a BeyWheelz Story - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 19, 2012
Here is the second Beywheelz story! Hope you like it!
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My Story:
Part 1 (City Championships) Chapter 1
Chapter 1:The Semi-Finals
"Doom Molten Drago, Special Move! Dark Flame Impact!" 13-year-old Seth called to his Balance-type Wheel, in the stadium. He had short black hair, amber eyes, and a sly smile.
"Go Thunder Wing Pegasus, Resounding Thunder!" Called the 10-year-old John.
Drago burst into flame and charged toward Pegasus, who let out a shockwave. The shockwave caused Drago to fly into the sky, which Seth smiled at.
"Why are you smiling?!" The John asked.
"Because, you fell right into my trap." Seth said, "Go! Soaring Fireblast Strike!!"
Drago soared higher into the air, spinning in a circle. Then, Attack Gear down it drove into Pegasus' Attack Gear, unscrewing it. Then, Drago sent a ring of fire to blast thee parts to John.
"Pegasus!!" John cried as he screwed Pegasus back together.
"I win." Seth said, smiling.
"Wow, how did you learn that?!" John asked.
"Practice." Seth said.
"And Seth is the winner!!" Blader DJ Called to the people in the stands, who burst into applause.
"Now Seth moves up to the finals!!" Blader DJ said.
"Yes! Seth said, punching the air. Then he walked back to the locker.
Chapter 2 Hey, here's Chapter 2:
Chapter 2: The Grand Final
"And Seth's opponent is... Rocky Strusioux!!" DJ announced.
The crowd suddenly quieted down. Rocky was an African with a reputation for being ruthless. His Wheel was Hurricane Fin Pisces, a speed type.
"And now, here they are!" DJ said, then announced, "This battle will be a race battle!"
Seth went to the red stadium lift, and pulled out his green launcher and slowly wound his black ripcord. Rocky got up, and did the same with his grey launcher and yellow ripcord.
"Get ready for a pounding!" called Rocky.
"Ditto!" Seth called, as he put Drago on the launcher.
Alright, you two ready?!" DJ called to them.
"Yeah!" Called both Seth and Rocky.
"3...2...1...Let it rip!!!" Seth said, launching Drago.
Drago raced behind Pisces, which didn't go unnoticed.
"Is that the Slipstream?!" DJ asked.
"Yeah, and I'm gonna use Pisces against itself!" Seth confirmed.
Drago suddenly gained speed, going faster and faster. Then, it came up from behind Pisces, overtaking it.
"Heh heh, Now Pisces! Dark Twister of the Sea!!" called Rocky as they reached the quarter mark. Pisces sped up, then spun in circles around Drago, creating steam. As more and more steam appeared, the harder for Seth to see.
"Hey, where's Drago?!" Seth asked.
"Over there!" Rocky said, pointing to where Drago had just flown out of the steam.
"Wah?!" Seth exclaimed. Then, Seth realised what could be done of his predicament, "Go Drago! Soaring Fireblast St——"
"Not gonna work!" Rocky called, smiling as they neared the finish line, "Go! Thundering Storm of DOOM!!!"
Pisces created even more steam, causing drago to disappear again.
As Seth was about to give up, he figured out what to do.
"Go Drago! Flame of Justice!!" Seth called.
Drago spun around and around, heating up the air. Then, Drago burst into flame, and rings of fire surrounded Drago. Then Drago tore into Pisces, Sending Pisces all the way back to Rocky, who called, "Noooo!!!" As Drago crossed the finish line, and came back to Seth.
"And Seth is the winner!" DJ cried.
"Yes! I did it!" Seth exclaimed.
"Grr, you won this time, but I'll be back." Rocky growled, walking away.
"Your prize for winning is a solid gold trophy, and..." Blader DJ rolled out the word to make sure he had everyones attention, "A place in the City Championships! If you win there, you'll get to go to the State CHampionships, DJ said, then "With a team," to himself and, "if you win there you'll get to the World Championships!!"
"W-wow, awesome!" Seth said.
"Now, the Tournament is in 3 days, so you better get prepared!" Blader DJ said.
"Okay." Seth said walking to Beypark for some training.
Chapter 3 This is Chapter 3:
Chapter 3: The Park Battle
Seth was walking to the park for some training when he saw two kids —They were around 11— battling a crash battle.
"Go Leone! Hit him hard!" the girl on the right said.
"Dodge it Striker!" The boy on the left said.
The Leone plowed ahead, charging the Striker. The Striker wiggled around a bit, then barely dodged the Leone's attack. But then, Leone turned around and hit Striker from behind. Then, Striker flew up, and came down at the boy's feet.
"Aww, no fair!" The boy said.
"Ha ha, yes! I won!" The girl said, punching the air as Leone came back to her.
"OK, you won fair and square, see ya tomorrow!" The boy said, then left.
"Hey, you!" The girl said, who had noticed Seth. "You're the guy who won the county championship, right? Come battle me!"
"Uh, ookay?" Seth said, readied his launchar unsteadily.
"How about a Crash Battle?" She said.
"Sure?" Seth said.
"3...2...1...Let it rip!!" They said as one, then launched their beys.
Right at the beginning, the girl said, "Go, Wild Crusher Leone! Circle him!!"
"Wah?! Uh, dodge it, Drago?" Seth said, unused to such a straightforward attack.
Leone, once again, charged. Drago snaked around Leone, then went back and hit Leone back to the girl.
"Nooo!" The girl said.
"Now, who are you?" Seth asked.
"Dawn Sen! Grr, I lost." Dawn said, then she left, too.
"Hmm, strange." Seth wondered aloud. Then, he headed home, wondering how strange that last battle was. When he got home, he plopped down on his bed, and fell asleep.
Chapter 4
Chapter 4: Round One, Part 1
3 days later...Seth got out of bed, got dressed, brushed his teeth, grabbed Drago, and flew out the door. When he got to the city championships, he saw that the tournament was already underway. He got to the registration office, signed in, and found the tournament board.
"The first match in Division A is... Seth VS. Cane in a Crash Battle! Who will win?" DJ announced, "Come on up!"
"I'll crush you!" Cane said to Seth.
"Oh yeah? Bring it!" Seth countered readying his launcher.
"Alright, 3...2...1...Let it rip!!" Dj, Seth, and Cane at the same time.
"Go! Hit him hard Cetus!" Cetus drove forward, ready to hit Drago.
"Not today! I'm not gonna lose, Go Drago!"
"Ooh, it's a power v. balance battle! Who will win?" DJ asked.
Drago and Cetus were about to hit when Drago ran it's Attack Gear on Cetus, causing it to wobble.
"Go now Drago! Molten Rage!"
Drago sped up, catching fire, then smashing Cetus to Cane.
"Nooo!" Cane said, picking up Cetus and leaving.
"What a fast match! And the winner is Seth and Drago!" DJ announced.
"Alright! I got to the semifinals!" Seth said.
"The next round is... Dan VS. David in a Race Battle!" DJ said.
Seth took a seat to watch the match.
Dan and David got on the lifts and readied their launchers.
"3...2...1...let it rip!!"
"Go, Serpent!"
"Go, Zurafa!"
Serpent whacked Zurafa, but Zurafa kept going. Then, "Zurafa! Spinning Winds!" David said.
Zurafa powered right into Serpent, sending it all the way to Dan, then crossed the finish line.
"What a strong wheel, knocking it all the way back to it's owner!" Seth exclaimed.
"And the winner is David!" Blader DJ Exclaimed
Chapter 5
Chapter 5 Round One, Part 2
"Next up, it's Bram VS. Camen, ready for a Stunt Battle?" DJ asked.
Bram and Camen lined up at the stadium and readied their launchers.
"3...2...1... Let it rip!!"
"Go Bull! UFO!" Bram said.
"Sidewinder, Cetus!" Cane said.
"After the moves the crowd voted.
"And it is... 49% for Bram and 51% for Camene, the winner!"
The crowd erupted into applause.
"Ready for the last of Round One in a crash battle?! It's... Dawn VS. John!" DJ announced.
Chapter 6
Chapter 6: Round One, part 3
"Wow, Dawn and John are battling? This'll be a good match. There both really good." Seth said.
"Alright, ready you two? 3...2...1...let it rip!!" DJ said.
"Let it rip!!" Dawn and John said.
"Go Leone!"
"Go Pegasus!"
The two Wheelz crashed into each other, like an explosion.
"Woah! Intense!" DJ confirmed.
"Now Pegasus! Resounding Thunder!"
"Uh-oh. Dawn doesn't have a Special Move!" Seth said.
"Now Leone! Streaming Whirlwind Strike!"
"I stand corrected." Seth said.
Leone suddenly flew off the stadium because of Pegasus, then, Leone spun around and around, getting faster and faster, then, eventually a tornado formed, which sucked up Pegasus and spat it out at John's feet.
"W-what?! Nooo!" John exclaimed.
"Oh yeah, I won!" Dawn exclaimed.
"And the winner is Dawn Sen!"
"Wow, she won?!"Seth wondered aloud.
"And now, the winner is Dawn!" DJ proclaimed. "And now, for the first battle of the semi-finals in a Crash Battle is  eth VS. David!"
"You two, come on up!" Chapter 7
Chapter 7: Semi-Finals
"I made it this far, I'm not losing!" David affirmed, more to himself than to Seth.
"Neither will I!" Seth said.
"Alright, ready?" DJ said. "3...2...1...Let it rip!!"
"Rip!!" Seth said along with David.
"Go Zurafa! Spinning Winds!" David said, starting off with a Special Move.
"Well OK then." Seth said. Then, "Alright, Special move, Soaring Fireblast Strike!"
Zurafa spun up from above, crashing towards Drago. Then, Drago launched into the air, causing Zurafa to crash-land. Then Drago spun around and around, catching fire, then, Attack Gear down, Drago smashed into Drago smashed into Zurafa's Attack Gear, causing it to unscrew.
"Nooo! Spike Crusher Zurafa!" David exclaimed.
"Awww, that wasn't very long." Seth said.
"And the winner is...Seth! Again!" DJ said. "Next is: Camen VS. Dawn in a Race Battle!"
Seth once again took his seat and Dawn and Camen came up.
"Get ready! 3...2...1...Let it rip!!"
"Let it rip!!" Dawn and Camen said.
"Go Soaring Fin Cetus!"
"Go Wild Crusher Leone!"
"Cetus, Whirlpool of the Deep!"
"Oh, yeah? Streaming Whirlwind Strike!"
Cetus spun in a circle, accumulating mist and water. Leone started it's Special Move, but the water stopped it.
"What?! Leone!" Dawn said, "Power ahead!!"
"No use!" Camen said. "Cetus, Strike Fin!"
Cetus rode easily on the water, skating on it like ice. Then it smashed into Leone from the side. Leone wobbled, and started to slow.
"No! I won't lose here!" Dawn yelled. "Leone! Spinning Stream of Whirlwind!
Leone stopped wobbling, and sped towards Cetus, getting faster and faster, then a cyclone formed around Leone, getting bigger, then, It started to pull Cetus closer and closer, then, it sucked Cetus and the water and shot it to Cane's feet. Then Leone whirled past the finish line, and came back to Dawn.
"Yes! I won it!" Dawn said.
DJ Started, "Now, it's the final battle between: Seth and Dawn in a—"
"Crash Battle." Both Dawn and Seth said.
"OK then, tommorow is the final match. Come back then for the finale!" DJ announced.
Then, Seth said "Good luck" to Dawn, and went home. On the way, something stopped him... Chapter 8
Chapter 8
As Seth walked past BeyPark,
"Let it rip!" He heard, Then,"Urgh, Go Bull!"
He looked and saw a boy battling a huge figure.
"huh?" Seth said.
"Now Zurafa, Special Move, Dark Twister!"
"Let it rip!" Seth said, launching Drago.
Drago hit Bull back to the boy, scratched, but in one piece.
"Thank you!" The boy said.
"Run!" Seth ordered.
"Grr, stay out of this!"The huge figure said.
"No way! You were harassing that kid!"
"Why do you care? Wild Fire Zurafa! Dark Twister!"
"Grr, Drago, Dark Flame Impact!"
A dark tornado formed around Zurafa, and Dragu burst into dark flames. The tornado clashed with Drago's flames, and Drago's flames spluttered out, and Drago shot back.
"Drago! Soaring Fireblast Strike!"
"Zurafa, Wall of Darkness!"
Zurafa suddenly got surrounded by a dark wall, which Drago bounced off
of.
"Wh-what? Drago, Flame of—"
"Zurafa, Darkly Cyclone of destruction!"
As Drago was getting back to attacking, Zurafa was surrounded by a giant cyclone, then, the figure said, "Flames of doom!" Then, the dark cyclone was surrounded by flames, and hit Drago, who got caught in the fiery vortex. Then he got shot back, along with Seth.
Clink.
A burnt Drago fell back, along with Seth.
"Heh hah, See ya!" He said, walking away.
Eventually Seth made it home, and cleaned up Drago. Then he fell asleep. Chapter 9
Chapter 9: The Finales Match, Part 1
"Alright, it's time for the last match of Division A! It is... Seth VS. Dawn!" DJ announced.
"Alright, 3...2...1..." DJ said.
"Let it rip!!" Seth and Dawn shouted together, launching their wheelz.
"The first move sets the course for the rest of the battle, Leone, Streaming Whirlwind Strike!" Dawn said.
"Oh, yeah? Drago, Dark Flame Impact!"
The Special Moves collided, and the shockwave blew both Wheelz back.
"Grr, go Leone! Spinning Stream of Whirlwind!"
"Now! Drago, Soaring Fireblast strike!"
Again, the Special Movesclashed, but both Wheelz were prepared and weren't blown back this time. Then, they continued hitting. Leone—being a power type— started pushing Drago— a balance type that didn't have as much power— back, towards the end of the stadium, for a stadium out.
"No Drago! Maneuver around Leone!" Seth called to Drago.
Drago finally got out from in front of Leone, and started to do the same, almost succeeding as Leone was spinning towards where Drago was pushing it. But then Dawn said,"Leone, Whirling Cyclone Spin!" Then Leone blew Drago back and turned toward him.
"Grr, Now Drago, Seaburst Claw!" Seth called to Drago.
To be continued... Chapter 10
Chapter 10, the Finales Match
Leone started spinning in a circl, faster and faster, and then a Circle of wind appeared, and started going higher and higher— They had to open the roof— and then started to wreck the stadium. Then Drago started to churn up a dense amount of water around it's Attack Gear, Molten, and then it was a sphere of water around the entire Wheel, churning and shifting, getting smaller around Drago until it was a sphere barely bigger than Drago. Then, as the tornado started to come closer, Drago rushed forward. As Drago was about to make contact with it the water got slightly bigger and broke through the tornado. Not enough to destroy the tornado, but enough to pierce it. Then the water shrank again. Then the sphere burst into steam.
"Leone? where are you?" Dawn said, searching the steam.
"There!" Seth said, pointing to ana rea where the steam was dissipitating.
Drago burst from the steam in a torrent of water in front of it, and trailing behind it, and crashed into Leone, sending it high into the air.
"That's it." Seth said, smiling.
"Not yet!" Dawn called. "Leone, smash right into Drago!
"Huh, ok. Drago, Flame of Justice." Seth said.
"No!" Dawn said as Leone flew toward Drago's Special Move.
Bang.
Leone fell back to Dawn.
"Ahh man, I lost." Dawn said.
"Don't worry. That was a close battle." Seth said, smiling.
"Yeah, you DID almost lose." Dawn said.
"Hey!" Seth said, with a laugh.
"And the winner is Seth!" DJ said. "Now, you two will be on a team with the other two finalists from Division B!"
"Division B? I thought this was it!" Seth said.
"Yeah!" Dawn said. "I guess we were too caught up in this division to find out."
"Well, the final in Division B is about to come on. Might as well watch!" DJ informed them.
"OK. I'll do that." Seth said, sighing.
"Me, too." Dawn said.
When Seth got home, he flipped on the TV to watch.
"And now, the last battle of Division B is... Lily VS. Zem in a stunt battle*!" DJ announced.
"Hmm. So they will be my team mates, huh?" Seth wondered aloud.
Lily and Zem stepped up to the stadium.
"3...2...1...let it rip!" They said, launching their beys.
"Now Soaring Mane Detroyer!" Lily called.
"Slip past him silently, Slash Crusher Rex!" Zem called happily.
Destoyer was heading straight up the ramp for Rex, who slipped past quickly to avoid the hit. Then, both landed on the opposite ramp and turned around.
"Woah, it takes skill to get to the other ramp." Seth said, watching attentively.
"Now Rex, Special Move, Great Slam!" Zem said.
"All right then, Destroyer, Thesius Shredder!" Lily said.
Rex jumped off the ramp straight up, then tillted itself downward to slam Destroyer. Destroyer jumped off the ramp, and spun around and around,* and started to glow. Then, a huge explosion hit Rex in midair.
"Woah, Rex, use—"
"Too late. Now Destroyer, Therian barrage!"
"Uh uh uh! Rex Nova Attack!"
Rex was surrounded by a red aura wich seemed impossibly hot. Destroyer was coated in frost,—which left a trail of ice behind it— making it faster. Then, the Special Moves met in midair, causing a huge explosion of flame and ice. The stadium was covered in steam from the heat and ice colliding.
"Woah, I wonder which one, uh, won?" Seth thought aloud.
As the steam cleared, it revealed both Wheelz still moving, barely. Then, Destroyer slid to Rex and hit it's side inbetween the ramps, knocking it down. Then, Destroyer fell on Rex.
"Nooo! Rex" Zem cried out, clutching his head.
"I... did it. I won!" Lily said, hands in the air.
"She did it! Lily and Destroyer just beat Zem and Rex by a measly 3 seconds!" DJ announced.
"Now, you two and the winner and runner-up of Division A will be a team! You are to meet here tomorrow, introduce yourselves, pick a captain and a name. The captain is decided by a Crash Battle, got it?" DJ said.
"Yeah!" Lily and Zem said in unison.
"Yeah," Seth said, watching. Then, he turned off the TV and went to bed.
"Now
*A real stunt battle, not the gag one in Division A.
*Not like Wall oof Typhoon or other moves, like a coin that got spun around. Chapter 11
Chapter 11, The Meet
The next morning, Seth got out of bed, Got ready, grabbed Drago, and ran out the door to meet with his new teammates.
When he got there, he saw only one person there. It was Zem.
"You must be one of the finalists in Division A,huh?" Zem said lazily.
"Yeah, I'm the winner of the Division."
"Well, while we wait for the others, how about we warm up before the deciding match, ok?" Zem said, holding up his Wheel—Slash
Crusher Rex.
"Sure, prepare for a loss!" Seth replied holding Doom Molten Drago.
They went to the Race Stadium for the match.
"We'll see who's faster, K?" said Zem
"Both our beys are Balance Types, right? Neither will have an advantage."
"Fine."
"3...2...1...Let it rip!"
Their beys hit the stadium and came up for a win. Then, they both crossed the other line, and tied.
"Awww, a tie!" Zem said frustrated.
"Yeah," Seth said.
They decided to have a Crash Battle, as the Race Battle was unsuccessfull. They launched their Wheels and started the battle.
"Go Rex, Great Slam!"
"Now Drago! Dark Flame Impact!"
The Special Moves were about to clash, when Seth and Zem heard...
"Thesius Shredder!"
"Streaming Whirlwind Strike!"
BOOM!
All four Wheels stopped spinning at their owners feet.
"Oh come on!" Zem said angrily. "I was about to win!"
"Well, too slow!" Dawn said, ignoring Zem's frustration.
"Well, that was a big boom. Who knew though, right?" Lily said.
"I guess." Seth said with an exasperated sigh.
"Alright, ready for the real deciding match?!" Zem said readily.
"Alright, 3...2...1... Let, it, Rip!"
"Go Rex!"
"Hit him hard Leone!"
Do it, Destroyer!"
"Now, Drago!"
Leone and Rex hit at the bottom of the stadium. Then, Destroyer and Drago clashed. Then Leone hit back Rex in their clash. Drago and Destroyer were at a stand-off.
"Now Rex! Special Move, Great Slam!"
"Streaming Whirlwind Strike!"
Leone's tornado hot Rex, but Rex was able to withstand the hit. Then, Rex slowly penetrated the tornado. By then, the Special Move wore off. Also, Leone's tornado couldn't effect the battle inside of it.
"Haha, you're big, strong tornado can't help you know can it?!" Zem said gleefully.
"Grr, uh, ha!Special Move Leone, Spinning Stream of Whirlwind!"
Now, Rex Nova Attack!"
Just as Leone was about to start it's Special Move, Rex slammed into it with it's Special Move.
"Ha, that's all she wrote." Zem said, smiling.
"Aah, noo!" Dawn said, crumpling to her knees.
"Go now, Rex Nova Attack!" Zem said.
Rex used it's Special Move on Drago and Destroyer (Still at a stand-off!) and they flew away.
"Huh? Lily?" Seth asked Lily.
"Uh-huh." Lily nodded, understanding what Seth meant. "Now Destroyer! Special Move! Therian Barrage!"
"Drago, Molten Rage!"
"huh? Ultimate Rex Barrage! NOOW!!!" Zem yelled loudly.
"Joint Special Move*,Fusion Blast!" Seth and Lily called together.
Rex was covered in a purple aura, and started to vibrate at a high speed, going faster and faster, and eventually nearly invisible. Then, Destroyer and Drago started to spinning in a circle*, getting faster and faster as well. Then, a red aura formed around them, becoming an electric shield. Then, the shield formed into a single blast, containing both Drago and Destroyer. The Special Moves clashed, and neither seemed to be gaining any ground.
"Now! Push through!" Lily and Seth called together again.
Drago and Destroyer glowed brightly once again, and finally gained some ground.
"Rrr, Rex! Special Move! Super Rex Destructive Strike! GAAAH!!!!"
"No! ready Lily?" Seth asked.
"Yeah," Lily said. Then, with Seth, she said,"Joint Special Move! Fusion Power Strike!!!"
Rex started to glow much, much brighter. Then, it vibrated so it had disappeared. All that was visible was it's aura. Then, Drago and Destroyer glowed nearly blindingly bright, and surged forward against Rex.
BOOOOM!
All three Wheels flew into the air.
"Who is still spinning?" They all said at once.
Then, Rex fell, completely motionless, at Zem's feet.
"Nooooo!" Zem said, unbelieving that he lost.
"But are Drago or Destroyer still moving?" Dawn wondered.
Then, Drago AND Destroyer landed, still moving—Barely.
"Now Drago, Dark Flame Impact!" Seth called.
"Huh?!" Lily said. "Wha—"
"Too late!" Seth said.
Drago hit Destroyer with it's Special Move, and knocked Destroyer to Lily. Then, it's power petered out, and stopped and fell to it's side.
"Huff,puff, I... Did it!" Seth said.
"So I guess Seth is Team leader, huh?" Dawn thought aloud.
"Yeah, and, being the first to lose, YOU'RE the sub." Zem said, relieved he was able to beat her first.
"And I'm 2nd-in-command, I guess." Lily said, satidfied with the position.
"Ok, now, the only thing remaining is..." Seth said.
"The name." The others said.
"Well, whaddya think we should name ourselves? Seth asked.
"How about 'Strike Burners'?" Zem said, calm once again.
"How about 'Blast Beamers'?" Dawn suggested.
"How about... ' Team Superior Dusk' guys?" Lily suggested.
"Hmm... Yeah." Seth said.
"Cool!" Dawn and Zem said enthusiastically.
"Alright, it's been a long day. Let's go home and get some rest." Seth said.
"Yeah," The others said.
Then, they all left.
*Inspiration comes from Marche and Nicole's Joint Special Move, Fusion Tornado.
*Like in Wall of Typhoon, only that two are in one circle. Part 2, State Championships (To be finished)
Chapter 12
Chapter 12
Seth finally made it to where the State Championships were, and met up with the rest of Superior Dusk.
"Alright, how about a practice match?" Seth asked.
"OK, how about You and Zem, and me and Dawn?" Lily suggested.
"OK."
They went to a stadium and got ready.
"3...2...1... Let it rip!!"
Zem's Rex and Seth's Drago hit directly in the middle, and Dawn's Leone and Lily's Destroyer clashed as well. Then, Rex came up and hit Drago repeatedly. Then, Drago dodged, and started pushing Rex out of the stadium.
"Now Drago! Push him out!"
"No! Rex, get out of the way!"
Rex was almost out when it dodged the attack and started to get away.
"Now Leone! Make Destroyer get a stadium out!"
Leone started to push Destroyer out as well, but into the air. Then, Destroyer was almost out.
"Haha, no one wins against Leone in a power clash!"
"Destroyer, Therian Barrage!
"Leone, Streaming Whirlwind Strike!"
The Special Moves clashed, and Destroyer started to push through the tornado, little by little. Then, Destroyer was in.
"Go hard, Destroyer! Thesius Shredder!" Lily called to Destroyer.
"No! Leone, Spinning Stream of Whirlwind!"
Once again, the Special Moves clashed, stiill in the tornado. Then, the two tornados combined, and sent Destroyer flying.
"No Destroyer, Thenian Canonade!"
Destroyer sent itself above the tornado, and dived. Then, it activated the Special Move directly above Leone. Then, it was over.
"Awww, I lost again!" Dawn said.
"Well, good try there." Lily said as Destroyer came back to her.
"Rex, Great Slam!"
"Drago, Dark Flame Impact!"
The Special Moves clashed, then, Drago started forward. Then, Rex couldn't go any more, and stopped.
"It's a Sleep Out!" Seth said as Drago came back.
"Well, I guess I lost this one." Zem said, picking up Rex.
"Alright, ready for Round One?! First up is Team Superior Dusk VS. Team Poison Fury!" They heard Blader DJ announce.
"Let's go guys," Dawn said. then,"I'm first!" Chapter 13
Chapter 13
"First is Dawn VS. Tix in a race battle!" DJ said.
"Ready? 3...2...1... Let, it—" DJ started.
"Rip!" Dawn and Tix said as one.
"Go Toxic Crusher Scorpio!"
"Now Wild Crusher Leone!"
Leone and Scorpio hit the track and Leone went up the side.
"Ha, already trying to get a stadium out?!" Tix taunted.
"Nope. I'm gonna smash right into you!!" Dawn countered.
Leone dove back to the track, and right to Scorpio.
"Scorpio no!" Tix cried.
"Ha, what I lack in speed, I make up for power!" Dawn said.
Leone started to push Scorpio right to the edge of the track for a quick stadium out.
"Rrr, Scorpio Slasher!" Tix cried out desperately.
"Leone, Streaming Whirlwind Strike!"
Leone started the tornado while Scorpio started to glow purple. Then, Scorpio smashed right through the tornado, destroying it.
"What?! Leone Spinning Stream of Whirlwind!"
Again,Scorpio's Special Move destroyed the tornado.
"No! Leone Spinning Stream of Whirlwind!" Dawn called just as desperately as Tix had earlier.
Leone started to the tornado, but it just did the same thing.
"No, Leone..." Dawn said.
"Wahaha, you LOSE!" Tix said.
That started something in Dawn.
"Now Leone Swirling Blast of Air Strike!" Dawn yelled.
Leone ran up to the side of the track, and started spinning in the air. Then, a HUGE Blast of air smashed down on Scorpio. A large mushroom cloud came up, which Leone fell into.
"What happened? Did I win?!" Dawn asked.
"Not a chance!" Tix said.
The dust cleared, revealing Scorpio hitting Leone, who stopped spinning.
"Noooo!!" Dawn called, falling to her knees.
"Heh, heh, heh. Good going, Squirt." Tix said.
"We're gonna defeat you in the next round!" Zem shouted.
"It looks like Zem has put himself forward for Round 2!" DJ announced.
"I'm coming up, too!" Trent said, holding up Slash Stinger Scorpio.
"Alright, Trent VS. Zem in a Stunt Battle! 3...2...1... let it rip!"
Scorpio and Rex launched up the ramp and smashed into each other. Rex, a balance type, knocked back Scorpio, a speed type.
"No Scorpio, Ultra Scorpio Slasher!"
"Rex, Great Slam!"
Rex and Scorpio hit once again, Scorpio's Special Move was the same as the Scorpio Slasher, except stronger. But Great Slam is stronger.
"Nooo!" Trent yelled as Scorpio fell to his feet.
"And Zem has evened the score!" DJ announced.
"Yeah, who's next guys?" He asked his teammates.
"Me," Seth said. Then, to Team Poison Fury, "How about you?"
"Me." Said Team Leader B'Ryan, flashing hurricane Bite Serpent.
"Me too." said Sub D'Brickshaw, showing off Venom Stinger Scorpio.
"A team battle? Ok. So, Lily will have to help Seth in this Tag-Team Crash Battle!" DJ told the crowd.
"OK, 3...2...1... Let it rip!!" The foursome yelled.
Drago and Destroyer rushed towards Serpent and Scorpio. Drago, Destroyer, and Serpent were Balance-Types, but Scorpio is a Power-Type. Scorpio hit Destroyer and started to push it back. Drago and Serpent were at a stand-off.
"Now Scorpio! Poison Strike Stinger!" D'Brickshaw called out to Scorpio.
"Thesius Shredder!" Lily called to Destroyer.
Scorpio glowed purple and green, and vibrated. Then, it clashed with Destroyer's Special Move. Then, it still pushed back Destroyer.
"Dark Flame Impact!"
Drago hit Serpent, and knocked it out of the stadium.
"Not possible!" D'Brickshaw yelled.
"Yeah, we did it!" Seth said to Lily.
"Yeah, let's get Serpent now!" Lily told Seth.
"Joint Special Move, Fusion Blast!" They said together.
"Special Move, Hurricane Bite Attack!!" B'Ryan yelled.
Serpent started to glow green and red. Then, it started to go in a zig-zaggy pattern and clashed with Fusion Blast, knocking into them like a steamroller. Destroyer and Drago barely held on, until Drago and Destroyer glowed even brighter, and knocked Serpent all the way to B'Ryan.
"Wh-wh-wh..."B'Ryan stuttered.
"And Team Superior Dusk goes on to Round 2 of the State Championships! This round is tommorow. Get rested guys." DJ said.
"Yeah," Seth and his team said. Then, they went to their rooms. Chapter 14
Chapter 14
"OK now, it's Team Superior Dusk VS Team Legend!" DJ said the next morning. "It's Team Leader Jule VS Lily in a Crash Battle!"
Lily and Jule came up to the stadium and readied their launchers.
'3...2...1... Let it rip!"
They launched their Wheelz.
"Go Savage Warrior Destroyer!"
"Go Soaring Mane Destroyer!"
The two Wheelz met in the middle, and SW Destroyer knocked SM Destroyer almost all the way back.
"Argh, Destroyer! Thesius Shredder!" Lily called to Destroyer.
"Destroyer, Special Move, Great Sword!" Jule called.
Lily's Destroyer and Jule's smashed into each other, and seemed to be at a tie.
"Now Destroyer, Special Move, Therian Barrage!" Lily said.
Lily's Destroyer reared up and delivered a barrage of attacks, pushing Jule's Destroyer back and out of the stadium.
"Yeah! I won it!" Lily whooped.
"Nooo!" Jule cried.
"Next up, get ready for Zem VS Cino in a Crash Battle!"
They both came up and readied their launchers.
"3...2...1... Let it rip!"
"Now Rex, Great Slam!"
"Go hard Slash Fin Cetus! Special Move, Water Whirlpool Slash!"
The Moves clashed, and Rex smashed right through Cetus.
"Now Rex Nova Attack!"
Rex smashed Cetus further back.
"And Ultimate Rex Barrage!"
Rex smashed Cetus into the wall, and Cetus stoppeed moving.
"What. Just. Happened." Cino asked himself.
"Alright, Team Superior dusk wins Round 2!" DJ announced. "Just 2 rounds left! Tommorow is the Semi-Finals!"
Then, Seth and his team left. Chapter15
Chapter 15
"And now, it's Team Superior Dusk's Lily VS Team Ulti-Flare's Sammy in a crash battle!"
"OK, 3,...2...1... Let it rip!"
"Go Destroyer!"
"Now Serpent!"
Destroyer and Serpent hit each other, and Serpent started delivering a high-power barrage attack. Then Serpent started glowing. Then, it was a different bey altogether.
"Huh? Cool! Rampage Stinger Serpent! Attack!" Sammy yelled when he saw the transformation.
Then, Serpent smashed into Destroyer and as Destroyer was about to fly out, Destroyer started glowing as well, then as it was about to fall out, a huge explosion rocked the stadium. When the smoke cleared, Serpent was halfway embedded in the stadium wall, and Destroyer was a different bey as well.
"Wow, it's Raging Shredder Destroyer!" Lily marveled.
"Next is the finals of the State Championships! Get ready for it!" DJ announced. "It will be Zem VS Dave in a Stunt Battle!" Chapter 16
Chapter 16
Zem came up, along with Dave.
"Hmm, maybe Rex can evolve, too?" He wondered aloud.
"Well, you may have figured it out already, but everyone in my team's Wheelz are on the verge of evolution. So I'm probably next!" Dave said.
"Alright, 3...2...1... Let it rip!" They yelled.
"Now Bone Bite Serpent!" Dave yelled,"Special Move, Serpent Bone Constrictor!"
"Great Slam!" Zem commanded.
The moves clashed, and a huge explosion ensued. Rex and Serpent were both going strong still. Then Rex started to flash. Serpent did, too. They continued flashing as they hit, and glowed brighter and brighter. Then, Rex and Serpent were different.
"Go, Spike Bite Rex!"
"Now, Venom Gash Serpent!" Dave yelled, "Venom Gash Attack!"
"Rex Nova Attack!" Zem commanded.
Rex and Serpent attacked, and an enormous explosion ensued. When the smoke cleared, Rex was barely rolling, as was Serpent. Serpent sped up, and Rex stopped.
"Noo!" Zem cried. "How could I lose with this new Rex?!"
"Because I won with this new Serpent!" Dave told him.
"Next is Dawn VS Kenny in a Crash Battle!" DJ announced.
Dawn and Kenny came up and readied their launchers.
"Leone will be the next to evolve!" Dawn announced.
"Yeah, right." Kenny taunted. "It will be MY Herculeo!"
"OK, 3...2...1... Let it rip!" They launched their Wheelz.
"Go Leone!" Dawn yelled.
"Attack Striker!" Kenny commanded.
When the two hit, the two beys both smshed into the stadium walls, greatly decreasing rotation.
"Now Leone, Streaming Whirlwind Strike!"
Leone started to glow, as did Herculeo. They glowed brighter and brighter. Suddenly, both Leone and Herculeo were different.
"Yeah! Bone Gash Leone! Whirling Cyvclone Spin!"
"Now Soaring Blade Herculeo!"
Leone's Tornado collided with Herculeo. After the tornado faded, Herculeo was defeated.
"Yes!" Dawn said as Leone returned.
"And Dawn is the winner!" DJ announced.
"The finals will be tommorow, so go get ready!" Chapter 17
Chapter 17
The next day, Seth's team came to the stadium a little early for some practice.
"We'll have a battle royal!." Seth announced.
"3...2...1... Let it rip!"
The four beys landed in the crash stadium.
"Now Drago!"
"Go Leone!"
"Destroyer, attack!"
"Smash 'em Rex!"
Leone used it's Bone Energy Core to bounce into Destroyer, who used it's Raging Energy Core to get some extra speed and power. Rex used the Spike Energy Core to get superior power and speed to smash into Drago, whose speed and power hadn't been augmented.
"No Drago! Dark Flame Impact!" Seth yelled.
"New Rex, Great Slam!" Zem commanded.
Rex's Special Move, which had been augmented by the transformation and would normally be weaker, was able to beat Drago's Special Move.
"No! Soaring Fireblast Strike!" Seth called out.
"Go Rex!" Zem yelled. "Rex Nova Attack!"
Again the Special Move clashed, with the same result.
"Drago Molten Rage!"
"I can defeat him now with Great Slam!"
This time, even augmented, Rex's Special Move wasn't enough to beat Drago's even stronger Special Move. It was over then. Now, to Destroyer and Leone's battle.
Leone was able to achieve the upper hand, being a Power-Type.
"Go Destroyer, Thenien Canonade!"
"Leone, Spinning Stream of Whirlwind!"
Leone whipped up it's tornado, and Destroyer gathered power. When the Special Moves hit, Destroyer pierced the tornado. Then, Leone and Destroyer smashed, crashed, and bashed. Leone used it's Gash Attack Gear to scrape Destroyer up, and Destroyer used it's Shredder Attack Gear to... shred Leone up. The effects were immediate in both beys, whose rotation was weaker. The two started to lamely tap each other.
"I still have enough power for my Special Move!" Dawn realized. "Streaming Whirlwind Strike!"
Destroyer fought the tornado, but it pushed it further into the shrinking gap between tornadoes, which merged and shot Destroyer out.
"No!" Lily exclaimed.
"Yeah!" Dawn whooped. Then, pointing at Seth, said, "You're next!"
"Oh, yeah?" Seth asked. "Well come at me!"
"Go Leone, Whirling Cyclone Spin!" Dawn said, utterly ignorant to the fact her bey, who was significantly slower, didn't have enough power to generate the tornado, and got a Sleep-Out.
"Say whaaat?!" Dawn said. "Leone!"
"Yeah!" Seth yelled. "You're Wheel was too weak to use your—"
"Alright, ready for the finals?!" DJ announced. "Team Superior Dusk VS Team Flame Bursters!"
"Come on guys, let's go!" Seth called to his team, running out to the stadium with his team. Chapter 18
Chapter 18
Team Superior Dusk and Team Flame Bursters walked into the Crash stadium, glaring.
"I'm up, and my Serpent is gonna thrash you!" Keb taunted.
"My, Spike Bite Rex and I will stomp your little snake!" Zem taunted back.
"3...2...1... Let it rip!!"
Spike Bite Rex and Raging Blade Serpent smashed, but Serpent was not strong enough and got blown away by Rex's new power.
"Rex, use a barrage attack!"
"Gak! Serpent, uh, uh, u-use, uh—" Keb started.
"Now, Ultimate Rex Barrage!!" Zem yelled.
Rex glowed gold and started to blast Serpent out. Serpent didn't put up much of a fight.
"Zem and Rex win!" DJ announced. "Next is Lily VS Blay!"
The aforementioned ran to the Race Stadium, and prepared for launch.
"3...2...1... Let it rip!!"
Raging Shredder Destroyer and Rampage Fire Bull sped into battle smashing and crashing each other.
"Go now, Destroyer! Thenien Canonade!" Lily yelled.
"Blaze Crash, Bull!"
Destroyer and Bull smashed, but Destroyer's new power overwhelmed Bull— for a moment. Then Bull was overcome in flames and utterly smashed Destroyer out of the stadium and crossed the finish line.
"D-Destroyer..." Lily trailed, falling to her knees. "How? Destroyer's new power..."
"I'm next!" Seth said.
Me, too!" Via— The leader of The Flame Bursters— decided.
"3...2...1... Let it rip!!"
Doom Molten Drago and Doom Molten Fireblaze hit the Crash Stadium's floor, and they smashed and crashed.
"Hmm, if I can unlock Drago's—" Seth started.
"Yoohoo! There's a battle going on!" Via called. "Focus!"
"Go Drago!" Seth yelled. "Drago Seaburst!"
"Fireblaze Imperial Lava Attacker!"
The beys clashed head on. Fire and water. They hit again and agai, glowing brighter each time. Soon, there was a blinding light. Drago had changed.
"Go River Warrior Drago!" Seth yelled. "Special Move! Drago River Blazer!"
Drago glowed blue, radiating power, and manipulated the moisture in the air, creating a sphere of water that surrounded Fireblaze, extinguishing it's flame. Then Drago smashed headlong into Fireblaze. It was over.
"Fireblaze!" Via cried.
"Oh, yeah!" Seth whooped.
You just earned a spot for your team to the National Tournament!" DJ announced.
"Yeah!" Team Superior Dusk whooped.
You'll be on your way to New York in one week to represent North Carolina!"
"Really?" Zem asked.
"Yeah!" Dawn whooped.
"Get some practice and rest in guys. DJ told them.
Let's meet tomorrow at the bey park, ok?"
"Yeah." The rest of the team agreed.
Seth
Age-13
Wheel  oom Molten Drago (Balance-type)
Special Move(s): Dark Flame Impact, Soaring Fireblast Strike, Flame of Justice, Drago Molten Rage, Drago Seaburst Claw, Fusion Blast (In conjunction with Lily), Fusion Power Strike (In conjunction with Lily),
Design: Dark hair, black pants, red shirt, amber eyes
Personality: Friendly, quiet, helpful, reads a lot,
Dawn Sen
Age- 11
Wheel: (Former) Wild Crusher Leone (Power-type), Bone Gash Leone (Power-Type)
Special Move(s): Streaming Whirlwind Strike, Spinning Stream of Whirlwind, Whirling Cyclone Spin
Design: Blue shorts, green shirt, blonde, brown eyes,
Personality: Nice, but impatient,
Lily Wrend
Age-13
Wheel: (Former) Soaring Mane Destroyer (Balance-Type), Raging Shredder Destroyer (Balance-Type)
Special Move(s): Thesius Shredder, Therian Barrage, Thenien Canonade, Fusion Blast (In conjunction with Seth), Fusion Power Strike (In conjunction with Seth),
Design: Blue pants, light red shirt and pink hoodie, Brown hair with a red streak, blue eyes,
Personality: Thoughtful; if not battling, reading; selfless, patient,
Zem
Age-12
Wheel  Former) Slash Crusher Rex (Balance-Type), Spike Bite Rex (Speed-Type)
Special Move(s): Great Slam, Rex Nova Attack, Ultimate Rex Barrage, Super Rex Destructive Strike,
Design:Loose pants, black and gold shirt, gold gloves, white and black hair,
Personality  asygoing, serious when it comes to battling, and easily angered at loss,
Creator:isa
Do not vote that you hate the story because you hate beywheelz!
P.S. 'The Depths of Pisces' is a tentative name. It might change depending on the finished plot. It may have nothing to do with Pisces after Chapter 2! This is additive writing.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - Driger Kai - Oct. 19, 2012
Its pretty well done, but a bit short. Keep it up!
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 20, 2012
Hey, here's Chapter 2:
Chapter 2: The Grand Final
"And Seth's opponent is... Rocky Strusioux!!" DJ announced.
The crowd suddenly quieted down. Rocky was an African with a reputation for being ruthless. His Wheel was Hurricane Fin Pisces, a speed type.
"And now, here they are!" DJ said, then announced, "This battle will be a race battle!"
Seth went to the red stadium lift, and pulled out his red launcher and slowly wound his black ripcord. Rocky got up, and did the same with his grey launcher and yellow ripcord.
"Get ready for a pounding!" called Rocky.
"Ditto!" Seth called, as he put Drago on the launcher.
Alright, you two ready?!" DJ called to them.
"Yeah!" Called both Seth and Rocky.
"3...2...1...Let it rip!!!" Seth said, launching Drago.
Drago raced behind Pisces, which didn't go unnoticed.
"Is that the Slipstream?!" DJ asked.
"Yeah, and I'm gonna use Pisces against itself!" Seth confirmed.
Drago suddenly gained speed, going faster and faster. Then, it came up from behind Pisces, overtaking it.
"Heh heh, Now Pisces! Dark Twister of the Sea!!" called Rocky as they reached the quarter mark. Pisces sped up, then spun in circles around Drago, creating steam. As more and more steam appeared, the harder for Seth to see.
"Hey, where's Drago?!" Seth asked.
"Over there!" Rocky said, pointing to where Drago had just flown out of the steam.
"Wah?!" Seth exclaimed. Then, Seth realised what could be done of his predicament, "Go Drago! Soaring Fireblast St——"
"Not gonna work!" Rocky called, smiling as they neared the finish line, "Go! Thundering Storm of DOOM!!!"
Pisces created even more steam, causing drago to disappear again.
As Seth was about to give up, he figured out what to do.
"Go Drago! Flame of Justice!!" Seth called.
Drago spun around and around, heating up the air. Then, Drago burst into flame, and rings of fire surrounded Drago. Then Drago tore into Pisces, Sending Pisces all the way back to Rocky, who called, "Noooo!!!" As Drago crossed the finish line, and came back to Seth.
"And Seth is the winner!" DJ cried.
"Yes! I did it!" Seth exclaimed.
"Grr, you won this time, but I'll be back." Rocky growled, walking away.
"Your prize for winning is a solid gold trophy, and..." Blader DJ rolled out the word to make sure he had everyones attention, "A place in the Regional Championships! If you win there, you'll get to go to the Beywheelz WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP!!"
"W-wow, awesome!" Seth said.
"Now, the Tournament is in 3 days, so you better get prepared!" Blader DJ said.
"Okay." Seth said walking to Beypark for some training.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - Dual - Oct. 20, 2012
Pretty good. You are doing a good job at describing the battles but
1. Try to describe the wheelz a bit more, dont just do al special moves (im not saying that all that is happening is special moves but still, more of the actual wheelz normal attacks and strategies would be good).
2. Try to make it not all battling.
3. Make the chapters a bit longer.
Overall- just needs a little bit of improvement.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 20, 2012
Yeah, it won't be all battles. And thanks for the advice. I'll try to use it. P.S. I need some new characters so if anyone has any ideas, just post 'em here. Thank you!
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 21, 2012
This is Chapter 3:
Chapter 3: The Park Battle
Seth was walking to the park for some training when he saw two kids —They were around 7— battling a crash battle.
"Go Leone! Hit him hard!" the girl on the right said.
"Dodge it Striker!" The boy on the left said.
The Leone plowed ahead, charging the Striker. The Striker wiggled around a bit, then barely dodged the Leone's attack. But then, Leone turned around and hit Striker from behind. Then, Striker flew up, and came down at the boy's feet.
"Aww, no fair!" The boy said.
"Ha ha, yes! I won!" The girl said, punching the air as Leone came back to her.
"OK, you won fair and square, see ya tomorrow!" The boy said, then left.
"Hey, you!" The girl said, who had noticed Seth. "You're the guy who won the city championship, right? Come battle me!"
"Uh, ookay?" Seth said, readied his launchar unsteadily.
"How about a Crash Battle?" She said.
"Sure?" Seth said.
"3...2...1...Let it rip!!" They said as one, then launched their beys.
Right at the beginning, the girl said, "Go, Storm Fire Leone! Circle him!!"
"Wah?! Uh, dodge it, Drago?" Seth said, unused to such a straightforward attack.
Leone, once again, charged. Drago snaked around Leone, then went back and hit Leone back to the girl.
"Nooo!" The girl said.
"Now, who are you?" Seth asked.
"Dawn Ser! Grr, I lost." Dawn said, then she left, too.
"Hmm, strange." Seth wondered aloud. Then, he headed home, wondering how strange that last battle was. When he got home, he plopped down on his bed, and fell asleep.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 23, 2012
By the way, Hurricane Fin Pisces can be made if you have Tail Fin Cetus and in Winter 2012, Hurricane something Pisces.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - Dual - Oct. 23, 2012
Hurricane Crusher Pisces. And just a suggestion, put all your chapters in the OP so they are easier to read.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 23, 2012
OK. Thanks!
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 23, 2012
(Oct. 23, 2012 1:40 AM)Déjà vu Wrote: Hurricane Crusher Pisces. And just a suggestion, put all your chapters in the OP so they are easier to read.
Actually, I changed Black Storm Pisces to Hurricane Fin Pisces.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 25, 2012
Alright, Chapter 7 is finished!
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 26, 2012
Alright, anyone reading this, if you have any questions for the characters don't be shy! 
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - Driger Kai - Oct. 26, 2012
You may want to describe the character's design and personaillity a bit, since I see you've put them in the OP
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 26, 2012
I will try. XD
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 28, 2012
Chapter 8 is up!
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - halisi - Oct. 28, 2012
Your story is interesting indeed I believe it's a little rushed. It wouldn't hurt to write a few chapters in between to actually build the characters. Even after reading all 7 chapters I still know very little about seth. Some of the grammar needs fixing, how many times do you fully reread each chapter?
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 30, 2012
Chapter 9 is up, I didn't have time to finish the Finales yet, so I ended with a cliffhanger. Sorry! I wwill hopefully finish the Chapter tomorrow. Maybe have a reference to Haloween. [WoooOoooh]
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - thelegISlAtive - Oct. 30, 2012
my wheel is rampage shadow leone its awesome and i can beat any one with it boyyy and good but can you descibe the characters you know like the personalities and stuff so ya know,like how on beywheelz leon is angry half the time like that type of stuff but really good and as well put the battle styles of each character in and not as many special moves with each battle one or 2 are fine each battle but as an example he was all over him with left and right attacks ok but real good story so far..................... just you know i meant fortune not shadow dang i confuse my self some times
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - Dual - Oct. 30, 2012
Don't SPAM the thread. And do you have proof that you can beat EVERYONE? 
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - Driger Kai - Oct. 30, 2012
(Oct. 30, 2012 10:36 PM)Déjà vu Wrote: Don't SPAM the thread. And do you have proof that you can beat EVERYONE?
A better question is, does he know there isn't even an attack gear called shadow?
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - thelegISlAtive - Oct. 30, 2012
this is a person request
name:zem
role:protaganist a ( one of the seths rival)
wheel:slash crusher rex
(specialmoves) great slam, rex nova attack, ultimate rex barrage
apperance: white and black hair (kinda like kai off of beyblade g revalution) gold gloves, loose pants, black and gold shirt.
personality :laid back,cool,but gets real serious when it comes to wheeling,and easily angered when battling.
hope ya put him in and make em real strong even number 2 or 3,4 best ok and story is geat so far
nobody has beat me so far and sorry gosh and things so ya and again cool story but try to make longer chapters when as soon as i started reading the first one i was done and started the next.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - DarkNinja720 - Oct. 31, 2012
(Oct. 30, 2012 11:02 PM)isa Wrote: this is a person request
name:john
role:protaganist a ( one of the seths rival)
wheel:slash crusher rex
(specialmoves) great slam, rex nova attack, ultimate rex barrage
apperance: white and black hair (kinda like kai off of beyblade g revalution) gold gloves, loose pants, black and gold shirt.
personality :laid back,cool,but gets real serious when it comes to wheeling,and easily angered when battling.
hope ya put him in and make em real strong even number 2 or 3,4 best ok and story is geat so far
nobody has beat me so far and sorry gosh and as well i just made something up ya know its not a real bey wheel i get it if you change things so ya and again cool story but try to make longer chapters when as soon as i started reading the first one i was done and started the next.
Well, I will try to put him in, but there is already a character named John. If you could change his name, that would help, but I could probably work around that... Also, what type of Wheel is Rex (Balance, Speed, or Power)?
Note: I need more Antagonists, K? Whith isa's character request, I have run out of spots on the protagonist's team (I have a fourth member already). So, more antagonists.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - halisi - Oct. 31, 2012
Ok if you need an antagonist here's mine, hope it helps. Your story is pretty good right now, but try making the chapters longer.
Halisi prizma
Role: Primary, or secondary antagonist whatever works for you. and at times a deuturagonist.
Bio: After having his company bought out by a rival Beywheel manufacturer he create the T.C.L as a tool to get revenge. But Leviathan the lord of water and air saw potential in his wheel and entered it, naming himself Storm Tsunami Leviathan. This also changed appearance of the wheel to a scaly energy wheel, with the side wheels taking on a fin shaped appearance. After Leviathan explained his plans to flood the earth Halisi decided to help.
Personality: A calculating, intelligent man. He takes great pride in his intelligence, which in turns makes him vulnerable after an insult to his intelligence. He enjoys cracking jokes and talking smack to his opponents, but rarely says anything funny.
Appearance: A 23 year old man wearing a light blue cloak with long sleeves. He has black hair with 2 streaks of blond, it is long coming a little past his shoulders. Two locks are hung in front of his shoulders.
Leviathan: A god that has the personality of one, he often looks down on everyone including Halisi. He often disregards Halisi's commands during battle and acts on his own. He however will do anything to preserve Halisi including working with Seths group.
Wheel: Storm Tsunami Leviathan
Type: Balance speed 8-power 8
Special Moves
Aqua Ring: Forms 2 rings of water around the wheel, a horizontal, and a vertical one. Increases speed, and power while also defending against other wheels. Only lasts 10sec.
Fin blade: Uses Leviathans fins to hit the oppenent with a melee attack.
Heavens Catastrophe: Summons 10 orbs of water overhead to fall and flood the field with raging waters.
Leviathan can also shoot high pressure water pellets surrounded by wind at his opponents.
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - thelegISlAtive - Oct. 31, 2012
call em zem or (my name)isa and he is a balance type and ohhh also i hope you take my advice
RE: a BeyWheelz Story: The Depths of Pisces(Accepting Character Requests!!) - DarkNinja720 - Nov. 01, 2012
Sorry, but chapter 10 won't be up till Tuesday or Wednesday at least. Trip to SC. Sorry.
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