[Story] The Annonymous Blader - Viral - May. 06, 2012
My friends and I had just finished watching a movie, late at night. We decided to go get some food and eat in the park like normal people do. The moment after we left, A dark shadow looming in the darks, With something round in its hand, Like a beyblade, Just standing there, Not moving neither breathing. Although I couldn't Identifty the person, I smelt a great power where that blader was and I could feel my Sol Blaze getting cold and had a werid feeling . "Look over there!", We all said. We looked at each other and looked back, He/she or it dissappeared. "Agh, That guy, His power, Is very high"."Don't worry, we'll try to find him in the morning", As Luke looked at his watch, "My parents are going to kill me If I don't come home In 5 minutes".
"Same here", I said, Still afraid on what beyblade that was and more importantly who that was.
I arrived home and quickly ran to my bed and examined Sol Blaze as I had this weird feeling in my pocket. "AH!" I scram and fell back and hit my head on the floor. I remembered that annonymous blader, "His bey......No, What am I saying, If he obtained that bey he would've died, It's power is far greater than any bey or all bladers together.
I remembered that dad told me rumours and stories about this bey and what smell it had, And the feel of it's power. It has to be it, The forbidden Dark Saber. I grabbed my phone to make a group call with Luke, Jason, Matt and Tyler, But the time read 1:03 am. "Darn, I've been awake this long?". I went to sleep as we had to meet up at 8 am.
*Ring* I answer my phone "Natsu!!!! It's 8:17!! We're waiting for you!". I didn't care that I had to shower, I just took off my clothes, and put a pair of tracksuits and the first top in my closet. I had to find if it was true, And if it was, how did that blader obtain it. As I hopped on my bike I received another call, But strange, It was a private number. "I'm going to get you!", I fell off my bike and I realised why I had to wear a helmet. I picked up the phone again "Jokes dude! Relax, We're still waiting for you!!".
Phew, It was just my friends. "Finally, you arrived! World's Record!!!" said Tyler with sarcasm. "Come on stop joking around, We need to see who that was, I also have an important thing to tell you guys, but we need to make sure that no one hears. "Yesterday I examined my bey, It's power was low. It happened when I saw the blader in the dark, I felt a tingly feeling in my pocket". "So that happened to you too ha" Matt replied. "Jason, tyler, Luke, Did this also happen to you?" I asked anxiously. "Yes" They all said. "I thought my bey just wanted to battle, Burn Xpegasis felt like it wanted to battle", said Matt. *BOOM* We all got pushed away, seperated. Then a mysterious shadow approached us, *The smell, th-the power, It'ss Sammme a-as Lalast nnnnight!*
My upper leg, Where my bey was, My pocket is was getting warmer and warmer! "If you'd like your friends tyler, Luke and Jason...Ha well you and your friend Matt have to defeat me! MWAHAHA. "Darn, Why does he want us, And all of a sudden my Sol Blaze's power has risen" I wispered to my self. "MATT! We have To defeat him, If we don't Tyler, Luke and Jason, I don't know what's going to happen to them.
"This will be a great warm up for ruling this world" The unknown blader said. "If we defeat you, you will leave us alone, Give our friends back and tell us who you are!" "Deal, But don't get too confident, Daddy will get be ashamed you didn't save him." "What are you talking about! My dad is gone and he will NEVER come back!". "You'll see kiddo, If you win OFCOURSE!"
*crack* Me and Matt were rising and so does the floor crack up and bring up a gigantic stadium. "Listen Burn Xpegasis, You have to do your best and crack this guy up, You hear that!" "Alright now let's get started!" 3! 2! 1!
GO SHOOT! *It is, It's The forbidden Dark Saber* "Go pegasis! Burn Fire Metor!" *The attack was massive, But Dark Saber is more stronger than that* "Haha, I gave you so much power and that's all, Alright Kiddo What'd you got?" *His really testing my nerves* "Alright! Sol Blaze! Flaming Giga BLAST!!! "Woah that's some power over there....My turn!, Dark Giga DRILL!!!
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Boom is all I heard, and then It's over, The battle is over. I lay down on the dirt, crying, My friends are gone, Matt probably is gone because he took most of the attack, and the bad thing is I don't know who he is and what he knows about my father. "ARGH!!! DO I HATE THAT GUY!!!" Screamed Matt. "Wha-What? YOUR ALIVE!!!!" "Ofcourse, Which blader gives up, His just a quitter and left". "Nothing of that matters, We, you hear me WE have to save Tyler, Luke and Jason!". Suddenly that voice the annonymous blader whispered to my mind *This is because of your father, You will all suffer and soon I will be ruler of this WORLD! And also, your friends, They'll be alive but they're waiting for you...*
"hehe....hehe..HAHAHAHA!!" *Sol Blaze, He took control of me and made me go crazy, and I couldn't control this power, It was too strong. "NATSU! Stop this NOW! What is wrong with you!" Sol Blaze, He went out of control bursting power and power, Blasts of fire..SOL BLAZE STOP! It meant something, I had to obtain the power to get out, Blaze is helping me.
ARGHHH!!!!ARGHH!!!! I could feel it, The power, Sure it was great, It felt good and it was good! Special MOVE! Fire blazing!! STORM ERUPTION!!!
"Woah, Since when did you have that move?" "Since now!, Matt you need a new special move that's stronger, Then we combine our powers to defeat that Forbidden Blader!" "Forbidden blader...That's sad, But how do I get a special move? I know I have 2 special moves but another one? That's nearly impossible". We made an arrangement to go to bey park to battle some bladers to get him a special move. "Ahhh, Feels good to be home...What am I doing? I need to sleep early and wake up early so I can train!"
I woke up at 6am. "Mum, I'm going with Matt for bey training!". "Wha-What? You better come home before 7pm!!". "Don't worry that's enough time for training!" *whistle* "Wait a second.....If I*'m going to train then I better walk to the bey-park, Alrthough it's pretty far." When I arrived *SHRIEK* *Matts already here and he is beating everyone. "I guess he really wants to get a special move". "I forgot why we need to train, I should train too!"
*I really have to train, This isn't a joke* "I think I just have to hop in-" "Oh hey there Natsu! Come up here, This guy sure is powerful, Maybe your Sol Blaze will beat his Wind Unicorn," Interrupted Matt.
"Hi, Nice to meet you Natsu, My name is Gira Kent and I own Wind Unicorn". "Lets get this battle started then Natsu?"
"3! 2! 1!, GO SHOOT!"
"Alright lets do this Wind Slash!" *He used his special move right after we said shoot?* Bang, My bey went flying, I tried to get back and strike but there was another effect on that move, After the move the strongest wind would be pushing me. " Alright then, Lets see what wind and fire turn into!"
Meteor STORM! "Fire against win, that's a bad move". I scream, Letting all my power out, ARRGHHH!! I can see it working, My fire is getting bigger and then all that power can turn into Fire blazing storm eruption.
"WHAT! HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!!!! Wind against fire must be equal to wind but-" "You should stop talking and be prepared for FIRE!! BLAZING!! STORM ERUPTION!!!!" The stadium I could see it, Full of blazing flames, I was really proud. I could see Gira, His shocked, He must be scared. "I know what your thinking Natsu, This match has made me improved, Theres an upcoming tournament, I want a rematch so be there, Next saturday, So in 7 days, You better be there! Bye bye!" "Argh, So much wind, It's hurting my eyes!" And then the wind disappeared.
"I WIN!!! But no special move....And that's probably the way he leaves, By sending gushing wind into the opponents eye", Exclaimed Matt. I'll be there, And I will surprise everyone there, And the payment, Goes to my sick mother, I am going to win! "NATSU!! COME ON!! Find another match already!" "DUDE!! I WAS HAVING AN EXTREMELY PEACEFUL AND AWESOME DAYDREAM!!!"
"Well carry on then....".
Day 1: "Matt! I'll meet you at the park!". I was so excited, It was bad to be rude and just end the call but was I in a rush! "Mum! I'm leaving again!" "Kids these days, Always energetic, When I was young I don't even think I was that close to having that energy".
"Helmet, Bike, Bag, Sol Blaze, Launcher, Done!" I was so excited, Maybe I could battle really strong opponents and beat them. "Oh no, It's that gang, The SoulEaters!" "AGH!" "Where do you think your going?" Asked a member of the gang. " This guy is so short but yet fat, I could beat him". *UGH* He kicked me darn hard, In the stomach. He goes for it again, *UGH* That was a real painful, and again-"Stop it right there!' Matt, His here! "Battle me and you can beat him up all you want! Wheres your leader!"
A mysterious figure, Although not like the annonymous blader appeared, He was tall, muscular, "I am Tyren Loar!" "LOAR!! HAHA!! Isn't it roar?!"
I could see his face, Getting angry,
3! 2! 1! GO SHOOT!
RE: The Annonymous Blader - Nova-X - May. 06, 2012
what got you into making stories?
and natsu and luke in one story doesnt match, one name is jap and the other is...americany
anyways...keep it up
RE: The Annonymous Blader - Viral - May. 06, 2012
I got into writing stories because, Graphics designing isn't going to get you alot of money if you go for full time. You told me that right? That's why you'll become a business man, And I also need a back up job If I don't make it for one job or If something happens to me on those jobs And I could do writing almost anywhere.
Chapter 2 is now up!
Chapter 3 is now up!
Chapter 4 is now up!
RE: [Story] The Annonymous Blader - Duck - May. 07, 2012
I NEVER expected this... well, that's a nice plot... quotation form goes like this:
"Hi Ileki!" I shouted anxiously.
"Oh, great to see you Gegin!" he replied.
Keep up the great writing!
RE: [Story] The Annonymous Blader - Viral - May. 08, 2012
Accepting character requests for next chapter, my names are really just...but anyways I am accepting character requests.
Chapter 5 is up!
RE: [Story] The Annonymous Blader - Focus - May. 08, 2012
Liked The story...When is Chapter 6 coming?
I think the unknown blader was the father of Natsu!
RE: [Story] The Annonymous Blader - Viral - May. 11, 2012
Chapter 6 is up!
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