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[story] White Rose, Black Rose (Epilogue up!) - Printable Version

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[story] White Rose, Black Rose (Epilogue up!) - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 15, 2012

Yay, a new story! Notice how many references I make to an anime/cartoon, since the story takes place around 2011.

reference count: 5




Chapter 1: Beginnings
Chapter 2: Scratching the Surface
Chapter 3: Into the Forest part 1
Chapter 4: Into the Forest part 2
Chapter 5: Kaito

Epilogue



RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012

Woah. I dont usually read non-beyblade stories but i am definetly going to keep reading this. I saw like one grammatical mistake but i am in no place to criticize, im no good as a writer but its fun. Anyway, i really got drawn into the story which doesn't happen to often with me. Im voting for the first option!


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 15, 2012

After test = Best time for writing. lol. anyways, I will try to upload new chapters as possible. Most chapters will come out on weekends, though.


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose - sarabscientist - Sep. 15, 2012

(Sep. 15, 2012  3:07 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: "Alright, fine, we will be partners then," I reply.

___

"Great! The first puzzle!" Kaito responds quickly.

Uff, I've been playing the two games faaaar too long xD

Nice story, maybe we'll get to know the reason behind the title Tongue_out


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 15, 2012

(Sep. 15, 2012  3:20 AM)ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) Wrote:
(Sep. 15, 2012  3:07 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: "Alright, fine, we will be partners then," I reply.

___

"Great! The first puzzle!" Kaito responds quickly.

Uff, I've been playing the two games faaaar too long xD

Nice story, maybe we'll get to know the reason behind the title Tongue_out
Psst Kaito = Neku Suki = Shiki

Puzzle games = 999


hahahahaha, I suck.
Sorry for double post, but a new chapter is already out! The reference counter has been created!


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose - sarabscientist - Sep. 15, 2012

(Sep. 15, 2012  3:22 AM)Redux Wrote: Psst Kaito = Neku Suki = Shiki

Puzzle games = 999

The reference counter has been created!

ITS A SAD WORLD.

Ah cool, we get to read the story+title reference =P


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 15, 2012

(Sep. 15, 2012  4:01 AM)ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) Wrote:
(Sep. 15, 2012  3:22 AM)Redux Wrote: Psst Kaito = Neku Suki = Shiki

Puzzle games = 999

The reference counter has been created!

ITS A SAD WORLD.

Ah cool, we get to read the story+title reference =P
I created a list of all the references to anime/games/cartoons

1. teenage mutant ninja turtles
2. 999
3. twewy
4. Ib (rose thing)
5. Full Metal Alchemist


I think that's it.


p.s. the antagonist is named "The conductor" twewy...




RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 15, 2012

Sorry for double post, but a new chapter is up!


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose (Chapter 4 is up) - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012

A bit to much "shooting back" but thats probably just me. Cool chapter!


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose (Chapter 4 is up) - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 16, 2012

A new chapter has arrived, it is short, but is very important to the story line.

EDIT: Everything will be organized into acts.
Sorry for double post, but the story has ended!!



RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose (Epilogue up!) - Dual - Sep. 16, 2012

That's it? So the story's done?


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose (Epilogue up!) - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 16, 2012

(Sep. 16, 2012  2:29 AM)Beyniac Wrote: That's it? So the story's done?

Sequel coming soon Smile

It's quick because I don't have the time to write.




RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose (Epilogue up!) - sarabscientist - Sep. 16, 2012

It ended just as it started? Confused


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose (Epilogue up!) - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 16, 2012

(Sep. 16, 2012  4:00 AM)ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) Wrote: It ended just as it started? Confused

Haha, mindcarping ftw.


RE: [story] White Rose, Black Rose (Epilogue up!) - Cookie Bouquets - Sep. 17, 2012

Hah, I wrote a shortened version for a project in school, I'll post it soon.