World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.
[Story] Lockdown - Printable Version

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[Story] Lockdown - King of Misfits - Oct. 30, 2012

Hello there members of the WBO!
I decided to try a non-beyblade story.
I want legit criticism please.
I hope to finish this story!
SO READ AWAY!
Grin
Characters in Chibi Form (Click to View)


Chapter 1 (Click to View)
Chapter 2 (Click to View)
Chapter 3 (Click to View)



RE: [Story] Lockdown - SilverChronos - Oct. 30, 2012

It really has the stuff, King. 1 little thing that I see in stories everywhere that I hate... no character description.


RE: [Story] Lockdown - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 30, 2012

Ooooh, a story like this! I've been looking for a good one of these lately. I hope it turns out good. I really like it! Good luck! Smile


RE: [Story] Lockdown - Rush - Oct. 30, 2012

Woa. At first, in the prolougue, I thought I was reading about a zombie apocalypse, heh. Keep it up!


RE: [Story] Lockdown - King of Misfits - Nov. 02, 2012

Chapter 2 is up!
Sorry it's so short, I'm in a rush


RE: [Story] Lockdown - SilverChronos - Nov. 03, 2012

Interesting... and in the future I see blood. I like it.


RE: [Story] Lockdown - King of Misfits - Nov. 04, 2012

(Nov. 03, 2012  4:43 PM)ukdl123 Wrote: Interesting... and in the future I see blood. I like it.

It seems your hypothesis is partially correct
Character Descriptions and more chibi characters should be up by Wednesday!




RE: [Story] Lockdown - SilverChronos - Nov. 05, 2012

Yay! I was right!! Blood.... yes.... Anyway, I like it!! KIU!!!
Chibi characters (flashback to chibi Batman) every girl at my school would fangirl if they read this post.


RE: [Story] Lockdown - King of Misfits - Nov. 08, 2012

Chapter 3 is up!


RE: [Story] Lockdown - SilverChronos - Nov. 10, 2012

BLOOD!!!! YES!!!!! BLOOD!!!!! It's just a little short in the chapters though...


RE: [Story] Lockdown - King of Misfits - Nov. 10, 2012

(Nov. 10, 2012  4:26 AM)ukdl123 Wrote: BLOOD!!!! YES!!!!! BLOOD!!!!! It's just a little short in the chapters though...

Yes, you are right
I've been very busy and had to write chapters quickly.
Hopefully I will be able to make longer ones soon




RE: [Story] Lockdown - Rush - Nov. 10, 2012

Epic story!!!
Bad words King, bad words. But still, I love it!


RE: [Story] Lockdown - SilverChronos - Nov. 11, 2012

(Nov. 10, 2012  2:09 PM)King of Misfits Wrote:
(Nov. 10, 2012  4:26 AM)ukdl123 Wrote: BLOOD!!!! YES!!!!! BLOOD!!!!! It's just a little short in the chapters though...

Yes, you are right
I've been very busy and had to write chapters quickly.
Hopefully I will be able to make longer ones soon
Well, I AM a psychokenetic hedgehog. I can time travel. It may be cheating, but it's fun.



RE: [Story] Lockdown - King of Misfits - Dec. 21, 2012

Well, Sorry for no chapters in like, MONTHS! I had really big school projects that took a lot of time and dedication. Then right after that, BAM! Another project and a big test. Ugh.
I'll be writing over break.