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Pegasus Battle Set - Kaneki - Sep. 14, 2013 Quote:Pegasus Battle Set RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Kai-V - Sep. 14, 2013 That is definitely not enough content. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Kaneki - Sep. 14, 2013 I do now agree with you but i am trying to think of more content to put on. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Cannon - Sep. 14, 2013 You should read the articles and drafts on Beywiki already, and think of adding it before posting the thread. Same goes for the L-Drago thread. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Kaneki - Sep. 14, 2013 I did and all i realy found was the stufe i posted on here. Unless you mean the overall part? RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Dual - Sep. 14, 2013 This needs a lot of work. For one thing, first person shouldn't be used. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - 6 God - Sep. 14, 2013 Everything needs work. Too much too list. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Kaneki - Sep. 14, 2013 Like i said i am working on it also i belive Kai-V and Cannon already said that so no need to keep saying that. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 14, 2013 Other than content, grammar and punctuation need work. I'll try and help when I'm on the computer(in an hour). RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Kaneki - Sep. 14, 2013 Thanks jacolal i was not on my computer to so i done it a bit fast so i should be able to do more. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Kai-V - Sep. 14, 2013 What you have done now is better, but it is not at all in a format that is appropriate for an encyclopedia. Really, try looking at our articles on some Faceoff Sets : we do not go Beyblade by Beyblade; we write about the parts in general, which ones are outclassed and which ones are good or great, etc. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Kaneki - Sep. 14, 2013 Thanks for the advice Kai-V i will start looking at Beywiki and redo the parts. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - 6 God - Sep. 15, 2013 I'd reccomend adding this: Even though it comes with the top tier parts, such as RF, R2F, there are still cheaper options to obatin those parts. For that reason, this should only be bought for collection purposes. Also Reviser isn't top-tier for attack. Also work on spelling. RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Ocean - Sep. 15, 2013 What does Revizer have to do with this? RE: Pegasus Battle Set - Kaneki - Sep. 17, 2013 I'v updated it please tell me if it's ok. |