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Deleted - Infobleeder321 - Aug. 30, 2012
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RE: Story:Going it Alone - TakasuMouce - Aug. 30, 2012
(Aug. 30, 2012 12:47 PM)Ajitumari Wrote: “And this is how to make an orange,roll.You forgot a quotation mark here.
And, it feels too confusing with the switching POVs. Its hard to understand. The changes in location are confusing...
I think you should try to make it less confusing...
RE: Story:Going it Alone - K!d Death - Aug. 30, 2012
It's going good,but like Takasu said you shouldn't switch through POVs so many times.It can get really confusing
RE: Story:Going it Alone - Infobleeder321 - Aug. 31, 2012
Quote:You forgot a quotation mark here.
And, it feels too confusing with the switching POVs. Its hard to understand. The changes in location are confusing...
I think you should try to make it less confusing...
Quote:It's going good,but like Takasu said you shouldn't switch through POVs so many times.It can get really confusing
I'll try shifting it to mainly Mike's POV
PS. Michael=Mike
RE: Story:Going it Alone - Infobleeder321 - Sep. 05, 2012
Sorry for the long time no post, but I'm back! With more fun chapters this time!