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Ball N' Chain (Story, not related to Beyblade) - *Converse* - May. 06, 2012
CHAPTER 1: How it All Began
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RE: Ball N' Chain (Story, not related to Beyblade) - TakasuMouce - May. 06, 2012
Tip : Make the chapters longer. Remember, a chapter is not a paragraph.
RE: Ball N' Chain (Story, not related to Beyblade) - sarabscientist - May. 06, 2012
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RE: Ball N' Chain (Story, not related to Beyblade) - Duck - May. 07, 2012
Very interesting... yes, you should make the chapters longer... your grammar is adequate and the plot has great potential... keep up the great writing!