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[BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Printable Version

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[BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - 6 God - Apr. 01, 2013

Hey guys well this is my story so tell me what u think
Chapter 0: Epilogue
Chapter 1: Tournament!
Chapter 2:The inpenetrable Tourmaline Tortolious
CHAPTER 3: Planet Beyblade



RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - 6 God - Apr. 04, 2013

I guess its only only been 3 days but is anyone going to comment?!


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - 6 God - Apr. 05, 2013

Chapter 3 is finally up, sorry for the delay I've been busy. Chapter 4 will be up soon, hope you enjoy Smile


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - 6 God - May. 10, 2013

Now accepting character requests, just submit the nsme,bey,and character description.


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Samurai_Ifraid1 - May. 15, 2013

Keep up the good work!


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Dual - May. 15, 2013

(May. 10, 2013  1:43 AM)Kyler_the best Wrote: Bump! Now accepting character requests, just submit the nsme,bey,and character description.
You can only bump in the bey market place. Just edit your original post, or if you must post, make a new chapter and additionally state you are taking character requests.


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - diblee123 - May. 16, 2013

Can you add rago but instead of diablo nemesis, but Poot Nemesis 85Q. I hate rago, so I want this story to make him into carp. Make him like a small character thats annoying.


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Samurai_Ifraid1 - May. 16, 2013

Name: Yuichi Hanuro
Age: 13
Bey: Burn Minotaur D125 CF
Special Move: Blazing Inferno
Description: He is a Beyblade prodigy considering the fact that Tyson Granger is his great-grandfather. He has a little sister Chizuko who happens to be in training with her Cosmic Hydra 105R2F. He trains everyday and has complete control over his Bey.


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Haspro - May. 16, 2013

Name: X
Age: 15
Bey: Hell Ionis E230 XF
Special Move: Ionis Firestorm Blast
Description: He is a mysterious teenager who appears, as quickly as he dissapears. He has a Kyoya-Like attitude, and is a hardcore blader. He got Ionis from his grandfather before his passing.


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Leone19 - May. 16, 2013

Whoops, accidently quoted Haspro, haha (my cousin)

How about:

Aaron Blitz
Age: 13
Bey: Goriem Gryph E230 W2D
Special Moves: Synchrom Blast, Wave Fury, Fused Smash, and Elevator Shield
Des. : A quiet, shy kid. But when he needs to, he toughens up and is an extremely strong blader.


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - LMAO - May. 16, 2013

Name: Kira Yategami
Age: 17
Bey: Elite Spartan SA165 MEWD (Metal Eternal Wide Defence)
Special Move: Spartan Fang, Hydro Beam Cannon
Description: A very calm and collected blader, who is always trying to do the right thing. He is one of the 10 people, who possesses a special Zero G Bey. He acts like an older brother to most of the characters. He is very intelligent and knows the most about Beyblades.

Don't usually do these type of things, but the story was good, so I had to make a character request.


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Dual - May. 16, 2013

There are a few spelling mistakes, as well as grammar mistakes.
Not sure if this is in purpose, but the main character is very conceited.
The overall story is ok, but it moves to fast. Think about it; if you were on the street, and you were attacked by a bunch of beybladers, then this guy asks you to start training with him, would you?
I just think you need to develop the characters more.
Overall, the stories ok, and I'll keep reading it.


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Elite Projects - Jun. 06, 2014

Keep going


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Kaneki - Jun. 06, 2014

Dude, this topic is one-years old...


RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Elite Projects - Jun. 06, 2014

(Jun. 06, 2014  4:52 PM)Ryûzaki Wrote: Dude, this topic is one-years old...

I know.He can still write more even if it is a year old...