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[Beyblade]A Mark of True Power - Printable Version

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[Beyblade]A Mark of True Power - кαмυι カムイ - Nov. 18, 2013

A boy named Elijah Griffin embarks on a mission for the WBBA. On that mission, he meets an agent named Kaito Razor. They team up together with their powerful, legendary beys. As soon they finished the mission, they were sabotaged and had to start over. Is Kaito who Elijah really thinks he is? Will they ever finish the mission again before the deadline? Find out!

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RE: [Beyblade]A Mark of True Power - RagerBlade - Nov. 23, 2013

It's too short... Also make better spacing.

Ex)
"3 2 1 Go Shoot!" said Timmy.

"Special move Rise!" said Jimmy.