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Legend of Pegasis VS L-Drago - Kaneki - May. 31, 2012
Chapter1:The Epic Battle
Pegasis the Wing Horse. L-Drago the Evil Dragon. Long ago they was a Huge Peacfull Land could Cristis. Long ago they was a Firy Evil Small Land could Sprigo. in they Land of Cristis Lived. Lion's Bull's Goat's. and a Lot more of Craturs. in ther Land of Sprigo Lived Wolf's Snake's. and a Lot more of Evil Cretuers. L-Drago have been Living in the Evil Land for a very Long time. he haved a nufe of Living in a small Land. He whanted the Biger Land Cristis. he Called all the Evil Creterus as He planed to Attack Cristis. then a Stick broke. He saw Pegasis. he ordered his Army of Evil Creterus to Attack Pegasis. but Pegasis Attack the Army with His move Shining Star Blast!!! and defeted hafe of the Army of Evil Creaturs. L-Drago told His Army to just leave Him. Pegasis Rushed back to the Land of Cristis to Warn the Land. He got there and told everyone. they did not Beleve Him to they saw Fire coming towordes the Land. they rushed out of the Land Pegasis stayed. Pegasis used his Move Shining Star Blast!!! the rest of the Army was defeted
L-Drago was so Angry He launched a Attack on Pegasis. Pegasis misted the Attack. Pegais said if its a Battle you whant a Battle you will get. they started to Battle. Pegasis Attack with His Shining Star Blast.L-Drago used Dark Fire Blast. Crisis was getting Destroyed Pegasis haved a nufe. He used his Strongest Move. Galaxy Star Blast. L-Drago used his Strongest Move.Fire Meteo Blast. they made a Big Clash the World would be gone. Pegasis used all his Power to Save the World then. they got turned into Beys and Sank to the bottom of the Ocean for 10000 years'. it was a 10000 Years Later
the End of Chapter One. so what do you Think
RE: Legend of Pegasis VS L-Drago - Flash! - May. 31, 2012
Horrible grammar, just saying and this should be the prologue, not chapter 1.
RE: Legend of Pegasis VS L-Drago - Raigeko13 - May. 31, 2012
Oh my God there are so many errors in this.
Half of it is incomprehensible.
Ow, my eyes...
RE: Legend of Pegasis VS L-Drago - Kaneki - May. 31, 2012
do you have to be so Horrible
RE: Legend of Pegasis VS L-Drago - Flash! - May. 31, 2012
Sorry but we're being honest, that's all a writer can ask.
RE: Legend of Pegasis VS L-Drago - Driger Kai - May. 31, 2012
Agree. I can't even understand it. More then half of it is spelled wrong.
You often said 'could' when it was 'called'.
RE: Legend of Pegasis VS L-Drago - T. L-Drago 9207 - May. 31, 2012
@ galaxy blade: Are you ripping off my story?
RE: Legend of Pegasis VS L-Drago - Hazel - May. 31, 2012
Closing at the request of the TC.