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Story:the real deal - SUNDAYNIGHT - Oct. 30, 2012
Some people think that the heart has has its own life it can make its own choices and live and thrive on love. But whats real isnt in ur heart its much deeper its deeper than hate but not than life dig deeper and u will find true love,life,hate and death but nothing is really true unless u are .... u will find it
RE: Story:the real deal - Dual - Oct. 30, 2012
Is this an actual story? It needs to be way longer, this isn't a text, its a story. Uses the actual word "you" not "u". There are also grammar errors.