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[Non-Beyblade Story] Remedy - akio314 - Sep. 10, 2013

Hey folks, that weird kid's making a new story again. This doesn't mean Kazuki's Quest and the Avatar FanFic won't be concluded, I just want to refresh my writing slate with a new story.

Without Further Ado:
Chapter 1: "Client (Click to View)



RE: [Non-Beyblade Story] Remedy - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 11, 2013

A good, interesting story. You just need to be careful about your grammar. Other than that, you're good.


RE: [Non-Beyblade Story] Remedy - akio314 - Sep. 11, 2013

(Sep. 11, 2013  8:18 AM)jacolal Wrote: A good, interesting story. You just need to be careful about your grammar. Other than that, you're good.

Thank you!
Can you explain the grammar issues in PM?