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Stoked Once Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 15, 2014

So this is a sequel to the TV show "Stoked" I don't know why I want to write it but I do. So Here it is.

Prolouge
Chapter 1


Chapter 2

Chap 3

Character request

Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Surfing level: 0-10
Board Appearance:


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - 6 God - Jan. 15, 2014

You switch from first to second person in the fourth paragraph.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 15, 2014

Sorry for the typo I went back and changed it.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 15, 2014

I'm liking this, you're doing well!

I have a request:

Name: Matthew Crax
Age: 15
Appearance: Medium black hair with blue t-shirt. Wears a belt, and shorts with red sneakers. When surfing he's shirtless and wears blue swim trunks and grey sandals
Personality: Very talented and is very short tempered. Very serious while in trying to get free time to surf, and hates to be betrayed.
Surfing level: 7- as the story goes on eventually progresses to around 8.
Note: Drums


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014

It's a a requirement for a main character.

Also, I was afraid you were going to make a character request like this, Jake Hagane is in too many stories He seems a bit overdone. In no way am I saying that it is a bad character but, "too much of a good thing" Y'now?


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014

OK, I'll change it!

K i changed the name to Matthew Crax, that's based on my old username and i may change the persona and appearance wen i get good ideas for them.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014

Alright also someone wouldn't just be a level ten surfer you should tone that down a bit.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014

Ok, I'll do that now!

OK done!


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014

Also one last thing, it's summertime And I'm pretty sure Matthew would experiance a slow painfull death in those clothes...


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014

Lol i'll change that


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014

Okay, now I only need one more MC before I start Chapter one.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014

I finished my edit!


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014

soory but one last thing, what does his board look like?


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - DRAGON KING - Jan. 16, 2014

Name: Logan trikson
Age: 15
Apearance: a black under armour shirt, slick black hair and black shorts
Personalality: funny and always joking around.
Surfing level: 8
Note: electric guitar

Black surfboard with a white tribal shark design In The center.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014

It's a dark blue board with a marking of a demon face, black stripe down the middle.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014

sorry one FINAL final thing, you can't have drums and electric guitar and drums you can have electric guitar and viola but if you have drums thats the only instrument your character can have.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014

ok i'll only hav drums...


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014

alright I'll start working on chapter one.


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014

Ok whew


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 16, 2014

Got Chapter 1 done




RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 16, 2014

I love it! Can't wait for chapter 2!


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Resonated_ - Jan. 17, 2014

Thanks I'm currently working on the next chap of the last of us it should be done tonight but you should expect chap 2 on saturday


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 17, 2014

i hav a suggestion:
For a list of characters, do this,
Characters



RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - DRAGON KING - Jan. 17, 2014

(Jan. 17, 2014  9:48 PM)Jake Hagane Wrote: i hav a suggestion:
For a list of characters, do this,
Characters
haha, I'm the first one started doing that Tongue_out, it's a good way to keep track of them Wink


RE: Stoked Again (Accepting Character Requests) - Airus - Jan. 17, 2014

yea i thot that waaaaaaaaaaay was useful and damn my keyboard wont work so sorry for constant aa's