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Olympiana - Seshomaru - Aug. 08, 2012

Hi this is a greek story hope you like it!Stupid I will be accepting character requests and your thoughts on it so far!

Chapter 1:There`s Good News and Bad News (Click to View)

Chapter 2: Tartarus Rising (Click to View)
here`s chapter 2 guys!Stupid


RE: Olympiana - Sword Master - Aug. 08, 2012

you did the encoding for spoiler wrong you forgot the bracket for [spoiler=Chapter 1] and you spelt the final spoiler wrong


RE: Olympiana - Seshomaru - Aug. 08, 2012

i fixed it


RE: Olympiana - Sword Master - Aug. 08, 2012

it is great now and the beginning is good but try to write longer chapters Smile


RE: Olympiana - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012

reminds me the lightening theif dude but its really good


RE: Olympiana - legendblader01 - Aug. 08, 2012

pretty good


RE: Olympiana - Voltage - Aug. 08, 2012

So this is what you were telling me about in PM impressive but you should really make longer chapters.


RE: Olympiana - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 08, 2012

Yeah Chapters should be longer, and It's great but is that it? I know he had to do some more stuff before he left. Oh and i chose the wrong poll. SorryXD


RE: Olympiana - Seshomaru - Aug. 10, 2012

thanks every one i will try to write longer chapters and i`m working on chapter 2:Tartarus Rising and does any one have a character suggestion?


RE: Olympiana - Seshomaru - Sep. 20, 2012

sorry about last few weeks have had writer`s block and stuff so i`ll try to finish.


RE: Olympiana - Luck - Sep. 20, 2012

Try not to double post, it's good, but the chapters could be longer.


RE: Olympiana - Seshomaru - Nov. 20, 2012

(Aug. 08, 2012  9:48 PM)MasterBlader-X Wrote: Yeah Chapters should be longer, and It's great but is that it? I know he had to do some more stuff before he left. Oh and i chose the wrong poll. SorryXD
he did but he had to do it real quick so i just decided to not say anything but what i did.




RE: Olympiana - Clefairy - Nov. 20, 2012

You clearly necro-bumped this thread. People need to know NOT to do this!!!


RE: Olympiana - Dip - Jan. 03, 2013

Good story. When do you make next one.