This is Shaman Saber, it's a powerful attack type, but you must learn to control it, and find the right style, if you do then I will reward you with this Turbo RPM Gear, it's a very powerful gear which can give bursts of power extremely quickly and will activate when you command it to, I hope you do well."

Kenichi Sora: "Thanks a lot, you have been a real help to me. Looks like I have a long way to go..."

(Oct. 28, 2014  11:33 PM)Kazuto. Wrote:

(Oct. 28, 2014  9:37 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Yeah now that's a good idea

Anyways I will probably post Episode 3 tonight or something.

---

Episode 3 is up, since episode 2 was too short, I'm making up for it with this one.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 3:
It was Tuesday morning, Kenichi was still asleep inside his bedroom, then suddenly, the alarm clock rang rapidly.

Kenichi: He wakes up and then looks at his schedule.

"-Sigh- I remember now, I have regular school...

wait up... I'm coming"

He brushed his teeth, got dressed and walked downstairs to get some rice for breakfast. He kept looking at his training beyblade whilst eating, which reminded him of the training which needed to be done.

Mrs Sora: "Kenichi! It's time you walked to school."

During his maths class, Kenichi sat staring out the window and seeing the academy, he resumed thinking about his beyblade training and wondered how well he would do.

He questioned to himself "Can I really rank up to level 10? I could barely rail a beyblade through a line by itself. How can I test my skills so far?"

Maths Teacher: He glares at Kenichi and smacks his marking book three times repeatly on Kenichi's desk. He shouted:

"WAKE UP! I asked you to answer this question! But you were far too slow..."

Kenichi Sora: "Oh...I'm sorry...I was just thinking about something."

As Kenichi walks into his form class, he sits down, while the teacher makes her announcements.

Kenichi's Form Teacher: "Alright class, we have a new candidate joining us in class, I would like you to treat her with as much respect as you would like to be treated.

A girl who came in had short rounded hair which was black, gapping in the middle, she wore a typical white school uniform neatly, tied with a ribbon, with a white medium length skirt.

Her name is Shinkai Shio."

Shinkai Shio: "It's very nice to meet you all."

She then walks to her seat whilst people were whispering about her. Kenichi stared at her for a few seconds wondering what she was like.

She glared back at Kenichi and asked:

Shinkai Shio: Excuse me, did you want anything?

Kenichi Sora: Erm...no...

Shinkai Shio: Then please stop staring.

Kenichi let out a sigh, then stared at the board.

When school finished, Kenichi rushed into the Beyblade Academy, and got some more training done, he tried turning his beyblade through cones and knocking heavy blocks over.

The principal looked at him while he was hard at work, then said to himself.

"That boy seems to work harder than most level 1 students, which are slackers, and for a beginner he can do his set course quite well. It's time he used the beyblade he got out his box, this will determine his control on more powerful Beyblades.

Excuse me Kenichi, I think it's time you tried this out."

Kenichi Sora: He looked at the Beyblade his mother bought him and accepted it.

"Thanks, I'll be sure to use this now!"

Principal: "Just make sure to practice with it in your spare time."

Kenichi went outside the school field, using his training beyblade to race on the grass. He inspected the grass and found that the terrain was tougher than the normal stadiums.

Then he started to use the beyblade he was given and found the beyblade was capable of going through the grass a lot better, shredding it away. Kenichi however found it harder to control.

"I have to get the hang of this, but how?"

Kenichi looked around the school and wondered how he could practice control, and then he remembered the training room with the line training. Kenichi lined up his launcher to the line once again and launched his beyblade , he tried to rail it towards the line but the more powerful beyblade was harder to control.

"Stay on the line, I need to focus my mind on control, rather than just power....

Wait that's it!"

He used the power of the beyblade and focused it on a certain direction, he controlled the beyblade and boosted it's power to run through the line accurately.

"I did it? Great! Now I have to challenge someone."

The principal walked in to check on Kenichi, and then he said to him:

"I see your finally really to step in and battle against an opponent, I hope you have fun, but remember what you have learnt."

Kenichi Sora: "Got it!"

He looked around the building, peering through every corridor. After a few minutes he found a large room, full of stadiums and seats, it's ceiling was made of thick glass and the room had white and grey walls, and a lot of players battling, trading parts, training or just socialising.

He then overheard one player mumbled: "-Sigh- looks like the winner is Shinkai Shio...again..."

Kenichi Sora: "Shinkai? You mean the new girl in my school? What are you doing here?"

Kenichi watched her skills with an astonished look. Shinkai was able to take down other players easily which amazed Kenichi whilst everyone left with a scowl. Shinkai walked away with little emotion and then found Kenichi just standing there.

Shinkai Shio: "...What are you doing here?"

Kenichi Sora: "I-I come here too...and I just wanted to come here and practice and battle with someone but then I saw your skills and..."

Shinkai Shio: "Oh, is that right?! Mind your own business and get out if my way."

Kenichi Sora: "You can't talk to me that way, I'm a student here too."

Shinkai Shio: "And...?"

Kenichi Sora: "You should treat me with as much respect as you want to be treated, but to get it through to you, I want to challenge you to a beyblade match, I needed to practice against an actual opponent anyway."

Shinkai Shio: "I am treating you how I'm treated...and why should I battle you?"

Kenichi Sora: "I need to train, I also wanted to observe your skills by battling you."

Shinkai Shio: "Your being ridiculous...I don't have to do anything. However, I will show my skills just to teach you a lesson to keep bothering me and I'm not afraid to show-off my skills because I can predict that you will never catch up to my level."

Kenichi Sora: "OK, let's begin...

3...2...1.....Go Shoot!

Kenichi's beyblade races around the stadium and was about to hit Shinkai's beyblade. He used the power of his beyblade in full force to try and knock Shinkai's beyblade out. As he peered down, he looked at Shinkai's beyblade, it was a dark navy colour, when it spun, it seemed fair and rounded, it carried a sharp like bottom and it was at a medium height, it then attack Kenichi's beyblade which careened off it's path.

Kenichi Sora: "Impressive, it seems to be able to consistently spin in perfect motion and controlled, but what's making it so strong?"

Shinkai Shio: "How pathetic?! You can't even back up your so-called skills. I'll just get rid of you right now!"

Kenichi Sora: "I see, the sharpness of the core it's using allows it to reduce friction, but what good is that if it doesn't attack as well?"

Shinkai Shio: "I play the endurance style so I can just wear you down...but don't think that's the only skill I have. I have many other skills which include attacking your Beyblade! I own Samebi, a powerful endurance type with strong attacks, it is because of that you will lose for sure."

Kenichi Sora: "Endurance? Does that mean your beyblade can spin longer than mine by itself? That's not good.

I have got to find a way to defeat her, but how? All I have is a quick burst of power and my beyblade would become totally drained. Wait a minute....

Because of her lower friction, she can be pushed around easier? I wonder...

Attack Samebi!"

Kenichi's Beyblade dashes around the stadium and trails behind Samebi ready to attack, it strikes and hits Samebi away a small distance.

"Damn, not good enough, and my beyblade is starting to drain it's rotation."

Shinkai Shio: "Then I guess I will have to put you out of your misery...MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Tsunami Wave

Kenichi's Beyblade gets extinguished by Samebi.

Kenichi Sora: "I-I lost? My beyblade is broken!"

Shinkai Shio: ...Not even a challenge...Your so weak, I see no reason to worry about you. Don't ever waste my time again or else..."

Kenichi Sora: In defeat, he looks down upset, then quietly replies:

"Yes...Shinkai..."

The principal walks towards Kenichi:

Principal: "I watched your battle young boy."

Kenichi Sora: "I know, I failed badly..."

Principal: "That's not it at all, I was very impressed by your beyblading skills, despite your loss, you knew a strategy, and you lasted much longer than an average blader in this academy alone."

He reached out a beyblade inside his pocket.

"That's why I wanted to give you this, you have shown you were capable of controlling that beyblade, and as it was destroyed, this one is a fine replacement, it's durable and strong as long as you can use it.

This is Shaman Saber, it's a powerful attack type, but you must learn to control it, and find the right style, if you do then I will reward you with this Turbo RPM Gear, it's a very powerful gear which can give bursts of power extremely quickly and will activate when you command it to, I hope you do well."

Kenichi Sora: "Thanks a lot, you have been a real help to me. Looks like I have a long way to go..."

Awesome

I need to come up with Narasimha,Ryujin and Alectryon's Mecha Function

(Oct. 28, 2014  11:42 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote:

(Oct. 28, 2014  11:33 PM)Kazuto. Wrote:

(Oct. 28, 2014  9:37 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Yeah now that's a good idea

Anyways I will probably post Episode 3 tonight or something.

---

Episode 3 is up, since episode 2 was too short, I'm making up for it with this one.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 3:
It was Tuesday morning, Kenichi was still asleep inside his bedroom, then suddenly, the alarm clock rang rapidly.

Kenichi: He wakes up and then looks at his schedule.

"-Sigh- I remember now, I have regular school...

wait up... I'm coming"

He brushed his teeth, got dressed and walked downstairs to get some rice for breakfast. He kept looking at his training beyblade whilst eating, which reminded him of the training which needed to be done.

Mrs Sora: "Kenichi! It's time you walked to school."

During his maths class, Kenichi sat staring out the window and seeing the academy, he resumed thinking about his beyblade training and wondered how well he would do.

He questioned to himself "Can I really rank up to level 10? I could barely rail a beyblade through a line by itself. How can I test my skills so far?"

Maths Teacher: He glares at Kenichi and smacks his marking book three times repeatly on Kenichi's desk. He shouted:

"WAKE UP! I asked you to answer this question! But you were far too slow..."

Kenichi Sora: "Oh...I'm sorry...I was just thinking about something."

As Kenichi walks into his form class, he sits down, while the teacher makes her announcements.

Kenichi's Form Teacher: "Alright class, we have a new candidate joining us in class, I would like you to treat her with as much respect as you would like to be treated.

A girl who came in had short rounded hair which was black, gapping in the middle, she wore a typical white school uniform neatly, tied with a ribbon, with a white medium length skirt.

Her name is Shinkai Shio."

Shinkai Shio: "It's very nice to meet you all."

She then walks to her seat whilst people were whispering about her. Kenichi stared at her for a few seconds wondering what she was like.

She glared back at Kenichi and asked:

Shinkai Shio: Excuse me, did you want anything?

Kenichi Sora: Erm...no...

Shinkai Shio: Then please stop staring.

Kenichi let out a sigh, then stared at the board.

When school finished, Kenichi rushed into the Beyblade Academy, and got some more training done, he tried turning his beyblade through cones and knocking heavy blocks over.

The principal looked at him while he was hard at work, then said to himself.

"That boy seems to work harder than most level 1 students, which are slackers, and for a beginner he can do his set course quite well. It's time he used the beyblade he got out his box, this will determine his control on more powerful Beyblades.

Excuse me Kenichi, I think it's time you tried this out."

Kenichi Sora: He looked at the Beyblade his mother bought him and accepted it.

"Thanks, I'll be sure to use this now!"

Principal: "Just make sure to practice with it in your spare time."

Kenichi went outside the school field, using his training beyblade to race on the grass. He inspected the grass and found that the terrain was tougher than the normal stadiums.

Then he started to use the beyblade he was given and found the beyblade was capable of going through the grass a lot better, shredding it away. Kenichi however found it harder to control.

"I have to get the hang of this, but how?"

Kenichi looked around the school and wondered how he could practice control, and then he remembered the training room with the line training. Kenichi lined up his launcher to the line once again and launched his beyblade , he tried to rail it towards the line but the more powerful beyblade was harder to control.

"Stay on the line, I need to focus my mind on control, rather than just power....

Wait that's it!"

He used the power of the beyblade and focused it on a certain direction, he controlled the beyblade and boosted it's power to run through the line accurately.

"I did it? Great! Now I have to challenge someone."

The principal walked in to check on Kenichi, and then he said to him:

"I see your finally really to step in and battle against an opponent, I hope you have fun, but remember what you have learnt."

Kenichi Sora: "Got it!"

He looked around the building, peering through every corridor. After a few minutes he found a large room, full of stadiums and seats, it's ceiling was made of thick glass and the room had white and grey walls, and a lot of players battling, trading parts, training or just socialising.

He then overheard one player mumbled: "-Sigh- looks like the winner is Shinkai Shio...again..."

Kenichi Sora: "Shinkai? You mean the new girl in my school? What are you doing here?"

Kenichi watched her skills with an astonished look. Shinkai was able to take down other players easily which amazed Kenichi whilst everyone left with a scowl. Shinkai walked away with little emotion and then found Kenichi just standing there.

Shinkai Shio: "...What are you doing here?"

Kenichi Sora: "I-I come here too...and I just wanted to come here and practice and battle with someone but then I saw your skills and..."

Shinkai Shio: "Oh, is that right?! Mind your own business and get out if my way."

Kenichi Sora: "You can't talk to me that way, I'm a student here too."

Shinkai Shio: "And...?"

Kenichi Sora: "You should treat me with as much respect as you want to be treated, but to get it through to you, I want to challenge you to a beyblade match, I needed to practice against an actual opponent anyway."

Shinkai Shio: "I am treating you how I'm treated...and why should I battle you?"

Kenichi Sora: "I need to train, I also wanted to observe your skills by battling you."

Shinkai Shio: "Your being ridiculous...I don't have to do anything. However, I will show my skills just to teach you a lesson to keep bothering me and I'm not afraid to show-off my skills because I can predict that you will never catch up to my level."

Kenichi Sora: "OK, let's begin...

3...2...1.....Go Shoot!

Kenichi's beyblade races around the stadium and was about to hit Shinkai's beyblade. He used the power of his beyblade in full force to try and knock Shinkai's beyblade out. As he peered down, he looked at Shinkai's beyblade, it was a dark navy colour, when it spun, it seemed fair and rounded, it carried a sharp like bottom and it was at a medium height, it then attack Kenichi's beyblade which careened off it's path.

Kenichi Sora: "Impressive, it seems to be able to consistently spin in perfect motion and controlled, but what's making it so strong?"

Shinkai Shio: "How pathetic?! You can't even back up your so-called skills. I'll just get rid of you right now!"

Kenichi Sora: "I see, the sharpness of the core it's using allows it to reduce friction, but what good is that if it doesn't attack as well?"

Shinkai Shio: "I play the endurance style so I can just wear you down...but don't think that's the only skill I have. I have many other skills which include attacking your Beyblade! I own Samebi, a powerful endurance type with strong attacks, it is because of that you will lose for sure."

Kenichi Sora: "Endurance? Does that mean your beyblade can spin longer than mine by itself? That's not good.

I have got to find a way to defeat her, but how? All I have is a quick burst of power and my beyblade would become totally drained. Wait a minute....

Because of her lower friction, she can be pushed around easier? I wonder...

Attack Samebi!"

Kenichi's Beyblade dashes around the stadium and trails behind Samebi ready to attack, it strikes and hits Samebi away a small distance.

"Damn, not good enough, and my beyblade is starting to drain it's rotation."

Shinkai Shio: "Then I guess I will have to put you out of your misery...MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Tsunami Wave

Kenichi's Beyblade gets extinguished by Samebi.

Kenichi Sora: "I-I lost? My beyblade is broken!"

Shinkai Shio: ...Not even a challenge...Your so weak, I see no reason to worry about you. Don't ever waste my time again or else..."

Kenichi Sora: In defeat, he looks down upset, then quietly replies:

"Yes...Shinkai..."

The principal walks towards Kenichi:

Principal: "I watched your battle young boy."

Kenichi Sora: "I know, I failed badly..."

Principal: "That's not it at all, I was very impressed by your beyblading skills, despite your loss, you knew a strategy, and you lasted much longer than an average blader in this academy alone."

He reached out a beyblade inside his pocket.

"That's why I wanted to give you this, you have shown you were capable of controlling that beyblade, and as it was destroyed, this one is a fine replacement, it's durable and strong as long as you can use it.

This is Shaman Saber, it's a powerful attack type, but you must learn to control it, and find the right style, if you do then I will reward you with this Turbo RPM Gear, it's a very powerful gear which can give bursts of power extremely quickly and will activate when you command it to, I hope you do well."

Kenichi Sora: "Thanks a lot, you have been a real help to me. Looks like I have a long way to go..."

Awesome

I need to come up with Narasimha,Ryujin and Alectryon's Mecha Function

Excellent...I can't wait to see these.

(Oct. 29, 2014  12:21 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Wow, not too bad actually, I do like Ryujins the most.

(Oct. 29, 2014  12:27 AM)Kazuto. Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  12:21 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Wow, not too bad actually, I do like Ryujins the most.

Actually i re-named them

Narasimha:Crested Zaber Slash (Yes Zaber)

Alectryon:Flashing Sound Crater

Ryujinuperior Blaze-Shot

(Oct. 29, 2014  3:22 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Here is episode 4 of Beyblade Mecha Sentoki, hope you enjoy it.

Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 4:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Another day at the Beyblade academy, Kenichi tried out his new given beyblade, Shaman Saber.

[Image: sl5uvd.jpg]

He stared at his beyblade, looking at the four large blades on it.

Kenichi Sora: "It looks really nice, but is there any power behind it's vicious looking wheel? Guess I'll have to practice and see."

He went outside and launched his beyblade towards the ground, baron and spacious, there was a lot of room for his beyblade to rome around, his beyblade raced with ferocious speed, however it also moved in erratic patterns crashing into walls and digging through gravel.

"Darn it, I cannot control this beyblade at all, it's too fast and powerful, and even with all my concentration, it still moves in erratic patterns. There's got to be a way to resist it."

A random student overheard what Kenichi said and walked up to him, he had brown mid length hair, he wore a grey thick waist jacket full of tools and stationary, he was slightly chubby in stature, he wore goggles on his head and he seemed as tall as Kenichi.

Random Student: "Having trouble with stabilising your beyblade? I have a solution."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait, who are you?"

Random Student: "My name is Aian Meisu, I'm a beyblade student but I'm also a part time mechanic for the school, I try to help you see."

Kenichi Sora: "Hey Aian, what do you think the solution is?"

Aian Meisu: "Come with me."

They both walked inside the academy, he led him inside an enormous room, it was another training room, but it contained more machinery, required for higher level trainers. Aian pointed at a machine with a treadmill function and two heavy bars.

Aian Meisu: "That's the one you should use, the two heavy bars above the machines track will limit your erratic movements, the automatic rolling track will oppose the direction you should be going, which is forward, your objective is to go through the track with your power while the two bars hold your beyblade in a straight position.

This program is sort of like training wheels on a bicycle, you can test your power, focus, control and strategy while the track keeps your beyblade from destroying the area and moving out of control.

Your objective is to get through this automatic track all the way till the length of the two bars end, got it?"

Kenichi Sora: "Alright, I'm ready...

...3...2...1 Go Shoot!"

Shaman boosts forward opposing the automatic track's direction, as it boosts with full force, it wobbles and vibrates the two bars aside it.

"Shaman, full power! Attack!"

It jets forward causing friction to the track, eventually the area smokes while Shaman dashes forwards, finishing it's course.

Kenichi Sora: "That's so cool, my Shaman was able to bypass the track with it's full power, alright, I'm ready to test my skills out."

Aian Meisu: "Alright, but are you sure your ready? I mean, it's only been one test."

Kenichi Sora: "Sure, I will test my skills so far."

Aian Meisu: "Alright then, we'll see.

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Golemoth, stabilise position!"

Kenichi Sora: "Huh? What are you doing?"

Aian Meisu: "My beyblade Golemoth Stone [Image: 70ygck.jpg] uses a defensive style, it exceeds in it therefore it's a defense type, meaning I can resist attacks better than other types."

Kenichi Sora: "My Shaman is out of control, I can barely manoeuvre it...

Ok I think I got it, Shaman attack!"

Shaman charged towards Golemoth and smashes into it, but Golemoth stays stationary while deflecting Shaman.

"Your defense ability is good, better than I thought."

Aian Meisu: "My beyblade is heavier than yours, so I have better momentum, the thick walls on my Beyblades Metal Weapon can shield off your attacks and take no damage."

Shaman constantly erratically moves and smashes into walls, and hitting Golemoth very loosely and poorly.

Aian Meisu: "Times up! Golemoth, MECHA FUNCTION!."

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Chunks of rocks build up and are sent crashing towards Shaman, eventually the rocks are smashed into Shaman therefore wearing it down and losing it's rotation completely.

Kenichi Sora: "I lost again? I thought the training was suppose to help."

Aian Meisu: "Well the test you did would only be really completed if the two metal bars didn't rattle and shake too hard, it had to be done with perfect accuracy and power, leaving the bars barely shook, never mind, you can battle again next time, but remember to practice, even if it's your own way."

Aian left whilst Kenichi thought about what Aian said and then look at his Beyblade.

Kenichi Sora: "My own way...? What does that mean?

WAIT! My Shaman has the ability to boost power but the problem is that it is hard to control...maybe if I can control the boosting ability and allow it to move at a certain direction then it can aim with perfect accuracy at the opponent with direct hit. Then I would have truly mastered Shaman's ability to boost at certain directions."

Kenichi gets his prop out ready for practicing in the training centre

Kenichi Sora: "I must remember to keep Shaman on line by boosting it fowards. 3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!"

Shaman boosts fowards on a straight line on the ground with it's speed accelerating afterwards but then goes off line

Kenichi Sora: "It didn't go further enough. The power is too strong that I can't control it well enough yet. I have got to keep my arm and launcher steady..."

He trained for hours, mastering the power of Shaman

Kenichi Sora: "Alright, Shaman!

I almost got it! Time to do it again until I get it right."

Shaman dashes towards into a straight line and boosted, and then completed the line.

"I got it now, I have to know my power and use it in a focused destination, and I think I got the hang of Shaman."

Kenichi runs towards Aian.

Kenichi Sora: "I'm ready now."

Aian Meisu: "For what?"

Kenichi Sora: "I am finally prepared to challenge you once again now that I have had practice with my accuracy"

Aian Meisu: "Is that so? Fine...but I won't hold back.

3...2...1... Go Shoot!"

Golemoth holds a steady position, but as it does, Shaman boosts towards it and smashes it further away, sending Golemoth off center from the stadium.

Aian Meisu: "Not bad, you are powerful enough to break through my defenses, but you haven't seen my heavy attack power.

Golemoth, attack Shaman!"

Golemoth strikes Shaman and delivers heavy blows towards it, it then charges into Shaman and smashes it towards the wall.

Kenichi Sora: "Shaman, push back Golemoth.

Full power!"

Shaman rapidly moves causing Golemoth to be smashed back, they both collide against each other with a series of clashes and strong attacks draining each other's spin. Shaman and Golemoth cause huge impact and were on par with each other's skills and abilities.

Aian Meisu: "Your doing well, but can you face...

MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Massive chunks of rock build up and collide towards Shaman, smashing it all over the place.

Kenichi Sora: He begins to look worried and then asked himself:

"What am I going to do now? I can't last his Mecha Function attack forever, the last time it happened I lost to it, but I wonder...

If I can do Mecha Function? Let's try, MECHA FUNCTION!

The Mecha Function command causes Shaman to light up and flash the area with an extremely bright light, as everything around was white, Kenichi looked in astonishment. As it faded away, it revealed the outcome, Golemoth stopped spinning while Shaman still remained rotating.

Kenichi Sora: "I won?.... I did it! Alright that training paid off, and the power of Shaman was amazing."

Aian looked in shock at first, then he smiled.

Aian Meisu: "Well done Kenichi, I can't believe you actually beat me, considering I'm a Level 10 beyblader, currently #5 best in this academy right now I think."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait? You mean the fifth best student here is a fatso?"

Aian Meisu(Angrily): "Hey! Come back here, apologise for that fat joke right now!"

Aian was about to chase after him until the principal arrived.

Principal: "Well done both of you, I was very impressed, a level 1 student actually beat a level 10 student, Kenichi, you are clearly more capable of being more than Level 1, I am proud.

But I forgot to mention I accidently left the Turbo RPM Gear inside, but I see you have mastered it now, and quickly too which is impressive."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait, really? That's great, thanks! Thank you as well Aian, for helping me train and battling with me."

Aian Meisu: "Ah it was no problem, I help any student.

Hey, you want to be friends."

Kenichi Sora: "Haha sure thing, we can train together"

Then he thought to himself.

"Soon, I can finally face Shinkai again and beat her, I hope this day comes."

I may do episode 5 and 6 tomorrow, maybe even episode 7.
EDIT: BTW, kudos to Dual for the italics action idea, it looks presentable.

(Oct. 29, 2014  5:34 AM)KirbyRobot Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  3:22 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Here is episode 4 of Beyblade Mecha Sentoki, hope you enjoy it.

Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 4:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Another day at the Beyblade academy, Kenichi tried out his new given beyblade, Shaman Saber.

[Image: sl5uvd.jpg]

He stared at his beyblade, looking at the four large blades on it.

Kenichi Sora: "It looks really nice, but is there any power behind it's vicious looking wheel? Guess I'll have to practice and see."

He went outside and launched his beyblade towards the ground, baron and spacious, there was a lot of room for his beyblade to rome around, his beyblade raced with ferocious speed, however it also moved in erratic patterns crashing into walls and digging through gravel.

"Darn it, I cannot control this beyblade at all, it's too fast and powerful, and even with all my concentration, it still moves in erratic patterns. There's got to be a way to resist it."

A random student overheard what Kenichi said and walked up to him, he had brown mid length hair, he wore a grey thick waist jacket full of tools and stationary, he was slightly chubby in stature, he wore goggles on his head and he seemed as tall as Kenichi.

Random Student: "Having trouble with stabilising your beyblade? I have a solution."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait, who are you?"

Random Student: "My name is Aian Meisu, I'm a beyblade student but I'm also a part time mechanic for the school, I try to help you see."

Kenichi Sora: "Hey Aian, what do you think the solution is?"

Aian Meisu: "Come with me."

They both walked inside the academy, he led him inside an enormous room, it was another training room, but it contained more machinery, required for higher level trainers. Aian pointed at a machine with a treadmill function and two heavy bars.

Aian Meisu: "That's the one you should use, the two heavy bars above the machines track will limit your erratic movements, the automatic rolling track will oppose the direction you should be going, which is forward, your objective is to go through the track with your power while the two bars hold your beyblade in a straight position.

This program is sort of like training wheels on a bicycle, you can test your power, focus, control and strategy while the track keeps your beyblade from destroying the area and moving out of control.

Your objective is to get through this automatic track all the way till the length of the two bars end, got it?"

Kenichi Sora: "Alright, I'm ready...

...3...2...1 Go Shoot!"

Shaman boosts forward opposing the automatic track's direction, as it boosts with full force, it wobbles and vibrates the two bars aside it.

"Shaman, full power! Attack!"

It jets forward causing friction to the track, eventually the area smokes while Shaman dashes forwards, finishing it's course.

Kenichi Sora: "That's so cool, my Shaman was able to bypass the track with it's full power, alright, I'm ready to test my skills out."

Aian Meisu: "Alright, but are you sure your ready? I mean, it's only been one test."

Kenichi Sora: "Sure, I will test my skills so far."

Aian Meisu: "Alright then, we'll see.

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Golemoth, stabilise position!"

Kenichi Sora: "Huh? What are you doing?"

Aian Meisu: "My beyblade Golemoth Stone [Image: 70ygck.jpg] uses a defensive style, it exceeds in it therefore it's a defense type, meaning I can resist attacks better than other types."

Kenichi Sora: "My Shaman is out of control, I can barely manoeuvre it...

Ok I think I got it, Shaman attack!"

Shaman charged towards Golemoth and smashes into it, but Golemoth stays stationary while deflecting Shaman.

"Your defense ability is good, better than I thought."

Aian Meisu: "My beyblade is heavier than yours, so I have better momentum, the thick walls on my Beyblades Metal Weapon can shield off your attacks and take no damage."

Shaman constantly erratically moves and smashes into walls, and hitting Golemoth very loosely and poorly.

Aian Meisu: "Times up! Golemoth, MECHA FUNCTION!."

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Chunks of rocks build up and are sent crashing towards Shaman, eventually the rocks are smashed into Shaman therefore wearing it down and losing it's rotation completely.

Kenichi Sora: "I lost again? I thought the training was suppose to help."

Aian Meisu: "Well the test you did would only be really completed if the two metal bars didn't rattle and shake too hard, it had to be done with perfect accuracy and power, leaving the bars barely shook, never mind, you can battle again next time, but remember to practice, even if it's your own way."

Aian left whilst Kenichi thought about what Aian said and then look at his Beyblade.

Kenichi Sora: "My own way...? What does that mean?

WAIT! My Shaman has the ability to boost power but the problem is that it is hard to control...maybe if I can control the boosting ability and allow it to move at a certain direction then it can aim with perfect accuracy at the opponent with direct hit. Then I would have truly mastered Shaman's ability to boost at certain directions."

Kenichi gets his prop out ready for practicing in the training centre

Kenichi Sora: "I must remember to keep Shaman on line by boosting it fowards. 3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!"

Shaman boosts fowards on a straight line on the ground with it's speed accelerating afterwards but then goes off line

Kenichi Sora: "It didn't go further enough. The power is too strong that I can't control it well enough yet. I have got to keep my arm and launcher steady..."

He trained for hours, mastering the power of Shaman

Kenichi Sora: "Alright, Shaman!

I almost got it! Time to do it again until I get it right."

Shaman dashes towards into a straight line and boosted, and then completed the line.

"I got it now, I have to know my power and use it in a focused destination, and I think I got the hang of Shaman."

Kenichi runs towards Aian.

Kenichi Sora: "I'm ready now."

Aian Meisu: "For what?"

Kenichi Sora: "I am finally prepared to challenge you once again now that I have had practice with my accuracy"

Aian Meisu: "Is that so? Fine...but I won't hold back.

3...2...1... Go Shoot!"

Golemoth holds a steady position, but as it does, Shaman boosts towards it and smashes it further away, sending Golemoth off center from the stadium.

Aian Meisu: "Not bad, you are powerful enough to break through my defenses, but you haven't seen my heavy attack power.

Golemoth, attack Shaman!"

Golemoth strikes Shaman and delivers heavy blows towards it, it then charges into Shaman and smashes it towards the wall.

Kenichi Sora: "Shaman, push back Golemoth.

Full power!"

Shaman rapidly moves causing Golemoth to be smashed back, they both collide against each other with a series of clashes and strong attacks draining each other's spin. Shaman and Golemoth cause huge impact and were on par with each other's skills and abilities.

Aian Meisu: "Your doing well, but can you face...

MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Massive chunks of rock build up and collide towards Shaman, smashing it all over the place.

Kenichi Sora: He begins to look worried and then asked himself:

"What am I going to do now? I can't last his Mecha Function attack forever, the last time it happened I lost to it, but I wonder...

If I can do Mecha Function? Let's try, MECHA FUNCTION!

The Mecha Function command causes Shaman to light up and flash the area with an extremely bright light, as everything around was white, Kenichi looked in astonishment. As it faded away, it revealed the outcome, Golemoth stopped spinning while Shaman still remained rotating.

Kenichi Sora: "I won?.... I did it! Alright that training paid off, and the power of Shaman was amazing."

Aian looked in shock at first, then he smiled.

Aian Meisu: "Well done Kenichi, I can't believe you actually beat me, considering I'm a Level 10 beyblader, currently #5 best in this academy right now I think."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait? You mean the fifth best student here is a fatso?"

Aian Meisu(Angrily): "Hey! Come back here, apologise for that fat joke right now!"

Aian was about to chase after him until the principal arrived.

Principal: "Well done both of you, I was very impressed, a level 1 student actually beat a level 10 student, Kenichi, you are clearly more capable of being more than Level 1, I am proud.

But I forgot to mention I accidently left the Turbo RPM Gear inside, but I see you have mastered it now, and quickly too which is impressive."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait, really? That's great, thanks! Thank you as well Aian, for helping me train and battling with me."

Aian Meisu: "Ah it was no problem, I help any student.

Hey, you want to be friends."

Kenichi Sora: "Haha sure thing, we can train together"

Then he thought to himself.

"Soon, I can finally face Shinkai again and beat her, I hope this day comes."

I may do episode 5 and 6 tomorrow, maybe even episode 7.
EDIT: BTW, kudos to Dual for the italics action idea, it looks presentable.

OOOOOOOOOOOH SNAP! EPISODE 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EDIT; Wait... manoeuvre? is dat how dats spelled? I mean I'm not scholar but I'm not sure dats how das' spelled. Like I said disclaimer; I'm not a schoolar (IF ANYBODY GETS THE REFERENCE I GIVE YOU COOKIES!)

(Oct. 29, 2014  11:45 AM)~Pharmist~ Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  5:34 AM)KirbyRobot Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  3:22 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Here is episode 4 of Beyblade Mecha Sentoki, hope you enjoy it.

Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 4:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Another day at the Beyblade academy, Kenichi tried out his new given beyblade, Shaman Saber.

[Image: sl5uvd.jpg]

He stared at his beyblade, looking at the four large blades on it.

Kenichi Sora: "It looks really nice, but is there any power behind it's vicious looking wheel? Guess I'll have to practice and see."

He went outside and launched his beyblade towards the ground, baron and spacious, there was a lot of room for his beyblade to rome around, his beyblade raced with ferocious speed, however it also moved in erratic patterns crashing into walls and digging through gravel.

"Darn it, I cannot control this beyblade at all, it's too fast and powerful, and even with all my concentration, it still moves in erratic patterns. There's got to be a way to resist it."

A random student overheard what Kenichi said and walked up to him, he had brown mid length hair, he wore a grey thick waist jacket full of tools and stationary, he was slightly chubby in stature, he wore goggles on his head and he seemed as tall as Kenichi.

Random Student: "Having trouble with stabilising your beyblade? I have a solution."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait, who are you?"

Random Student: "My name is Aian Meisu, I'm a beyblade student but I'm also a part time mechanic for the school, I try to help you see."

Kenichi Sora: "Hey Aian, what do you think the solution is?"

Aian Meisu: "Come with me."

They both walked inside the academy, he led him inside an enormous room, it was another training room, but it contained more machinery, required for higher level trainers. Aian pointed at a machine with a treadmill function and two heavy bars.

Aian Meisu: "That's the one you should use, the two heavy bars above the machines track will limit your erratic movements, the automatic rolling track will oppose the direction you should be going, which is forward, your objective is to go through the track with your power while the two bars hold your beyblade in a straight position.

This program is sort of like training wheels on a bicycle, you can test your power, focus, control and strategy while the track keeps your beyblade from destroying the area and moving out of control.

Your objective is to get through this automatic track all the way till the length of the two bars end, got it?"

Kenichi Sora: "Alright, I'm ready...

...3...2...1 Go Shoot!"

Shaman boosts forward opposing the automatic track's direction, as it boosts with full force, it wobbles and vibrates the two bars aside it.

"Shaman, full power! Attack!"

It jets forward causing friction to the track, eventually the area smokes while Shaman dashes forwards, finishing it's course.

Kenichi Sora: "That's so cool, my Shaman was able to bypass the track with it's full power, alright, I'm ready to test my skills out."

Aian Meisu: "Alright, but are you sure your ready? I mean, it's only been one test."

Kenichi Sora: "Sure, I will test my skills so far."

Aian Meisu: "Alright then, we'll see.

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Golemoth, stabilise position!"

Kenichi Sora: "Huh? What are you doing?"

Aian Meisu: "My beyblade Golemoth Stone [Image: 70ygck.jpg] uses a defensive style, it exceeds in it therefore it's a defense type, meaning I can resist attacks better than other types."

Kenichi Sora: "My Shaman is out of control, I can barely manoeuvre it...

Ok I think I got it, Shaman attack!"

Shaman charged towards Golemoth and smashes into it, but Golemoth stays stationary while deflecting Shaman.

"Your defense ability is good, better than I thought."

Aian Meisu: "My beyblade is heavier than yours, so I have better momentum, the thick walls on my Beyblades Metal Weapon can shield off your attacks and take no damage."

Shaman constantly erratically moves and smashes into walls, and hitting Golemoth very loosely and poorly.

Aian Meisu: "Times up! Golemoth, MECHA FUNCTION!."

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Chunks of rocks build up and are sent crashing towards Shaman, eventually the rocks are smashed into Shaman therefore wearing it down and losing it's rotation completely.

Kenichi Sora: "I lost again? I thought the training was suppose to help."

Aian Meisu: "Well the test you did would only be really completed if the two metal bars didn't rattle and shake too hard, it had to be done with perfect accuracy and power, leaving the bars barely shook, never mind, you can battle again next time, but remember to practice, even if it's your own way."

Aian left whilst Kenichi thought about what Aian said and then look at his Beyblade.

Kenichi Sora: "My own way...? What does that mean?

WAIT! My Shaman has the ability to boost power but the problem is that it is hard to control...maybe if I can control the boosting ability and allow it to move at a certain direction then it can aim with perfect accuracy at the opponent with direct hit. Then I would have truly mastered Shaman's ability to boost at certain directions."

Kenichi gets his prop out ready for practicing in the training centre

Kenichi Sora: "I must remember to keep Shaman on line by boosting it fowards. 3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!"

Shaman boosts fowards on a straight line on the ground with it's speed accelerating afterwards but then goes off line

Kenichi Sora: "It didn't go further enough. The power is too strong that I can't control it well enough yet. I have got to keep my arm and launcher steady..."

He trained for hours, mastering the power of Shaman

Kenichi Sora: "Alright, Shaman!

I almost got it! Time to do it again until I get it right."

Shaman dashes towards into a straight line and boosted, and then completed the line.

"I got it now, I have to know my power and use it in a focused destination, and I think I got the hang of Shaman."

Kenichi runs towards Aian.

Kenichi Sora: "I'm ready now."

Aian Meisu: "For what?"

Kenichi Sora: "I am finally prepared to challenge you once again now that I have had practice with my accuracy"

Aian Meisu: "Is that so? Fine...but I won't hold back.

3...2...1... Go Shoot!"

Golemoth holds a steady position, but as it does, Shaman boosts towards it and smashes it further away, sending Golemoth off center from the stadium.

Aian Meisu: "Not bad, you are powerful enough to break through my defenses, but you haven't seen my heavy attack power.

Golemoth, attack Shaman!"

Golemoth strikes Shaman and delivers heavy blows towards it, it then charges into Shaman and smashes it towards the wall.

Kenichi Sora: "Shaman, push back Golemoth.

Full power!"

Shaman rapidly moves causing Golemoth to be smashed back, they both collide against each other with a series of clashes and strong attacks draining each other's spin. Shaman and Golemoth cause huge impact and were on par with each other's skills and abilities.

Aian Meisu: "Your doing well, but can you face...

MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Massive chunks of rock build up and collide towards Shaman, smashing it all over the place.

Kenichi Sora: He begins to look worried and then asked himself:

"What am I going to do now? I can't last his Mecha Function attack forever, the last time it happened I lost to it, but I wonder...

If I can do Mecha Function? Let's try, MECHA FUNCTION!

The Mecha Function command causes Shaman to light up and flash the area with an extremely bright light, as everything around was white, Kenichi looked in astonishment. As it faded away, it revealed the outcome, Golemoth stopped spinning while Shaman still remained rotating.

Kenichi Sora: "I won?.... I did it! Alright that training paid off, and the power of Shaman was amazing."

Aian looked in shock at first, then he smiled.

Aian Meisu: "Well done Kenichi, I can't believe you actually beat me, considering I'm a Level 10 beyblader, currently #5 best in this academy right now I think."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait? You mean the fifth best student here is a fatso?"

Aian Meisu(Angrily): "Hey! Come back here, apologise for that fat joke right now!"

Aian was about to chase after him until the principal arrived.

Principal: "Well done both of you, I was very impressed, a level 1 student actually beat a level 10 student, Kenichi, you are clearly more capable of being more than Level 1, I am proud.

But I forgot to mention I accidently left the Turbo RPM Gear inside, but I see you have mastered it now, and quickly too which is impressive."

Kenichi Sora: "Wait, really? That's great, thanks! Thank you as well Aian, for helping me train and battling with me."

Aian Meisu: "Ah it was no problem, I help any student.

Hey, you want to be friends."

Kenichi Sora: "Haha sure thing, we can train together"

Then he thought to himself.

"Soon, I can finally face Shinkai again and beat her, I hope this day comes."

I may do episode 5 and 6 tomorrow, maybe even episode 7.
EDIT: BTW, kudos to Dual for the italics action idea, it looks presentable.

OOOOOOOOOOOH SNAP! EPISODE 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EDIT; Wait... manoeuvre? is dat how dats spelled? I mean I'm not scholar but I'm not sure dats how das' spelled. Like I said disclaimer; I'm not a schoolar (IF ANYBODY GETS THE REFERENCE I GIVE YOU COOKIES!)

Actually, there are different ways of spelling it so before you write anything about spelling errors...do some research.

(Oct. 29, 2014  4:20 PM)KirbyRobot Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  11:45 AM)~Pharmist~ Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  5:34 AM)KirbyRobot Wrote: OOOOOOOOOOOH SNAP! EPISODE 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EDIT; Wait... manoeuvre? is dat how dats spelled? I mean I'm not scholar but I'm not sure dats how das' spelled. Like I said disclaimer; I'm not a schoolar (IF ANYBODY GETS THE REFERENCE I GIVE YOU COOKIES!)

Actually, there are different ways of spelling it so before you write anything about spelling errors...do some research.

Windows says thats not how it's spelled. I'll go do some research.

*googles it* oh okay

(Oct. 29, 2014  5:00 PM)~Pharmist~ Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  4:20 PM)KirbyRobot Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  11:45 AM)~Pharmist~ Wrote: Actually, there are different ways of spelling it so before you write anything about spelling errors...do some research.

Windows says thats not how it's spelled. I'll go do some research.

*googles it* oh okay

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maneuver

Yeah, I know anyone can edit Wikipedia but it shows different ways of spelling it.

Anyways, I have been informed episode 5 is coming very soon.

(Oct. 29, 2014  8:52 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 5:

Episode 6 will come soon, MAYBE today so stay tuned!

Spoiler (Click to View)

At the Beyblade academy, Aian and Kenichi just got their results back from the 'Beyblade parts and physics' test and Aian and Kenichi were about to leave their individual classrooms and meet in the corridor.

Aian Meisu: "Look at what I got for my test results. I got 100%"

Kenichi Sora: "That's great, you are really smart."

Aian Meisu: "What did you get?"

Kenichi Sora: "Oh...I got 67%. I have been studying all night and I only got 67%?"

Aian Meisu: "Hey, it's a good start actually. So how about we go to the training facility and practice?"

Aian and Kenichi ran in the corridors and they both accidentally bump into a girl. She had blonde smooth hair, one black glove and vest, a white skirt and white boots.

Aian Meisu: "Oh I'm so sorry! Are you alright?"

Female Student: "No! I don't think so. If only your fat body wasn't in my way!"

Aian Meisu: "Hey! No fat jokes!"

Kenichi Sora: "-snickers- OK...sure...but as for you, who are you?"

Female Student: "You don't know me...? Well then let me introduce myself. My name is Taikuki Nami and I am currently #4 best blader in this academy!"

Kenichi Sora: "Y-You are?!"

Taikuki Nami: "Yeah...WHY DO YOU SOUND SURPRISED?!!! Is it because I am a girl?"

Kenichi Sora: "N-No...that's not it, I was just surprised tha-"

Taikuki Nami: "You were surprised because I'm a girl weren't you...?"

Kenichi Sora: "No! That isn't true"

But Taikuki walked off in anger whilst Aian and Kenichi were curious about her skills. Later on, Aian and Kenichi went to the training facility and Aian helped Kenichi practice his Mecha Function.

Aian Meisu: "Come on Kenichi! Your still not ready yet! You may have beaten me with you Mecha Function but you still have yet to control it!"

Kenichi Sora: "Got it! MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Sunrise Saber

Kenichi's Mecha Function managed to destroy nearly every obstacle in the Stadium

Kenichi Sora: "Wow! I almost perfected it!"

Aian Meisu: "That's right! All you have to do is practice a few more times and your Mecha Function will be complete"

Suddenly there was a huge commotion in a different area.

Taikuki Nami: "I told you! No losers allowed!"

Student 1: "But everyone has the rights to use this facility, you can't tell us what to do!"

Taikuki Nami: "Very well then!" -clicks fingers-

Taikuki's friends step in and scare the remaining students except for Aian, Kenichi and another student who wanted to battle Taikuki to win their rights to use the facility back

Student 1: "Well...Well I'm not afraid to step in. You may have scared off everyone else but not me! I challenge you to a battle and if I win then we win our rights back!"

Taikuki Nami: "Fine...but if I win...then you can never come back!"

Student 1: "Grr, FINE!"

Student 2: "Is he really going to battle Taikuki? She is so strong."

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Taikuki's Beyblade was in the centre whilst the other Beyblade raced around the stadium recklessly

Taikuki Nami: "This is going to be too easy! I have never been beaten by the likes of you before...I have the most powerful Beyblade, Simurgh Sky!"

Student 1: "U-Uh! Just because you have a powerful Beyblade...DOESN'T MEAN IT CAN BEAT MY COMBO!"

Taikuki Nami: "What are you talking about? You can never stand a chance against me!"

Taikuki's Friends (Both): "Yeah, THATS RIGHT."

Simurgh deflects all of the other Beyblade's attack and the other Beyblade stands no chance against Taikuki's attack pattern. Simurgh then flies up the ceiling

Taikuki Nami: "It's time...I finish you off quickly. MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Taikuki's Mecha Function shifts her opponent'a movements and then her Beyblade blows her opponents Beyblade to pieces and throws it away with her tornado. Aian and Kenichi were amazed with Taikuki's skills.

Student 1: "NOOOOO!!! It can't be...and you also destroyed my Beyblade too. Isn't beating me enough?"

Taikuki Nami: "Just get lost or else!"

Student 2: "I think you better do as she says, you made a deal!"

Student 1: "Grrr, NOOOOO!!!"

Student 1 and 2 ran off whilst Aian and Kenichi were angry with what Taikuki was doing.

Kenichi Sora: "Hey! Now wait a minute...you can't just terrorise these poor kids like that. In fact you have no right to ban students from this facility!"

Taikuki Nami: "Oh just shut up! I am a high rank blader and-"

Aian Meisu: "And you think you can do whatever you want because your a high rank student?! That is not how it works here. Now apologise to those kids or I'm reporting this to the principal!"

Taikuki Nami: "If you want me to listen then you have to beat me..."

Taikuki's Friend 1: "But you'll never beat her!"

Taikuki's Friend 2: "Yeah, that's right! She will destroy you if you try..."

Kenichi Sora: "...I'm willing to take that risk..."

Aian Meisu: "Wait, Kenichi don't...you cannot beat her yet because she is in a higher rank...higher than me..,but that's about to change because I'll battle her and I'll be the one to defeat her."

Taikuki Nami: "Huh, bring it on!"

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Golemoth and Simurgh clash into each other at equal power and collision a few times. Simurgh then moves to the centre and Golemoth tries attacking it but Simurgh dodges it.

Aian Meisu: "Golemoth!"

Taikuki Nami: "Attack!"

Aian Meisu: "W-What?!"

Simurgh counterattacks Golemoth in a stable position and then loses Golemoth's balance and endurance.

Aian Meisu: "No way! My rotation is decreasing. I get it, She is in a stable position so when I attack, she can counterattack. I'll just have to wear her down."

Golemoth tries colliding with Simurgh but gets deflected

Aian Meisu: "Ahh! How did my defense ACTUALLY get deflected? Did she somehow make me use my own defense against myself?"

Taikuki Nami: "That's right! You have little endurance left"

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Miss Taikuki is going to win this battle"

Aian Meisu: "I will not hold back just yet, especially not to a drama queen like you!"

Both Golemoth and Simurgh clash each other violently and collide with each other. Then Golemoth is shown to gets even weaker.

Taikuki Nami: "Don't bother. I have the ability to wobble on command and attack you at any angle meaning I can dodge your attacks and attack you at any angle without you getting in my way!"

Aian Meisu: "Agh, looks like I have no choice but to use my last shot to beat her...MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Taikuki Nami: "Hm, this is perfect...MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Chunks of rocks build up and are sent crashing towards Simurgh but Simurgh's Mecha Function destroys the Rocks and shifts the pressure of the atmosphere which then works against Golemoh thus breaking Golemoth in the process. Kenichi observed Taikuki's Mecha Function and realised that whilst it was strong it was also slow.

Aian Meisu: "NOOOOO!!! GOLEMOTH!!!"

Kenichi Sora: "Grrr, what is your problem Taikuki?! Do you have any idea what you did to Aian's Beyblade?!"

Taikuki Nami: "He shouldn't have challenged me...his Beyblade would have lasted longer"

Kenichi Sora: "That's the thing, you shouldn't even be breaking anyone's Beyblades...but you did anyway"

Taikuki Nami: "Oh yeah, I'll destroy your Beyblade too if I have to"

Kenichi Sora: "I guess your asking for a battle, WELL CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!"

Aian Meisu: "NO! Kenichi, your not even ready yet and your Mecha Function isn't fully perfected yet!"

Kenichi Sora: "If it helps everyone get their rights back then I'll do whatever it takes to get our rights back"

Taikuki Nami: "Uhh, fine...fine but hurry up because me and the girls are going clothes shopping so hurry up!"

Kenichi thought about how Aian and other people were beaten by Taikuki's Mecha Function and is trying to find a way to resolve that obstacle.

Kenichi Sora (To Himself): "That Shift Atmos Mecha Function was incredibly powerful, it managed to crush Golemoth.

I watched her attack slowly break Golemoth...

Wait, that's it! All I have to do is distract her beyblade from it's Mecha Function. I just need to find the right timing of opening and strike her down with my Mecha Function, her attacks are powerful but also slow."

Taikuki's Friends (Both): "GO TAIKUKI! GO TAIKUKI!"

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Shaman and Simurgh circle around the stadium and then Shaman moves at a different pattern to confuse Taikuki

Taikuki Nami: "It's no use. Unlike Golemoth, Simurgh can attack at different angles as it can wobble and tilt at will without losing endurance so it doesn't matter which angle you try to aim at, I will always counterattack your every movement!"

Kenichi Sora: "She's right, I can't attack without her suspecting."

Simurgh knocks Shaman back and deflects any attacks that were thrown at Simurgh. Simurgh then rapidly attacks Shaman at every angle and lifts it up the air.

Kenichi Sora: "She has the ability to counterattack, wobble and her Mecha Function...Maybe if I charge at the precise moment then I can cause Simurgh to use it's power against it...GO SHAMAN!"

Shaman charges at Simurgh and they both collide. They both then smash into each other at equal strength and power.

Kenichi Sora: "I need to find an opening when she unleashes her Mecha Function. Aian couldn't do it because his Beyblade moves slowly whilst my Beyblade can move fast enough to pass through her attacks."

Taikuki Nami: "As long as I can counter any attack you throw, you can't stop me."

Kenichi Sora: "Go Shaman!!!"

Taikuki Nami: "Wait, WHAT?!"

Shaman strikes Simurgh up the sky and then they both hit each other at rapid fire speed and it also cause some cracks in the stadium. Taikuki then starts getting angry.

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Is it just me or is Taikuki actually having trouble?"

Taikuki Nami: "SHUT UP!!! I can do this!!!"

Simurgh lights up and violently attacks Shaman at every angle. Shaman then dodges and counterattacks Simurgh in which they both lose a lot of rotation.

Taikuki Nami: "It's time... I have had enough...MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Simurgh's Mecha Function created a shift in the air pressure which pressurises and limits the movement of Shaman.

Kenichi Sora: "All I need to do is find an opening by seeing which area has the least air pressure...

Kenichi analyses the Mecha Function and then finds an opening

...There it is. CHARGE, SHAMAN!!!"

Shaman charges at Simurgh thus distracting it's Mecha Function and knocking it at the very edge. Shaman then rapidly attacks Simurgh.

Kenichi Sora: "That's it, MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Sunrise Saber

Shaman's saber lights up and Shaman uses to strike at Simurgh eliminating it's powers and it's rotation knocking it out in an instant. Taikuki looks at Kenichi surprised.

Kenichi Sora: "Huh...I did it, I DID IT!!! I actually won. Well Taikuki, you'll have to give everyone back their rights to use the facility...and apologised to those you have hurt, especially Aian!"

Taikuki Nami: "Mmmmmm! I-I'm sorry OK! I guess I messed up, huh? And I'm especially sorry for breaking your Beyblade, Aian. I'll...send it to the repair shop right away!"

Aian Meisu: "...It's alright...apology accepted"

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Oh my...did Taikuki actually lose? Not cool Taikuki...not cool"

Both of Taikuki's friends ditch Taikuki after she lost.

Taikuki Nami: "W-Wait! Don't go!...Alright, FINE JUST GO!

And as for you two, I hope your happy...I guess I'll go now..."

[i]Kenichi starts to think about this for a moment and then stops Taikuki.[i]

Kenichi Sora: "WAIT! Taikuki...?"

Taikuki Nami: "Y-Yeah?"

Kenichi Sora: "If you don't have anyone to turn to then you can become friends with me and Aian...if you want to of course. Together we can become stronger and we can all beat Shinkai together."

Taikuki Nami: "...Beat Shinkai? You mean it. Alright, I'll join you two if that's what you want."

Kenichi Sora: "Alright! Let's use the facility and practice!"

Aian Meisu: "Cool! Let's do it tommorow!

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:41 PM)Kazuto. Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  8:52 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 5:

Episode 6 will come soon, MAYBE today so stay tuned!

Spoiler (Click to View)

At the Beyblade academy, Aian and Kenichi just got their results back from the 'Beyblade parts and physics' test and Aian and Kenichi were about to leave their individual classrooms and meet in the corridor.

Aian Meisu: "Look at what I got for my test results. I got 100%"

Kenichi Sora: "That's great, you are really smart."

Aian Meisu: "What did you get?"

Kenichi Sora: "Oh...I got 67%. I have been studying all night and I only got 67%?"

Aian Meisu: "Hey, it's a good start actually. So how about we go to the training facility and practice?"

Aian and Kenichi ran in the corridors and they both accidentally bump into a girl. She had blonde smooth hair, one black glove and vest, a white skirt and white boots.

Aian Meisu: "Oh I'm so sorry! Are you alright?"

Female Student: "No! I don't think so. If only your fat body wasn't in my way!"

Aian Meisu: "Hey! No fat jokes!"

Kenichi Sora: "-snickers- OK...sure...but as for you, who are you?"

Female Student: "You don't know me...? Well then let me introduce myself. My name is Taikuki Nami and I am currently #4 best blader in this academy!"

Kenichi Sora: "Y-You are?!"

Taikuki Nami: "Yeah...WHY DO YOU SOUND SURPRISED?!!! Is it because I am a girl?"

Kenichi Sora: "N-No...that's not it, I was just surprised tha-"

Taikuki Nami: "You were surprised because I'm a girl weren't you...?"

Kenichi Sora: "No! That isn't true"

But Taikuki walked off in anger whilst Aian and Kenichi were curious about her skills. Later on, Aian and Kenichi went to the training facility and Aian helped Kenichi practice his Mecha Function.

Aian Meisu: "Come on Kenichi! Your still not ready yet! You may have beaten me with you Mecha Function but you still have yet to control it!"

Kenichi Sora: "Got it! MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Sunrise Saber

Kenichi's Mecha Function managed to destroy nearly every obstacle in the Stadium

Kenichi Sora: "Wow! I almost perfected it!"

Aian Meisu: "That's right! All you have to do is practice a few more times and your Mecha Function will be complete"

Suddenly there was a huge commotion in a different area.

Taikuki Nami: "I told you! No losers allowed!"

Student 1: "But everyone has the rights to use this facility, you can't tell us what to do!"

Taikuki Nami: "Very well then!" -clicks fingers-

Taikuki's friends step in and scare the remaining students except for Aian, Kenichi and another student who wanted to battle Taikuki to win their rights to use the facility back

Student 1: "Well...Well I'm not afraid to step in. You may have scared off everyone else but not me! I challenge you to a battle and if I win then we win our rights back!"

Taikuki Nami: "Fine...but if I win...then you can never come back!"

Student 1: "Grr, FINE!"

Student 2: "Is he really going to battle Taikuki? She is so strong."

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Taikuki's Beyblade was in the centre whilst the other Beyblade raced around the stadium recklessly

Taikuki Nami: "This is going to be too easy! I have never been beaten by the likes of you before...I have the most powerful Beyblade, Simurgh Sky!"

Student 1: "U-Uh! Just because you have a powerful Beyblade...DOESN'T MEAN IT CAN BEAT MY COMBO!"

Taikuki Nami: "What are you talking about? You can never stand a chance against me!"

Taikuki's Friends (Both): "Yeah, THATS RIGHT."

Simurgh deflects all of the other Beyblade's attack and the other Beyblade stands no chance against Taikuki's attack pattern. Simurgh then flies up the ceiling

Taikuki Nami: "It's time...I finish you off quickly. MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Taikuki's Mecha Function shifts her opponent'a movements and then her Beyblade blows her opponents Beyblade to pieces and throws it away with her tornado. Aian and Kenichi were amazed with Taikuki's skills.

Student 1: "NOOOOO!!! It can't be...and you also destroyed my Beyblade too. Isn't beating me enough?"

Taikuki Nami: "Just get lost or else!"

Student 2: "I think you better do as she says, you made a deal!"

Student 1: "Grrr, NOOOOO!!!"

Student 1 and 2 ran off whilst Aian and Kenichi were angry with what Taikuki was doing.

Kenichi Sora: "Hey! Now wait a minute...you can't just terrorise these poor kids like that. In fact you have no right to ban students from this facility!"

Taikuki Nami: "Oh just shut up! I am a high rank blader and-"

Aian Meisu: "And you think you can do whatever you want because your a high rank student?! That is not how it works here. Now apologise to those kids or I'm reporting this to the principal!"

Taikuki Nami: "If you want me to listen then you have to beat me..."

Taikuki's Friend 1: "But you'll never beat her!"

Taikuki's Friend 2: "Yeah, that's right! She will destroy you if you try..."

Kenichi Sora: "...I'm willing to take that risk..."

Aian Meisu: "Wait, Kenichi don't...you cannot beat her yet because she is in a higher rank...higher than me..,but that's about to change because I'll battle her and I'll be the one to defeat her."

Taikuki Nami: "Huh, bring it on!"

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Golemoth and Simurgh clash into each other at equal power and collision a few times. Simurgh then moves to the centre and Golemoth tries attacking it but Simurgh dodges it.

Aian Meisu: "Golemoth!"

Taikuki Nami: "Attack!"

Aian Meisu: "W-What?!"

Simurgh counterattacks Golemoth in a stable position and then loses Golemoth's balance and endurance.

Aian Meisu: "No way! My rotation is decreasing. I get it, She is in a stable position so when I attack, she can counterattack. I'll just have to wear her down."

Golemoth tries colliding with Simurgh but gets deflected

Aian Meisu: "Ahh! How did my defense ACTUALLY get deflected? Did she somehow make me use my own defense against myself?"

Taikuki Nami: "That's right! You have little endurance left"

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Miss Taikuki is going to win this battle"

Aian Meisu: "I will not hold back just yet, especially not to a drama queen like you!"

Both Golemoth and Simurgh clash each other violently and collide with each other. Then Golemoth is shown to gets even weaker.

Taikuki Nami: "Don't bother. I have the ability to wobble on command and attack you at any angle meaning I can dodge your attacks and attack you at any angle without you getting in my way!"

Aian Meisu: "Agh, looks like I have no choice but to use my last shot to beat her...MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Taikuki Nami: "Hm, this is perfect...MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Chunks of rocks build up and are sent crashing towards Simurgh but Simurgh's Mecha Function destroys the Rocks and shifts the pressure of the atmosphere which then works against Golemoh thus breaking Golemoth in the process. Kenichi observed Taikuki's Mecha Function and realised that whilst it was strong it was also slow.

Aian Meisu: "NOOOOO!!! GOLEMOTH!!!"

Kenichi Sora: "Grrr, what is your problem Taikuki?! Do you have any idea what you did to Aian's Beyblade?!"

Taikuki Nami: "He shouldn't have challenged me...his Beyblade would have lasted longer"

Kenichi Sora: "That's the thing, you shouldn't even be breaking anyone's Beyblades...but you did anyway"

Taikuki Nami: "Oh yeah, I'll destroy your Beyblade too if I have to"

Kenichi Sora: "I guess your asking for a battle, WELL CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!"

Aian Meisu: "NO! Kenichi, your not even ready yet and your Mecha Function isn't fully perfected yet!"

Kenichi Sora: "If it helps everyone get their rights back then I'll do whatever it takes to get our rights back"

Taikuki Nami: "Uhh, fine...fine but hurry up because me and the girls are going clothes shopping so hurry up!"

Kenichi thought about how Aian and other people were beaten by Taikuki's Mecha Function and is trying to find a way to resolve that obstacle.

Kenichi Sora (To Himself): "That Shift Atmos Mecha Function was incredibly powerful, it managed to crush Golemoth.

I watched her attack slowly break Golemoth...

Wait, that's it! All I have to do is distract her beyblade from it's Mecha Function. I just need to find the right timing of opening and strike her down with my Mecha Function, her attacks are powerful but also slow."

Taikuki's Friends (Both): "GO TAIKUKI! GO TAIKUKI!"

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Shaman and Simurgh circle around the stadium and then Shaman moves at a different pattern to confuse Taikuki

Taikuki Nami: "It's no use. Unlike Golemoth, Simurgh can attack at different angles as it can wobble and tilt at will without losing endurance so it doesn't matter which angle you try to aim at, I will always counterattack your every movement!"

Kenichi Sora: "She's right, I can't attack without her suspecting."

Simurgh knocks Shaman back and deflects any attacks that were thrown at Simurgh. Simurgh then rapidly attacks Shaman at every angle and lifts it up the air.

Kenichi Sora: "She has the ability to counterattack, wobble and her Mecha Function...Maybe if I charge at the precise moment then I can cause Simurgh to use it's power against it...GO SHAMAN!"

Shaman charges at Simurgh and they both collide. They both then smash into each other at equal strength and power.

Kenichi Sora: "I need to find an opening when she unleashes her Mecha Function. Aian couldn't do it because his Beyblade moves slowly whilst my Beyblade can move fast enough to pass through her attacks."

Taikuki Nami: "As long as I can counter any attack you throw, you can't stop me."

Kenichi Sora: "Go Shaman!!!"

Taikuki Nami: "Wait, WHAT?!"

Shaman strikes Simurgh up the sky and then they both hit each other at rapid fire speed and it also cause some cracks in the stadium. Taikuki then starts getting angry.

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Is it just me or is Taikuki actually having trouble?"

Taikuki Nami: "SHUT UP!!! I can do this!!!"

Simurgh lights up and violently attacks Shaman at every angle. Shaman then dodges and counterattacks Simurgh in which they both lose a lot of rotation.

Taikuki Nami: "It's time... I have had enough...MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Simurgh's Mecha Function created a shift in the air pressure which pressurises and limits the movement of Shaman.

Kenichi Sora: "All I need to do is find an opening by seeing which area has the least air pressure...

Kenichi analyses the Mecha Function and then finds an opening

...There it is. CHARGE, SHAMAN!!!"

Shaman charges at Simurgh thus distracting it's Mecha Function and knocking it at the very edge. Shaman then rapidly attacks Simurgh.

Kenichi Sora: "That's it, MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Sunrise Saber

Shaman's saber lights up and Shaman uses to strike at Simurgh eliminating it's powers and it's rotation knocking it out in an instant. Taikuki looks at Kenichi surprised.

Kenichi Sora: "Huh...I did it, I DID IT!!! I actually won. Well Taikuki, you'll have to give everyone back their rights to use the facility...and apologised to those you have hurt, especially Aian!"

Taikuki Nami: "Mmmmmm! I-I'm sorry OK! I guess I messed up, huh? And I'm especially sorry for breaking your Beyblade, Aian. I'll...send it to the repair shop right away!"

Aian Meisu: "...It's alright...apology accepted"

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Oh my...did Taikuki actually lose? Not cool Taikuki...not cool"

Both of Taikuki's friends ditch Taikuki after she lost.

Taikuki Nami: "W-Wait! Don't go!...Alright, FINE JUST GO!

And as for you two, I hope your happy...I guess I'll go now..."

[i]Kenichi starts to think about this for a moment and then stops Taikuki.[i]

Kenichi Sora: "WAIT! Taikuki...?"

Taikuki Nami: "Y-Yeah?"

Kenichi Sora: "If you don't have anyone to turn to then you can become friends with me and Aian...if you want to of course. Together we can become stronger and we can all beat Shinkai together."

Taikuki Nami: "...Beat Shinkai? You mean it. Alright, I'll join you two if that's what you want."

Kenichi Sora: "Alright! Let's use the facility and practice!"

Aian Meisu: "Cool! Let's do it tommorow!

This chapter is really well written,Well done!

And when will Suzme be introduced?

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:43 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:41 PM)Kazuto. Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  8:52 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Beyblade Mecha Sentoki Episode 5:

Episode 6 will come soon, MAYBE today so stay tuned!

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At the Beyblade academy, Aian and Kenichi just got their results back from the 'Beyblade parts and physics' test and Aian and Kenichi were about to leave their individual classrooms and meet in the corridor.

Aian Meisu: "Look at what I got for my test results. I got 100%"

Kenichi Sora: "That's great, you are really smart."

Aian Meisu: "What did you get?"

Kenichi Sora: "Oh...I got 67%. I have been studying all night and I only got 67%?"

Aian Meisu: "Hey, it's a good start actually. So how about we go to the training facility and practice?"

Aian and Kenichi ran in the corridors and they both accidentally bump into a girl. She had blonde smooth hair, one black glove and vest, a white skirt and white boots.

Aian Meisu: "Oh I'm so sorry! Are you alright?"

Female Student: "No! I don't think so. If only your fat body wasn't in my way!"

Aian Meisu: "Hey! No fat jokes!"

Kenichi Sora: "-snickers- OK...sure...but as for you, who are you?"

Female Student: "You don't know me...? Well then let me introduce myself. My name is Taikuki Nami and I am currently #4 best blader in this academy!"

Kenichi Sora: "Y-You are?!"

Taikuki Nami: "Yeah...WHY DO YOU SOUND SURPRISED?!!! Is it because I am a girl?"

Kenichi Sora: "N-No...that's not it, I was just surprised tha-"

Taikuki Nami: "You were surprised because I'm a girl weren't you...?"

Kenichi Sora: "No! That isn't true"

But Taikuki walked off in anger whilst Aian and Kenichi were curious about her skills. Later on, Aian and Kenichi went to the training facility and Aian helped Kenichi practice his Mecha Function.

Aian Meisu: "Come on Kenichi! Your still not ready yet! You may have beaten me with you Mecha Function but you still have yet to control it!"

Kenichi Sora: "Got it! MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Sunrise Saber

Kenichi's Mecha Function managed to destroy nearly every obstacle in the Stadium

Kenichi Sora: "Wow! I almost perfected it!"

Aian Meisu: "That's right! All you have to do is practice a few more times and your Mecha Function will be complete"

Suddenly there was a huge commotion in a different area.

Taikuki Nami: "I told you! No losers allowed!"

Student 1: "But everyone has the rights to use this facility, you can't tell us what to do!"

Taikuki Nami: "Very well then!" -clicks fingers-

Taikuki's friends step in and scare the remaining students except for Aian, Kenichi and another student who wanted to battle Taikuki to win their rights to use the facility back

Student 1: "Well...Well I'm not afraid to step in. You may have scared off everyone else but not me! I challenge you to a battle and if I win then we win our rights back!"

Taikuki Nami: "Fine...but if I win...then you can never come back!"

Student 1: "Grr, FINE!"

Student 2: "Is he really going to battle Taikuki? She is so strong."

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Taikuki's Beyblade was in the centre whilst the other Beyblade raced around the stadium recklessly

Taikuki Nami: "This is going to be too easy! I have never been beaten by the likes of you before...I have the most powerful Beyblade, Simurgh Sky!"

Student 1: "U-Uh! Just because you have a powerful Beyblade...DOESN'T MEAN IT CAN BEAT MY COMBO!"

Taikuki Nami: "What are you talking about? You can never stand a chance against me!"

Taikuki's Friends (Both): "Yeah, THATS RIGHT."

Simurgh deflects all of the other Beyblade's attack and the other Beyblade stands no chance against Taikuki's attack pattern. Simurgh then flies up the ceiling

Taikuki Nami: "It's time...I finish you off quickly. MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Taikuki's Mecha Function shifts her opponent'a movements and then her Beyblade blows her opponents Beyblade to pieces and throws it away with her tornado. Aian and Kenichi were amazed with Taikuki's skills.

Student 1: "NOOOOO!!! It can't be...and you also destroyed my Beyblade too. Isn't beating me enough?"

Taikuki Nami: "Just get lost or else!"

Student 2: "I think you better do as she says, you made a deal!"

Student 1: "Grrr, NOOOOO!!!"

Student 1 and 2 ran off whilst Aian and Kenichi were angry with what Taikuki was doing.

Kenichi Sora: "Hey! Now wait a minute...you can't just terrorise these poor kids like that. In fact you have no right to ban students from this facility!"

Taikuki Nami: "Oh just shut up! I am a high rank blader and-"

Aian Meisu: "And you think you can do whatever you want because your a high rank student?! That is not how it works here. Now apologise to those kids or I'm reporting this to the principal!"

Taikuki Nami: "If you want me to listen then you have to beat me..."

Taikuki's Friend 1: "But you'll never beat her!"

Taikuki's Friend 2: "Yeah, that's right! She will destroy you if you try..."

Kenichi Sora: "...I'm willing to take that risk..."

Aian Meisu: "Wait, Kenichi don't...you cannot beat her yet because she is in a higher rank...higher than me..,but that's about to change because I'll battle her and I'll be the one to defeat her."

Taikuki Nami: "Huh, bring it on!"

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Golemoth and Simurgh clash into each other at equal power and collision a few times. Simurgh then moves to the centre and Golemoth tries attacking it but Simurgh dodges it.

Aian Meisu: "Golemoth!"

Taikuki Nami: "Attack!"

Aian Meisu: "W-What?!"

Simurgh counterattacks Golemoth in a stable position and then loses Golemoth's balance and endurance.

Aian Meisu: "No way! My rotation is decreasing. I get it, She is in a stable position so when I attack, she can counterattack. I'll just have to wear her down."

Golemoth tries colliding with Simurgh but gets deflected

Aian Meisu: "Ahh! How did my defense ACTUALLY get deflected? Did she somehow make me use my own defense against myself?"

Taikuki Nami: "That's right! You have little endurance left"

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Miss Taikuki is going to win this battle"

Aian Meisu: "I will not hold back just yet, especially not to a drama queen like you!"

Both Golemoth and Simurgh clash each other violently and collide with each other. Then Golemoth is shown to gets even weaker.

Taikuki Nami: "Don't bother. I have the ability to wobble on command and attack you at any angle meaning I can dodge your attacks and attack you at any angle without you getting in my way!"

Aian Meisu: "Agh, looks like I have no choice but to use my last shot to beat her...MECHA FUNCTION!"

Mecha Function - Gravel Burst

Taikuki Nami: "Hm, this is perfect...MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Chunks of rocks build up and are sent crashing towards Simurgh but Simurgh's Mecha Function destroys the Rocks and shifts the pressure of the atmosphere which then works against Golemoh thus breaking Golemoth in the process. Kenichi observed Taikuki's Mecha Function and realised that whilst it was strong it was also slow.

Aian Meisu: "NOOOOO!!! GOLEMOTH!!!"

Kenichi Sora: "Grrr, what is your problem Taikuki?! Do you have any idea what you did to Aian's Beyblade?!"

Taikuki Nami: "He shouldn't have challenged me...his Beyblade would have lasted longer"

Kenichi Sora: "That's the thing, you shouldn't even be breaking anyone's Beyblades...but you did anyway"

Taikuki Nami: "Oh yeah, I'll destroy your Beyblade too if I have to"

Kenichi Sora: "I guess your asking for a battle, WELL CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!"

Aian Meisu: "NO! Kenichi, your not even ready yet and your Mecha Function isn't fully perfected yet!"

Kenichi Sora: "If it helps everyone get their rights back then I'll do whatever it takes to get our rights back"

Taikuki Nami: "Uhh, fine...fine but hurry up because me and the girls are going clothes shopping so hurry up!"

Kenichi thought about how Aian and other people were beaten by Taikuki's Mecha Function and is trying to find a way to resolve that obstacle.

Kenichi Sora (To Himself): "That Shift Atmos Mecha Function was incredibly powerful, it managed to crush Golemoth.

I watched her attack slowly break Golemoth...

Wait, that's it! All I have to do is distract her beyblade from it's Mecha Function. I just need to find the right timing of opening and strike her down with my Mecha Function, her attacks are powerful but also slow."

Taikuki's Friends (Both): "GO TAIKUKI! GO TAIKUKI!"

3.....2.....1 Go Shoot!

Shaman and Simurgh circle around the stadium and then Shaman moves at a different pattern to confuse Taikuki

Taikuki Nami: "It's no use. Unlike Golemoth, Simurgh can attack at different angles as it can wobble and tilt at will without losing endurance so it doesn't matter which angle you try to aim at, I will always counterattack your every movement!"

Kenichi Sora: "She's right, I can't attack without her suspecting."

Simurgh knocks Shaman back and deflects any attacks that were thrown at Simurgh. Simurgh then rapidly attacks Shaman at every angle and lifts it up the air.

Kenichi Sora: "She has the ability to counterattack, wobble and her Mecha Function...Maybe if I charge at the precise moment then I can cause Simurgh to use it's power against it...GO SHAMAN!"

Shaman charges at Simurgh and they both collide. They both then smash into each other at equal strength and power.

Kenichi Sora: "I need to find an opening when she unleashes her Mecha Function. Aian couldn't do it because his Beyblade moves slowly whilst my Beyblade can move fast enough to pass through her attacks."

Taikuki Nami: "As long as I can counter any attack you throw, you can't stop me."

Kenichi Sora: "Go Shaman!!!"

Taikuki Nami: "Wait, WHAT?!"

Shaman strikes Simurgh up the sky and then they both hit each other at rapid fire speed and it also cause some cracks in the stadium. Taikuki then starts getting angry.

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Is it just me or is Taikuki actually having trouble?"

Taikuki Nami: "SHUT UP!!! I can do this!!!"

Simurgh lights up and violently attacks Shaman at every angle. Shaman then dodges and counterattacks Simurgh in which they both lose a lot of rotation.

Taikuki Nami: "It's time... I have had enough...MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Shift Atmos

Simurgh's Mecha Function created a shift in the air pressure which pressurises and limits the movement of Shaman.

Kenichi Sora: "All I need to do is find an opening by seeing which area has the least air pressure...

Kenichi analyses the Mecha Function and then finds an opening

...There it is. CHARGE, SHAMAN!!!"

Shaman charges at Simurgh thus distracting it's Mecha Function and knocking it at the very edge. Shaman then rapidly attacks Simurgh.

Kenichi Sora: "That's it, MECHA FUNCTION!

Mecha Function - Sunrise Saber

Shaman's saber lights up and Shaman uses to strike at Simurgh eliminating it's powers and it's rotation knocking it out in an instant. Taikuki looks at Kenichi surprised.

Kenichi Sora: "Huh...I did it, I DID IT!!! I actually won. Well Taikuki, you'll have to give everyone back their rights to use the facility...and apologised to those you have hurt, especially Aian!"

Taikuki Nami: "Mmmmmm! I-I'm sorry OK! I guess I messed up, huh? And I'm especially sorry for breaking your Beyblade, Aian. I'll...send it to the repair shop right away!"

Aian Meisu: "...It's alright...apology accepted"

Taikuki's Friend 1: "Oh my...did Taikuki actually lose? Not cool Taikuki...not cool"

Both of Taikuki's friends ditch Taikuki after she lost.

Taikuki Nami: "W-Wait! Don't go!...Alright, FINE JUST GO!

And as for you two, I hope your happy...I guess I'll go now..."

[i]Kenichi starts to think about this for a moment and then stops Taikuki.[i]

Kenichi Sora: "WAIT! Taikuki...?"

Taikuki Nami: "Y-Yeah?"

Kenichi Sora: "If you don't have anyone to turn to then you can become friends with me and Aian...if you want to of course. Together we can become stronger and we can all beat Shinkai together."

Taikuki Nami: "...Beat Shinkai? You mean it. Alright, I'll join you two if that's what you want."

Kenichi Sora: "Alright! Let's use the facility and practice!"

Aian Meisu: "Cool! Let's do it tommorow!

This chapter is really well written,Well done!

And when will Suzme be introduced?

Thanks.

Well, it depends on what Suzmes role actually is, so tell me that and I will see when he appears.

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:48 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: I meant what his occupations are.

East Academy student? North, West Or South Team? Alone blader?

What is it?

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:49 PM)Kazuto. Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:48 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: I meant what his occupations are.

East Academy student? North, West Or South Team? Alone blader?

What is it?

North Blader....Beacause I live in the north

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:50 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:49 PM)Kazuto. Wrote:

(Oct. 29, 2014  9:48 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: I meant what his occupations are.

East Academy student? North, West Or South Team? Alone blader?

What is it?

North Blader....Beacause I live in the north

The North team is an antagonist team, isn't Suzme protagonist?