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Olympiana - Seshomaru - Aug. 08, 2012 Hi this is a greek story hope you like it! I will be accepting character requests and your thoughts on it so far! Epilouge (Click to View) Chapter 1:There`s Good News and Bad News (Click to View) Chapter 2: Tartarus Rising (Click to View) RE: Olympiana - Sword Master - Aug. 08, 2012 you did the encoding for spoiler wrong you forgot the bracket for [spoiler=Chapter 1] and you spelt the final spoiler wrong RE: Olympiana - Seshomaru - Aug. 08, 2012 i fixed it RE: Olympiana - Sword Master - Aug. 08, 2012 it is great now and the beginning is good but try to write longer chapters RE: Olympiana - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012 reminds me the lightening theif dude but its really good RE: Olympiana - legendblader01 - Aug. 08, 2012 pretty good RE: Olympiana - Voltage - Aug. 08, 2012 So this is what you were telling me about in PM impressive but you should really make longer chapters. RE: Olympiana - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 08, 2012 Yeah Chapters should be longer, and It's great but is that it? I know he had to do some more stuff before he left. Oh and i chose the wrong poll. SorryXD RE: Olympiana - Seshomaru - Aug. 10, 2012 thanks every one i will try to write longer chapters and i`m working on chapter 2:Tartarus Rising and does any one have a character suggestion? RE: Olympiana - Seshomaru - Sep. 20, 2012 sorry about last few weeks have had writer`s block and stuff so i`ll try to finish. RE: Olympiana - Luck - Sep. 20, 2012 Try not to double post, it's good, but the chapters could be longer. RE: Olympiana - Seshomaru - Nov. 20, 2012 (Aug. 08, 2012 9:48 PM)MasterBlader-X Wrote: Yeah Chapters should be longer, and It's great but is that it? I know he had to do some more stuff before he left. Oh and i chose the wrong poll. SorryXDhe did but he had to do it real quick so i just decided to not say anything but what i did. RE: Olympiana - Clefairy - Nov. 20, 2012 You clearly necro-bumped this thread. People need to know NOT to do this!!! RE: Olympiana - Dip - Jan. 03, 2013 Good story. When do you make next one. |