Stoked Once Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 15, 2014
So this is a sequel to the TV show "Stoked" I don't know why I want to write it but I do. So Here it is.
Prolouge
Res stood at the docks his onyx black emover hair blowing in the wind exposing his left eye that was a dark purple instead of brown like his right one, his tanned brown skin seemed to darken even more as a cloud blocked the sun and shade washed over him.
He had two guitar cases strapped to his back, and the purple skull on the shoulder of his black shirt was covered by one of the broad straps.
His black surfboard with the large purple skull in the center perfectly matched the pigment of his board shorts that were slightly covered by his black duffle bag.
Res’ bored expression was washed away as a large bus in the shape of a whale pulled up. The door swung open and he saw a middle aged man with slowly graying blonde hair and a thick beard that looked like the highlight of it’s life would’ve been in the early 70’s.
“What’s up grom, I’m the Kahuna, I guess you’re the new summer staff right? I thought there would three.†The bus driver said staring at me intently. Res stepped on the bus and went to sit in the back. The Kahuna was about to close the door when two voices cried out “Wait up!â€.
Chapter 1
A kid with sleek black hair pulled up riding on what seemed to be a drum set.
“Hey.†He said hopping off the cart and brushing some dust off his black under armor shirt and board shorts “My names Logan.†He stated extending his hand for me to shake.
“I’m Joseph, but you can call me Res†Res said with a thick Irish accent as he shook Logan’s hand. He then took a guitar case, what looked like a violin case and a surfboard off of the cart and hopped aboard the bus.
Res stuck his head out the back window to find a kid with about medium length black hair and a blue t-shirt and red board shorts. When he finally finished loading his drum set he got on board and glared daggers at Logan.
“What’re you lookin’ at me for?†Logan asked.
“Two miles.. I had to push you on my cart for two miles..†The kid said.
“Now don’t go getting your panties in a twist, I was just messin’ around.†Logan said. The kid screamed and charged at Logan.
Res suddenly got up and stood in front of him. Logan smirked thinking Res was going to defend him.
Res then elbowed Logan in the stomach and Logan fell back into his seat, Res then pushed the kid into a seat. “If you don’t mind, I would like to get through this ride without having to listen to two 15 year old boy bickering like children.†Res stated sitting back down.
“Heavy.†The Kahuna said as he started to drive.
As time passed and tension faded someone finally broke the silence, "So where you groms working?" The Kahuna asked.
"Dining Room entertainment." The all said simultaneously said.
The kid exhaled "I guess if we're working together I should introduce myself, I'm Matthew, and sorry about before I just don't like being messed with like that y'now?" He apologized.
"Don't stress about it bro" Logan said. "It's cool" He added. As they pulled up to the hotel and walked in side.
They walked up to the front desk "Welcome to Surfer's Paradise, we are surfing." The guy at the front desk said.
Res rubbed his temples "This is gonna be a long summer" he said.
Chapter 2
We are surfing?" Logan asked laughing.
The guy at the front desk sighed "I'm not going into this right now." He said "Anyway, I'm Johnny, and I'm guessing your the new summer staff." Johnny stated.
"Joseph, Joseph MacHonaday, but you can just call me Res." Res stated. Johnny gulped and tugged on the neck of his shirt.
"W-what a pleasure to h-have you here sir." Johnny stuttered. Res stood in confusion pondering on what Johnny meant by his last statement.
Res snapped his fingers "Oh yeah I own like half the hotel in stocks right?" Res realized asking Johnny.
Johnny shook his head slowly as Logan and Matthew stood in confusion. Johnny noticed their confusion and decided to explain. "Joseph's dad is David MacHonaday, extremely wealthy guy, for Joseph's 15th birthday he gave him one of his companies that company makes over 1.2 billion dollars a year and owns almost half of Surfer's Paradise Hotel." Johnny explained.
"I'm a little weirded out that you know so much about me." Res stated creeped out. "Your like a wiki page.." he added taking a step back.
"So Res, can a brother borrow a hundred?" Logan asked putting his hand on Res' shoulder as if they were grade school friends. Res sighed and pulled out a hundred dollar bill and handed it to Logan. "Wait, a-are you actually giving this to me!?" he asked surprised.
"I feel like if I don't you won't stop bugging me about it." Res admitted. "So where will we be staying?" He asked.
"Well here at Surfer's Paradise hotel has many open rooms for you three." A voice said, Matthew turned around to find a somewhat tan man with short blonde hair.
"Well actually sir there the new summer staff." Johnny pointed out.
"Oh, then why aren't you lazy bums working?!" The man yelled.
"Umm Mr.Baumer may I speak to you or a moment" Johnny requested nervously. Johnny and Baumer went into a corner and started whispering when they returned Baumer had a nervous smile on his face.
"I am so sorry Mr. MacHonaday, I had no idea that you would be working with us this summer." Baumer apologized.
"You should be, that out burst was very offensive and un-professional, I believe that I now need to call Mr.Ridgemount to complain about these services." Res said in a very snobbish manner.
"Well there really is no need for that sir, l-let me take your bags to the staff house while Johnny shows you around." Baumer pleaded as he took Res' duffle bag and left.
Res clapped slowly and laughed "Did You guys see the look on his face?!" Res asked hysterically while wiping a tear from his eye. "Oh man that was hilarious." He stated picking up his guitars and surfboard.
"So where are we staying?" Matthew asked ignoring Res' hysteria.
"Follow me." Johnny stated as he walked towards the beach. They arrived at a two story old beach house that looked, like the Kahuna's beard, that the peak of it's life was in the 70's.
As they walked inside Logan saw a boy with spiked up auburn hair arguing with with a blonde girl in the kitchen. "Don't put a fork in there you idiot you're gonna get electrocuted!" She yelled at him.
"Fine!" the boy said as he reached into a drawer and pulled out a spoon.
"Did my words not get through your thick skull E-LECT-TRO-CUTE-ED" She screamed sounding out the syllables.
"I know the vowels of the word Fin!" He screamed.
"They're called syllables kook!" the girl who was apparently name Fin yelled back. Johnny face palmed and Res walked over to the kitchen picked up the toaster that they were arguing next to and turned it upside down.
A slightly burnt toaster waffle fell out. "My waffle!" the boy said excitedly as he picked up the burnt waffle off the counter and started to eat it.
Fin rolled her eyes as the boy finished his waffle. "Hey, I'm Reef and this is Finnegan." Reef said with his mouth full.
"Finnegan? that name Irish by any chance?" Res asked.
"No, I'm from Halifax, my real name is Fin McCloud." She said elbowing Reef in the stomach.
"Halifax? I live there too, what part?" Res asked. As Fin and Res were conversing Johnny showed Logan and Matthew to their room.
"This is where you guys will be staying" Johnny stated pointing to a room with one bunk bed and one regular bed. Logan and Matthew stared at each other like two cowboys at a shootout.
"I call top bunk!" They both yelled running into the room. Matthew climbed the ladder to the top bunk, Logan quickly pushed him off and climbed all the way to the top where he sat victorious.
"The mighty Logan is victorious over the weak Matthew" Logan exclaimed gallantly.
"Oh really?" Matthew said as he held Logan's duffle bag. Logan sat suprised that he would forget something so important.
"Hey." Res said as he walked in and plopped down on the regular bed. Logan sat on the top bunk and pouted. "What happened?" He asked
Chap 3
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BE-, The window shattered as Res ripped the alarm clock out of the power socket and threw it out a nearby window. He then walked over to Logan who was sprawled out on the floor. "Get up." He said tirely nudging Logan with his foot.
Logan batted his eyes and looked up at Res noticing his one purple eye that was exposed due to bedhead. "AHH Demon!" Logan said backing up.
"Well it looks like you figured me out." He said patting his hair down until it somewhat resembled his usual emover. "Yep that's right, I'm a demon, fresh outta hell." He stated curling his fingers on top of his head to look like horns.
With that Logan ran out of the room screaming while Res got dressed with a large smirk on his face. As Res walked out of the door Matthew was just starting to wake up. As he saw Res his eyes widened. "I'm gonna be late!" He yelled jumping off the top bunk.
*10 minutes later*
Res was already in the locker room as Matthew scrambled to open his locker, soon after 7 other people joined them, Johnny, Reef, Fin and Logan included. Res let out a loud yawn accompanied with a very wide stretch due to his giant wingspan. During his stretch he accidentally hit a brunette girl.
"Excuse you." She said annoyed.
"Sorry Mary O' Kathrine O' Bridget O' Gil." Res replied putting his hands on his head.
"That didn't even make any sense!" She said genuinely ticked off now.
"Mary O' Kathrine O' Bridget O' Gil is a song written by Barrett O' Gil, one of Res' favorite artists." Johnny explained.
"Okay dude, seriously starting to creep me out now." Res stated, taking a step sideways knocking into the brunette.
"Ugh, would you stop that!" The brunette snapped stomping her foot.
"Geez Lo, whats got you so ticked off?" Asked a tan boy with a large blonde afro and a thick, unplaceable accent.
"Well Broseph, Mr. Clover over here can't seem to keep his hands to himself." Lo scoffed.
"Hey, now there's no need to get racist." Res stated squinted his eyes and jutting his finger in Lo's face as everyone looked at him with confusion.
"A, "Clover", is a very offensive ter-" Johnny started.
"Would ye' stop that already!" Res snapped his accent switching from Irish to Scottish. "Now look what you done." He continued rubbing his throat.
"Hello everyone, as you can see we have some new employees here this summer." Baumer said walking in. "This is Joseph MacHonnaday and these are.. the other two, they will be performing music in the dining room." He explained.
"Yo." Res said raising his hand in a lazy wave.
"Hey." Matthew said.
"What's up." Replied Logan as a girl in a pirate outfit and an eye patch walked in.
"Drumsticks, Emo, Sharkboy." She said. "Put these on." She commanded as she thew the trio some outfits.
*5 minutes later*
"Are you freakin' kidding me." Logan complained as he stepped out the locker room wearing a pirate outfit.
"I think it looks cool." Said Res stepping out looking very smug.
"What about these outfits looks cool?" Matthew asked.
"Well, not so much yours, but mine looks awesome." Res explanied. "Wait, do you guys even know any sea shanties or celtic music?" Res asked.
"Not really." They replied.
Res sighed. "Baumer, we need to take the day off to practice." Res explained.
"Okay." Baumer replied as he walked off.
"Dude, how'd you do that?" Logan asked amazed. Res shrugged his shoulders.
"Well." Res started pulling some paper out of his pocket. "I know my part, here's some sheet music and a CD, catch you later." He finished handing the items to Logan and walking off. Character request
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Surfing level: 0-10
Board Appearance:
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - 6 God - Jan. 15, 2014
You switch from first to second person in the fourth paragraph.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 15, 2014
Sorry for the typo I went back and changed it.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 15, 2014
I'm liking this, you're doing well!
I have a request:
Name: Matthew Crax
Age: 15
Appearance: Medium black hair with blue t-shirt. Wears a belt, and shorts with red sneakers. When surfing he's shirtless and wears blue swim trunks and grey sandals
Personality: Very talented and is very short tempered. Very serious while in trying to get free time to surf, and hates to be betrayed.
Surfing level: 7- as the story goes on eventually progresses to around 8.
Note: Drums
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014
It's a a requirement for a main character.
Also, I was afraid you were going to make a character request like this, Jake Hagane is in too many stories He seems a bit overdone. In no way am I saying that it is a bad character but, "too much of a good thing" Y'now?
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014
OK, I'll change it!
K i changed the name to Matthew Crax, that's based on my old username and i may change the persona and appearance wen i get good ideas for them.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014
Alright also someone wouldn't just be a level ten surfer you should tone that down a bit.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014
Ok, I'll do that now!
OK done!
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014
Also one last thing, it's summertime And I'm pretty sure Matthew would experiance a slow painfull death in those clothes...
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014
Lol i'll change that
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014
Okay, now I only need one more MC before I start Chapter one.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014
I finished my edit!
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014
soory but one last thing, what does his board look like?
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - DRAGON KING - Jan. 16, 2014
Name: Logan trikson
Age: 15
Apearance: a black under armour shirt, slick black hair and black shorts
Personalality: funny and always joking around.
Surfing level: 8
Note: electric guitar
Black surfboard with a white tribal shark design In The center.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014
It's a dark blue board with a marking of a demon face, black stripe down the middle.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014
sorry one FINAL final thing, you can't have drums and electric guitar and drums you can have electric guitar and viola but if you have drums thats the only instrument your character can have.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014
ok i'll only hav drums...
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014
alright I'll start working on chapter one.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014
Ok whew
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014
Got Chapter 1 done
A kid with sleek black hair pulled up riding on what seemed to be a drum set.
“Hey.†He said hopping off the cart and brushing some dust off his black under armor shirt and board shorts “My names Logan.†He stated extending his hand for me to shake.
“I’m Joseph, but you can call me Res†Res said with a thick Scottish accent as he shook Logan’s hand. He then took a guitar case, what looked like a violin case and a surfboard off of the cart and hopped aboard the bus.
Res stuck his head out the back window to find a kid with about medium length black hair and a blue t-shirt and red board shorts. When he finally finished loading his drum set he got on board and glared daggers at Logan.
“What’re you lookin’ at me for?†Logan asked.
“Two miles.. I had to push you on my cart for two miles..†The kid said.
“Now don’t go getting your panties in a twist, I was just messin’ around.†Logan said. The kid screamed and charged at Logan.
Res suddenly got up and stood in front of him. Logan smirked thinking Res was going to defend him.
Res then elbowed Logan in the stomach and Logan fell back into his seat, Res then pushed the kid into a seat. “If you don’t mind, I would like to get through this ride without having to listen to two 15 year old boy bickering like children.†Res stated sitting back down.
“Heavy.†The Kahuna said as he started to drive.
As time passed and tension faded someone finally broke the silence, "So where you groms working?" The Kahuna asked.
"Dining Room entertainment." The all said simultaneously said.
The kid exhaled "I guess if we're working together I should introduce myself, I'm Matthew, and sorry about before I just don't like being messed with like that y'now?" He apologized.
"Don't stress about it bro" Logan said. "It's cool" He added. As they pulled up to the hotel and walked in side.
They walked up to the front desk "Welcome to Surfer's Paradise, we are surfing." The guy at the front desk said.
Res rubbed his temples "This is gonna be a long summer" he said.
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014
I love it! Can't wait for chapter 2!
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 17, 2014
Thanks I'm currently working on the next chap of the last of us it should be done tonight but you should expect chap 2 on saturday
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 17, 2014
i hav a suggestion:
For a list of characters, do this,
Characters
Onyx Piravteer= Res
Jake Hagane= Matthew Crax
DRAGON KING= Logan Trikson
etc.=etc.
(USED EXAMPLES OF CURENT CHRAAAACTERS)
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - DRAGON KING - Jan. 17, 2014
(Jan. 17, 2014 9:48 PM)Jake Hagane Wrote: i hav a suggestion:
For a list of characters, do this,
Characters
Onyx Piravteer= Res
Jake Hagane= Matthew Crax
DRAGON KING= Logan Trikson
etc.=etc.
(USED EXAMPLES OF CURENT CHRAAAACTERS) haha, I'm the first one started doing that , it's a good way to keep track of them
RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 17, 2014
yea i thot that waaaaaaaaaaay was useful and damn my keyboard wont work so sorry for constant aa's
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