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Frontinus: Bloody Christmas (Chp. 2-3 are up.) - Septentrione - Sep. 22, 2013

Another story I want to evolve into a novel for some reason. So this is another story of mine! Hope you like.

Frontinus: Bloody Christmas
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3



Chapter 2 and 3 are up! Changed Chapter 1 a bit to introduce him a little more. Changed the title a little too!


RE: Daemon Venatores: The Deus Xiphos - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 22, 2013

Great story! Long chapters... See if you cqn keep that length. Other then that, nothing to point out really.


RE: Daemon Venatores: The Deus Xiphos - BIGBANG! - Sep. 22, 2013

Awesome story love the length of the chapters and no spelling mistakes well done


RE: Daemon Venatores: The Deus Xiphos - Septentrione - Sep. 22, 2013

*Blinks* Is this possible? People actually read my story? Finally! The length daunts most people, so I think they can't read it all and comment. Thanks so much guys! Content would be out every week.


RE: Daemon Venatores: The Deus Xiphos - Kaneki - Sep. 22, 2013

Really awsome story dude, I loved it<3


RE: Daemon Venatores: The Deus Xiphos - Septentrione - Sep. 28, 2013

Alright, as promised. Chapter 2 is up.


RE: Daemon Venatores: The Deus Xiphos - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 28, 2013

Great work on chapter 2. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes, at least I think so, and the spelling was pretty good. Keep up the chapter length, put in some character development, and BAM! Best story here! Smile


RE: Daemon Venatores: The Deus Xiphos - Septentrione - Oct. 05, 2013

Alright. Changed almost everything but it has basically the same plot. Read it and I hope you like it!


RE: Frontinus: End of Days - LimiTTrickster - Oct. 05, 2013

I am actually enjoying this so much, I jjust want you to update a new chapter every minute... I doubt that will happen. Anyways... as I said before, becuase it's only the first 2 chapters, it's a little hard, but try and develop or introduce characters.


RE: Frontinus: End of Days - Septentrione - Oct. 06, 2013

I update as much as I can. Thanks for the comment though!


RE: Frontinus: Bloody Christmas (Chp. 2-3 are up.) - Septentrione - Nov. 10, 2013

Sorry for the short hiatus (which happens on everything I write) but I've added. I'm writing continuously, and just splitting them into chapters so it wouldn't be a congested wall of text.