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2nd try: Story - wtater888 - Aug. 19, 2012
The Bey Islands
Prologue: In the year....oh what was it..... Well anyway the continents break leaving 14 islands. Beyblade rules change and the wbba loses control over events. On each island there are new rules, new styles,new stadiums and of course NEW BEYS. Now lets check on a new blader Wade Moore(yeah a name we can actually pronounce). Wade Moore lived on the only island that the wbba had control of and the safest island, Smith Island. This island was known for making beys and parts so they were considered the strongest beys though they had no special rules or special cheating skills. Now where they make the beys they have had accidents. They've made a bey that was dark and could make more dark beys. These controlled some people on other islands but the wbba got rid of them on Smith island. They even had accidents where people were transported into beys and became the bey spirt( talk about unsafe work environment.Chapter 1:
"Don't forget all your gear"said Wade's mother.
"I won't," replied Wade, "Please stop worrying."
"I'm not worrying why do you think I'm worrying," said mother, "Now treat his bey as your partner and your best friend."
"I will mom calm down" I respond, "BYE!"
Wade started his journey in his own neighborhood.
"I am at the bottom of the chain. I must prove until I can beat anyone. NO ONE CAN TAKE ME AND MY BEY FLAME WOLF!"screamed Wade So then Wade embarked on his journey and decided to battle the former worst(now 2nd worst due to Wade having no record).
Chapter 2: Wade walks to the bey stop for the tournament of the neighbor hood. It wasn't seeded like most tournaments(i.e. 1 vs 16) but seeded to the best way of showing who is best:
1vs.2 3vs.4
15vs.16 13vs.14
5vs.6 7vs.8
9vs.10 11vs.12
"We should start 15vs.16" says Wade."Its my Flame Wolf 230 WD vs Azhar Awan and his Twisted Bull AD145 WD"
"Participants please head to the Stamina Stadium please" said the talking intercom a.k.a a clerk. "May the battle begin!"
"3......2......1........ Go Shooooooot"Wade and Azhar said in unison.
So Wolf goes to the middle and Bull is coming after him. Wolf being faster passes the middle of the stadium goes higher and goes back down to reclaim his spot. He hits bull with so much power.....wait it got deflected. Wolf flies to the edge of the stadium but barely stays in. He circles as wolf decides not to attack till he has a plan.
"Why didn't he get affected?" Wade asks himself apparently not so quietly.
"Its because of the beys weight. It weighs so much no attack can affect it"said Azhar
Wade gets covered with red aura and a dog next to him,wait not a dog a wolf
"We shall see about that" replied Wade
"Special Move: Wolf claws"said Wade
Wolf changes course and with all the power he has and hits Bull. This time it is clear Wolf made Bull move as he is circling the stadium.
"So you did move him" said Azhar"But now its snack time. Special Move: 3 o'clock"
Bull comes and attacks Wolf in the center of the stadium but Wolf uses his quickness to move out of the way.
"Put him away Wolf"Wade yells "Special move:Flaming Bite"
Wolf comes with everything he has got. Bull flies out of the stadium next to Azhar who is on his knees asking how. Wolf flies to Wade, he catches his bey and the red aura disappears and Wade passes out.
I know its short but i need some character suggestions.
Name:
Bey:
Age:
Additional Info(Not Required but happily accepted):
RE: 2nd try: Story - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 19, 2012
You only have to edit the first thread.
RE: 2nd try: Story - Beychamp76 - Aug. 19, 2012
It's nice
Azhar Awan
Twisted Bull AD145 WD
12 years old
RE: 2nd try: Story - wtater888 - Aug. 19, 2012
Chapter 2 is up.
RE: 2nd try: Story - wtater888 - Aug. 19, 2012
From Eternal-E
Name-Evan.
Name he goes by- E-man
Age- 12
Bey- cosmic befall 90 MF
Other stuff- he has long black hair that sticks up (like dogi without the weird golden strand) and a scar on his forhead, from training as a child. Average hight for his age.
RE: 2nd try: Story - Voltage - Aug. 19, 2012
you should put your chapters in spoilers
RE: 2nd try: Story - sarabscientist - Aug. 19, 2012
One story, one thread. Go edit your other one.