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[Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Jan. 06, 2013
So I'm going to try to keep this story alive this time. This is a plastics story so explaining the parts may be a bit difficult.
Edit: I did not, in fact, keep this story alive. I must have gone in and deleted it earlier because just a few lines from the first chapter were still up. I've deleted those.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Driger Kai - Jan. 07, 2013
Looks nice! Haven't seen a plastic-bey story yet, even though I was planning one ... Oh well.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Jan. 07, 2013
Thanks, and if you're still gonna do it, I'd like to see it. Chapter two is up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Driger Kai - Jan. 07, 2013
Okay. The new chapter's great!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Jan. 12, 2013
Jan 08 2013 : Thanks! Chapter 3 is up!
Jan 09 2013 : Well, chapter 4 is up!
Jan 13 2013 : Chapter 5 is up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Jan. 20, 2013
Ok chapter 8 is up! Probably will type chapter 9 right now. Wow I messed up. I meant chapter 6 is up, and I'll type chapter 7 up now XD
Sorry for the double post, but chapter 7 is up! *Does a weird dance so people will read this* I'm joking. I don't dance. Nah, but I would like it if more people read this story
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 20, 2013
cookie to the hoosie(when everything is wonderful) and that is what your story is. WONDERFUL but I wonder that girls name was. hurry and do chapter 8 quick
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Jan. 20, 2013
Well, read chapter 8 and you'll find out (aka chapter 8 is up)!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 21, 2013
and I wonder if you know that I wish to have carinas hair even if im male.and I wonder what will happened in the next chapter
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Jan. 25, 2013
Haha, I'd like to have my hair a little longer, but my darn school has an over the eyebrows, above the ears, and over the collar of my bloody polo policy (as you can see, I'm not the least bit formal XD). Anyway, chapter 9 is up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 25, 2013
ahhhhh smod what gets in the way of people of all ages in alot of schools from being FREE but nice chapter and aww man now i know why she has long hair!!!!!!! shes been living with wolves ima guess. i wish i could do that.................... not really i couldnt get on the cpu, but if i got internet in a cave id be there in a minute.i wish i had bit beast too or be like kenny aka cheif and have it in my cpu but still if i had a bit beast man I WOULD DESTROY EVERYTHING...........jk.but interesting chapter hit me with a hook better than the best boxer.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Jan. 26, 2013
(Jan. 25, 2013 8:18 AM)iwillbe#1isa Wrote: ahhhhh smod what gets in the way of people of all ages in alot of schools from being FREE but nice chapter and aww man now i know why she has long hair!!!!!!! shes been living with wolves ima guess. i wish i could do that.................... not really i couldnt get on the cpu, but if i got internet in a cave id be there in a minute.i wish i had bit beast too or be like kenny aka cheif and have it in my cpu but still if i had a bit beast man I WOULD DESTROY EVERYTHING...........jk.but interesting chapter hit me with a hook better than the best boxer.Tell that to my gym teacher. Anyway, Chapter 10 is up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 27, 2013
i just realised i had a clear red galzzly got i from my best friends but i lost it
it was coool thow and whit seems to get beat every win
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Driger Kai - Jan. 29, 2013
(Jan. 25, 2013 4:20 AM)Outnumbered Wrote: Haha, I'd like to have my hair a little longer, but my darn school has an over the eyebrows, above the ears, and over the collar of my bloody polo policy (as you can see, I'm not the least bit formal XD). Anyway, chapter 9 is up!
Wow, I'd surely never want my school to have that, I'd probably need a new haircut.
Anyways, keep it up, while I catch up.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Jan. 30, 2013
Chapter 10 is up! Sorry for the lack of chapters lately.
Edit: Haha, woops, that'd be chapter 11...my bad.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - thelegISlAtive - Jan. 31, 2013
so wolf girl is best no losses she owned bianca and whit and now to find out if silvester can beat her ,maybe,nice second chapter 10.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Feb. 04, 2013
Haha, I fixed that. Anyway, chapter 12 is up!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Feb. 06, 2013
Chapter 13 is up! Enjoy!
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - thelegISlAtive - Feb. 07, 2013
i honestly did enjoy it truthfully o think you are one of the best writters in the wbo from my prespective but nice chapters.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Feb. 07, 2013
Thanks, but I wouldn't say I'm one of the best. Thanks for the positive feedback. Also, if you like my stories, check out chinablade's and defstamina55's stories (among others). They are much better writers than me. One last thing, chapter 14 should be up Friday.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Feb. 08, 2013
Never mind that, Chapter 14 is up today! Its a bit short, but it seems most of my chapters have been lately, sorry bout that. Also, can't help but notice the lack of stories lately. Anyway, chapter 15 should be up tomorrow. Plus...
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EDIT: So, chapter 15 is up, and I tried using a different writing style in this chapter. Tell me what you think please! Also, info on my new story-
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RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - thelegISlAtive - Feb. 12, 2013
well its pretty good on c 15 so keep it up
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Feb. 12, 2013
Thanks, chapter 16 is up, sorry its short.
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - thelegISlAtive - Feb. 15, 2013
.its cool even thow its short
RE: [Beyblade Story] Frozen Mistakes - Dual - Mar. 01, 2013
Thanks, and chapter 17 is up!