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BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - Printable Version

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RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 06, 2013

Again with a suspense ended. I love it !!!


RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - DefStamina88 - Sep. 08, 2013

Here's Chapter 11!!! Grin

WARNING: Some blood.




RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - DefStamina88 - Sep. 10, 2013

Sorry for Double Post, but here's Chapter 12!




RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 10, 2013

There are a couple of grammar points where you can use semi-colon rather than a full stop, which was overused. And there were no speech marks for the 3 2 1 LET IT RIP.

But this still a great story! I am loving it.


RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - RagerBlade - Sep. 10, 2013

Want this story to be in WBO Weekly?


RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - DefStamina88 - Sep. 11, 2013

(Sep. 10, 2013  8:04 PM)jacolal Wrote: There are a couple of grammar points where you can use semi-colon rather than a full stop,

Funny Story, I actually never learned how to use a semi-colon properly. I know that I should use it, but to avoid making it look weird, I try to avoid it completely.

I did correct the quotation, as well as a few grammar mistakes.


RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - DefStamina88 - Sep. 15, 2013

Here's Chapter 13!!




RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 15, 2013

It was a bit short, but really interesting. I liked this chapter and am excited to see more of you in action.


RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - DefStamina88 - Sep. 26, 2013

Sorry for disappearing. School had me held up. Here's Chapter 14!!!




RE: BeyBlade Story: Getting Back to the Top[PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 03, 2013

Sorry for double post, but here's chapter 15!!