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Roller Attacker draft - Benjohadi - Aug. 05, 2012 Quote:{{Beybox RE: Roller Attacker draft - sarabscientist - Aug. 05, 2012 Quote:Roller Attack Ring is a thick, shell-like AR in circular shape, with two rollers attached along the circular AR. This AR is mainly built for Attack purposes. With its rollers'(the gimmick of the rollers?) gimmick, this AR uses its aggressiveness to exert some amount of force to repel and push away its opponent. However, this gimmick is not successful because the amount of the Attack delivered is not powerful enough to net a KO to its opponent. When the rollers that are spun at the time it were hit, some energy from its attack is absorbed to enable the rollers to spin, in which reduced its Attack. In addition, the bulky rollers on the AR also result in some amount of recoils. Roller Attack Ring, on this modern days does not serve any purposes in plastics customization and is outclassed by many other better Attack Ring made for Attack purposes. I also fixed some tiny grammar issues RE: Roller Attacker draft - Benjohadi - Aug. 05, 2012 hahah..thanks..i'm suck at grammar...at least wrote down what sounded like correct... anyway..i'm still unsure about this draft..i'm not quite confident posting this around...i hope someone can have a look on the facts.. RE: Roller Attacker draft - sarabscientist - Aug. 05, 2012 (Aug. 05, 2012 11:46 AM)Benjohadi Wrote: hahah..thanks..i'm suck at grammar...at least wrote down what sounded like correct... Can't help you when it comes to Beyblade facts But call me anytime for grammar! RE: Roller Attacker draft - Ultra - Aug. 05, 2012 Your English is bad but I think what you've wrote is correct. RE: Roller Attacker draft - sarabscientist - Aug. 05, 2012 (Aug. 05, 2012 12:16 PM)Ultra Wrote: Your English is bad but I think what you've wrote is correct. *written Sorry, but saying that someone's english is bad kinda entitles you to have a higher performance :\ RE: Roller Attacker draft - Ultra - Aug. 05, 2012 No it doesn't. All I doing was stating a fact. I don't hold it against him at all. I know he is a valuable member. RE: Roller Attacker draft - sarabscientist - Aug. 05, 2012 (Aug. 05, 2012 12:19 PM)Ultra Wrote: No it doesn't. All I doing was stating a fact. I don't hold it against him at all. I know he is a valuable member. Okay sorry. Kinda should've kept it in Anyways ... Quote:Hence, this beyblade can be bought for collection purposes only. Sounds better as "should be bought"(?) RE: Roller Attacker draft - Ultra - Aug. 05, 2012 I think the whole thing needs to be looked over rather than just individual sentences. The article needs to flow properly. RE: Roller Attacker draft - sarabscientist - Aug. 05, 2012 I'll leave it to the experts then ... (no hard feelings ) RE: Roller Attacker draft - Ultra - Aug. 05, 2012 I'm not saying you shouldn't help. You're the person for beywiki who cares about grammer and how it sounds which is needed. I was just saying that it would better if you looked at it as a whole. RE: Roller Attacker draft - Benjohadi - Aug. 05, 2012 yes..th!nk and others would be the best at sentences..hahaha but try not quarrel or sounded like one..haha..its not nice for other that reading it..XD doing all calculation, studying structure,design,integration, differentiation,bla bla bla (all maths) really makes me suck at english..haha..it has been quite long since i wrote essays..haha..so..no surprise my english went that bad.. well..i will try to edit it properly once i have time if not too late i guessed... and...feels free to correct any mistakes..haha RE: Roller Attacker draft - sarabscientist - Aug. 05, 2012 (Aug. 05, 2012 12:26 PM)Ultra Wrote: I'm not saying you shouldn't help. You're the person for beywiki who cares about grammer and how it sounds which is needed. I was just saying that it would better if you looked at it as a whole. I meant I would leave it to you Beyblade peeps to make the article "Bey-Accurate". In other words, I suck at Beyblade and all related aspects so I do not have enough knowledge to have a say in the "Bey-Aspects" of this article (or any other article for that matter XD). So yeah, I could still pop in to make a few grammar/spelling edits. But I can't really do that right now because the whole sentence/paragraph could be re-worded/corrected knowledge-wise and render my grammar edits futile. So yeah. Back on topic, shall we? RE: Roller Attacker draft - th!nk - Aug. 06, 2012 I think I forgot to reply to your PM about this, my apologies. As the others said, your facts look good but the English needs work, but that's fine, it's much easier to fix than factual errors. One thing, Looking at the AR it always looked very defensive to me, does it have any defensive ability or is it too aggressively shaped? The roller gimmick is just a silly gimmick for an attacker, and that could be better described. Overall pretty good though. Also in case anyone asks about the roller defense mod working on this, that should be illegal anyway, so it isn't relevant (everything else similar from that era is and there were some posts about it I can dig up on request). RE: Roller Attacker draft - Benjohadi - Aug. 06, 2012 (Aug. 06, 2012 3:57 PM)th!nk Wrote: I think I forgot to reply to your PM about this, my apologies.Haha..no problem at all..i understand that you could be busy... Frankly,i never tested it for defense..but the radius is quite small...and the rollers are more buldged out than roller defenser's ar..roller defenser's rollers are less pop out..Also..roller defenser's ar has smoother surface,no bulky things like roller attacker's one...so theoritically, roller attacker has less defense and more recoil than roller defenser.. I will edit and reword the draft and repost later on weekend..haha RE: Roller Attacker draft - Benjohadi - Sep. 02, 2012 Quote:== Attack Ring (AR): Roller Attack Ring== i totally forgot about this thing..haha..sorry... anyway..tried my best on correction the errors and making it sounds better... still..any other correction and changes, i would appreciate that..haha RE: Roller Attacker draft - th!nk - Sep. 25, 2012 I would mention that the choice of a roller gimmick is very odd for a beyblade that was intended to be aggressive, and perhaps mention that it was likely considered a misstep in what was a particularly experimental phase of the Beyblade series, as rollers were never used aggressively again. I would still put more focus on its uses for defense, even if it is rather poor, than attack, despite it being designed for attack, it's small and doesn't look particularly aggressive to me (though maybe I'm wrong about that). Design wise, I would mention that it is a lot like a reversed Roller Defense Ring, with small oblong protrusions similar to those of Master/Kid Draciel's Smash Turtle. I'd make some more direct comparisons to roller defense ring in various areas. I imagine Defense is better, being smoother and so on. Also, are you sure the rollers stick out more than Defensers? They look the same in pictures, though I don't have either (I've got defenser coming), Lastly, what do you mean by Coin-Like? RE: Roller Attacker draft - Benjohadi - Sep. 25, 2012 (Sep. 25, 2012 10:50 AM)th!nk Wrote: I would mention that the choice of a roller gimmick is very odd for a beyblade that was intended to be aggressive, and perhaps mention that it was likely considered a misstep in what was a particularly experimental phase of the Beyblade series, as rollers were never used aggressively again.haha...i will try to include those as well..but being english as not my primary language..it would be a bit a hard..hahah Quote:Also, are you sure the rollers stick out more than Defensers? They look the same in pictures, though I don't have either (I've got defenser coming), yes..i am very sure..i owned both..but sold..XD hahah roller attacker's roller are poped out more than the defenser.. Quote:Lastly, what do you mean by Coin-Like?first thing in my head when i saw the ar..its the kamen rider ooo's medal..hahah..oh..its hard to describe the shape..hahah RE: Roller Attacker draft - Kai-V - Sep. 25, 2012 Round with rigged and slightly raised edges ? RE: Roller Attacker draft - Benjohadi - Sep. 25, 2012 (Sep. 25, 2012 3:04 PM)Kai-V Wrote: Round with rigged and slightly raised edges ? ah..yes...sounds good..thanks Kai-V..haha.. Quote:== Attack Ring (AR): Roller Attack Ring== |