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(B-Daman Story) B-Dabrothers: The Story of B-Daman NG! - Leone19 - Jun. 07, 2013

Just a little thing I'm working on. If it seems a bit fast paced so far, it is because:
A. I'm in a bit of a rush to do some of it, there will be a lot of character development, these first few chapters were really just to introduce it, etc.

Here we go!

Intro:
Ch. 1- Birthday Brawl

Ch. 2- Mysterious Forces



RE: (B-Daman Story) B-Dabrothers: The Story of B-Daman NG! - Dual - Jun. 07, 2013

Yay! B-Daman story! I will be doing one of these as well!
As you said, it is a bit fast paced, but the grammar and spelling is great!
And last thing,
Don't you ever, ever dis Pemby=Penguin. He will steal your soul.
I'm kidding, XD
Great story, can't wait for more!


RE: (B-Daman Story) B-Dabrothers: The Story of B-Daman NG! - Leone19 - Jun. 07, 2013

Thanks! Grin

Its just a little fast paced because I wanted the first few chapters out. But it will be bit slower, in the coming chapters! Ik, Pemby=Penguin is the raddest B-Daman ever Tongue_out


RE: (B-Daman Story) B-Dabrothers: The Story of B-Daman NG! - Samurai_Ifraid1 - Aug. 15, 2013

Can't wait for more!


RE: (B-Daman Story) B-Dabrothers: The Story of B-Daman NG! - Themeeny7 - Aug. 16, 2013

I, Themeeny7- Writer of the story " The Last King " approve of this story. In my opinion, fast paced is okay as long as you still tell the full story in a way that makes sense :I


RE: (B-Daman Story) B-Dabrothers: The Story of B-Daman NG! - Leone19 - Aug. 16, 2013

Yeah, I've been working on it still!
Some new chapters should be up soon!


RE: (B-Daman Story) B-Dabrothers: The Story of B-Daman NG! - 6 God - Aug. 17, 2013

Keep it up Leone19!