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[story] Come Alive (The end is now!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Printable Version

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[story] Come Alive (The end is now!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 13, 2012

Yeah, this is a really weird story.
Prologue: Newspaper club

Act 1: Establishment of the club
Act 2: The club begins, and the first crime
Act 3: The election



Epilogue



RE: [story] Come Alive - SilverChronos - Oct. 13, 2012

Very interesting intro. I kinda expected something with a little bit more detail, but it's really good. The only thing I would do is change the first sentence by adding a description of the main protagonist.


RE: [story] Come Alive - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 14, 2012

New chapter! Haha, this is a quite important flashback also

Chapter 2: The Newspaper Killer (Taken from Iwa's POV, and flashback)



RE: [story] Come Alive - Duck - Oct. 14, 2012

What the Hades Kerbecs?! Shirayuki, you're insane. Wink

...I like it. Eee


RE: [story] Come Alive - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 18, 2012

New chapter, and I know it is kind of short, but whatever XD

Chapter 3: False Accusations



RE: [story] Come Alive - Voltage - Oct. 19, 2012

Nice story. Cant wait for more.


RE: [story] Come Alive - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 26, 2012

Yo, chapter 4 is out, a tad bit short, but chapter five will star Act 2, so it will be pretty long.

Chapter 4: Recruitment (Back to Normal)



RE: [story] Come Alive - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 27, 2012

sorry for a double post, but chapter 5 is out!

Chapter 5: Plans



RE: [story] Come Alive - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 28, 2012

Sorry for triple post, but chapter six has risen

Chapter 6: The shadowy truth (Rated PG 13)
EDIT!: While I have the time, I guess I should write Chapter 7

Chapter 7: Anniversary

Edit 3: I decided to write the closing of act 2! It is a very important chapter!


Chapter 8: Hikui (Hikui's and Iwa's POV)
REAL EDIT 3!: Let us get a new chapter out before the rain comes XD

Chapter 9: Car Collision (Back to Hana's POV)



RE: [story] Come Alive (Chapter 9 is up!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 29, 2012

Sorry for quad post, but Chapter 10 is out!

Chapter 10: Voting Period



RE: [story] Come Alive (Chapter 10 is up!) Rated mostly PG 13 - SilverChronos - Oct. 30, 2012

Shirayuki, this thing with the........ I don't know what to say about this story. I can't say whether it's bad or good. It's...... I don't know. I can't vote on the poll with such a jumbled mind!


RE: [story] Come Alive (Chapter 10 is up!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Cookie Bouquets - Oct. 31, 2012

(Oct. 30, 2012  6:34 PM)ukdl123 Wrote: Shirayuki, this thing with the........ I don't know what to say about this story. I can't say whether it's bad or good. It's...... I don't know. I can't vote on the poll with such a jumbled mind!
Lolwut? Was it the construction/grammar/Etc.

Or was it the Plot/Idea/Etc.



RE: [story] Come Alive (Chapter 10 is up!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Cookie Bouquets - Nov. 03, 2012

Sorry for double post.

Chapter 11: The First Issue



RE: [story] Come Alive (Chapter 10 is up!) Rated mostly PG 13 - SilverChronos - Nov. 05, 2012

It wasn't anything wrong with the plot line, grammar, etc. It was with........ I dunno. This is inexplicable. Sorry.


RE: [story] Come Alive (Chapter 10 is up!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Voltage - Nov. 05, 2012

You have a twisted mind Shirayuki


RE: [story] Come Alive (Chapter 10 is up!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Cookie Bouquets - Nov. 20, 2012

We are getting to the conclusion!

Chapter 12: End of the World



RE: [story] Come Alive (The end is now!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Voltage - Nov. 24, 2012

Crying So sad it ended Crying


RE: [story] Come Alive (The end is now!) Rated mostly PG 13 - Cookie Bouquets - Nov. 24, 2012

(Nov. 24, 2012  6:27 AM)Voltage Wrote: Crying So sad it ended Crying
Two more sequels to come!

literally.