(Sep. 15, 2012  5:08 AM)beybladefoever Wrote: attempt at a story suggest characters please

Prologue

Cherish your siblings you never know if you'll forget them or loose them.

Chapter 1 The Beginning

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Hi my name is Jason Kitaro, everything weird started happening last week so I will start there.
I had just moved from California to Oxford N.C i'ts a pretty small town just below the Virginia border, okay enough about location. School here is a boring prison... until lunch that is when the exciting things happen. So the first day at my new school I daydreamed through all my classes. During lunch I sat down and started eating my PB&J with Pringles and Juice. Once I finished my lunch I started walking down to the field when I saw two people playing with tops, when I saw the tops it clicked a hidden memory, fuzzy but it was there. Then something happened.

Chapter 2 Hiding Something

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Those two people said "Hey kid are you going to battle or not?" "n-no" I stuttered "I don't have one but I feel like I've had one a-are those beyblade's?" I asked "Yeah what other battling tops are there?"they said smirking "I-I don't-" Just then the bell rang, I was saved from looking like an idiot. My next class was social studies with Ms.Lucero, I thought this class would be boring too but i was wrong. Ms.Lucero is hilarious but she's strict too. She will throw stuff at you if you make her mad, yet she'll let you talk if your good so my favorite class ended with taking notes. My next two classes drifted by while I thought about those tops, beyblade's. When I got home my mom asked me about my day I told her "it was fine, hey mom have you seen those tops called beyblades because I feel like I have had one?" "no i haven't herd of those," she said it like she was trying to hide something. My day ended with me studying those beyblade's online.

Chapter 3 A New Beyblade

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Today is a Saturday, so I'm just going to walk around town but even that's hard because there's kids playing with beyblade's everywhere. Change of plans I decided to go buy a beyblade at the shop instead. There were beyblades all around the store stacked five row's high. Just then I saw one that stood out to me, like it was calling me. I reached out to touch it, and i felt tremendous power so I said "how much for this one?"
"Nobody likes that one" he said as started pointing to the fancier ones"why don't you get these instead?"
"That one was calling out to me how much for it?"
" Uhh... five bucks and it's yours"
"Deal!" I said excitedly. As he was giving me the beyblade I was thinking about if I were to win or not.
"kid," he said in an annoyed tone
I was so excited I just started running to my house when...
"Hey kid you look excited" a giant person my age said. He was almost six feet tall, he had rippling muscles and was holding his beyblade out in a battle stance.
"My names Brady, so how about you battle me," it wasn't really a question it was a battle me or get pummeled
"S-sure" i said uncertain of my self.
"3-2-1 LET IT RIP!"

Chapter 4 The battle

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My beyblade flew to attack Brady's bey. I noticed he had a Earth Libra T125 ES, the perfect stamina type, well not better than my Phantom Eagle
135 MS.
"Libra go now!" he shouted " Special Move weight displace!" He smirked as my bey started to wobble.
"No Eagle don't give in"
"Stop your wining kid this will be over in a second" His beyblade kept clashing into mine.
"NO I WON'T ALLOW YOU TO WIN" I shouted "Eagle special move GHOST FLIGHT" My bey started spinning in circles so fast you couldn't see it, then BAM it hit his bey making it shot into a tree.
"h-how how did you win?" he said in disbelief.
"I don't know,"
He ran to get his bey when I noticed a person watched our whole battle
"Hey kid" he shouted "Who are you"
"I'm Jason Kitaro who are you"
"I'm Blader DJ, here's a ticket to the WBBA tournament I'll see you there"
"Whats WBBA?"
"It's the World Beyblade Battles Association see you there"
Right after that I passed out.
I wake in a hospital bed with a Doctor in front of me.
"Nice to see your'e awake," she said " you don't have any critical injuries so you can go,"
"Okay" ten minutes later I was out the door running to my house.
I couldn't wait to tell my mom about what happened. I ran through the door explaining what had happened. She looked worried. I could tell she was thinking about my past, but I didn't ask because she wont ever tell me.