[BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - 6 God - Apr. 01, 2013
Hey guys well this is my story so tell me what u think
Chapter 0: Epilogue
As a part of the WBBA's zero-g program they developed 10 zero-g beyblades with a special gem stone crystal wheel and they sent these beyblades to 10 towns all across the world. These towns would choose a certain blader to possess one of these beyblades. The blader who possesses one of these special blades will hold tremendous power.
My town chose me because they knew I wasn't like other bladers, I had a passion for blading more than anyone else, so I left my town to seek out other special beyblades, and that's where my story begins.
Chapter 1: Tournament!
One day I came across a town that held local tournaments once a month, so I entered the tournamnet with the expectations of winning.
"Okay everybody our special monthly tournament shall now begin!" Blader DJ yelled.
The first three rounds passed nothing particulary exciting happened, basically the beginner vs. beginner setup. Finally, it was my turn.
"We now have Kade vs. Max!" Blader DJ yelled.
"Blitz Rex and I are gonna take you down," Kade shouted
"Whatever bro," I responded.
"3, 2 ,1, GO SHOOT!" we both yelled.
Our beys bounced into the stadium.He started with a barrage of light attacks.
"Go Rex!" he shouted.
His bey sent Ruby flying into the air.
"They never learn," I told myself. "Ruby Diving Crash!"
Ruby came down, crashing into his bey, sending it flying out of the stadium.
"Ugghh," he sighed.
"This tournament is in the bag," I thought.
The next match started again nothing really happened worth mentioning.
"Match 6 start," said Blader DJ.
That's when I noticed his bey, it was a zero-g bey, but not just any zero-g bey, a gem crystal wheel bey!
"Attack," His opponent yelled.
The opponent's bey charged toward the zero-g bey in the center of the stadium.
"Iron Defense," he yelled.
A blast of blue light shot up from the bey and expanded outward into a dome-shape and it was over.The kid's bey lay at his feet. I was stunned about what had just happened, never have I seen a bey with that much power before.
"The winner is.......... Joooooeeeeyyy!!!" Blader DJ yelled.
Joey stepped down from the panel, he wore an orande shirt with blue jeans and atop his head he had neatly combed brown hair that glistened from the gel in it. He walked over and stared at me, then proceeded to walk down the hall.
Two more matches ended and finally the semi-finals started.The competition picked up a little. Luckily, I was first up in the second round because I was about to die of bordom.
"3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!" we yelled.
Ruby circled around the kid's bey ,Earth Bull 145 ewd. I commanded Ruby to attack. Ruby let out a barrage of attacks and sent his bey flying out of the stadium. DJ finally announced, " Joey vs. Rick!" It was just like his first match totally one sided.
"Okay everyone it's the match you've all been waiting for," Blader DJ yelled. "Max vs. Joey!"
*crowd cheers
"3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!" we scream.
Chapter 2:The inpenetrable Tourmaline Tortolious
I attacked several times ,but his bey kept enduring them!
"C,mon Ruby!" I yelled.
Ruby let out a barrage of powerful attacks. Each one doing absolutely nothing.
"When are you all going to learn, no one can break my inpenetrable defense," he said.
I commanded Ruby to attack again, but my attacks were futile. How do I defeat a bey that won't lose stamina or be thrown out of the stadium? I have one chance, my special move, if that doesn't work I'll lose.
"Diving Crash!" I yelled.
Ruby shot into the air and came down hard.
"Iron Defense!" Joey yelled.
His bey emmited a blue light and for a while I couldn't see anything, but a few seconds later I saw Ruby down at my feet and Joey's bey in the center of the stadium. I thought I was going to blow through this tournament and move onto the next round but it looks like I'll have to stick around for a rematch. He started walking towards me and said "If you ever want a rematch ask for the Tourmaline Tortolious at the Beyshop,"
One day I was going to challenge Joey to a rematch but I'll have to improve a lot to even stand a chance
CHAPTER 3: Planet Beyblade
I still couldn't get over the fact I lost to Joey. So, I decided to go battle at the park. When I arrived, I could hear murmurs and whispering. No doubt about my loss at today's tournament. Suddenly, a group of kids(about 9) walked up to me ,and challenged me to a battle. I was going to accept when,
"Hey you know it's not fair for a group of bladers to against 1 opponent," the man said.
"But coach," one kid whined.
"No means no Jim," he said.
"FINE, you go against him," Jim said.
This is just what I needed to do to help me get back in the game.
"Okay okay," the Coach said.
"3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!" we said.
I glanced at his bey. It looked like a yellow version of gravity destroyer with a tr145 track under it had a wd performance tip, or maybe w2d, possibly ewd. I Couldn't tell, but it did seem like a decent bey. I decided to attack. Suprisingly, he dodged every single one. He then followed up by his own attacks that sent me flying into the air.
"Go Diving Crash!" I yelled.
Ruby slammed down onto his bey. I thought I had one because his bey had stopped spinning, but suddenly started spinning the other direction! This sent my bey flying to my feet. I was in complete denial, it must be some freak bad luck. I had lost twice in one day.
"Gaahh!" I exclaimed.
I picked up my bey.
"Hey it looks like you could use some training, just follow me and I'll teach you how to beat Joey," he said.
"How do you know Joey?" I asked.
"Well aside from the fact Joey is a legend in this town, I trained him," he replied.
When I arrived at the gym there were dozens of bladers practicing and battling.
"This is Planet Beyblade, Joseph come here," he said.
He wore elastic shorts with an under-armour t-shirt.
"Show him what you've got," Coach said.
His bey was Samurai Falconious wa130 gcf, an attack-type like mine. Soon a small crowd gathered around the stadium.
"3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!" we yelled.
The 2 beys clashed in the center of the stadium. They continued the attacks until Falconiuos began circling the stadium. I sped down to the center of the stadium, and his bey was coming towards me, but in a split-second Ruby dodged it. Ruby ran across the stadium, but Falconious was gaining speed and coming fast. So, I decided to scale the stadium and fly onto the air, but Falconious followed Ruby and sent it crashing into the ceiling and then ricocheted off the ceiling and crashed into Falconious and both beys flew out of the stadium. At leat I didn't lose. As soon as the battle was over, Coach put me to work.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - 6 God - Apr. 04, 2013
I guess its only only been 3 days but is anyone going to comment?!
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - 6 God - Apr. 05, 2013
Chapter 3 is finally up, sorry for the delay I've been busy. Chapter 4 will be up soon, hope you enjoy
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - 6 God - May. 10, 2013
Now accepting character requests, just submit the nsme,bey,and character description.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Samurai_Ifraid1 - May. 15, 2013
Keep up the good work!
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Dual - May. 15, 2013
(May. 10, 2013 1:43 AM)Kyler_the best Wrote: Bump! Now accepting character requests, just submit the nsme,bey,and character description. You can only bump in the bey market place. Just edit your original post, or if you must post, make a new chapter and additionally state you are taking character requests.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - diblee123 - May. 16, 2013
Can you add rago but instead of diablo nemesis, but Poot Nemesis 85Q. I hate rago, so I want this story to make him into carp. Make him like a small character thats annoying.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Samurai_Ifraid1 - May. 16, 2013
Name: Yuichi Hanuro
Age: 13
Bey: Burn Minotaur D125 CF
Special Move: Blazing Inferno
Description: He is a Beyblade prodigy considering the fact that Tyson Granger is his great-grandfather. He has a little sister Chizuko who happens to be in training with her Cosmic Hydra 105R2F. He trains everyday and has complete control over his Bey.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Haspro - May. 16, 2013
Name: X
Age: 15
Bey: Hell Ionis E230 XF
Special Move: Ionis Firestorm Blast
Description: He is a mysterious teenager who appears, as quickly as he dissapears. He has a Kyoya-Like attitude, and is a hardcore blader. He got Ionis from his grandfather before his passing.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Leone19 - May. 16, 2013
Whoops, accidently quoted Haspro, haha (my cousin)
How about:
Aaron Blitz
Age: 13
Bey: Goriem Gryph E230 W2D
Special Moves: Synchrom Blast, Wave Fury, Fused Smash, and Elevator Shield
Des. : A quiet, shy kid. But when he needs to, he toughens up and is an extremely strong blader.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - LMAO - May. 16, 2013
Name: Kira Yategami
Age: 17
Bey: Elite Spartan SA165 MEWD (Metal Eternal Wide Defence)
Special Move: Spartan Fang, Hydro Beam Cannon
Description: A very calm and collected blader, who is always trying to do the right thing. He is one of the 10 people, who possesses a special Zero G Bey. He acts like an older brother to most of the characters. He is very intelligent and knows the most about Beyblades.
Don't usually do these type of things, but the story was good, so I had to make a character request.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Dual - May. 16, 2013
There are a few spelling mistakes, as well as grammar mistakes.
Not sure if this is in purpose, but the main character is very conceited.
The overall story is ok, but it moves to fast. Think about it; if you were on the street, and you were attacked by a bunch of beybladers, then this guy asks you to start training with him, would you?
I just think you need to develop the characters more.
Overall, the stories ok, and I'll keep reading it.
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Elite Projects - Jun. 06, 2014
Keep going
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Kaneki - Jun. 06, 2014
Dude, this topic is one-years old...
RE: [BEYBLADE STORY] Beyblade Shogun Steel: GCW PROJECT - Elite Projects - Jun. 06, 2014
(Jun. 06, 2014 4:52 PM)Ryûzaki Wrote: Dude, this topic is one-years old...
I know.He can still write more even if it is a year old...
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