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MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 23, 2012
Quote:{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = HMS Custom Try Set
| item number = MA-10
| beyblade system = [[HMS]]
__TOC__
==Contents==
*Dranzer MS (Black)
*[[Advance Adverazer]] (White)
*Tornado Balance type S Stadium (Light Blue)
*Launcher and Ripcord (Red and Yellow)
==General Info==
This set was the first release of the Tornado Balance Type S Stadium. It was later given released on its own later in the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]] generation in Yellow.
==Gallery==
==Overall==
The black dranzer MS is one of the most sought after recolours of the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]] but the beyblade has little competitive value. Advance Adverazer is also a useful beyblade with the parts having use in stamina and wobbler combinations. However as the normal versions of both beyblades are available relatively easily this set is only for collection. That said it is one of the rarest collectors’ items and such be purchased if found at a reasonable price.
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RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Imperial - Jun. 23, 2012
Quote:{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = HMS Custom Try Set
| item number = MA-10
| beyblade system = [[HMS]]
__TOC__
==Contents==
*Dranzer MS (Black)
*[[Advance Adverazer]] (White)
*Tornado Balance type S Stadium (Light Blue)
*Launcher and Ripcord (Red and Yellow)
==General Info==
This set was the first release of the Tornado Balance Type S Stadium. It was later released independently during the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]] generation in a yellow color.
==Gallery==
==Overall==
Although it has little competitive value, the black Dranzer MS is one of the most sought after recolours of the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]]. Advance Adverazer consists of useful parts for Stamina and Wobbler combos. This set is one of the most rare collector's items and should be purchased if found at a reasonable price. However, since the normal versions of both Beyblades are relatively easy to find, this set should be only for collection purposes.
[[Category
Fixed some errors and re-worded it a little.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 24, 2012
I think the overall section made more sense the way it was before. The way it was before the first point worked with the second.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Kai-V - Jun. 26, 2012
I made some corrections. My English is not perfect, but since "sought after" is made into an adjective, should it not have a hyphen ?
(Jun. 23, 2012 8:36 PM)Imperial Wrote:Quote:{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = HMS Custom Try Set
| item number = MA-10
| beyblade system = [[HMS]]
__TOC__
==Contents==
*Dranzer MS (Black)
*[[Advance Averazer]] (White)
*Tornado Balance Type S Stadium (Light Blue)
*Launcher and Ripcord (Red and Yellow)
==General Info==
This set was the first release of the Tornado Balance Type S Stadium. It was later released independently during the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]] generation in a yellow color.
==Gallery==
==Overall==
Although it has little competitive value, the black Dranzer MS is one of the most sought-after recolours of the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]]. Advance Averazer consists of useful parts for Stamina and Wobbler combos. Since the normal versions of both Beyblades are relatively easy to find, this set should be only bought for collection purposes. However, as such, it is one of the rarest collector's items and should be purchased if found at a reasonable price.
[[Category
Fixed some errors and re-worded it a little.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 26, 2012
Uh well I kind of didn't his edit since the way he rearranged it made what I was make fit less.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Kai-V - Jun. 26, 2012
Your above post makes no sense ...
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 26, 2012
Okay basically I don't think all of his overall should be used since he rearranged the sentences when I made them for one to link into what I said in the next one. It makes more sense the way I did it basically. Apart from the first sentence which he did better than mine. Anyway would say this is ready once I do that or would Kei need to look at it still?
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Kai-V - Jun. 26, 2012
You made it sound like Dranzer MS also had good parts. I think Imperial's Overall section is fine.
This should be ready, but does anybody know about the hyphen, hah ?
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 26, 2012
Oh I see that now. I was only going to use the second part of mine. Please trust me on this, the end bit of the overall makes more sense with the way i've done it. I can explain why if you really want.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Kai-V - Jun. 26, 2012
Sure. How about the edit I made ?
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 26, 2012
Those are good. Not sure about the hyphen thing. Anyway i'll post the final edit tomorrow.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 27, 2012
Quote:{{Setbox
| image =
| full item name = HMS Custom Try Set
| item number = MA-10
| beyblade system = [[HMS]]
__TOC__
==Contents==
*Dranzer MS (Black)
*[[Advance Averazer]] (White)
*Tornado Balance Type S Stadium (Light Blue)
*Launcher and Ripcord (Red and Yellow)
==General Info==
This set was the first release of the Tornado Balance Type S Stadium. It was later released independently during the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]] generation in a yellow color.
==Gallery==
==Overall==
Although it has little competitive value, the black Dranzer MS is one of the most sought-after recolours of the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]] series. Advance Averazer consists of useful parts for Stamina and Wobbler combos. However as the normal versions of both beyblades are available relatively easily this set is only for collection. That said it is one of the rarest collectors’ items and should be purchased if found at a reasonable price.
[[Category
That's it done then now that the Overall Section is the way I want it. Is it ready to up now Kai-V?
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Kai-V - Jun. 27, 2012
... What is wrong with the draft I posted ? What you just posted still has mistakes, such as "such" instead of "should".
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 27, 2012
I copied your one apart from the overall which I altered which we already discussed. Anyway i've read over it and there are no other mistakes.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Kai-V - Jun. 27, 2012
I repeat : what is wrong with this revised Overall section anyway ?
Quote:Although it has little competitive value, the black Dranzer MS is one of the most sought-after recolours of the [[HMS | Heavy Metal System]]. Advance Averazer consists of useful parts for Stamina and Wobbler combos. Since the normal versions of both Beyblades are relatively easy to find, this set should be only bought for collection purposes. However, as such, it is one of the rarest collector's items and should be purchased if found at a reasonable price.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 27, 2012
Sorry there isn't. I didn't read yours well enough.
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Kai-V - Jun. 28, 2012
OK then, you should be able to publish what I posted.
Are pictures ready too ?
RE: MA-10 HMS Custom Try Set Article - Ultra - Jun. 28, 2012
As with the other HMS set article we're going to have to take some from other sites.